Ilos Book 2 Part 4

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The Illusive Man makes his move, and Nick and the rest of the mages race to try and summon something that can defend them. Back on Ilos, Aria is recovering from her battle with the first boss and getting to have a little downtime.

Well, I'm posting this earlier than I originally had thought I would, but here's your scheduled Saturday Matinee! ;)

It's shorter than I like posting, but it came in at a natural stopping point, so I figured I'd go ahead and put it up. Hope you enjoy! :)

 

-Tas

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 8: No Rest for the Weary

 

Earth, Day 27

 

Nick sprinted down the hallway, the sounds of gunfire behind him speeding his steps. The arrows on the signs attached to each corner pointed him towards 5041524B, the park, but with Darrel and Amanda leading him, he paid them no attention. He could hear Connor’s footsteps pounding behind him, the larger boy’s breaths coming in short gasps. Each of the others held a few cards with charged runes inscribed on them, ready to be used at a moment’s notice. Nick watched the blast doors overhead worriedly, prepared to dive or pull up if any of them looked like they might fall.

Things had been going so well. The cafeteria had been cleared of most of the tables for the off-day and turned into a party room, complete with refreshments and a horrifically expensive sound system that was tied into the facility’s overhead speakers. It was actually still piping music through the hallways, providing an odd counterpoint to the sudden violence. A few of the close-by unused labs hosted a variety of other entertainment setups, including video games, a bar, and even a karaoke booth. It was near lunchtime, so Nick had been eating some of the food in the cafeteria with Amanda, Darrel, and Connor. They’d been sticking together as much as possible the past few days and trying to talk about the new guards a lot to the other people in the facility. It’d been working rather well once people noticed how aloof and dangerous-looking the new soldiers were, and they were watched warily when they were around instead of being ignored like before. Another three of the staff without black Keys were able to unlock their magic within the two days since the meeting in Nick’s room, and while they weren’t exactly powerful, it was better than nothing.

Most of the guards had moved into the cafeteria and had seated themselves at a large table off to the side, taking up what was essentially an entire wall of the room, and Nick had been watching them out of the corner of his eye while he ate while trying not to be too obvious. It was a good thing he had been, because when he saw them all move at the same time to bring up their weapons on the room, he was able to react immediately. He’d jumped from his seat, yelling at the top of his lungs for everyone to get down as he activated the cir card he had in his pocket to cast cirres, creating a wall of solid air between the guards and everyone else.

The barrier had lasted only a few seconds before the small amount of mana stored in the card ran out, but it stopped the initial storm of bullets and gave all the magicians in the room a chance to react and defend themselves. Nick used the second of his three cir cards to make a smaller cirres wall to protect himself and the people sitting with him, including Amanda, Connor, and Darrel. Most of the mages in the room got protections up in time, but some of the scientists who hadn’t unlocked their magic and weren’t near anyone else weren’t so lucky.

Blood splattered everywhere as the hail of metal tore through those who weren’t quick enough and screams filled the cafeteria. A few lost their concentration and ended up joining the first victims in death. Everyone who wasn’t in shock had dashed for the door, and Nick had burned his final cir card to protect himself and his friends as they tore out of the cafeteria and headed towards the summoning circle as they had planned.

They’d discussed going on the offensive the previous day, but there had been a guard posted at the entrance to the park and a camera stationed right there. Since no one so using the summoning circle, it would have been blatantly obvious that they were doing something suspicious, and they would have had to get rid of the guard before being able to access the park. On the chance that they managed to take the trained soldier by surprise and defeat him before he could raise an alarm, the camera would catch them, and then there would be no reason for the guards to hold back. They probably would have just gunned down everyone in the facility, leaving the four instigators the only survivors. Thus the longer they could work at getting people suspicious with the guards, the better chances they had at keeping most of the Terran Inquisition alive.

The four mages skidded to a halt as the final blast door separating them from their destination slammed down, the heavy iron-lined door that was the doorway to the park just on the other side of the thick slab of metal. Shit! I knew they were watching from the guard room, but I was hoping they wouldn’t drop these in time.

