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Love Lost
by Jenn C.
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Love Lost
I prayed for love to last
I hoped for love to last
I needed love to last
It goes away
It always leaves
I pray the hurt is in the past
I hope the hurt is in the past
I need the hurt in the past
It doesn't go away
It always stays
Special thanks to Andrea Lena DiMaggio
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Comments
We seem...
...to be holding hands quite often. For which I am glad; no matter for what reason.
Love, Andrea Lena
I'll join you in holding hands
maybe we can share a three-way hug or two too.
Beautiful
Your economy of words to express the depth of feelings is wondrous. If you ever need me to help fight off the pain, i'm around Twin.
Hugs and more Hugs,
Diana
Me too...
Me too, Jenn, even though we don't know each other as well as you and my Moonbunny do. :)
(When the Internet isn't kicking me off every ten seconds, anyway...)
Dani
moonbunny?
really?
giggles.
Moonbunny?
Ooops, did I type that?
*grin*
Lisa
Bailey's Angel in Charge of Moonbunnies
Poem
Wow, Jenn nice piece. I felt it touch me.
Courage is resistance to fear, mastery of fear - not absence of fear.
Mark Twain.
Leigh Veritas
Kudos Jenn /Moonbunny?
Jenn you have a way with word. Sorry for the pain I wish I had a magic wand to take it away HUGS
P.S. how do you become a Moonbunny ?
is there an application to fill out ?
Becoming a Moonbunny...
It's a long, painful process. You have to put on a technologically advanced supersuit that then merges with the cells of your body and gives you super powers, and installs an AI companion into your brain that becomes one with your mind over time.
Oh wait, no, that was a novel I read once. The Enhanced: Moonbunny.
Lisa
Moonbunny Candidate
Love might last for you... I hope it will.
I'll join Andrea, Dorothy and you, three of my favorite people, in that hand holding and group hug, if you'll have me.
Well written and succinct as always.
Ole
We are each exactly as God made us. God does not make mistakes!
Gender rights are the new civil rights!
Universal Emotions
Universal emotions always make the best poetry.
Maybe Steve Hackett was feeling something similar when he wrote this. (Vocals by Randy Crawford.)
http://youtu.be/dGDtPsrCwhY
From the album 'Please Don't Touch' (1978)
Quite how it wasn't number 1 across the world I couldn't say.
I found the love I had lost
Lost Love Found
I prayed for it to come back
I hoped it would return for us
I craved for the past
It has been away
Why did it leave?
I prayed this hurt to pass
I hoped the hurt would leave us
The hurt is in the past
The Love that was lost has returned
and it will always stay
for I found my lost love today
Kathryn D