Getting sooooo intense I cant wait *squeals*
But umm something I noticed:
“Wait! What if he’s working with Sarah and those other archons? What if they know we’re coming?” she continued. “Then… I don’t know. I really don’t ever want to see him again, and I don’t want you anywhere near him, Amber, but what if you’re right? Maybe it really is a trap.”
Who is Courtney talking to, isn't Courtney the one who noticed it's a trap?

“Oh, my goodness! It’s a trap!” Courtney said, suddenly.

Did you mean Courtney there or.. umm I'm confused.