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Adam
Robert
Nate
Eli
Jonathan
Scott
Jessica
This was a bit of an experiment so let me know what you think in the comments!
This isn't exactly a sequel to Twin Swap or another chapter as much as it is an update on the characters. Basically these are screenshots from "Tyler's phone" on an average day a few years later, apart from the fact that Scott is away in Florida for the week for a baseball tournament. I thought it might be a fun new thing to try.
This takes place two years after the epilogue so Tyler, Jillian, Adam, and Scott are all in high school while Mason and Eli are in middle school.
Mom
Adam
Robert
Nate
Eli
Jonathan
Scott
Jessica
This was a bit of an experiment so let me know what you think in the comments!
Comments
Interesting
That was interesting.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
A different way to present a
A different way to present a story followup and a day in the lives of our two twins. Looks like they have truly settled into their new personas.
Novel concept
Kudos on trying something new. Very unique. I had a tough time easily following the flow of the story (because I don't have a smart phone) but you may have a found a format/style that will find an easy audience for a lot of readers. Your previous stories (in traditional format) were very well written and received. Keep writing.
Donna
This really was the best case.
She's doing well, as is Johnathan. Everyone has moved on with their lives. Their mother has SOMEHOW not gotten reported to CPS. I think that we can safely say that the best has indeed happened.
I must say that this is a
I must say that this is a first for Big Closet !
aahh mmmm?
kinda unsure if I was reading the messages from the right perspective.. Don't know how to text.. but enjoy this story!
alissa
Texting
This is interesting and i wonder if you could come up with a story that is nothing but text. Not sure how it would go, but the idea is there to go with. Maybe a pretext story before your next as if someone is trying to say they are suddenly a girl, but doesn't have the courage to call at first. Kind of to get the reaction before calling or coming in the house.
Hugs, Sara
Emotion, yet peace.
Ignorance, yet knowledge.
Passion, yet serenity.
Chaos, yet harmony.
Contemplation, yet duty
Death, yet the Force.
Light with dark, I remain Balanced.
Phone Update
FINALLY GOT SOME TIME TO READ STORY.
While I usually prefer normal story format, I think that the experiment worked out pretty well.
Gave story a thumbs up.
Keep writing
Phone Update
FINALLY GOT SOME TIME TO READ STORY.
While I usually prefer normal story format, I think that the experiment worked out pretty well.
Gave story a thumbs up.
Keep writing
Brilliant Story
Brilliant Story started it yesterday and finished it just now, I'll leave the story for few months and go read it all again, I do that with story's I love after finishing them I take time off then go back to them, I know all your characters are fiction but I wish I knew them and could hang around them, sounds like a brilliant family and a very supportive one too, anyway much love to this story and thanks for writing it,
S.Reacts