Ilos Book 2

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The initial crisis is over, and slowly the new inhabitants of Ilos begin to adjust to their surroundings and try to figure out the rules of this world. Earth experiences some upheaval with the advent of magic, and Xynus' counterpart begins to enact some of his plans for Ilos.

And also probably more I haven't thought up yet.

For those of you who didn't end up reading the fully edited version of the first book, a few changes happened that affect the storyline. Nick was captured by an organization known as the Terran Inquisition, led by Doctor Arterian Dark, and is held prisoner with cold iron shackles, which heavily restrict magic. I made it more clear that the raid Tasalin and Corvid conducted was inside the ruins of a once incredible military fort and that much of the groundwork was still solid.

There were of course some other minor edits with wording and whatnot, and thank you Eric, Acrii, and Reist for catching a lot of those that I missed and letting me know about them.

Unfortunately, I happen to be a really slow writer, so updates will be fairly sparse, but I will keep adding parts as I finish them here.

-Tas

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