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When Stephanie and Judy heard Crissie describe Marti's new Halloween costume they immediately forgot what happened on September 19th [International Talk Like A Pirate Day or Dress Like A Girl Pirate Day in Crissie's World]. Both raised a cup. When Crissie joined in, all three spontaneously shouted (as if they were staring in a movie...) "All for One and One for All, united we stand divided we fall!"
"Roland [high school] Colors?"
"No, our Princess Pink she will be!"
"Aurora always was your favorite"
{giggles}
"Do you think we can pull it off?"
"Oh yeah! There are tons of websites and how to videos."
"Let's do it!"
"What about Kiera and your sister?"
"We will need both. Let's try Kiera first. We definitely need her help and she's always been willing to join in."
"Sounds like a plan"
Having not learned their lesson from the last time, Crissie was able to ensnare Kiera and her BFF... Meanwhile, life went on for the unsuspecting Marty. Surprisingly, he didn't die at school after his pirating adventure. In fact, he found himself with new friends (and brooding enemies who waited for a opportunity to destroy the bitch of Roland).
As Halloween approached, Marty did not notice the increasing stares and secret conversations about Marti's next adventure (stoked by Crissie's leaked rumors).
The first dress was completed on the fifteenth of October, but the Princess's Musketeers were not satisfied with her gown. It was insufficiently bouffant for a Princess of Royal Blood! The second gown was completed two days before Halloween. When the gown was completed, the Musketeers realized they had a problem. How could their Princess sit in such a bouffant gown. Kiera quickly searched the Internet and found a solution. The Musketeers would put a stool under her dress in order for the Princess to sit down.
The night before Halloween, the Plan was complete. Her gown and undergarments prepared. Her breasts cleaned and prepared. Her Musketeers Uniforms prepared. Her Royal stool stowed in her carriage. All that remained was to inform the Princess...
Crissie knew how to get Marti to accept her next challenge. She didn't have a chance. Her fate was sealed (as if she were a document awaiting the sealing wax) the minute Crissie's eyes began to gleam.
The next morning, two cars entered the empty student parking lot (students never arrived that early). The Five Musketeers quickly emerged from the vehicles. While one carried the Princess's gown securely covered in a blanket, a second carried the Royal Stool. The remaining Musketeers carefully guarded a cloaked figure. The party quickly moved to the closest girls restroom where a guard was placed at the door.
When students began to arrive, the strangely clad guard at the restroom door attracted attention. When two girls attempted to enter, they were politely told that the restroom was temporarily closed. Intimidated by the Senior, the two girls moved towards another restroom wondering what was going on??? Soon, a crowd appeared and began milling around in sight of the restroom door. Finally, the curiosity of the crowd was satisfied as the door was opened and the Princess emerged surrounded by her escort.
There were gasps of amazement as the crowd rushed to pull out their cell phones. Before them was the most amazing thing they had ever seen! Within a minute cell phones all over Roland Heights were being pulled out so that people could see the selfies and read the texts about the Princess of Roland and her amazing gown - A GOWN OF BALLOONS! She was beautiful! Her Gown was breathtaking! A beaming Crissie thought "Best Halloween EVER!"
The Princess's Musketeers escorted the Princess to her first period. Entering the classroom first, Crissie shouted "Her Royal Highness the Princess of Roland High!" Following the Princess, Judy and Stephanie quickly moved forward, removed Martie's chair, pulled the desk behind back about four feet and placed the Royal Stool. Marti moved next to the stool. When Judy pulled up the back of her dress, Stephanie pushed the Royal Stool under the dress. Marti carefully sat down with the grace of a Princess (they had practiced sitting down in the restroom). The (bemused) teacher tried his best to conduct the class normally (with little success - there was considerable distraction from people walking by the (open) classroom door and peering in for a glimpse of the Princess). The teacher considered having the door closed, but decided to just soldier through the class.
When the bell rang, Marti waited patiently until Judy and Stephanie arrived to assist her to stand up and leave the classroom. Meanwhile Brad and his minions ditched their next class and hurried to the gym to ambush Marty. Instead of escorting Marti to the gym, they headed to the library (Elizabeth had arraigned for Marti to be excused from PE).
Once they figured out that Marty wasn't going to PE, Brad, Thing One and Thing Two quickly left the gym (avoiding the teachers). Outside, They ran into a pair of senior girls who had also waited to get Marty. A quick conference, a few texts and a plan was hatched to get Marty at lunch. Over the next two hours, a series of texts and covert conversations cemented the alliance. Based upon surveillance of The Princess's movements, everything was in place to separate Marti from the Musketeers. Unbeknownst to his fellow conspirators, Brad was armed with a large switchblade...