Without any more cards and needing to conserve his mana for the summoning, Nick was defenseless, but thankfully his friends were not. The blast doors were too thick to burn through quickly, so Connor and Darrel both used a res card to force parts of the hall under the door upwards, but it only moved a few inches before the spells ran out of mana.

“Damn, it’s heavier than I thought!” Darrel cursed. “Shit. Alright. You guys are going to have to handle the summon yourselves. I’ll get this door open and hold them off as best I can. Give me the cards you haven’t used yet.”

“Thanks Darrel and good luck.” Amanda said as she handed over a trio of spell cards to go along with the pair Connor held out.

The black man nodded sharply. “Res!

The two small pillars of hall ground slowly upwards until there was enough room to get under the blast door, and one by one they started crawling through. The sound of pounding boots reached them as Nick and Amanda were pulling Connor under the door, his girth having a hard time getting under the small gap. Connor came through as Darrel called out, raising a wall of concrete just in time to block the first bullets.

Damn! What do I do?! We can’t leave Darrel, but he can’t do anything when he’s trying to cast and concrete isn’t going to last against that kind of firepower!

“Darrel! Drop down and stick your feet under the door!” Amanda commanded, . “We’ll pull you through!”

Res!” And the sound of another section of concrete being raised was the only response, but a pair of boots appeared from under the door.

Nick and Amanda each grabbed a leg and dragged Darrel backwards under the door. As soon as he was clear, the two pillars of hallway holding up the blast door shot back into the ground, followed almost instantly by the massive section of steel and the disintegration of two of the spell cards Darrel held. The gears that would pull the door back up fell apart along with another pair of spell cards, leaving him with only one.

They all collapsed, breathing hard.

“Fuck! Get the damn door open Paul!” They heard one of the guards yelling into his radio through the blast door.

There was a pause as the man listened to the response and a grinding noise from the ceiling above the blast door.

“It’s not opening!”

Another pause.

“What!? They destroyed the mechanism!? Fuckin’ kids! Damn it!”

As the soldier continued to blister the air with profanities, Amanda began to giggle. The sense of relief, the joy of being alive, suffused the small group, and before long they were all laughing.

“Paul! Get me that blowtorch in lab sixteen! The Illusive Man will kill us if we leave any loose ends! Actually, better yet, talk one of those freaky mages holed up in the labs and tell ‘em we’ll spare their lives if they can get this door open!”

The laughter stopped as the sense of safety vanished. It would take a five or ten minutes to get through with a blowtorch, but a minute of concentrated fire or a strong enough earth spell would get the guards through the blast door in short order.

“We need to move.” Amanda said as they all picked themselves up off the floor. “Darrel, what kind of mana do you have left?”

He shook his head. “Not much.”

Amanda stepped over to the heavy park door, pulled up on the latch, and shoving it open as she stepped through. “Alright, do what you can to block the door while Nick, Connor, and I start on the summoning. Nick, how are we doing this?”

Nick pulled the platinum spell cards from his pocket and headed towards the summoning circle as Darrel closed the door. “I just need the two of you to contribute as much mana as possible. If I told you what I was going to try and summon, the image you had in your head could mess things up, so just trust me on this.”

They both nodded and took their places on the sides of the circle. Nick placed his two cards, Light and Shadow runes, in the fourth and seventh corners of the nine-pointed star respectively, then moved to the base of the circle and looked at his two new friends. “Remember, this is all or nothing. What I’m going to summon can get us out of this, but it’s going to cost a lot of mana. If necessary, use your health to complete the summon, because if this fails, we’re dead anyway.”

Both of their expressions darkened, but first Amanda, then Connor nodded solemnly.

“Alright, let’s start.”

