From Knight To Dawn Part 1

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by: Lesley Renee Charles

Part One

Sir Eric decided to take a short cut through the forest. He was a 6’ tall. The sun glittered on his flaxen hair.

Suddenly he heard high-pitched laughter coming from his right side. He decided to see who could be out on a nice, sunny day. He peeked through some branches. He saw a lovely maiden. She appeared to be in her late teens, with her long golden hair flowing around her face and shoulders like a halo. Her complexion was so fair and clear, just like a porcelain doll.

Eric was so taken in by her beauty, he leapt from his hiding place. He startled her and she started to run. He reached out and forcibly grabbed her.

"Please, don’t hurt me!" she cried.

He threw her to the ground. He pinned her shoulders to the ground and started to lift up her dress. He then removed her undergarments and proceeded to take her virginity.

Once, he was finished raping her, she ran screaming to the nearest town. She reported him to the king and queen.

Eric was soon captured and brought in front of the king and queen. They found him guilty and the royal couple decreed that the maiden he ravished would dictate his punishment.

"He shall be dressed and treated as a fair maiden for a year. If he gets into further trouble then the punishment time can be and will be extended. His, I mean her name will be Dawn." The maiden said.

Eric was then taken to the dungeon of the royal castle until the punishment could be started. The royal couple started to have a suitable wardrobe for the new maiden to wear. A room was set aside for Dawn in the castle. The queen wanted to be able to keep an eye on her. The queen was also going to help instruct the new maiden in feminine deportment.

A month later, Eric, now Dawn was brought up to his/her new room. A set of clothes was laid out on the bed. A maid entered the room and proceeded to help Dawn shed her male clothes.

"You will first get washed and then we will proceed to put on clothes more appropriate for a lady, miss."

Dawn was led to a wooden tub in the middle of the room. The water smelled faintly of spring blossoms. She was scrubbed from head to toe. The body hair was removed from her body by the use of a sharp instrument. As soon as the bath was finished, she was toweled dry.

The maid helped Dawn don her undergarments. The lavender dress was soon placed over her head. Her hair had not been cut since the time of her sentencing and so it was about shoulder length. It was braided into a simple style.

"Her majesty wants to see you in ten minutes. She will explain what is going to happen to you."

Dawn was then led down a tapestry-covered corridor into the queen’s private chamber. The queen beckoned for Dawn to take a seat.

"You will be treated as a woman for the next year. We will find a suitable male suitor for you so you can experience all that a young maiden has to. You will have to worry about someone taking your virgin ass. You will remain here in this castle. Starting tomorrow I will instruct you in way a lady behaves. Remember, if you misbehave in any way I will extend you time by a year."

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Comments

Interesting start

Liked the title. Realistically I'm surprised that a rape victim would be so lenient on her attacker. I'd expect some more immediate, painful punishment leaving Sir Eric an enuch. At 6 ft tall, Dawn will certainly attract attention.

from knight to dawn

love your story hope it continues, new here so not sure

love your story

Thank you

And yes there will be more coming in the following days.

From Knight To Dawn Part 1

Like the start. And a true KNIGHT would NEVER ravish a maiden. No, he was simply a brute who needs to be taught a most valuable lesson.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine