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Lynn Oliver is a new author here on BC, and she has put up two of her novels for free download as PDFs!
I haven't read them yet myself but they seem worth checking out. You can find them at Lynn Oliver
If you read them, come back here to leave a comment and some kudos! Lynn will appreciate that, I'm sure!
Hugs,
Erin
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Unconventional Paragraphs
Didn't check the first one, but in Laura's New Life, the conversations that make up most of the first three pages don't include quotation marks or paragraph breaks. Entire conversations between two or more speakers are all crowded into the same long paragraph. I apologize to the author, but I'm not ready to go through a novel-length story that way.
Eric
Agreed
Some serious editing needed.
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