Who Makes Intercession? Part 7 of 8

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PART SEVEN

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Second Alto melody, with mixed alto voices in harmony

Kiko found Haley talking to Kendra backstage after Frau Talmadge and Winthrop had made their remarks. “Hey — you picked a great time to get handsy, girl.” Her broad smile removed any sting the words might have carried.

“What can I say? You’re hot, chicka!” Haley’s smile faded. “That was your mom, right? You gonna be okay?”

“Yeah, the ice queen cameth. When I spotted her during Part 1, I could tell she wasn’t having a good time, but I didn’t look at her again. Who knows? Maybe she liked the rest of it.”

“For what it’s worth, you were fire tonight. Lifted us all up. If it would help, I’d be happy to tell your mom. And if it wouldn’t, I could always deck her.”

“Thanks, Haley. I mean that. I don’t care what Kendra says, you’re all right.”

“Nice try, troublemaker,” Kendra laughed. “I’ll vouch for you, too, but I’ll leave the physical violence to Haley. Hey, where’s Gabe?”

“She got a surprise, too — her Dad showed up,” Kiko replied.

“That’s a surprise?” Haley shook her head. “I mean, Jeez, my parents made the trek, and I’m just singing chorus.”

“Yeah, well . . . Gabe never came out to him.”

“He doesn’t know she’s a lesbian?”

“Goof!” Kiko gave Kendra a mock punch to the arm. “He doesn’t know she’s a she.”

“Well, speaking of lesbians,” Haley said.

“Were we?” asked Kiko.

“We were. Anyhow . . . Does your mom know about you and Gabe?”

“That’s the least of my problems.” Kiko smiled ruefully. “Ever since Momma caught Dad cheating and kicked him out, she hasn’t had any use for men. She’d be fine with Gabe.”

“Except for the fact that she landed that solo part,” Haley reminded her.

“Yeah. Except for that.”

Winthrop gave the signal, and a hundred plus hungry musicians moved en masse toward the exit and the promise of free food.

“I’d better go,” Haley said. “My folks are waiting for me. But I meant what I said, Kiko. If there’s anything I can say or do, I’m there for you.”

“Me, too,” Kendra said. “We got your back, girl. Believe it.”

“I . . . “ Kiko shook her head, surprised to find she had no quip to hide her feelings. “Thanks. Just . . . thanks. You’re the best!”

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Interlude, Trumpet and Viola. Ent. Alto voices

“You must be Mrs. Agatsuma. I’m so glad you could fly out for the performance.”

Surprised out of her reverie, Reina Agatsuma turned to find she was being addressed by the woman in the cast who had done the conducting. Her name didn’t spring immediately to mind. “Ah . . . Mrs. . . . ?”

“Technically it’s ‘Doctor,’ but informally I tend to stick to ‘Frau Talmadge.’ I hope you enjoyed the performance. Your daughter was excellent.”

Agatsuma’s irritation flared. “If she was excellent, you would have chosen her as a soloist.”

The director’s welcoming smile faded. “As I explained on the telephone, your daughter’s abilities as a singer are equal to Ms. Carey’s. The soloist selections were based on my own interpretation of the music we were performing, and the overall sound of the group.”

“In other words, it’s all subjective.” Agatsuma flicked her wrist dismissively. “It doesn’t matter how talented Kiko is, or how hard she works. Only who she knows.”

Frau Talmadge cocked her head, considering how best to respond. “No-one succeeds in my world without talent and hard work. I can’t deny, of course, that subjective factors, connections, and pure luck affect which talented and hard-working people succeed. Is it different in your profession?”

Agatsuma was reminded, painfully, of her partner the rainmaker. The one who had the connections, or made them — and was demanding, harsh, and sometimes contemptuous of the people under him who actually did the work. “Not completely,” she agreed, with obvious reluctance. “But the odds seem worse in the field of music. How many graduates of this conservatory have performing careers? As opposed to teaching bored students in high school somewhere?”

“I’m the wrong person to ask that, I’m afraid, though I’m sure Administration keeps track. But teaching is important, too, Mrs. Agatsuma. I consider it an equal part of my career and my professional life.”

