Christina (Chris) Martin nee Christopher came to his senses after his startling transformation into a woman, and also with his new found powers. He, make that she was not happy with the idea of being a female, she was happy with her old body and missed her old life. She also realized though that she could not change it now, but would try to find a way to get her old life back.
The weight of her new breasts were a little startling to get used to, but she also realized that she had to get home and try to make a new life for herself. She was also curious thought about her new body. She also realized that she also had to get herself a new wardrobe, since she had a good idea that her old clothes would not fit her too well. She started to walk her way out of the dark forest, since the coven of witches she had disturbed had already left. She also found that she had to get used to a different way of walking since she had breasts and a void that she now had between her legs. She also thought to herself that she now would have to get used to wearing woman's shoes especially heels, she definitely was not looking forward to that.
She finally got herself home to her apartment. She went into her bedroom and looked into the mirror, after she took off her clothes so that she could get a better idea of she looked like. Her hair was now shoulder-length, still was the ebony color that she was used to. Her face and softer features now, a more dainty nose, a nice cupid bow shaped mouth and large emerald eyes that had a nice sparkle to them. She had a nice peaches and cream complexion to it. Chris realized that she still looked very similar to his face when he was Christopher.
Chris proceeded to let her gaze wander down her new body. She noticed her slim shoulders, her C-cup breasts, her nice hourglass shape. Her gaze next took in the junction between her nice shapely legs. She was shocked at the sight of her new womanhood. She did miss her nice sized manhood. She decided to explore her new genitalia, and let her fingers explore the entrance into her new vagina. It felt different but pleasant as she massaged her clit. She realized that maybe it would not be all bad being a woman.
Chris decided to experiment with using her new powers and wanted to see what limits she had. She noticed a vase of flowers sitting on the nightstand in her bedroom and wanted to see if she could levitate it to her. She remembered watching that TV show about three sister witches and wanted to see if she could orb it to her, but that did not work. Next she tried to picture it moving in the air towards her. She did not think that this would work so she was surprised when she saw the vase start to rise up off the table and move through the air towards her. She put out her hand so that the vase would land in it. She then wanted to see if she could transform it into something else, so she pictured, in her mind, the vase and flowers turning into marble. The vase and flowers proceeded to lose their beautiful colors and turn to a marble like color as the proceeded to also become stiff.
Chris decided to get ready to bed and put on an old t-shirt from her days as Christopher. It now hung a little bit lower on her new body, as she had lost about 3 inches from her previous height of 5' 10”. She planned on going shopping tomorrow and get herself some new clothes. She figured that she could go to a thrift store. She decided to open a store also, so that she could make some money. She wanted it to be a store where people could buy all kinds of things to bring pleasure to their lives.
She got the next morning, and put on some jeans and a t-shirt she found. The jeans were a little large but she could still wear them the same for a pair of old sneakers that she found buried in her closet. She also realized that she would have buy and learn how to use make-up in the near future. She missed the easiness that men have to get ready. She realized that from now on it would take her a lot longer to get ready to face the world.
As she was making her way, to the shops to get what she needed she found the perfect spot to open her shop and it happened to be for sale. She took down the information and called the reality company to get the price quote. She had a nice bank account, from an inheritance from her late grandmother, luckily the account was under the name of Chris Martin and no gender was specified. Her grandmother had set it up that way, as if she knew something like what happened to Chris would have happened. Once she was told, the price she decided to buy the store.
A month later, she finally opened the store. As for getting the goods, what was the point of being a witch if you couldn't use a little magic to help get you set up a little bit quicker.
Comments
Keep going.
Try and dwell a little longer on each individual circumstance. Some of the scenes are a bit thin on description. Otherwise a nice read.
Beverly.
Growing old disgracefully.
Thank you
Thank you for the advice. I enjoy reading your stories.
Huh?
How could Chris be late for his curfew and live in his own apartment?
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Light travels faster than sound. This is why some people appear bright until they speak.
I went outside once. The graphics weren' that great.
Huh
Thanks for catching that but since I wrote, the other part over eight years ago, we can ignore the curfew. Matter of fact I think I can edit that. lol
another slip..
yeah i keep getting the impression that this is a kid, like in the first story the witches are in his class... yet all of a sudden he's trying to open a store? O.o
Excellent potential
But you need to watch your continuity.
In the first part, while the transformation is going on, you state, "He felt his honey blond hair growing. It stopped when it reached his shoulder blades."
Then, in the second part, after returning to his/her apartment, you say, "Her hair was now shoulder-length, still was the ebony color that she was used to."
Which is it? Down to her shoulder blades and honey blond or shoulder length and ebony?
Best to write several parts in a single document and then post one part at a time than to write a sequel part without regard to the continuity that preceded it.
Just my two cents. Looks like it can be really, really good.
Erica
good start
cant wait to see what happens. keep up the good work.
robert
intresting start
which did you mean ? "She was shocked at the site of her new womanhood." or should that be "She was shocked at the sight of her new womanhood."
Sinful Pleasures 2 - Opening the Store
What kind of store is it?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Sinful Pleasures 2
Right now, I have some ideas formulating in my brain for some of the customers. I think of it as a store where the customers realize dreams that will make them happy or become someone or something that may make another person happy.
What can I say?
I have quite a bit of criticism, so forgive me in advance. The negatives are spoilered and if you don't want to you can skip them. They are a bit harsh.
{Highlight to read} The first and the second part seem more than a little disjointed. The coven and it's characterisation, and the characterisation of the entity, are almost nil. It seems very surprising that Chris was left practically alone to fend for herself in the world, without anyone accepting any responsibility to help. The 'punishment' is completely uncalled for. And the measure of Chris being integrated in the world after the change is also not shown.
I feel the story could benefit from a better characterisation of the parties involved and their future relations. The entire story has a feeling, for lack of a better word, an outline of a story, a skeleton on which a lot could be grown. I appreciate the efforts you made in writing it, but I feel the premise has to be elaborated on because right now it leaves a lot of questions unanswered.
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!