As Kiera and Eliza left their classroom, they were intercepted by two seniors who tried to delay them long enough for Brad to get The SKANK. In a hurry to join The Princess for lunch, Kiera and Eliza begged off and tried to move around the other two seniors. Both were grabbed by the other girls. Realizing they were being deliberately delayed, both Kiera and Eliza pushed the other girls away and quickly hurried towards the lunch area. One of the other girls banged into a row of lockers and stopped. The second girl landed against a bystander. Undeterred, she took off after Eliza. Pushing the bystanders aside she quickly caught up with Eliza and grabbed her by the hair knocking off Eliza's stylish hat. Both girls fell to the floor. Kiera turned around and saw what was happening. She kicked the girl who had pulled her BFF's hair who cried out and released her hold on Eliza. Kiera helped Eliza stand up. Kiera asked her BFF "Are you Okay?" Not answering, Eliza took off for the lunch area. Kiera turned to face the girl crying on the ground and snarled "If you get up, I'll smash your face!" When the girl on the ground just continued to cry, Kiera turned and followed Eliza...
When Judy left her classroom to join the group for lunch, she was also accosted. Judy ignored the girl and proceeded on her way. Her assailant tried grabbing Judy's hair. Big mistake! With her martial arts training, as soon as she felt her hair being pulled, Judy instinctively wheeled and drove her elbow into the head of her assailant. The unfortunate girl immediately dropped to the ground - stunned. Judy didn't even turn around to look at the girl. Realizing what was happening, she took off running...
The girls detailed to stop Crissie and Stephanie missed their target! Having prearranged hall passes, Crissie and Stephanie had already picked up The Princess and seated her at their regular table. When Stephanie left Crissie and The Princess to pick up their lunches, Brad (waiting for his opportunity) quickly moved forward with Thing One and Thing Two. Thing One grabbed and held Crissie while Brad and Think Two pulled up Marty to his feet. Yelling "Hold the Trannie!", Brad released his hold and pulled out his switch blade. Opening the blade, Brad began to pop balloons with the knife...
Turning to see what the commotion was about, Stephanie realized what was happening. She pushed her way out of line and rushed towards Marti...
After popping some of the balloons the gown began to slip down Marti's chest, exposing his bra and his breasts. Stunned at the sight in front of him, Brad yelled "FUCK, the Trannie has TITS!" Terrified, Marti froze as Brad began to slash with the knife ripping Marti's gown to the waist. Glancing down at Marti's tits and his now visible panties, Brad screamed "Fuck this Bitch! I'm gonna make her suck me off!" Not thinking, Brad tried to grab Marti's head and pull him down. At this point, Marti finally reacted! Marti screamed at the top of his lungs "RAPE!" and tried to twist himself loose. Brad's knife entered Marti's body near his groin. In shock from the intense pain, Marti collapsed into unconsciousness. As his body slumped, the knive drove deeper into Marti up to the hilt...
Turning the corner, Judy saw the blood spurt from Marti's body as Brad's knive drove into Marti. Enraged, she ran straight towards Brad...
When Thing One saw the knife enter Marti's body and the blood pour out as Marti collapsed, he immediately let go of Crissie, shouted "Fuck this!", turned and started to run - right into the arms of the first teacher on the scene...
Seeing the pool of blood on the ground, Thing Two let go of Marti, turned and fled. He didn't get far. He ran into the Varsity Quarterback's fist. Putting his foot on the chest of the now unconscious Thing Two, he said (to his friend) "Get Tank."
Brad released his hold on the knife. He watched as Marti collapsed and a pool of blood began to form. Deciding it was time to get out of Dodge, he took off running. He took three steps before running into Judy's knee. Brad immediately collapsed. Judy began kicking him repeatedly as hard as she could...
As soon as she was released, Crissie ran to Marti, crying. She put both her hands on Marti desperately trying to stop the blood flowing from the now unconscious Marti...
Stephanie reached the scene and quickly pulled out her cell phone, dialing 911.
"Operator 13. What is your emergency?"
"PLEASE HELP! Marti has just been stabbed!"
"Who am I talking to?"
"PLEASE HELP US! There's blood everywhere. I think Marti's dying!"
''Where are you and who am I speaking to?"
"Roland High School. Please help Marti!"
"Roland High School in Roland Heights?"