“Your choice, of course,” Agatsuma responded coolly. “But I have other hopes for Kiko. If you’ll excuse me, it looks like she’s arrived.” Without waiting for a reply, she walked toward the doors, where Kiko had just walked in with several other students.

Kiko looked at her warily — one of the habits that the elder Agatsuma found to be incredibly irritating. I’m your mother, idiot. It’s not like I’m going to eat you.

“I thought you weren’t coming, Momma.”

“Well I did. You could try to look a little grateful!”

“Of course I am. So, what did you think?”

“Not really my thing. It would have been better if I could have heard your voice. Hard to pick you out of a crowd.”

We could hear her — and she anchored our whole section.”

Kiko quickly looked back at the tall Caucasian girl behind her. “Haley, thanks, it’s okay though.”

“It’s not, actually.” Agatsuma managed to keep her volume appropriate, but the ice in her tone was unmistakable. “I don’t know who you are, or think you are, but I don’t appreciate your butting into my private conversation with my daughter!”

“She’s my friend, Momma. Can you maybe try not to be a jerk to her?”

“Enough, Kiko! I need you to come back to my hotel now. I’ve got an early flight tomorrow, and you and I need to have a serious conversation about your future.” She gave a venomous look at the two girls flanking Kiko, then moved toward the door.

“No.”

She spun around. “You will obey me, daughter!”

For the first time in her memory, her daughter’s eyes showed no wariness or fear. But they held a degree of coldness she had only ever seen in a mirror. Kiko snapped, “I worked my ass off for this party, and I’m going to enjoy every frickin’ minute of it. If you want to go, go. I promise: No one here will miss you.”

Agatsuma was shocked, stunned, and so furious that she literally saw red. She took a step toward Kiko, when a hand pressed on her arm and a soft, but urgent, voice said, “please don’t.”

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Saxophone with Alto voice; ent. Viola and Second Alto

John didn’t know how long they’d clung to each other, sharing the healing of the moment. He knew there was more work to do to rebuild their relationship, he just wasn’t sure where to start.

Gabe finally broke the silence, though she didn’t release him or even open her eyes. “I’m so sorry, Dad. I should have told you about all of this.”

“You did. Tried to, anyway.” He kissed the hair on top of her head, though he knew it couldn’t be hers. “I didn’t want to hear it, and that’s on me.”

“I didn’t want to disappoint you. I know I’m not . . . not the son you hoped for.”

He chuckled. “‘Man plans, God laughs.’ Remember that one?”

“That was Mom.”

“Sure was. But Gabe, it’s the best description of being a parent I ever heard. I had such a clear idea of who you were going to be, I couldn’t see who you actually were.” Gently, he moved his hands to her shoulders and held her in place while he stepped back, forcing her to look at him. “Tonight . . . when I heard you up there, sounding just like your mom come down from heaven, I couldn’t help seeing it.”

“Lose a son, gain a daughter?” Gabe’s voice was wistful.

“I guess maybe. Thought I’d be telling myself that when you got married someday, but there’s me and my plans again.”

“Oh, gosh!” Gabe blushed. “There really is so much I want to tell you. We’ve got a lot of catching up to do!”

“We do, but unless I misunderstood . . . I think we’ve got a reception to go to?”

Gabe giggled. “I wasn’t sure how I was going to talk you into that . . . I know it’s not your thing.”

“Yeah, no. Not normally. But you’re the star. I can put up with a pack of suits and snobs if I get to play the proud papa!”

“Oh, stop! I’m just one singer, even if I had a few solos!”

John tightened his grip. “I was there, Gabe. I’m no musician, but even I know that’s not true.”

“If we’re going to this reception, you’d better not make me cry again!”

“Oh, we’re going. But, ah . . . .” John looked embarrassed.

“What?”

“I kind of never imagined asking you this, but . . . do you know how to fix your makeup? It’s gotten sort of messed up.”

“Oh ffffffff . . . . !” Gabe managed to stop herself from swearing, just in time. Catching the gleam in her father’s eye, she giggled. “I can manage the basics, and that’s going to have to do. Give me a second?”

“No worries, I could use a restroom myself. No offense, but that was a long piece of music!”

“Tell me about it,” she said with feeling. “We’ve gotta drink like a gallon of water beforehand to keep our voices hydrated!”

