by Bobbie Cabot
PART THREE
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PICKING UP THE PIECES
(Prologue & parts one to three was adapted from an unfinished story written by a dear friend)
(Prologue edited by Holly “Happy” Hart & Bobbie Cabot)
In a future Earth, where the long-dreaded nuclear war had come and gone and the humans had started to rebuild again, humans learned to face the consequences of their first space battle in over two decades.
In the Satellite Wars years before, humans learned much about how to wage war in space, but whatever they learned, it wasn’t enough for what was yet to come.
- with a nod to the masters of space opera: J. Michael Straczynski, Larry Niven, David Brinn, E.E. (Doc) Smith,Iain M. Banks, and, of course, George Lucas.
My thanks. And my apologies.
“Or who will arrive at any terminus,
“While the narrowing rails slide together behind you.”
- from "Four Quartets" by T.S. Elliot, Earth poet and playwright, 20th Century Earth
"Insufficient data to achieve ninety percent accuracy. Most probable combination indicates
that targets will rendezvous with planet Earth after imminent battle engagement."
- EDS 361 Base Computer - Triton Center Seventeen, Year 2300
Shepherd Moon, Chapter 10: Prelude To A War
The Tirosians had pulled out of the fight early in the game, and were nowhere near the battle zone. Seeker's Phase-Wave sensors paced the Tirosian fleet easily as it sped away on a curving course away from Earth. Though Commander Tomoguchi kept close track of them, he still breathed a sigh of relief as the immediate danger of the Tirosians was removed. He turned back to plotting the course of the retreating invaders on the map in front of him and tallying losses.
"Give me a damage report on all decks," he said.
"Five turrets on level three overloaded and are unusable,” Seeker’s comm officer replied. “We were hulled aft of the shuttle bay, but damage control got to it right away: all bays are usable. Shield generators at ninety-nine percent: power is currently off on deck seven, but the Chief Engineer's crew is working on it."
"Nothing important then. Never mind that now. How about our people?"
"Sickbay reports thirty-seven minor injuries, and none in serious condition. We have one casualty, thought - one of our fighters got taken out in the battle, but the others report all well. Our landing parties also report all well."
"It could have been worse. How about our other ships? How are the carriers from the Constellation and Hermes doing?" he asked.
"There are casualties there, I'm afraid, Commander. Captain Dupont has pulled his people out, but Hermes' ships can't lift off yet. Landing party says the battle's pretty fierce and they're going to have a hard time getting back to their carriers. One of them has already been blown away. They've requested fighter cover to protect the other carriers."
"Have our fighters responded, yet, Lieutenant?"
"The two squadrons from Constellation and Hermes are already on the way, sir."
"Good. Tell the Constellation and Hermes that as soon as all our people have vacated the enemy ships, to regroup on Seeker, and to start collecting damage reports."
"Aye, sir."
"Give me status on the aliens."
"The Empire fleet is retreating, Commander, and are now on a slow course away from Earth. We've taken out ninety of their fighters and damaged their mother ships. Three Tiros cruisers and one Detterex cruiser have been taken out. One tanker and three escort ships are damaged beyond use, no survivors reported. They still have nine cruisers, four escort ships and one tanker. Internal damage, we don't know, but I think we've hurt them."
"But not enough to make them go away faster."
"No, sir. The Tiros and Detterex flagships have taken substantial damage, but the others escaped almost untouched."
"All right, how about the Federation ships?"
"There are three Elyran cruisers left, and the two Dixx cruisers survived."
"The two Arachnian ships?"
"Just radioactive debris, sir, though we got some electronic activity in one of them. Our probes have detected a large sphere in the center of both wreckages. According to the readings, they're either very dense, denser than anything we have, or they're very heavily shielded."
"Let's risk a pulse and see just what we have."
"Aye, sir," the lieutenant said, and started working on her console.
"Seems like we have a live one, sir. Variable electromagnetic signals in one of the spheres, indicating electronics and machinery."
"Damn. Try to find a chink in their armor, Lieutenant, or at least a thin spot, so we can send a radio message to them."
"Aye, sir."
"Give me the chief engineer."
"Aye, sir. Chief Engineer on-line."
Tomoguchi turned to the ceiling mike. "Chief, we'll be making a ship-to-ship rescue. Can you rig four or five carriers for radiation?"
"Radiation, sir? Against how much?"
"As many R's you can shield against, Chief. We're going to rescue some aliens from one of the two Arachnian cruisers."
"Sir? Those two radioactive hulks? I cannot guarantee..."
"I realize that, Chief. Just do it."
"Aye, sir."
"Get me the captain, lieutenant."
"Aye, sir. Captain on-line."
"Captain, this is Tomoguchi. We have detected some signals coming from a shielded area in one of the radioactive Arachnian derelicts. We think there are some survivors there. I've started rescue operations."
"Survivors? Good, Commander. Keep me posted. I won't be coming in with our other pilots. I'll be escorting some Elyran fighters back to their flagship."
"Aye, sir."
Mia switched off her mike and switched her headphones to the radio frequencies being used by the Elyran fighters. She listened to the alien voices. So humanlike yet so different. They were higher in pitch, he would have said like the voices of children, but yet not like the voice of any human child he knew. Voices like the purr of kittens, and in moments like the growl of tigers. She wondered how her own voice sounded to the aliens.
Mia switched on her radio transmitter and hailed the Talon. Her request for a landing berth surprised the Elyran operator, but after a while, obviously after it was referred to higher authority, her request was granted.
"An escort ship will guide you in, Earther. Do not worry." Mia smiled. The operator sounded just a bit patronizing.