"YES! PLEASE HELP US!"
"Do you know who stabbed her?"
"BRAD! JUDY KNEED HIM! SHE'S KICKING THE SHIT OUT OF HIM!"
"Can you describe the victim? What is she wearing?"
"HE'S A FRESHMAN! HE'S WEARING A PINK GOWN!"
"Who is wearing the Pink gown? Brad or Marti?"
"MARTI! SHE'S WEARING THE GOWN!"
"Is Marti a girl or a boy?"
"SHE'S A BOY! WE NEED HELP! THERE'S BLOOD EVERYWHERE!"
"Stay on the line. I'm going to get you some help now don't hang up. Stay with me."
"Dispatch. This is 911 Operator 13. I have a Code 3 at Roland High School lunchroom Roland Heights. We have a stabbing victim. Victim is loosing a large amount of blood. Victim is a High School Freshman named Marti. Victim is wearing a pink gown. 911 caller is confused about the gender of the victim. Perp is a male student. Perp has been disabled and is currently being assaulted by a bystander. "
"Hello? Are you still with me? What is your name?"
A female teacher moved in front of Elizabeth and grabbed her.
"Stop right now, Elizabeth. We don't allow students to fight at Roland High School."
As Kiera caught up, the teacher yelled "You too Kiera."
"We were attacked by those bitches! They were trying to delay us so they can get Marti."
"We will discuss this in the office."
"We can discuss it later, I have to get to my brother."
"She's telling the truth Mrs. Gage."
Tank stopped when a girl grabbed his arm. "Tank, wait we need to talk."
Tank stopped and looked at the girl. "I'm not interested Linda."
Just then another football player turned the corner and spied Tank. "Tom wants you in the lunchroom. Someone just stabbed Marti."
"Forget about that SKANK bitch! Let's talk about the prom."
Pushing the girl away, Tank said harshly "If it came down to a choice between you and Marti, I'd ask Marti to go to the prom, you disgusting whore!"
"FUCK YOU YOU GAY FUCK! I HOPE SHE DIES!"
"Let's go."
When Tank turned the corner, he heard Mr. De Soto yell "JUDY STOP!"
Hurling forward, Tank pushed through the crowd until he could see Mr. De Soto holding onto a struggling Thing One while still trying to get Judy to stop kicking Brad who was moaning on the ground. Quickly moving behind Judy, Tank reached out and grabbed Judy picking her up off the ground. Still trying to kick Brad, she yelled at Tank "LET ME GO! THAT BASTARD KILLED MARTI!"
Many students were milling around. Sirens could be heard. Crissie was crying while desperately trying to stanch the flow of blood. Stephanie sat next to Crissie also crying while desperately clutching her cell phone. She couldn't hear the 911 operator trying to go her attention. Tom stood over Thing Two with one foot still firmly on his chest. Tank was unable to calm Judy down. She was still struggling to kick Brad but unable to break Tank's hold on her.
Suddenly, two paramedics and four cops ran into the lunch area followed by the Assistant Principal. One of the cops quickly moved next to Tom (the Varsity Quarterback) and cuffed suspect #1 on the ground. A second cop moved next to Mr. De Soto and quickly cuffed suspect #2 while Mr. De Soto continued to yell "Judy stop!" The third cop moved next to Tank and said "Let the girl go son."
"Sir I think that is a really bad idea. One of her best friends was just killed by that bastard. If I let her go she'll try to kill him."
Mr. De Soto cried out "He's right officer! Give her a chance to calm down."
A girl turned the corner and yelled at Elizabeth "Brad just stabbed Marti in the lunchroom. I think he killed him."
Elizabeth slamed Mrs. Gage against the lockers and screamed "FUCK YOU!" She and Eliza immediately started running towards the lunchroom...
The paramedics took a brief look at Brad and without stopping moved to begin treating Marti...
The fourth cop moved next to Stephanie and got down on his knees. He gently touched the shoulder of the crying girl desperately clutching her cell phone and asked her "Are you the one that called 911?"
Stephanie nodded and continued to cry...
The cop put his hand on her phone and said "Please give me your phone."
Stephanie released her hand from the phone. The cop quickly stood up and said into the phone " Sergeant Stoker here. We will need two ambulances and additional police backup. Request two vehicles with women officers and at least two detectives "
"911 operator 13. Officer Stoker requests two ambulances, two additional vehicles with women officers and two detectives."
"Thank you operator 13. You can terminate 911 call after requesting additional backup."