When they’d finished their business and grabbed their coats, Gabe took John’s arm and guided him toward the building where the reception was being held. The two-day-old snow glistened like refined sugar in the reflected light of the lanterns that lined the walkways.

“Dad, there’s someone I have to tell you about, ‘cuz you're going to meet her.”

John immediately read between the lines. “A girlfriend? So . . . you aren’t . . . ?”

“Into guys? No. It doesn’t work like that. At least, it didn’t for me.”

“Okay. Sorry.” He chuckled. “Go easy on me, will you? This is all ‘brave new world’ stuff. I’ll try to keep up.”

“Kiko should have sung the solo tonight,” Gabe said, at once very serious. “I was there for her audition, and she was great. But she made the director listen to me. Made me audition for it, too. Because she believed in me . . . because she . . . .”

Gabe stopped walking. “God, I’m an idiot!”

“What did I miss?”

“She said she did it because my voice was right for the part, but . . . but that’s wrong.”

“Gabe, like I said before, I was there, remember? I heard you.”

“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean it like that. It’s just . . . Kiko’s every bit as good. My vocal interpretation was closer to what the Director was looking for, but a different director could easily have picked Kiko.”

John started to protest, but Gabe kept going. “We compete here; it’s what we’re supposed to do. And Kiko’s under a lot of pressure from her mom to do well. I mean, a lot of pressure. . . .”

John nodded, suddenly understanding. “So you’re saying she did it out of love.”

Gabe nodded, unable to speak.

“Then I owe her one,” John said.

Gabe’s expression was all the question she could muster.

“I needed to hear you tonight. Needed it bad.” John looked at his newly-minted daughter, so vulnerable, once again on the verge of tears, and thought, Okay, old man . . . time to saddle up and remember how to be a parent! “Suppose you tell me about her.”

So she did. They resumed their walk and arrived at the building where the reception was being held. Gabe was still going on about Kiko as they dropped off their coats and headed for the open doors to the banquet hall.

But she stopped in mid-sentence and the blood drained from her face. “Oh, no!” She sprinted forward, and John charged after her, his brain trying to make sense of the scene that had caused her such distress.

Four women, just inside the door. Three, probably in their twenties, facing an older woman. The girls look upset. The woman just looks pissed.

The older woman practically snarled, “You will obey me, daughter!”

The shortest of the three girls said something in response; the words didn’t register with John, though the tone was defiant and cold. The older woman moved towards the one who had spoken; it looked like she was going to slap her.

Gabe got there first. Placing a hand on the older woman’s arm, she said, “please don’t.”

The woman spun around. “Ah. If it isn’t the star of the show,” she sneered.

John’s every instinct was to jump in, to protect his daughter, and to give the arrogant woman a lesson in manners. But Gabe stopped him — stopped everyone — raising both hands in a placating gesture. “Please! Please! Everyone, stop! Before any more damage is done!”

“I am leaving,” the older woman announced.

“Please, Mrs. Agatsuma. Give me two minutes?”

“Why?”

“Because I just got my father back tonight, after twelve years, and I don’t want to see Kiko lose her mother. She loves you. She is one of the best musicians here, and she’s the first to say it’s all because of you. Because you’ve pushed her to be the best.”

John was suddenly aware that he had been leaning forward, weight on the balls of his feet, ready to spring into action. He eased back instead, waiting to see whether Gabe’s plea would have any effect. Do I know this person? This “daughter?” The Gabe I knew would never have done anything like this!

The woman pointed back at her daughter without looking. “If that’s what love looks like, I don’t want to see hate!”

“People say things in the heat of the moment, they maybe don’t mean. Kiko and I have had some moments like that. Kiko’s temper . . . well. She says she comes by it honestly?”

Ooh, watch yourself, John thought. Bear baiting only works if you’ve got the long guns behind you. But there were so many emotions warring for control of the woman’s face that John couldn’t get a read on her.

She flashed a calculating look at her daughter, then at Gabe. “You . . . and Kiko?”

Gabe raised her chin. “Yes.”

The girl — Kiko — finally spoke; her voice sounded raw. “Momma? I’m sorry. I can’t leave right now, but what I said . . . Gabe’s right. I didn’t mean it. I really wish you would stay.”