Nick closed his eyes and focused on the circle in front of him, pushing mana into the design and pulling it from the cards he had placed. He thought of everything he knew about his best friend, all they memories they had, all the time they’d spent together, all the things that he associated with the man. Honor, determination, intelligence, dependability, independence, social awkwardness, tolerance, fear of vulnerability, adaptability, and most of all, the quiet calmness that his friend had always possessed. He felt the connection and the massive amount of energy it would take to complete the summon. They didn’t have enough mana, even with all three of the most powerful mages the compound had to offer at full strength and the spell cards, but he’d expected that and kept shoving mana into the circle. Minutes passed, minutes they didn’t have to spare, but he could only power the summoning circle so quickly. Jess had told him about being able to meet and contact some of the silver Key players the previous day, and he didn’t doubt that this would work now that he knew that they could be contacted. He had to believe it would work, because he was putting everything into one stock, and if his gamble didn’t pay off, everyone in the facility was dead. The mages and staff could hold out for a little while, especially if they had managed to make the labs where the rune cards were. However, they were relatively weak compared to Nick and the three others with him, and he doubted they could do much to take down the guards. Their mana would run out long before the soldiers’ ammo, and then they were as good as dead. He was their chance at survival.

Nick’s mana hit zero and he mentally shoved through the buffer that protected his health. At first it was a slight uncomfortable feeling that suffused his body, like when the sun is a little too hot on a bright summer day, but that feeling quickly mounted into pain. First it as if he was just really sore, then like all his muscles were cramping at once. He heard Connor yell and go down, his face etched in agony. Amanda stood her ground only slightly longer, tears streaming down her face, before she too began screaming, her legs giving out from under her. A third voice joined the other two, and it took Nick a moment to realize it was his. He was on his hands and knees now. When had he fallen?

Mana stopped coming in from his two friends as they lost their will to continue, but Nick pushed further.

Every breath was a new lesson in pain. He was so close! Only a little more! Fire burned in every vein as he gave more of himself, and he saw blood dripping to the ground through hazy eyes before he collapsed. His ears were ringing, but with his darkening vision saw the tall dark figure of Darrel consumed in an explosion that blew the heavy park door open.

Nick gave it one last push with all the willpower he could muster.

I NEED YOU DAVID! HELP ME!

 

 

Ilos, Day 27

 

The first floating island above Ilos to the north was a peaceful place. Soft luscious grass covered the mostly flat surface, and the only populace in evidence besides myself was the multitude of cows sedately munching on the greenery. I was lying on my back on the fragrant grass, hands behind my head, watching the clouds float by with my newly repaired quarterstaff at my side. Rather than having my Light and Shadow bands sticking to my wrists, I was using the magic to try to make images in front of me with the clouds as outlines. My legs were crossed at the ankle, the Comfortable Traveling Boots still adorning my feet as they were, well, comfortable. The breeze ruffled my black dress and danced with my hair, the midnight tresses spilling to the side of me.

It hadn’t even been twenty four hours since I’d been saved from the Plantea boss by my previously unnamed companion, and in a fit sudden laziness, I’d decided to take it easy for a day. Solventus Gale could wait until I was rested, and so could progressing to the next island, doing quests, and finding answers to all those questions about Ilos and my new body. I felt safe knowing I was well ahead of any other competent champion besides Gale, and was taking my ease in the pleasant afternoon sun.

After waking up to an inn room, reading Gale’s note, and collecting my equipment from the corpse of the boss, I visited the marketplace to get my weaponry repaired. The villagers seemed happy enough to take some of the wood and vines from the boss in exchange for their services, and I’d even come away with a little bit of extra cash. With the various errands I needed to do out of the way, I headed through the Air Gate and decided that this was a good a place as any to relax alone for a little while. I’d killed one of the cows, roasted some of the meat over a fire, and made a nice lunch for myself before taking a nap for most of the day. It was well into the afternoon now and I’d woken up a half-hour ago or so, but I had no plans to move any time soon. I figured I could stay here till nighttime and then take the Air Gate on this island to the next one so I could fight the stuff that slept during the day.