Shortly, a tubular Elyran fighter cut in front of her, rockets glowing at full thrust. There was an awkward moment as the pilot had to cut in her forward jets to stop her ship from shooting too far forward, causing the fighter to swerve violently left and right before settling down. She was obviously showing off, Mia thought. She gave her a wide berth.
"T'chahn, honored Earther," she said in an almost sarcastic tone, "I am of the Talon. I have been instructed to guide you in. Please follow me."
"All right, warrior," Mia replied. "Thank you."
It was an uneventful five minutes to the ship's hangar deck, and Mia took the opportunity to examine the alien cruiser a little more closely. As they coasted into the hangar, she noticed no one on the deck. Obviously the deck was in vacuum. She followed her escort further in until they coasted into an enormous hatchway. The hatch slid down behind her, and she heard air whistle into the bay and felt gravity grip her body. Her escort ship rolled gracefully into a sort of metal cradle, one of several already filled by other ships.
Already several Elyrans in what Mia thought were maintenance uniforms poured into the bay even as she guided her own fighter into a cradle, though no matter how much she jockeyed her ship on its anti-grav landers, she could not fit it in. Her ship was simply the wrong shape. She settled for moving her ship as close to the wall as possible, and shut off all systems.
After a short check on the atmosphere, she popped her canopy open and climbed down from the fighter. Have to take chances on alien germs and things, she thought, and trust that her nanobots would take care of her.
Mia's escort was already at the foot of her ladder, waiting. She had her helmet off. When she looked up, Mia felt a slight tingle somewhere in the middle of her head. She had never felt the sensation before, and wondered what it was. As she locked the cockpit and climbed off from the ladder, she unhooked her own helmet and clipped it to her belt. The Elyran warrior's eyes widened in surprise, but quickly caught herself. She gave a short courtesy bow, and Mia answered with a deeper bow, with her fist over her heart, a greeting reserved for Elyran royalty.
The warrior blushed to a deep pink hue, and Mia smiled.
"T'chahn, my lady, welcome to the Talon,” she said in respectful tones – obviously, she assumed Mia was royalty, perhaps because of the bow. She started to say something more but stopped herself, forgetting for a moment.
"T'chahn, warrior,” Mia responded. “Thank you for your welcome. And thank you for your guidance. It was skilfully done."
"It was of no consequence, my lady, but thank you. If you will follow me, I am to escort you to the Lady Tasha. This way, please."
They walked around her ship towards the main airlock, and passed five Elyran fighters in their berths. The Elyran technicians, and the warriors overseeing the work on their ships, paused to take a look at their visitor. Mia politely nodded to the nearest ones, all female. And she had that tingling feeling again. What are they doing to me, she thought.
As they passed the exhaust ports of the fighters, she could still feel residual heat from their rockets and smell the faint acrid fumes from burned fuel.
As they neared the airlock, she could see Elyrans waiting there for them. By their accoutrements, combat warriors - the Elyran equivalent to Terran marines. The lead Elyran rested her hand deliberately on her ornamental dress sword, and walked to face Mia.
She bowed in the traditional welcome for royalty, her fist over her heart. "T'chahn, my lady. I am Lena, swordmistress of the princess Tasha Liaran-Kerr, who leads our fleet. I have been sent to escort you to our bridge, where you will await the arrival of our princess."
Mia bowed in the same manner. "T'chahn, swordmistress. Thank you. I am Captain Amelia Catherine Steele, from the Earth ship Seeker. I am at your service."
Lena gestured to a waiting lift and they all climbed into it. Mia found herself surrounded by small alien females, all wearing sidearms. Her close proximity to them made her aware of how they smelled. They did not exactly smell, but she was sure that these Elyrans needed a shower. Or maybe it's a natural condition with them, she thought. A slightly unpleasant idea.
She felt them close in around her, more than the cramped space could account for, as if they were intentionally crowding her.
And she felt odd sensations, like she was having unfamiliar thoughts. The tingling feeling was stronger. She tried to ignore the feeling and looked up at the elevator indicator. The flashing Elyran glyphs told her that they were nearing a level designated as One, presumably the bridge. And when the door dilated open, she was one of the first to escape out onto the bridge. It was becoming uncomfortable in there. She felt like all the Elyran eyes were on her and that she was being mentally undressed.
She took a deep breath and quickly scanned the bridge, noting the people and equipment. She smiled in recognition when she saw O'Connell.
Time to go into our act, she thought. She gave a short bow in O'Connell’s direction, and gave her a small wink. "Hello, Commander," she said. "Everything all right?"
O'Connell remembered, and gave her a deeper bow, her fist over her heart. "Everything is fine, sir. And is this really necessary?"
"Yes, it is. Just play along, Commander. It can't hurt anything."
She gestured towards the short be-jewelled male. "Have you met the prince?"
"No, not yet." She stopped by O'Connell’s side and acknowledged the bows of the rest of her people. One of the Marines was a bit slow, so Mike poked him in the ribs.
Lena, not missing the by-play between the Earthers, quickly moved forward and introduced her to Ren.
"My lady, I present you Prince Ren Tevann-Reshanii of the Great Plains of Elyra, husband to the princess Tasha Liaran-Kerr, and our honored Chief Scientist. My Lord, this is Captain Amelia Catherine Steele of the Earth Warship Seeker."
"T'chahn, Captain. I and my people are greatly in your debt."
"It was but our duty, my lord. Welcome to the Solar System."
"Your welcome honors us. But I am at a great loss to understand how you knew of our coming. We ourselves only knew of our time of departure a little less than seven standard months ago."
Mia did a little mental calculation. Approximately one year and five Earth months since the broadcast. "If I am correct, my lord, that was about 1.2 standard years after we sent our transmission to you."
"The transmission. Ahh, yes. We have several questions about that. Perhaps we can talk about it later?"
"Of course. Well, after we sent the transmission, we have been waiting for some sort of expedition from the Federation. We knew where the bulk of the Federation planets were, and were able to calculate the general area of space that you would be coming from, provided that you left the Federation almost immediately after the broadcast."
"The 'general area of space?'"
"Well," she smiled, "there was also a great deal of luck involved."
Just then, the lift doors dilated open. Tasha stepped out, still in her pilot's spacesuit. She went to Ren, and held his hand. She shut her eyes and breathed a sigh of relief and thanks. She turned and faced the Earthers. Mia bowed and gestured for her people to do likewise. Tasha acknowledged them and turned to Mia.
"Welcome, Captain. You and your people fight well."
"Our thanks, My Lady."
"You know of our mission here? To your Earth?"
"We know of it, My Lady. In fact, that is also why we are here. I bring the greetings of the whole family of the Human race, and I bring the invitation of the one who leads us all, to visit our mother world and meet with the leaders of our different kingdoms. It is her fervent wish that you accept this invitation and allow us to escort you to our world."
Tasha smiled, and bowed deeply. "In behalf of the peoples and races that I represent, I am pleased to accept your invitation. If it pleases your people, we would invite you to partake of a few refreshments."
"My Lady. Forgive me if I offend, but I and my people must return to our ship right away. The battle was fierce and we, as you, must recoup our strength and tally losses."
Tasha smiled. "Politely spoken, Captain. And rightly so. But surely, you and your immediate staff can stay a while?"
"If you insist, My Lady. Commander O'Connell and one of our scientists, Nicholas, will stay with me, if it's all right."
The princess bowed. "We shall be honored."
"Then, if I may, I would like to escort my people back to their ships, and wish them a safe journey home - one of our customs. I hope you understand."
"Of course, Captain." Tasha turned to her swordmistress. "Lena. Escort the captain and her people back to the hangar bay. See to it that it is speedily done. The captain has a lot to do. Captain? I trust that I will see you soon."
"You may count on it, my lady." Out of ingrained custom and reflex, Mia kissed her hand. Tasha blushed to a deep crimson. A dozen of the alien officers were taken aback, most especially Ren. It was too late when Mia realized her faux pas. She contented herself with an additional short bob of the head, and turned to walk out of the bridge.
The walk back to the hangar bay was uneventful. O'Connell’s carrier was waiting near the hatchway, with Marines near the open shuttle door, at port arms. O'Connell turned over her Detterex charges to waiting Elyran guards. Mia gave final instructions to her people and the shuttle co-pilot, surreptitiously handing over her suit’s recording disk, observing the same with Nick and O'Connell, went over to her ship, and pretended to inspect it for damage and got a fresh disk from the Miscellaneous Items compartment in the cockpit.
O'Connell’s Marines stepped into the shuttle, and they and her fighter (the carrier's co-pilot flew her fighter) sped back to the Seeker.
"Okay," she mumbled, "back to the princess."
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"Well?" Tasha turned to ask her Ren. "What do you think?"
Ren shrugged noncommittally and turned abruptly away. Tasha smiled and turned to her swordmistress. "Lena?"
"They seem to be people of good stock, though with unusual ideas about propriety."
Tasha raised an amused eyebrow, and Reena nodded in the direction of the prince. "I sense in them a strong will and a strong mind. One thinks of those of the royal blood when you meet them," she said.
"I agree, pilot. But most of them are like that," said Tasha.
Reena smiled. "A race of Bridges. The mind boggles."
Ren turned to face her. "A patent impossibility," he said heatedly. "Science tells us that the probability of conceiving a bridge is about one in three hundred thousand."
Reena bowed. "Of course, My Lord. But they are not Elyran. Who can say what is possible for them."
Ren glowered at her and turned to the princess. "My Lady, I find myself feeling a bit faint from all this excitement. May I be excused? I will retire to our quarters."
"Of course, my love. But make it a short rest. We have to meet with the captain soon." Ren bowed stiffly. They watched him leave with faint amused smiles.
"These past events bode well for the expedition, my lady," Lena said.
"Well," the pilot-navigator murmured. "Much of the fleet has been destroyed, many of our people have been killed, and we have yet to account for all of our missing warriors."
"You mistake my meaning, pilot," Lena said. "I, too, grieve for our lost sisters. But the coming of the Earthers have saved us from an even worse fate. And here they are, apparently ready to talk. Does that not mean well for the expedition?"
"Indeed, yes," Tasha said. "And perhaps we will get to know more of them in the coming days."
Tasha left to change out of her space suit and the rest turned back to their work.
Shepherd Moon, Chapter 11. Female Chauvinist
Mia deliberately walked leisurely back into the Talon, surrounded by her armed Elyran escort, taking her time to take a look at the bustling Elyran activity in the corridors. Nick took the opportunity to discretely record more in the hidden camcorder mounted on the shoulder of his suit.
"So, Nicky," she said, "what are you thinking?"
Nick minutely swiveled his suit from side to side as he walked. "Well, Skipper, everything seems to be going well." He bent backward and focused on one of the ceiling light panels. "And the Elyrans seem to be a friendly sort." He bent over and focused on the deck. "In a very nineteenth-century Victorian sort of way." He smiled.
"Their civilization is at least eighty millenniums old. I find it hard to believe we're still dealing with a bunch of prudes."
"So? Age doesn't make one an automatic sophisticate."
"Notice the smell?"
Nick sniffed cautiously. "It's almost gone, now."
"I think it's some kind of natural pheromone or chemical. It comes out during stress or fear. Something like that."
"Wish we could get a sample."
"Good luck."
"Tiny little buggers, huh?"
"Just a bit. What about those other ones - they weren’t small at all."
"The Detterex?"