Paramedic Early tried to pull Crissie away so he could begin to treat Marti. The distraught girl refused to move away crying "I HAVE TO STOP THE BLEEDING!" Calling Sergeant Stoker over, Paramedic Early asked him to "Get her away so we can treat the victim."
The Sergeant grabbed Crissie and pulled her away. She despatately tried to get back to Marti crying "I HAVE TO STOP THE BLEEDING."
Elizabeth entered the lunchroom just in time to see a cop dragging her sister away coated with fresh blood while she cried "LET ME GO!"
Furious, Elizabeth launched herself on the back of the Sergeant screaming "LET HER GO YOU FUCKING BASTARD!"
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I recommend you watch both of this chapter's videos in order to visualize Marti's Gown.
However, you might want to watch the second video after reading the chapter.
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2nd Video gone - You Tube account gone.
SmDani4
Well well well...
This story just took off like a rocket all of a sudden, didn't it? Nice.
If you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything.
Re: "Well well well..."
I tried to telegraph that this chapter would (hopefully) be exciting the day before in my last comment on Chapter 2 ("Same Bat Time, Same Bat Channel").
Thanks for the complement. I was trying to set up a Halloween nightmare. As an experiment, I tried to make it a real time event by rapidly moving from location/character to location/character as if everything was happening at the same time. Judging by the Kudo rate, the attempt wasn't as sucessful as I had hoped. The "feel good Halloween stories" (judging by the kudos) seem to be better received.
glad
Our emergency services don't waste that much time asking stupid questions, you could die before they've even asked why you are calling. And the friends took long enough to ring for help too - think I'd want better friends than that.
Bit of fun to forced Sex change hasn't improved the story which was quite fun before.
Madeline Anafrid Bell
Re: "Glad"
Crissie and her friends intended for Halloween to be "a bit of fun" like Dress Like A Girl Pirate Day. They tried to make sure that Marti was kept safe. They didn't expect Brad to have a switchblade and a gang willing to plan and launch a coordinated attack (separately on) the individual Musketeers in order to get Marti alone.
Stephanie was the only one of Marti's friends to call 911 (most likely, other bystanders also called 911 but they weren't included in the story). Her other friends were temporarily detained by teachers or Brad's gang members. They all tried to help (in their own way) as soon as they could. In addition, the football players stepped in without hesitation to stop the violence.
I'm not an expert on emergency responder procedures. I did do a limited internet search on LA area 911 procedures while composing this chapter including a short video on the LA City Control Center. One of the speakers in the video said that 911 operators had a prepared list of questions. I didn't have time to track down the list, so I just "winged it". I think if you speak out my text (while watching a clock) the time expired during the initial 911 call before the 911 operator contacted the dispatcher was well under a minute.
I wasn't intending to have Marty undergo a forced sex change. Personally, I feel that forced sex change is a very bad thing. I kept his injury ambiguous by stating that the wound was "near the groin area".
I did attempt to create a Halloween nightmare, which was different from chapter 1 where it was all in good fun. In hindsight, maybe I should have just stopped the story at chapter 1. So far, this chapter has not been well received, so your point has merit.
There is a transgender character in the story (based upon the events of chapter 1). I thought it should have been obvious, but apparently no one picked up on the clues. This person has not been "outed" and has been careful to conceal the physical gender from friends.
I like the story
It's just so scary.
There are so many directions it could go in now.
I would just hope that even if this hadn't happened, Chrissie's friends would have some compassion for Marty. They seem to use him w/o any feeling for him.
Re: "I like the story"
If you really want to see something really scary, watch the video for Mary Celeste Chapter 1:
http://youtu.be/ETC6NSxpFFE
What directions could this story possible go:
Brad ripped of the dress of a fellow student, tried to rape him, and then stabbed him before running into one pissed off Wild Cat!
Thing One grabbed a female student and then ran into the arms of a teacher before being handcuffed by the cops!
Thing Two participated in an assault, attempted rape, and a stabbing before being put down by the Varsity Quarterback, followed by being handcuffed by the cops!
Marti was assaulted, had her dress ripped off, was almost raped, was stabbed and is lying in a pool of blood!
Judy assaulted a fellow student, threatened her, and attempted to kill Brad before being grabbed by Tank!
Tank grabbed a really pissed off wildcat and is afraid to let go:
http://youtu.be/JIuep-pOS0U
(This video is really funny in the context of this comment)
Crissie refused to allow the paramedics to treat her brother before being dragged away by a cop!
Elizabeth swore like a sailor, slamed a teacher against the lockers before assaulting a cop!
