In an effort to get out of this whiny assed, needs a whippin' blue funk, I am working on the next installment. Expect action, like you ain't seen no shit like this befo'. It's going to be one of those "leave the ladies faint" episodes with much funk and gore.
You'll also meet a new character; a tough, half Eritiean, half Blonde white, street kid with a love for fighting. The world has not seen a bitch like this, ever. Hala Maksoud, meet the world !
Gwen
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Good to hear
I liked the first two parts and hoped for a resolution to the dead girl revived to say goodbye to her mom, the child the friendly aliens could not save.
Is she the hybrid person? Her mind and spirt deserve to live unlike the sniper and cronies who shot her in error. Then there is the child they made a whole girl in the first story and the rest or that remarkable family, what happens to them? And what of the threatened nasty aliens and an invasion?
Have fun, Gwen. Liked the end to you Desert Pricess though I wished it was a little longer.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Don't despair DP may not be done yet.
I liked playing with Khadija and Huda. There may be more yet; I have to think on it a while. Khadija is my Muslim name, could it be that there is a bit of me in the story? It is anyone's guess.
Go Get Them Gwen!!!
I have read the first two chapters and I want to see those cads pay for what they have done. If you need any help with the story, let me know. I am a sci-fi fan.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine