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Imagine a future where women are dominant. Their bodies can "Rebirth" you into the girl you've always wanted to be? What if they can also make women's body a weapon to use against men so are able to protect themselves? All this while jump starting evolution? The only down side, eventually there will be NO MORE MEN

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Subject: REPOST: Evolution / 1
Date: Mon, 20 Jul 1992 19:33:19 GMT

Note from the author:

Back in the 1950's and 60's, and to some extent even after this,
there's been a definite science-fiction sub genre which involved itself,
somehow, with the battle of the sexes-- as a "tease" to its audience,
one or more female antagonists threaten to somehow destroy, enslave, or
otherwise torture their male counterparts-- usually with some
overriding sexual overtones to keep the audience's interest.

In many cases, the males' intended proposed fate was justified; in some
cases the territory of an isolated group of women was violated; in some
the antagonist has suffered some kind of abuse that justified her
terrible wrath.

These stories, and even the parodies which followed, all shared the
same conclusion, though; in the inevitable happy ending, the male
protagonists successfully defend against the women's apparently
scatterbrained efforts to change their lives; the suddenly-"evil"
females, soundly trounced, slink back to the repressive shadows from
which they came, and the world quickly returned to normal. The "50
foot woman", having exacted her revenge on her cheating husband, is
electrocuted. Martian women, plans in ruins, are abandoned
on their own planet. Ultimately, not much has happened; after all,
it's been a "tease" to the audience all along.

What might happen if the outcome were different?

Disclaimer/Copyright:

This story is placed in the public domain by the author and was first
published on Usenet beginning on March 24, 1992. Adult content (FDMS,
W/S, more). Feel free to reply with any comments.


Posters Notes: This story is about 20 years old, and I spent a few hours tracking it down yesterday. I only managed to find it in two places, one didn't have the complete story, and the other was a Russian website riddled with warnings however I managed to get the whole story in a single file. Today I found it on another site with the above Public Domain Release. Tomorrow I will start to post a chapter a day or so. I am not going to alter the text in any way to fix typos and the like.

This story does have some elements that may make some overly sensitive to be aware. There is some minor Pee play that furthers the story. There are sex scenes with 2+ women, and sex with a man and a woman. I've personally been drawn back to the story over and over again due to some wondrous scenes and concepts throughout. I don't have a clue as to how many folks might have ever read it. It was posted on Usenet in 1992.

Look for chapter one tomorrow. I admit I'm not certain what the reaction will be, but I'd be happy to discuss the philosophy. :)

Last thing, the original author's name has eluded me in my searching. If anyone has it and/or know the guy, that would be quite helpful.

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IS THIS LEGIT?

kristina l s's picture

Frank?... an earlier alias. This seems very suss.

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kristina l s's picture

It seemed from spelling errors, the Russian mention, style of story not to be a very 'Frank' type thing. If it was dodgy I wanted to draw attention. All is apparently well, so... all good. Sorry to be a bit cryptic about the names.

Kristina

Evolution 00 of 24 - Infomration

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    Stanman
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May Your Light Forever Shine

Oldy but Goody

Very good story from time past.

Author is unknown, but I do have a copy in various formats.

If you want to check...

Bring it on.

A vintage story from the past skillfully unearthed and dusted off. This could be interesting. For those who may not know try reading A shore of Women by Pamella Sargent I believe. This made it into print and has been around for some time.

The only bad question is the one not asked.
Why does fiction make people worry so? Guilty conscious may be?

The only bad question is the one not asked.

I am curious about the legality here

How, if the original author and/ or present owner of the story cannot be found, can this be posted when the tenents of this site are permissions to post are required and material which could be sufficient to shut down the site legally is not permitted?

Just curious mind you.

I would like to read it just as much as the next gal.

Anesidora

Public Domain

Frank's picture

The story was originally posted on Usenet in 1992. Usenet at the time WAS the internet along with FTP/TELNET/IRC and some other protocols. Usenet was the internet's message boards. On the Russian site I found a complete copy of the story it doesn't mention the public domain notice above. The site I found it on yesterday where it is broken down into the individual chapter (also how it was originally posted) had the Public Domain message.

Thanks to someone who PM'd me earlier, I have the author's name to post it under when, Erin gets a moment to add him to the author list. If there was a problem with the story (or any on this site) Erin and the admins would not have a problem removing them.

{{Hugs}}

Hugs

Frank

Story Legitimacy

Piper's picture

I have added the author to the author list, and edited the story appropriately. I can confirm that Erin did approve the posting of this story. So that's the end of the legitimacy thread unless someone else is claiming ownership.

-P/KAF/PT


"Science is just magic with an explanation, and bumblebees are just tiny little fairies in disguise. :)" Submitted by Erin on Sun, 2010/04/04 - 6:37pm.



"She was like a butterfly, full of color and vibrancy when she chose to open her wings, yet hardly visible when she closed them."
— Geraldine Brooks


legality - thank you

My questioning was due to the mention of a Russian site.

While much of their web is wide open, there is an adamant censorship and ownership claim by the government.

I only noted this as during my observations of other material gleaned from the web and supposedly public domain, their government did pursue redress in Europen and World court dominions.

As this is my favorite site, I was being selfish in that I didn't want something bad to happen to it.

I'm looking forward to reading what is seldom pursued.

Thank you

Anesidora

For what it is worth

Frank's picture

The version I'm posting is from another site where it is posted in it's individual chapters and not the entire story in one huge slug. Also the site where I'm posting from is where the Public Domain notice was, not on the Russian site.

{{Hugs}}

Hugs

Frank

Regarding authorship...

I don't remember exactly where I got my copy from (it *might* have been from Google Groups/Deja News), but I probably got it after 2004, when I had a computer crash and lost most of my stories collection, and it was certainly before 2006, which is the latest timestamp in my copy. I vaguely remember reading it before the disk crash, so I probably saw it around sometime around 2000.

Anyway, wherever it was, it DID have the full 24 chapters, it DID have a public-domain deed at the top, and it did have an "Extras" (more like a FAQ) at the end. And... I noted an e-mail, probably the Usenet poster's e-mail at the time. Almost certainly obsolete by now (how many people still keep their 1992 e-mail accounts?), but it was [email protected]

As for the "Dream Weevil" name, it's very possible. The author was fairly well-known in the nineties (there is a story by this person in the original "Transformations Story Archive" called "Pony's Revenge"). When searching for it in Google Groups (damn Google bought Deja News and made it nearly unusable, took me a while to find anything, and not the original post of the story) I found this "smoking gun," back from 1994, where Dream Weevil not only reposts the story but seems to admit authorship, by this phrase: "two-and-a-half years later there are things even I would change; but I'm supposed to be working on other things." http://groups.google.com/group/alt.sex.femdom/browse_thread/...

Anyway, one fairly recent (2008) repost, again by Dream Weevil, was here: http://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=13009&start=60 - so he might be still reachable.

Just - wow.

Back in my early college days - I stumbled across this story. This was the first story I read having to do with transformation. Not just feminizing, but transformation...

Been hooked ever since.

Thanks for reposting this - it has driven me crazy that I could not remember the name of the story or author.

Mr.P