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Alright, since I made too many mistakes in my Tail of Two Bloods story, I'm going to revise it to make the chapters longer, and more understanding. I didn't get too many suggestions, or any...really...for my story so I'm going in blind for a second try. ^^; Wish me luck BCTS.

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Don't be afraid to revise stuff posted here

BC is a writer friendly site.

Though quality proofing is much appreciated we don't mind *works in progress* or else how would I ever have gotten posted here?

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

By Accident?

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You meant to submit to the Wawatosa Times

Angharad :)

Angharad

Ang, you have it wrong ...

it's the Wauwatosa News Times, published by The Milwaukee Journal Sentinal Co.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

I was close

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Does anything ever happen in Wauwawhatever to make news? If it wasn't for the song, i'd never have heard of Milwaukee let alone Ow-ma-toses.

Angharad

Angharad

Yeah. I was planning to for

Yeah. I was planning to for a while, but I don't get enough input to do so. Alot of what I do puts me in the dark. which is why I jumped alot the first time around. Untill I catch up with Revision, the first Seven Chapters aren't going to be apart of the story. I may not even go the same way I did.
I used to be broken, I used to be lost. Unsure of what I was, until he found me...

Never be afraid to push yourself to new limits. While you might not see the path, you will be amazed at what you can achieve.