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This Story
Is sure going places that I never thought of. I like its mixture of story elements, and general direction.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Seems to me
to be as good a story line as when you first released it. Lots of effort and imagination and working with words went into this. I guess the burning question HAS to be when we get to see the new chapter. Glad you brought it out of hiding.
Astral Projection
I love this chapter. It's like right out of a book I've read on astral projection. I suspect you've read more than a few books on the subject. :)
I love the scene with the wolf teacher, though it sounds a bit harsh to teach using nightmares even it it could be effective.
I love Jenny's response to the rising water. It was interesting to see all the different types of responses to it.
The teaching kept my rational mind happy but my emotional self loved the growing romance between Dawn and Diane. I'm actually half asleep as I type this so my comments might not make much sense. I'm about to take a nap, and I hope to have the same type of dreams. I can almost tie everything together -- the rational, emotional, reality, matter, energy, time. It's all a matter of different perseptives I think. I hope to find out ... someday. *sigh*
Nighty night
- Terry
Not sure how I feel about the
Not sure how I feel about the beginning of this chapter, maybe a bit too much recounting. Might be just my personal preferences though...
hehe palms... IIRC palm is bancrupt or something. Ah... how time flies :)
The unterwater learning scene is awesome. I think it's the best magic-learning scene I've ever read.
Anyway, I don't have much to say about this chapter, only that I need to read more :)
Thank you for writing this captivating story,
Beyogi