"Yeah, the Detterex. I wish we could keep one of them for tests and observation."
"These aren't pets, Nick. These are people."
"I know, I know. Just wondering out aloud."
O'Connell looked ill at ease. Though she knew the Elyrans couldn't understand what they were talking about, she couldn't help but blush in embarrassment. Their Elyran escorts looked at her somewhat in shock, but quickly looked away. Now what did that mean? She reached up to her suit collar and turned up the gain of her translator but the aliens weren't talking.
She turned to Mia. I'm being silly, she thought, and decided to join in.
"I think the princess has the hots for you," she blurted. Mia and Nick looked at her, and she smiled.
"How can you tell?" Nick asked.
"I know. Women almost always know."
"Ma'am," Nick said, "beggin' your pardon, but this particular woman was born hundreds of light years away. Not to mention the fact that we have more in common with a bullfrog than with her. And besides, Mia's a girl, too."
"What? There are no lesbians in Elyra?"
Nicky spluttered.
O'Connell tried to hide a small grin. Mia blushed, and the Elyrans looked at each other with raised eyebrows.
"This discussion is getting us nowhere," Mia said gruffly. "Let's drop the subject." She tried to change the topic. “I wonder where they're leading us. This isn't where we passed through before."
Nick tapped the lead Elyran and asked.
"We are going to My Lady's main audience chamber," the Elyran answered, "where we are to meet the Princess, and Prince Ren's science staff."
"That's good. Lead on, MacDuff."
The Elyrans looked at each other. "Macduff?" One of them asked the other.
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Tomoguchi peeked through the window of the carrier's airlock. "I don't think the captain or Commander O'Connell will like this, sir," his aide said.
"Shut up, Lieutenant." Tomoguchi knew his commanding officers would not like the fact he left the ship in the hands of the chief engineer, But he felt he had no choice. He turned back to his work.
"Everybody ready?" He took a deep breath and swung open the door. He could only half see what was in front of him: barely perceptible coruscating bands of rainbow-colored distortion washed over his helmet's faceplate as his radiation shield ticked over, blocking his vision enough that visibility was cut down to about eight feet or so,
"Alright, people. We only have an hour to do this. Let's make it snappy." He pulled out a sword with a curved blade and hacked away at the jutting pieces of metal, like an explorer in an old jungle movie. The pieces of metal made easy work for his laminated-durasteel sword as he rapidly cut into the Arachnian ship's hull. Around him were several of Seeker's Marines and the rescue team, quickly cutting into the ruins of the ship. Each time they reached a main bulkhead, Tomoguchi's demolition squad would attach a detonator and blast a hole into the deck, and, foot by foot, they went deeper into the ship.
Luckily, they chanced upon a ruined elevator shaft, and going down suddenly became easier. In a short while, they reached their goal. Tomoguchi pushed away pieces of junk and laid bare a small patch of a smooth, blackened metal surface. One of his technicians attached a sound transmitter to the metal and spoke very loudly in a much accented Elyran. "Hello, in there. We are from the Earth ship and we have come to rescue you. You are instructed to move away from this part of the wall as far as you can. Please signal that you will comply." A faint answer could be heard - something about radiation. “We have taken care of that. Signal that you understand and will comply.” After a muffled reply, the technician nodded to the rest of the team.
Tomoguchi's aide produced what looked like a packet made of clear plastic. As they shook it out, it started to look like a big cellophane-like bag. Two spacers stepped in the bag and the rest glued the opening to the black hull.
Faint rainbow-like patterns of distortion surrounded them, like those on the surface of a soap bubble or a film of oil, as a field-unit radiation shield was activated. The spacers took out what looked like pick-axes and started hammering into the metal.
They found the metal relatively thin, and had an easy time of it. As pieces of metal were gouged out, a faint hissing sound could be heard and the plastic bag puffed out. The spacers dropped their axes and used their gauntleted gloves to peel and push aside the metal. Tomoguchi peered into the bubble and gasped as two big white-and-orange insects with antennae levered themselves from the crack in the hull.
“Umm... hello,” he said, and shrugged as his aide gave him a sour look.
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Mia stood at the podium of Seeker's main conference hall. She had invited all of Seeker's officers and crew who had come in contact with the aliens. On the screen, split in two, were the officers and crew of the other ships who, like them, came in close contact with the aliens. She nodded to the yeoman technician who pressed a switch on her console, and broadcast the electronic conference on the three ships' entertainment channels.
"Settle down everyone." The soft murmuring of the crowd petered out.
"I've put together this meeting so as to get all of your impressions about the aliens. We're putting it on close-circuit so that the rest of the ship can watch. Needless to say, we will be recording this and sending it back to Fleet Command."
Mia nodded again to the technicians and various close-up shots of the Elyrans replaced her half of the screen.
"Here you see close-ups of some of the aliens we've met. Notice that most of them are female. In fact I can only recall actually encountering just one male.
"There are also several similarities between us and them, besides having two sexes. As you can see, the gross anatomy is obviously humanoid. There are, however, several differences in detail. Notice here that they have only three fingers, plus the expected opposable thumb. Notice also the solid-colored eyes and the thick fur-like hair.
"They also seem to be a little on the short side, by our standards. They average about 1.5 meters. Yet other than this, they seem for the most part like us." Mia noticed a waving hand. "Yes, Lieutenant?"
"Sir, what about those other aliens we encountered? They were definitely more than 1.5 meters."
O'Connell interrupted. "Those weren't Elyrans, Lieutenant. They were Detterex soldiers. But some of our phase-wave intercepts hint that these two races come from the same genetic stock. The physical differences are minor. Most of the fighters that we've gone up against were Detterex. The other Empire ships, the Tirosians - we never had a chance to meet up with them. For some reason, they seemed to hold back from the battle. I don't know why.”