Gale had obviously taken care of the boss on this island already as the Air Gate was active, though I would really have been shocked if he hadn’t by the time I came though. The guardian of the Gate on this floor was the same as all of the rest of the island’s populace, namely that it was a cow, though calling it a bull might be more precise. The animal could take a lot of hits and had unparalleled damage for any creature up till this point, but the only attack it had was to charge directly at you. As long as you didn’t mind a trip back through the Air Gate to Circir below, all you had to do to defeat the boss was stand at the edge of the island and then jump over it when it charged you. The couple thousand foot drop would ensure your victory, and then you just went to collect your spoils. Gale sure was a lucky bastard to get that one to himself.

I stopped myself from starting to grumble about it, it wasn’t really all that big of a deal anyway, that boss gave out very little exp. Honestly though, ignoring all the shit I’d had to deal with for the past few weeks for a change was liberating. I’d been worrying about everything for far too long, obsessing over things I couldn’t change, and that had bit me hard when I tried to fight the boss. I’d been an idiot trying to fight a monster of that difficulty when I was so exhausted and out of it, and I’d still almost pulled it off, which I was oddly proud of.

Putting that out of mind, I sighed contentedly as I watched a fluffy cat-shaped cloud float past, absently making Garfield out of it using the cloud as a background. I giggled at the imagery, amused by my own silliness. This is… nice. I need to take breaks more often. I yawned. I can wait until it gets dark to do more than just relax.

As if that thought had triggered it, light bloomed from under me, warm against my back. As relaxed as I was, my subconscious was still paranoid of unexpected things and caused my to bolt to my feet, scooping up my quarterstaff as I made a quick hop backwards and prepared myself to fight, my Light and Shadow magic vanishing. I looked down, spotting the odd light, which stayed directly below me even when I jumped again, this time high up and backwards. Now that I was in the air I could see that the light formed a fairly specific shape: a nine pointed star inscribed in a circle five or six feet across made of dim grey light, and in the center a glowing white starburst.

Fassi! I commanded mentally, sending strikes of burning light down into the oddity, which did nothing but distort it as my spell tore up the ground it seemed to be projected on. I landed directly on the thing, but nothing happened. It moved with me even when I made jerking movements to try and get out from over it, my best feints doing nothing to shake it.

This was freaking me out a bit. I’d never seen anything like it before in Ilos, and that it seemed locked to my position wasn’t exactly comforting. It looked like a fictional magic circle that I’d seen in any number of games or anime, but that only told me it was potentially dangerous and could possibly do something freaky.

Deciding to forgo the ineffective offensive and avoidance approaches, I crouched down and felt it with a hand, frowning. The starburst was somehow warm to the touch, and as I watched the empty parts of the figure were slowly filling with this weird shifting multicolored light. Something was going to happen when the circle was full, I felt sure of it, but I had no idea what. I took a deep breath and slowly let it out, exhaling all of the emotions that swirled within me until I floated calmly in the Stillness. The figure was mostly empty now, but I only had probably another thirty seconds or so until whatever was going to happen happened. My hands did a hasty check of my gear, feeling three health potions I had left, making sure my long knives were secure, touching all fourteen of my throwing daggers, tapping my wolf’s head clip, my metal armband, and my spell gem pendant, then finally gripping my quarterstaff.

Twenty five seconds to go.

Everything began to shimmer, as if distorted by heatwaves that slowly grew in intensity, but there was no change in temperature. I tried moving, but the circle stayed locked to my position, the white starburst remaining under my feet so matter where they moved.

Fifteen.

The world around me began to ripple, as if someone had cast a stone into the clear pool I was viewing the world through. Another image, another place, seemed superimposed over my vision, slowly fading into view. I could dimly hear screaming, first one voice, then two, and then three, both the visual and audio phenomenon becoming more intense as the seconds ticked by. I was pretty sure I knew what this was now. Ilos had enough game aspects in in for me to guess someone was using summoning magic, and I was the one getting pulled in. I didn’t know where it was I was going, but from the pain the voices seemed to be in, it wasn’t exactly peaceful.

Five.

