Pennies for Michelle

This is my first effort at this so please tell me if I have done anything incorrect and also how to make my writing better.
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Pennies for Michelle.
By plastic_roses

“A penny for your thoughts…” Said a sexy yet husky voice as father of one Joseph Brennan stared deep into his almost empty shot glass.

“What?” Joseph asked more out of shock then out of curiosity.



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