"Other things you've noticed?" Mia asked. She saw another raised hand. "Yes, Nick?"
"Captain, when we were brought to the bridge, we couldn't help but notice the, umm, smell. None of us were expecting that."
"Yes, I've noticed that also. But the Elyrans seem to be well disciplined. I'm sure that they know the value of good hygiene especially on spacecraft. This leads me to suspect that this may be a natural condition."
"Ugh."
"Well, it isn't bad. Sort of a musky dry scent. We can get used to it. But we have to warn everyone to stock up on air fresheners." The shipboard company laughed.
One of the Marine sergeants raised his hand. "Sir, it may be just me, or maybe it's because of the blasts, but I felt sort of funny when we were in close quarters with the aliens. Sort of an itchy feeling, but inside my head. Y'know what I mean?"
Mia looked at the others. "I also had a feeling like that. Anyone else?"
Almost half of those who went on board raised their hands, mostly the men.
"So it wasn't coincidence. Anyone have an idea what it was?"
The captain of the Hermes signaled. "Well, it was obviously being caused by the Elyrans. Because, if it were coming from their equipment, I'm sure we'd have picked up something."
"I agree, captain."
Another one, a Marine this time, raised her hand. "Could they be telepathic, captain? You know, read minds and stuff."
Mia shrugged. "I don't know, Private. They could be. Gives them one hell of an advantage, if that’s true." The looks that she got were thoughtful. "Anyway, Fleet and the CETI people will investigate this and get back to us."
In the video pickup, one of the fighter pilots from the Constellation raised his hand. "Sir, mostly the thing I noticed was their fighters. They look like rocket-powered ships. Now, why would they use rocket power, when they have artificial gravity? Look at us. All our ships are FTL-powered."
"That's right. And, you know, the Detterex had two tankers? One of them was blown up by an accidental collision. They probably use the tankers to refuel their fighters and other smaller ships."
“Either they know something about FTL that we don’t, or else they’re not as smart as we thought they’d be,” O'Connell said.
Someone else signaled for attention - the chief navigator on the Constellation. “Sir, how about military tactics? Seems to me, our guys were able to run rings around ‘em.”
“I think it was more technology than anything else, lieutenant,” Mia answered. “Naturally our FTL ships were faster and more maneuverable.”
The lieutenant raised a slightly dubious eyebrow. “Well, maybe.”
O'Connell turned towards Mia, a questioning eyebrow raised. She was wondering if they should talk about the meeting. O'Connell decided to shut down the meeting. "Well, sir. After all of this, what now?"
"We'll wait for our people that are investigating the Arachnian derelicts, and, unless Fleet Command has other ideas, we will escort the Federation ships back home."
"Back home, sir? Back to Earth?"
"Yup."
"What about the other aliens, the Detterex?"
"They seem to be headed the same way, Commander. Along with the rest of their fleet."
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Tomoguchi gave terse instructions to his pilot, and their carrier smoothly took off from the ruined alien ship. He felt his back prickling but suppressed an urge to look back.
On his ship were twenty-one of the bugs, “excuse me,” he thought, “I meant extraterrestrials, which accounted for roughly two thirds of the surviving Arachnians.” Another shuttle carried the remaining one third, along with a load of their equipment and personal effects. Both were headed to the Seeker.
He listened with more than half an ear to the chattering and clicking alien talk and tried to sense some meaning in them. He could not shake the vague impression he had of the aliens being familiar. He thought of spiders but they weren’t that similar to strike a chord. He snapped his fingers and thought, “Aha!”
The aliens curiously looked over to him, and he turned and automatically shrugged, as if to say that he didn’t mean anything. Unexpectedly, the other aliens shrugged, too. Almost as if imitating him. One of the scientists they had on board who was trying to converse with the only alien that was wearing an Elyran-language translator raised a curious eyebrow, as the aliens started chattering to each other with renewed vigor.
Whatever it was, Tomoguchi thought, I missed it. Hope it didn’t mean anything. He turned to face front and thought back to the idea that made him go “Aha.”
“I know what they remind me of now,” he thought. “Crabs!” Once he was at the Fisherman’s Wharf in old San Francisco, and he remembered the delicious crab that they had for lunch then. Despite their general appearance as big overgrown tarantulas, the aliens’ shininess and spotty orange-on-white coloring made them look like big crabs fresh out of the boiler, and reminded him that he hasn’t had lunch yet. Their lemony scent reminded him of shrimp in lemon sauce, and he tried to hide a grimace.
The scientist talking with the aliens bent his head lower and tried to understand the alien and answer his questions better. He again tried to explain that they were on their way to Seeker, and then to Earth.
The alien, whom he found was referred to by the others as the First Ambassador, apologized for being too much trouble.
“It is our pleasure, sir,” he said in a very accented Elyran.
The curious alien started pointing at the fixtures on the wall again, and he did his best to explain the function of each without missing details.
After a few minutes, they cruised into Seeker’s landing bay and felt a soft bump as their carrier landed on the bay’s deck. Tomoguchi felt the artificial gravity push his feet against the deck, and walked quickly to the back of the cabin. He opened the carrier’s doors and escorted the aliens down the ramp. The aliens stood on hind limbs and gingerly walked down the gangplank.
Mia was at the bottom of the ramp. Tomoguchi gave her a crisp salute and a short verbal report. Mia nodded, thanked Tomoguchi warmly, and faced the Arachnians. Mia bowed Elyran-style, with fist over heart, and the First Ambassador gave her a salute, a pretty good imitation of the commander, but using two front limbs instead of one. The others did the same thing, and Mia tried not to smile too widely.
“Welcome to the Seeker, Ambassador,” she said in her best Elyran. “I wish we could have met in better circumstances, but nevertheless, we hope that you will find your stay with us to be a comfortable one. I am Amelia Steele, captain of the Seeker.”
“Thank you, Captain,” the ambassador said through his translator. “Friendship found in war is as welcome as a drink in the desert. I cannot say our thanks enough. You saved us from sure death.”
“Just doing our job, sir. If you care to follow my people..."
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(End of Part Three)
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Postscript to this installment: A Dedication to Holly
A fellow writer in BCTS named Holly Hart was helping me edit my story, “Shepherd Moon.” Prior to her passing away, she finished editing the prologue, and parts 1 to 3 of the story. Holly and I agreed that we would post the edited version of the story when it was completed and we would hold off on posting any edited versions until then.
As many in the site know, Holly passed away August of 2013. And now that the story’s finished, I am posting our edited version of the prologue, and parts 1, 2 and 3 of the story, and I am dedicating them to Ms Holly “Happy” Hart.
She was a talented and open-minded editor who always had an encouraging word for amateur writers like me, and was a kind soul - gentle in her encouraging correspondence, and always positive in her outlook in life despite the considerable challenges that were in her way.
It is through the example of people like her that I find the will to persevere, and the power to remain positive regardless. If Holly can continue on and remain positive up to the last moments of life, we all can.
For Holly Hart / Holly Logan, 1944 – 2013
With Love, July 2016
Comments
Interesting story, I hope
Interesting story, I hope there will be more soon.
Lizzie :)
Bailey's Angel
The Godmother :p
lost steam
i sorta lost steam on this story... sorry...
Interesting story, I hope
Damn double post, sorry.
Lizzie :)
Bailey's Angel
The Godmother :p
Good story!
I'm enjoying this story very much.
So, the Elyrans have mental capabilities, and it looks like proximity with them is triggering reactions in the Earthers.
It also appears that the aliens achieved starflight while technologically less advanced than Earth. Apparently the secret of starflight is not a matter of technological advance down our paths, but instead a slight sidestep earlier on would allow for its discovery. I'm reminded of a story in Analog many years ago, where starflight was a very simple development, capable of happening in a Renaissance society, which we somehow missed; aliens reach Earth and find themselves woefully out gunned.
Yours,
JohnBobMead
Yours,
John Robert Mead
I remember that story!
The aliens charged off their ship armed with their muskets and got introduced to Mr. Machine-gun! I call those kind of stories "lost opportunities." Ones where we should've already found the secret to space flight and FTL but our own cultural blindness made us miss them.
However Earth is in the position of having better equipment and perhaps improved tactics, but being out numbered. Remember, Stalin said "Quantity has a quality all of its own." Being flanked and overrun is not good!
Another good thing Earth has going for it is an unified command structure. Both the Federation and the Empire has this feudal thing going, which can cause serious problems such as the one Empire group that held back out of the battle. Right now I'm thinking of the Romans. They were very disciplined troops that routinely out maneuvered and outfought larger numbers. I fear Earth will need every advantage it can get because in the end, even Rome fell to the barbarians.
Great stuff!
hugs
Grover
bradbury?
i remember a ray bradbury short that was somewhat like that...
Shepherd Moon, Part 03
Are every Federation species telepathic?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
A Splendid story
Interesting paths this is going down.
On the sociological front, I do not quite agree that the Earth folks should have bent over backwards to enforce more women in command positions. An honest meeting of cultures should be just that, warts and differences and all. Certainly the Feddies are not adjusting their culture to make Terrans feel better. It is very nice to see a sex change is not the big deal it was. I think it was implied, but I do believe Mia has the full complement of female organs so I wonder if she has met Aunt Flo yet. I don't think she has had much time to totally adjust to the social aspect of being a woman and very much look forward to that.
On the technological front, it is odd that Vacuum tubes and ICs will coexist as the discrete transistor ( and RTL circuits and their ilk, formed by them ) were the intermediate stage to IC logic circuitry. I guess we are seeing a bit of tip of the hat to Colossus the Forbin Project though I suspect Tasha's computer is not sentient.
It is odd that fighters are not kept streamlined in case they have to transition to atmospheric combat. The mother ships, well sure, as long as their mass is distributed correctly, they can be shaped any old way. The only time that it may be issue if a mother ship is going through thick interstellar mediums such as a nebula. Go fast, enough and it is very much likely to induce some aerodynamic effects ( compression waves and the like. )
On the battlefront I am surprised there were no few uses of nuclear weaponry, especially as the Tirosians were losing. I assume that the Hermes and the Constellation and Hermes was apprised of the upgraded engine capabilities of Seeker, better to be able to coordinate their firepower and fighter cover.
On the diplomatic front, I can't believe that once they learn more about the Federation and its capabilities that it might be worth reconsidering being a full member of the Federation. Considering the technological edge that Earth currently enjoys it is probably tempting to sit it out as a neutral power.
The Tirosians may have none of that I guess. I think it will be interesting what kind of technological sharing will be demanded of Earth as part of the application process to the Feds. It sounds a bit too much like a syndicate to me somehow and not as strong of a union as we are being lead to believe now. A more clever move might be to have other members of the Feds and select Tirosian break away planets to join Earth to form a third Power.
On the personal front for Mia, I expect to see her growth as a woman to be a bigger part of the plot. I always like my Sci-Fi to feel more like the Science is the medium upon which the personal saga is written and not have it more 'hard' sci-fi where it is all about the science and personal existence and motivation matters a whole lot less.
I am not saying this story is even close to be considered hard sci-fi in my eyes but the Science dominated a bit early on. I found the characters to be as developed as they need to be, especially for the Earth side. Well done. Now that most the the scientific universe seems to be settled, I expect the personal stuff will take up more of the plot, though by no means so I want the science to disappear. A technological edge is all Earth has against the brinksmanship and dirty politics that occur even in the Federation let alone the Tirosians.
All in all, I am enjoying it immensely (with the singular exception of the UN demo to Marc's home around Neptune.) BTW, you could've knocked me over with a feather at the matter of fact way Bill asked about that sex change, made my jaw drop, he did.
Kim
Sit It Out?
Given the title, I was expecting Earth to step in and defuse the situation rather than ally with one side. But that's not the way things seem to be going so far.
"Logically", the Dettorex, Elyrans and humans, as humanoid species, could form a separate alliance, I suppose. If it's treated as an addition to rather than a replacement for the sides' current affiliations, it might be that the Dettorex could use it to improve their second-class status in the Empire. If they can force their reptilian overlords to accept them as equals, they can probably direct imperial aggression in some other direction than against Earth and the Federation.
If Earth chooses to stay out of the Federation but ally with the Elyrans and the other races on the mission (fortunately, it appears they're all oxygen-breathers; I don't know how "equal" the Arachnids and Draxx will feel in a humanoid alliance, but they can hardly be left out under the circumstances), it ought to be to the aliens' benefit to share human technology (and vice versa), though it'll likely limit human access to useful items from other Federation civilizations, or at least make it take longer to reverse-engineer them.
As for whether the Federation would want to include humanity, if FTL travel was the limiting factor, it seems to have been overcome. I suspect that the Federation will want Earth more than Earth will want the Federation, though.
But that happy ending assumes that the potential allies can make common cause with Earth without the rest of the Federation and Empire considering it a secession and an act of war. I think humanity would survive (by making conquest more trouble and expense than it's worth; better to sign a treaty and go home), but it'd force their allies into an uncomfortable position; they'd probably have more to lose siding with Earth than with their current affiliates.
We'll see.
Eric
a different alliance?
i don't know if that would necessarily be "logical" - species bias isn't really a positive thing.
Oh and am curious why Mia was not promoted to Rear Admiral
or Commodore ( Commodore does not really have a use at least in the US Navy but that is a tiny point ) instead of demoting O'Connell? Mia would get the ranking and recognition she deserves and not have to deal with a potentially pissed off X-O in O'Connell.
Anyway, onwards, I look forward to the sociological fireworks when they hit Earth. Frankly I am surprised the Elyrans are having so much difficulty with men's roles in society as surely among all those races in the Federation, there are bound to be ones where males play a more Earth style role.
Kim
Batting 0 for 12
"On the sociological front, I do not quite agree..."
"On the technological front, it is odd that..."
"It is odd that fighters are not..."
"On the battlefront I am surprised.."
"On the diplomatic front, I can't believe..."
"The Tirosians may have none of that I guess..."
"On the personal front for Mia, I expect to..."
"I am not saying this story is even close to be considered hard sci-fi..."
"All in all, I am enjoying it immensely (with the singular exception of..."
"Oh and am curious why Mia was not promoted to Rear Admiral..."
"Anyway, onwards, I look forward to the sociological fireworks when they hit Earth. Frankly I am surprised the Elyrans are having so much difficulty with men's roles in society..."
In all twelve paragraphs you posted, seems nothing I wrote was correct/acceptable. Â I thought I was able to get one through, but even your last one you mentioned you had "difficulty" with something. Â Seems I am 0 for 12... A complete shutout.
I apologize for the crappy writing.
Still, I wish you'd give my story a chance, or at least give an amateur writer a break.
Great story
I am really enjoying this story. It's kind of "medium" sci-fi in the technical aspects and well developed in the personal and character aspects. I'm liking the fact that Earth isn't the technologically behind civilization as is often the case in sci-fi, and actually appears to be the more advanced, technologically speaking, then the other races seen so far.
Great story
I am really enjoying this story. It's kind of "medium" sci-fi in the technical aspects and well developed in the personal and character aspects. I'm liking the fact that Earth isn't the technologically behind civilization as is often the case in sci-fi, and actually appears to be the more advanced, technologically speaking, then the other races seen so far.
medium is right
well, medium is all i can aspire to, apparently.... but i thank you for your post. glad you like my story despite everything.
Very interesting...
Very interesting story - so far. Epic in proportions. There's obviously many directions this story could go, and I'd not be surprised for you to find a way I'd not even thought of.
While I'd probably have preferred to see the aliens being MORE different from humans than they are, I can't complain about your choice to have at least one (two?) race that is fairly close (with the "itch" perhaps closer than we think) to humanity.
One thing that I was kinda expecting (this is a site for trans fiction, after all) was the transition of Bill to Mia. I have to say, though, it happened in a way and for a reason that never occurred to me. (This is a good thing!) Her acceptance of the change, and reaction to it, was interesting though... Almost as if it were a non-event personally. The back history you'd provided hadn't shown (me anyway) any obvious hints at a TS background... Nor, subsequently, are we seeing any problems post change. This, for me anyway, to point to Bill/Mia being a fairly well balanced individual who has large male AND female sides - balanced to a large extent - so that he/she isn't overly concerned with who she is. Your comments - on the society and science - seemed to indicate this might be reasonable.
Interesting eugenics plan, too... Makes me wonder how many of Bill's colleagues were also either end results and/or a generation or two off from such. That Bill/Mia believe they NEED to be there to "GUIDE" things to the "RIGHT" direction is interesting in itself. The implication is that she recognizes some inherent "superiority" over the crowd and feels the responsibility to guide things where her intellect tells her the right place is.
Quite fascinating. I was glad to see the to be continued... bit at the end. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it next.
Thank you.