Two of the voices stopped, the third only pausing long enough to draw breath for another howl of agony. It was much louder now, and the world seemed to be melting away in my vision, doubled with another place. I could see three figures around me, too shimmery to make out, all on the ground. There was greenery there, and a path that lead to something that was grey instead of green. Moving around still did nothing, the almost completely filled figure remained centered on me even now, and in the other world didn’t change at all. I crouched, holding my quarterstaff low and behind me, ready to move in any direction if whatever this was did something dangerous, which seemed like the highest possibility at this point. I had no idea what I was getting into, or rather where I was going, I’d just have to figure it out when I got there.

The last voice stopped. A flare of orange light replaced the grey the path in the other world lead to. An explosion sounded, a trio of figures appearing in the smoke with what looked like assault rifles.

Two seconds.

One second. Light Barrier, cires!

A bubble of transparent solid Light surrounded me just before the nine pointed star and circle filled completely.

*I NEED YOU DAVID! HELP ME!*

Shock lanced through me, piercing the Stillness with its intensity. I knew the voice that sounded in my mind, more desperate than I’d ever heard it. It belonged to someone I was closer to than family, I would give my life for, someone I would do anything to help.

Nick.

Uncertainty vanished. It was time to go.

I charged forward as the starburst symbol under my feet flared with renewed light, blowing away Ilos with its brilliance.

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nice

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I hope we get the net installment soon. :)


Stupidity is a capital offense. A summary not indictable.

Writing

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I hope I can get it done soon too :)

-Tas

Cliffhanger

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Don't make us wait too long pretty please

Cliffhanger indeed

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I'll try, but it might be a little bit, I only have a little of the next part done :(

-Tas

Definitely a Saturday Matinee Cliffhanger!

Well done Padawan.

[If you don't understand the reference, see my comment "Why I can't wait until next Saturday" on the previous chapter of Ilos]

Assuming Aria can use magic to preserve the meat...

Wouldn't one (1) cow provide enough meat for at least a month (unless she is planning to transport it back to the city and sell it for more potions)?

Huh

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I honestly didn't think about that and have now changed it. Thanks for the catch!

-Tas

How will she ever catch up with Nameless (Solventus)

Unless there are multiple gates on the Air island, how can she ever catch up? if there is only one path (of Air Gates), Solventus will take out each guardian before Aria gets a chance.

Bosses

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Bosses aren't something to take lightly (except for the bull of course). It's impossible to go from boss fight to boss fight so quickly, you'd need to do some questing or killing on each island beforehand to have a fighting chance. Actually fighting bosses solo isn't a good use of time if you want to get experience quickly because it takes almost an entire day to prepare and fight the boss. Tack on some recovery time afterwards and and you're out a lot of experience. Aria is good enough to use that time to make up the difference quickly, and she feels that if she tries to rush it again she's just going to end up where she was before. Barring something happening to Gale, it'll take a few islands to catch up, but she'll manage just fine.

And the Air Gates are fairly linear for now, two on each island, one going up, one going down.

-Tas

Summoning

Suspect the summoning was made a bit more difficult due to the changes David had gone through that made it harder for Nick to get a lock on him. But, now that she has arrived the guards are going to be dropping fast.

Weaponry

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It's going to be time to see how champions hold up against modern weaponry, it's going to take more than just force for this one.

-Tas

thanks

thanks

Giffjon

Whoa.

Nick really managed to summon Aria to Earth? Not return David, but SUMMON Aria. This is important to note on multiple counts, as the difference REALLY matters.

Aria is by far the most powerful person right now in the Silver key group. Not only did she get all that exp from single-handedly annihilating an entire town apparently large enough to rank a duchy, but she got most of the exp from the gate boss, and between her and Gale, they're the only ones who've even gotten that far at all. So, power-wise, that might not be quite as powerful as Nick was leading his companions to believe, but it is pretty damned powerful. And we have to assume the power Xynus is exerting to keep the Silver key folks on Ilos will add another barrier.