Kiera kicked a fellow student on the ground and ran off after being detained by a teacher!
Six female students engaged in a criminal conspiracy to commit Assault, Rape, Murder!
Two detectives have been requested to investigate a riot at a local High School!
Nothing going on here! Just a normal Halloween at Roland High School.
Normal Late bloomers,
don't usually resort to PALS. Actually, I had noticed somebody seems to already own a set, and somebody else seemed eager to order a set too. In fact I even stopped to google it to be sure they were exactly what I thought they were.
Hey who says he has to live as a girl even if....., well you know, though very few stories seem to buck that trend.
Crissie needs to, let the Paramedics works, she is not helping. Gee, I wonder if Elizabeth is going to jail, she assaulted police officer. They tend to not let that go regardless of what else is going on, or led up to it. If the Sergeant is a stickler about it, Crissie assaulted a police officer too, just by trying to pull away.
Gee, and everyone seemed so calm after Marti's first escapade, now all hell breaks loose.
I am going to guess Marti is not going to actually die, only cause it might put a damper on more adventures.
*awaits more*
~Hypatia >i<
The girl pirate by Josette...
...I am so glad you have continued this story. What is to become of Marti? Thing one and two even seemed to think Brad went too far... Grad Marti has some real guy friends. Do the Musketeers really care about Marti and know him/her inside?
Hugs, Jessie C
Jessica E. Connors
Jessica Connors
spectacular pacing!
and narration. Just so exciting, though you got caught up with name confusion and have "Elizabeth" and "Eliza" as two different people.
Re: "spectacular pacing!" - "name confusion"
The use of both Elizabeth and Eliza to identify the same character was deliberate. However, I may have to rethink this???
In an earlier serial (Mary Celeste) the two leading female characters are sisters called Elizabeth and Crissie (I reused the names in Dress Up Like A Girl Pirate Day). In Mary Celeste, male characters called the older sister Elizabeth and the younger sister Crissie ( her actual name is probably Christine). Throughout both stories I used Crissie exclusively. In Mary Celeste, I used Eliza when the scene was primarily about the two sisters. In the company of men, I usually referred to her as Elizabeth. The male characters addressed her as Elizabeth. In Dress Like A Girl Pirate Day Elizabeth's BFF (Kiera) calls her Eliza. I used Eliza when the scene included only Kiera and Eliza (out of the five musketeers).
The fast pacing is an experiment that violates standard English grammar. I was attempting to describe multiple events occurring at the same time by rapidly shifting from location/character to location/character without identifying the location/character and having conversations (shifting from character to character without identifying the speaker).
I'm not sure if the experiment is a success or a failure.
I can't do a Judy Pinky Swear
It is not physically possible for me to do a Judy Pinkie Swear. However, I promise Maddy Bell and Jessie C that I will not kill Marti or force a sex change on Marty.
Crissie really does love her brother and knows him better than anyone else (which explains why it is so easy for her to get Marty to dress as a girl). In Chapter 1, Marty knew just by looking at three of the Musketeers that they were going to ask him to dress up as a girl! Marty's resistance to dressing up as a girl pirate was pretty mild (a suspicious individual might describe his initial declaration of "I'm not gonna dress up as a girl" as "Please don't throw me in the B'riar Patch"). Marti's only real objection was the length of the skirt she had to wear on the way to the costume shop. It should be pretty obvious that this wasn't the first time Crissie got him to dress as a girl. If I were to write a prequel, what do you think the odds are that Marti will end up in a dress?
Although Crissie loves her brother, she apparently enjoys (immensely) having her own personal living Barbie Doll.
In chapter 1, Crissie asked her BFF(s) "Has my brother ever refused a challenge?" The answers were "NO!" And "Never!" I think it's safe to assume that the Musketeers know Marty. Judy didn't hesitate to try to kill Brad for stabbing Marti. On Halloween, all five of the Musketeers tried to protect Marti. I believe they care about Marty.
I would describe Brad, Thing One and Thing Two's thought process just before they ran as "This ship is SINKING! Every rat for himself!"
They didn't learn
The girls I think are in a lot of trouble with not only the school but their parents. I see one being kicked off the cheer squad over this others suspended for 2 -5 days EACH then grounded for A VERY VERY long time. All privileges REVOKED no dances no games no NOTHING!!!!
Love Samantha Renee Heart
where the heck were the teachers?
kid gets STABBED and zero teachers are around? If I were Marty's parents there would be lawsuits coming