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The Fall of Kruhl
By Daniel A. Wolfe When the lost girl awakens in a strange place, she discovers that so much has changed. Frightened and unable to understand what has befallen her, she confronts her new situation the only way she knows how, head-on. |
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Comments
this is really neat
and well written.
it really conveys a sense of desperation and confusion
Thank you
Thank you. It was an interesting scene to write. I was careful to avoid using more certain words of a more modern origin. It was a bit difficult to describe a hospital room through the perspective of someone who had never seen one before, but in a way which a reader would understand what was being described.
Have a delightfully devious day,
I'm Hooked!
Intriguing!
>i< ..:::
Thank you
I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Have a delightfully devious day,