After a brief delay of 52 months I'm posting a new chapter

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After a modest delay I am posting Timeout 4, Chapter 14 in a multipart installment over the next week or so. Four or five posts of anywhere from 20 to 30 plus pages each should see it done.

As Princess for Hire and several other excellent but interrupted serials have posted of late I figured I should jump on the bandwagon.

-- grin --

Itinerant and Holly Hart helped me a while back on this, LAST YEAR in fact. I think. It's been a while. I believe they are both out of rehab by now.

I did make a few minor changes afterwards so any errors or typos are all the fault of whichever political party you DON'T like!

So there. See, I'm off the hook!

-- More like off the trolley--

WHO SAID THAT?

In any case as it has been a little while, um, April or was it May of 08 -- and that's 2008 not 1908 -- you may wish to reread the earlier chapters to refresh your memories.

Comments are always welcome.

John in Wauwatosa

P.S. This is a fanfic in the Whateley Academy universe, I think. Has it really been that long?

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Joanie LIVES!!!

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Great to see you back in the sadle I cant wait for it to be posted. Keep writing for as long as that muse sits on your shoulder and then hogtie her so she can't escape.

Way to go John!

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I'll DEFINITELY have to reread the older stuff before diving into this, but I'm glad to see you've still got some story left to tell!

Melanie E.

No byline needed

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This is so obviously your work you don't even need the byline. I noticed right off the bat that no entendre was left undoubled, Joanie still talks to herself AND gets answers back, and she's still as horny as a 13 yr. old with a stack of Playboys! Guess I have to get busy now, huh?

"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

I am like SOOO not like that. I am GOOD girl I am

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Or is that Eliza Doolittle?

Um, you do realize that READING my stuff is virtually guaranteed to permanently lower your IQ?

And Joanie wishes to point put she is not some oversexed, wanna be bimbo airhead.

She describes herself as biologically and mentally a normal 17 year old with a sharp mind and a normal 17 year old girl's dreams, drives and desires. She is NOT a wannabe bimbo.

Any apparent bimbo tendencies are part of a clever plan by her to *hide in plain sight* as it were and have nothing to do with her ever so natural and healthy 17 year old female wants and desires.

Just because the sight, sound and smell of a virile man elicit a natural and perfectly normal *response * in her is no proof she is oversexed or out of control.

That she is particularly smitten by one particular young man is only biology and her keen, logical mind selecting this person in advance for his many desirable and superior traits as a provider and potential mate.

Thus her nearly uncontrollable desire to rip of all their clothes and make out like weasels in heat is totally besides the point.

Beyond that little... quirk, she is a demure and utterly proper young woman.
John in Wauwatosa

P.S. She's not looking at the moment. She held a WEAPON on me man! I HAD to say what I said or..

NO! PUT down that loaded submarine sandwich.

Aaaaaaah!

John in Wauwatosa

In going back and re-reading Time Out, has anyone noticed ...

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The final lines of Chapter 11, the last one posted, were:

To be continued
Would *I* lie to you?
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John, if this is Chapter 14, what happened to 12 & 13?

Not to nit pick or anything, giggle

It's nice to be important, but it's more important to be nice.

Holly

No time warping here John

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Lost weekend maybe? :P

Now we are headed for 53 weeks for chapter 12 and counting *tapping my feet* :)

Kim

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