Mrs. Agatsuma was still looking at Gabe, weighing what she had said. Finally she turned and gave Kiko her full attention. “Alright. We still need to talk, but I agree, this is not the time. I will see you back home next week.”

“Will you stay?”

“No, daughter, but thank you for asking. I do have an early plane to catch.” She stepped forward and gave Kiko a hug. It was brief and it was brittle, but . . . a hug nonetheless.

Maybe there IS something I can do here. “Mrs. Agatsuma?” He waited until she looked his way. “I’m John Carey, Gabe’s dad. I can give you a ride to your hotel, if you’d like.”

She gave him a once over; John knew what she would see wouldn’t be much to her liking. “Thank you, but I don’t want to pull you away. I can take an Uber.”

He nodded. “Of course. Though, if you’re willing, I’d like to have a couple minutes to talk to the mother of Gabe’s girlfriend?” Jesus. It’s screwed up that that sounds so normal!

She shot him a sharp look, then nodded. “Okay, yes. That might be helpful.”

Gabe’s eyes, full of love and gratitude, were enough to melt his heart all over again.

“Will you be back?” she asked.

“Maybe at the end, if there’s time. You enjoy the party now, okay?”

“I love you, Dad.”

He reached up and touched her arm — so smooth and soft! — “Me too. See you soon.” Then he followed Kiko’s mom to retrieve their coats.

— To be continued


Author’s note: A bit of a short one today, but bring your seat backs and tray tables into the full, upright and locked position, ‘cuz the plane lands tomorrow!

For information about my other stories, please check out my author's page.

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Dee Sylvan's picture

Gabe’s interaction with her father was every Trans’ dream, and Kiko’s confrontation with her mother was not unexpected. But what do you have cooking for John and Mrs. Agatsuma, dearie? John reminds me of the circus performer who sticks his head inside the lion’s mouth! Foolish, or Brave? Time will tell. :DD

DeeDee

Maybe neither?

Emma Anne Tate's picture

I mean, what can she do to him, right?

Right?

Thanks, Dee!

Emma

I’ve had…

Robertlouis's picture

…a few tough days Long Covid wise, so forgive me for the absence of comments, and trying to consume three chapters of this enthralling musical rollercoaster of a tale in one go has been, to paraphrase Truman Capote, like consuming an entire box of liqueur chocolates at one sitting, but gosh, what a ride.

The performance was a nostalgic marvel for me. I’ve never sung it, but have attended more than twenty performances, so I was following every note, solo and chorus. Bliss.

And you managed the tension for our principals superbly. The father daughter reunion had me reaching for the tissues, and the supported collective forces of the choir might just be seeing the outer skin of the Ice Queen start to melt.

Happy ever after?

We’ll see.

Like hot chocolate with brandy. Lovely, Emma. xx

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Hot chocolate with brandy?

Emma Anne Tate's picture

Damn, that sounds good. I so don’t need those extra calories, but . . . A girl’s gotta do what a girl’s gotta do, right?

I hear the Messiah running through every chapter, so I’m pleased that it comes through for another admirer of the piece. Of course, I also hope the story works for people who are unfamiliar with the work or don’t care for it. I just don’t know what the story will “sound” like for them. :)

Emma

Why haven’t I sung Messiah?

Robertlouis's picture

I have, by all accounts, a tenor voice that’s ideal for oratorio, but as I’ve had a career as an acoustic singer songwriter since my late teens I had to make a choice, but I’ve been an enthusiastic supporter of choirs whether my parents or my wife’s ever since.

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Too funny!

Emma Anne Tate's picture

You should never let other people decide whether you sing, Bru. Of course, giving them some input on where and when is only polite . . . . :)

Emma

Late for work again

*Sigh* I thought it would be the alternative attitude unfortunately.

But Kiko's explosion is long in coming. I don't understand how Reina makes it in business.

Even in business you have to understand relationships as sometimes that is all there is that will make or break a deal.

She must suck at that kind of negotiations.

I mean she is in another business, the business of raising your child, your only child and if she screws up here she will lose her child. I mean taking her away from the school would guarantee a deep six of any hope of reconciling with her daughter for she will take her daughter from her love. That will never be forgiven.

I am a cat person and I don't see Reina as ever being a cat owner as you have to respect their choices and boundaries as they do not just obey like a dog tends to do.

A child is far worst of course for whether Reina likes it or not, her daughter is old enough that she can now make up her own mind. I suspect she will not be able to yank Kiko out of the conservatory as she thinks as Kiko is probably as capable of getting a scholarship as Gabe was once she gains emancipation. This means of course Gabe had to have some serious musical chops to get that scholarship.

The discussion between the father and the mother will be an interesting one considering their diametrically different backgrounds. Gabe's father is in the roofing trade and having had a new roof done recently I can see how harsh and back breaking that is. Being a roofer means you retire from it if possible by your 50s.

At least I assume so as I do not know Reina's economic past growing up might be part of fuel of her ruthlessness.

She cannot be such as ass to her staff either unless she pays them ridiculous money else they will turn their back on her at the first opportunity when she needs them the most as they would not back her up due to loyalty any time soon.

Like I said in another comment, what a half person.

Edit: I don't expect a tie in a bow ending, merely a hopeful beginning.

Even if Gabe succeeds in her quest to gain Kiko, she would have Reina as a mother-in-law. And you think being trans is enough torture for one lifetime.

Bow ties

Emma Anne Tate's picture

I’ll ask you to stick a pin in that one, too. We can discuss it after the last chapter lands.

Every person needs an asshole. But many people, once they become big enough shits, decide to outsource theirs. I think Reina is the designated asshole for her senior partner. She would be kept from front-facing jobs except in situations where the relationship has already soured to the point where sweetness and reason are dispensed with.

To be fair, organizationally, it’s an important role. But the human question is whether the asshole can put it aside when they aren’t on the job.

Thanks, Kimmie. I hope you enjoy the ending.

Emma

The tiger can be...

RachelMnM's picture

Reasoned with? There might actually be a beating heart in that woman, but will we get to see a glimpse of love - like we got from Gabe's pop? What a ride this story has been! Great bit of writing Emma... No, damn fine and brilliant story and I know you'll stick the landing. The judges cards already lined up with their 10's across the board... :-) Hugz Chica!

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Ah, but . . .

Emma Anne Tate's picture

Botched landings are where the best gymnasts lose the most points! See, e.g.,

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But thank you, Rachel. :)

Emma

Hmmmph!

RachelMnM's picture

Yeah, even without having read the final there were 10's on the judges cards Ms. Emma and NO WAY IN HECK would anyone believe you'd botch that. :-) <3 No spoilers, the next chapter is a 10, no points were lost. Hugz Chica!

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

The Climb To The Top

BarbieLee's picture

There are those in the music business, any business who step on others on the way to the top. To them business, and life is a war zone take no prisoners. It's lonely at the top with no friends, only the enemies they left as so much debris in their wake.

Emma didn't give us a prelude to this story which leaves us guessing is Agatsuma the kind of person mentioned? Or was she forced into being a Dragon Lady because she is a woman in a man's world? No doubt at some point in her life she was a caring mother who nurtured another life inside her womb. She wouldn't have paid for Kiko's training in the school of arts if she didn't still love her own daughter. Even if the love is hidden behind a facade of fire as the Dragon Lady.

Emma, my love, I DO NOT like cliff hangers. I'll wait with baited breath to read how you tie the bow on this one.
Barb
"The hardest part of life isn't dying, it's living it."

Oklahoma born and raised cowgirl

Sorry about that!

Emma Anne Tate's picture

Really wasn’t any way to avoid cliffhangers this time, because . . . . well. You’ll see.

I have a backstory for Reina in my head, because I’ve known people like her (men and women both). But it isn’t really relevant to the story, so I didn’t include it. However she got there, she is what she is, with the brittle strength that has gotten her through life.

Thanks for reading, Barbie, and for your thoughtful comments!

Emma

Interesting that Gabe was the one

gillian1968's picture

Just stepping up to face the Dragon Lady shows his level of lover for Kiko. And not many people would have the backbone for such a statement, especially on the spot like that.

A great story! I’m sure it will be on my short list of favorites!