Anne
thanks
if ever i get the go to continue the story, maybe i can explore that aspect of mia's character. thanks for the post!
great space opera
you have a great story going here.
with this many races in the federation you would think they would not judge new people by their own society but even alien people are people.
looking forward to more, thanks
Thanks!
As a human myself, I can't seem to think of anyone behaving in any way other than how a human would... but then, I am no professional writer. still, thank you.
Noooo!
Cutoff in the midpoint practically! I yearn for more! :)
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Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
I don't know when...
Thank you so much for that. I don't know when I can put up a new installment of this story, though... I sorta lost steam. I suppose that's not too big a surprise, huh, given all the "errors" everyone's pointed out.
Ignore them Bobbie, they are
Ignore them Bobbie, they are not reading your story, they are looking for "errors" to point out. :P
The story is fine and well by me. :)
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Very good story.
This is a very good story. I hope you continue it.
When you complete it, your story is both origin and good enough to be publishable.
Thanks!
Thanks so much, Paul! High praise, indeed. Given all million-and-one problems the story has that everyone has so clearly pointed out, I may need the remaining portion of the decade to rewrite before that can happen.
But I appreciate your refreshingly correction-free post. Much appreciated and gratefully received.
Space....
Really love how this is going. Was also not understanding why Mia was not promoted to Admiral. But it is a little thing.
sorry for not explaining
I am sorry for not explaining why. I sincerely do hope you can give the story a chance.
Terrific so far.
I personally think your doing a terrific job so far. Some people seem to have trouble suspending their need for everything to be grounded in reality. This is your story so you should write it the way you want, not the way somebody else wants. I wouldn't let one or two negative people get to you. They probably don't submit any stories of their own to be critiqued either. I'm looking forward to the next part of this story.
Dvdicvs
Shepherd's Moon...
A super good read Bobbie!! It puts me in mind of some of my favorite sci-fi stories from years gone by. Your characterizations and dialog are well written also. Thank you so much for taking of your considerable talent to write this tale. I look forward to seeing more of it!
Blossom
Amazing story :D
I started reading this story last night at 1:30 AM, planning to read it for an hour or so, but I just couldn't stop reading and I eventually finished reading all 3 parts somewhere before 7:30 AM. Ah well, I can't always stop myself once I'm reading something real good. It was actually a sad moment when I finished with part 3, because I knew that I had to wait until there would be more and I didn't want to bring up the patience to do so at that time. I guess that goes to show you that I really really like your story.
Some small things though that I thought were slightly confusing. After Bill turns into Mia, Mia eventually decides to see himself as a she. The thing is though, once she enters the Seeker, they (and 'you') keep switching between the pronouns he and she and they pretty much always address her as a 'sir' (instead of the much more logical (to me) 'ma'am'). They're even doing the same thing with O'Connell as well. This left me slightly confused. Is this an error in your writing that wasn't picked up before it was posted? Or is this just something cultural? The boundaries between a he and a she are not as rigid for example and it thus is much more common to address a higher or equal ranking female marine as a 'sir' and to refer to her in with both 'he' and 'she' pronouns. Well the main question is, is this 'pronoun issue' a cultural thing or something else?
Well, thanks for the amazing story and I hope to read more about Mia's adventures.
a sign of the times - their time, that is
In all the chapters where there were discussions among the Earth military, I had tried to make it consistent - that there were no deep gender biases in the Earth Military, that in the post-nuclear-war earth armed forces, a reflection of this wasthat there were no gender-specific honorifics used when addressing one's military superior. I would have hoped you came to the conclusion that the use of "sir" was too consistent to have been a mistake and that it was deliberate. As a precedent, you can, pehraps look at some of Joe Haldeman's books, but for me, I was taking the idea off of Star Trek II. ("Mr. Saavik," and so on...)
I am gratified that you like the story, so far. I will do my best to get new chapters up.
(If you should have some problems with the tech aspects of the story, by the way, please read Interviews 01.)
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Medium is not an insult
In a story as broad and and encompassing as this, you must balance the various parts to achieve a balance. So a medium sci-fi and medium personal interactions, mixed in with the various other supporting bits is about right. You could have gone strong sci-fi and cut back on the personal aspects, or you could have gone all personal relations and tip-toed around the sci-fi with vague references. Instead you have presented a mix of the two. Rather like Star Trek, TOS. It had plenty of "Shields Up! Fire Phasers!" action but it dared to look below the surface at the human and human-alien dynamics Some were in fact morality plays wrapped in a veneer of science.
Couldn't help but notice. the humans are not quite as accepting of the differences as they claim. You have only to look at Miriam's response to Bill's sex change to see that. For her, the wrapper is more important than the love. It's like dumping your husband/wife/girlfriend/boyfriend because they were disfigured or disabled in a car accident. If you care more about how someone's looks than the love you felt for them, you weren't in love, maybe you were in lust. Yeah, I was disappointed in Miriam, I'd expected better than that. Perhaps, deep down humans really are assholes.
Doctor says I have depression. I look around me and say "No Shit!? Can't imagine why."
"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin
evolution
I wonder if earthlings have psychic potential also and if it will be unlocked. Also you skipped the meeting, I wonder if the seekers full engine capacity will be needed,
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
Still catching up
on my reading, good story though.You mention hydrogen exploding in space, For that to happen there has to be oxygen, or some other oxidizer.
Newness for everyone
Finally, after all the years of wondering, speculation, and guess work, aliens are finally met. Though not under the best of circumstances. Still, after kicking the Empire's butt, thereby saving many of the Federation, what better way to start off a friendship?
Some people of Earth will go crazy when they see the Arachnians. If not screaming into the night. Security better be tight around them or some nut will try to get rid of the "bugs."
Others have feelings too.