Another reason this distinction is important is that it means well and truly that David really is gone, utterly sublimated into the new persona of Aria. Nick's target was NOT Aria, it was David, but since Aria is the only entity anywhere who has ANY of the qualities the spell was told to look for, it pulled her as the most powerful entity that came the next closest to what was being envisioned, like the other mages and scientists had been explaining to Nick would happen if an exact match wasn't found.

We also know she won't be able to stay long. Whatever she does to destroy the attackers, she's going to have to do it FAST. Seconds will count.

Abigail Drew.

Yup

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You're right, Aria is the most powerful champion on Ilos, far and ahead of anyone we know of except for Gale. I will note that Xynus isn't expending any additional effort to keep the silver Key champions in Ilos, he's made them residents of Ilos. Permanently.

I wouldn't say David is utterly sublimated into the persona of Aria, but Aria thinks of herself as Aria most of the time, not David in a girl's body. Aria still has a lot of the qualities that define David to Nick, and with the summoning trying to find a creature that uses Light and Shadow magic plus Nick's very personal ties with David, Aria is pretty much the only option.

There is a time limit, a very short time limit, and how that's going to play into the fight is something you'll have to wait and see :)

-Tas

That's what I meant...

That's exactly what I meant by utterly sublimated though.

http://www.thefreedictionary.com/sublimate

David isn't gone in the way of DEAD, he's gone as in exalted. Aria is not LESS than David, she is MORE.

Basically, what I'm saying is that David isn't ever coming back, because he's part of Aria now, and Aria is more than David.

Abigail Drew.

Ahh

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I guess I had a slightly different definition of sublimate stuck in my head, my apologies :)

-Tas

No worries.

I'm pretty sure I was using a fairly unusual and rare usage of the term. Something I do a lot, and tend to confuse people with often.

Abigail Drew.

Tas, I just discovered your

Tas, I just discovered your story, and I love it! I've been reading your revised versions, and just recently realized you had posted this storyline before.

From your perspective, should I wait for further edits, or should I read the old ones? I'm eager to get the rest of the story!

Old versions

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I'm glad you like it!

I've pretty much just kept the old versions around to preserve the comments. It's the same storyline, written a bit worse and with a few errors I fixed, no need to read them unless you want to take a look at the comments. I'm posting this as I go, so there will be indeterminable waits between parts depending on how much free time I have (also meaning this is the latest part and all the rest of the story resides only in my head). Once I finish with book 2 (which will be a loooong while), I'll do the same thing I did with book 1 and do a full editing run, reposting it all before I start putting up the third book.

tl;dr: Don't read the old parts, they have nothing new but comments :)

-Tas

Much better

Book 1 really benefited from the editing done there. With the parts of book 2 so far, you have managed to keep that better writing form going. Keep up the great work and eventually I hope you publish the books on kindle. It is a truly remarkable storyline.

Joanna

Thoughts

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-And if you have any thoughts or questions (particularly questions) about the story so far, please comment them or message me. It's important y'all are wondering about the things I want you to wonder about and not something because I just didn't explain properly. Besides, when people guess at stuff it sometimes works it's way into the story :)

-Tas

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But Are They On OUR Earth?

Hope you weren't waiting for me before posting the next chapter (g).

Didn't find much that I needed clarification on -- actually the most interesting thing from that standpoint was your answer in the comments that the Silver Keys were now permanent residents of Ilos and therefore unable to travel, short (apparently) of the most adept Champion on Ilos getting summoned by an overwhelming amount of mana on Earth led by someone with whom David had a close personal connection. (Is Abigail Drew's comment correct that Aria had the capability to refuse/resist the summoning? Didn't seem like it to me.)

Until your comment, while I hadn't thought about sending Ilosian survivors to Earth if their planet fell (and Earth hadn't), this suggests that it would be impossible. (Ditto Lorilee following Lassea to Earth at some point relatively soon to see whether Earth technology is usable by Ilosians, now that we know that Ilosian magic works on Earth. Sounds as though I T would be really helpful to her there.)

One thing came to mind when Aria mentioned that she didn't know where the starburst magic came from; it wasn't Ilosian and only existed on Earth in game/fantasy form. The logical assumption from her standpoint ought to be that there's another magical world/universe where the Black Keys were sent, and that Nick's SOS is coming from there.

We presumably know otherwise, up to a point. The Illusive Man obviously got the basics from somewhere, since he insisted on the symbols inside the summoning shape. But if you're trying to make magic work in Earth's universe, it'd seem counterproductive to put your laboratory elsewhere.

(It just occurred to me while writing this: Xynus has been clear, to us in the prologue and to the Silver Keys in his oration, that "two worlds" are at stake here. But he's never actually said that the second one is Earth -- only that Earth's champions are his only hope of surmounting his diminishing powers to save the two. Arianus, in the prologue to Book Two, seemed unconcerned with any world but Ilos, and he does seem to be the imprisoned entity who set Ilos's decline in motion as described in Xynus's Book One prologue, rather than a lesser enemy wanting to take advantage.)

Still, none of the mages, scientists, etc. -- not even Amanda, unless she's not telling -- know where on Earth they are. Somebody had to transport them (and the guards, and Dark, unless he's driving the bus, so to speak) so it's not a complete secret. (I suppose the Illusive Man could be the bus driver, though that seems inconsistent with the little we know about his personality.) Which made me wonder if they all had been transported to a counter-Earth somewhere. (At first I was thinking of a second "instance", but that wouldn't seem to work.) But I guess the only advantage to it would be that it couldn't be discovered by others on real-Earth; Illusive would still want to kill them, all the more so if they could return to real-Earth without having to leave the grounds once they learned they weren't there already.

(Nick is communicating regularly with Jess on real-Earth, but that only means that it's close enough to reach without spending an excessive amount of mana, and that could be true even if they were on different versions of the same planet.)

I don't really think the counter-Earth theory would be worth Illusive's effort to set up even if such a world were there and he were able. (I'm not at all clear as to what he's capable of. Doesn't seem to me as though he's getting his info from Arianus, though, unless he's immortal like Arianus and he got it a long time ago.) But having spent an inordinate amount of time trying to think it through, I figured I'd run it out here anyway.

Eric

Aria had the capability to refuse/resist

I actually suggested no such thing... I suggested that Xynus may have done something to restrict the Silver key holders which might have resisted a summoning spell. The author already shot that theory down though.

As to Aria resisting... I didn't say it, but the story kinda suggests it may have been possible, but she'd have had to exert magical power of her own to do so effectively. As it is, the fact that she recognized her childhood friends scream for help made up her mind not to even try that. No idea myself what might have happened had she tried to resist. She may only have inadvertently outright killed everyone involved in the summoning but still get summoned.

Abigail Drew.

Resistance

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I'm surprised that that actually got across in my writing. I had it in mind, but I didn't put anything in on purpose to hint at that possibility, so I'm impressed y'all picked up on it haha. I'm not going to give away any other particulars though, mainly because I haven't decided exactly how they're going to work myself.

-Tas

Permanent residents of Ilos

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I wasn't waiting haha, I just don't have much of it written so it's going to be a bit.

I'm glad I got everything explained pretty well, though when I commented that the silver champions were permanent residents of Ilos, that also means that the rules of Ilos apply to them, including those of summoning. Technically the silver Key players now count as Ilosian creatures, and are summonable from Ilos, it just takes a lot of mana.

As for Lorilee being able to get to Earth? Not on her own.

If you look again at Xynus' address to the summoned silver Key champions, he also says this: "Do not waste this time attempting to return to your previous world, you cannot get back of your own power until the remaining champions join you."

We know that the Illusive Man knows something because he insisted on using those symbols, but not how much.

If the Illusive Man could set up another instance of Earth or something similar, he probably wouldn't need a team of scientists to research magic for him, interesting idea though.

Thanks for commenting, and I'm off to go continue writing the next part :)

-Tas