Gillian Cairns

Backbone

Emma Anne Tate's picture

Although the world seems to disagree just at the moment, I firmly believe that love and compassion are sources of strength, not signs of weakness. Gabe is a gentle, loving person, but that doesn’t mean she’s a pushover — especially not when her heart is engaged.

Thank you for your kind comment. I truly hoped this story would have special resonance for readers who love classical music, as I know you do.

Emma

Wonderful. Just Wonderful.

Lucy Perkins's picture

"Dear Gabe,
I have to say that you are The Best.
Not just The Best Singer, or The Best Daughter" but the best human being in this cast.
Able to partly diffuse a situation that was heading totally off the rails, and face down one of Emma's nastiest villains.
You are my hero.
Lucy xx"

"Lately it occurs to me..
what a long strange trip its been."

Villains

Emma Anne Tate's picture

Hmm. I’m thinking I don’t have all that many nasty villains. The people who consistently behave badly typically don’t get a lot of screen time. I think, like Erin, the more time I give them, the more they insist on becoming real people. We’ll see how that applies in this case!

But nonetheless, I agree that Gabe was very brave here. Love is the best motivator. :)

Emma

Gabe and Kiko and parents...

Two tear-jerking chapters for me to read back to back... so sweet. And just before the PSW got here to help Mum have a bath. I hope I didn't look like I'd just been bawling... *laughs*

Loving this story. Love your writing, as usual...

Thank you, Lisa!

Emma Anne Tate's picture

Thank you for your sweet comments, and for sharing your enjoyment of the story. :)

Emma

Ooooooookay…………..

D. Eden's picture

So, we had the big confrontation, and I was wrong - and yet still right, lol.

Like everyone else, I had expected Kiko and her mother to have a big confrontation. I may have figured it out a little earlier, but by this point in time I am sure everyone knew it was coming. I had also expected Frau Talmadge to intercede on the part of her two star students, which she inevitably did. But I expected Gabe’s father to be the one who stepped in and stopped Kiko’s mother from going off on her. Instead, it was Kiko’s friends - and ultimately Gabe who played the biggest part in preventing her temper tantrum from becoming violent. Which would have put a final punctuation on the relationship between Kiko and her mother.

But, I believe that I was still right in that Gabe’s father still has a large part to play in repairing the relationship between Kiko and her mother. Just as Kiko was instrumental in repairing the relationship between Gabe and her father - potentially at great loss to herself. That shows just how much Kiko truly loves Gabe - for true love is being willing to sacrifice everything for the person you love. We’re it not for Kiko insisting that Frau Talmadge listen to the recording of Gabe, her father would never have heard her singing, which led to the two of them finally sharing their grief over the loss of wife and mother. We will have to wait to see, but I believe that Gabe’s father has much to tell Kiko’s mother about the loss of his wife, the chasm which had formed between him and Gabe, how his mistaken ideal for his son and the repressed grief due to the loss of his wife had nearly caused him to lose his child, and how she is headed the same direction by trying to force her ideals onto a daughter who obviously loves her and needs her love in return.

I was apparently wrong about how she would react to the relationship between Kiko and Gabe, but then again, she has yet to learn that Gabe is transgender. Hopefully that will not become yet another wedge between the Agatsumas.

It will be nice to see this all resolved, and as this is a Christmas story, perhaps a little Christmas magic has the four of them together for the holiday? Or at least moving toward an improved relationship between Kiko and her mother, and perhaps Gabe and Kiko’s mother, not to mention the opportunity for Gabe’s father to meet Kiko. It appears that the magic has already worked for Gabe and her father.

D. Eden

Dum Vivimus, Vivamus

Dear Dallas

Emma Anne Tate's picture

You are channeling me again, my friend! No, not all of your guesses are right, but . . . . Well. Read on. :)

I hope the finale works for you — I will be interested to get your thoughts. But thank you, as always, for being part of this creation.

Emma

And now . . .

Emma Anne Tate's picture

. . . You don’t have to!

Thanks, Dot!

Emma

Mrs. Agatsuma & Kiko

There’s your refiner’s fire already!

Exactly right!

Emma Anne Tate's picture

Insightful comment, as always. :)

Emma

This is so good

Certainly the best I've read in a long while.

Maeryn Lamonte, the girl inside