Legacy of the Anari - 2

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LEGACY OF THE ANARI

Many thanks for the kind comments to chapter 1. Please enjoy chapter 2!

Ashleigh Blayze

Time passed, probably only minutes but they felt like an age. Rin tried his comm guessing it was futile but to his stunned mind it seemed like the thing to do. He was right, there was no signal. He snorted in disgust at himself.

Yeah like you can get a comm signal with a million tonnes of rock on your head. Fuckwit.

He sat in the dark and slumped against a rock pile, mind blanking out for a time, as he gazed sightlessly into the dark. Finally he shook himself, telling himself to get it together. There was no leaving this way for sure, so it was back through the passage and then explore. He gathered his courage, pulling a grim determination not to give up from his anger and fear.

Rin grabbed his equipment and once again prepared to squeeze along the bloody passage. Without the Dtilla behind him the entrance to the small confined tunnel seemed much more oppressive. Pausing as he remembered pushing something out of the passage with his pack Rin scanned the scope around, finding the Dtilla's weapon, and its body or what was left of it.

Grimacing, he quickly searched the remains, finding a couple of ammo clips for the weapon, and a sheathed vibro blade. The handle wasn't shaped for human hands but he could use it if he needed to. The reptilian alien's personal effects were just trinkets of some type that meant nothing to Rin, and lastly what looked in the scope like a credit chip.

Hmm wonder what shops there are down here?

The chip went in his pocket. Finally, conscious of the stink and feeling ghoulish he forced his way back through the passage with his new and old possessions. Once he got through he stacked his gear in a pile then detached the scope from the rifle. It was still a little cumbersome, but at least he look around without the heavy cumbersome rifle. Next order of business was to find the torch.

It took a while but eventually he found it, the mini torch had rolled into a crevice in the cave floor, and after it had cooled had been very hard to see in the scope. Relief took a weight off his shoulders and light flared as he turned it on. Squinting in the sudden brilliance Rin shone it around . The cave he was in was small but tall enough to stand easily in and it looked dry. Seeing no obvious concerns, with his spirits rising Rin turned to his gear to see what he still had. The big rifle was undamaged, but way too powerful to fire in the cave. His ears were still ringing a bit. He still had seven shells in the weapon, 2 full clips in the pack and the empty clip as well, for a total of 23 rounds. After checking the rifle had the safety on, he placed it to one side.

The weapon the Dtilla had used was much smaller. Under the torch beam he examined it. No obvious signs of damage. Checking the gun’s controls he ejected the ammo clip and examined it. A flechete weapon, and the clip appeared to be half full. It fired nasty slivers of ceramic that could rip a person to pieces with ease. Rin had seen gangs in the city slums using similar weapons during the worst parts of the riots, before he had escaped and headed for the plains and the Rijkards took him in. The weapons grip wasn't ideal as it was designed for Dtillas' 4 digit clawed hands, but he could use it with some discomfort. The gun also had a universal mount that the rifle scope slotted into perfectly, making a reassuring click.

This done Rin was pleased, he had a weapon he could use that was a lot more suitable for a cave and he could easily use the scope if necessary without being disarmed, or having to wield the large hunting rifle. Rin realised his mindset seemed a lot more grim and jaded than it normally was, despite his years in the slums but he decided that being buried alive after seeing your friends killed could make you grow up fast. His work belt had space in a pouch so he slipped the 2 spare clips in there, and the knife and sheath were quickly attached as well.. Groaning he realised his own hunting knife had been on the trynlar, leaving him only the sheathed vibroblade which was primarily a weapon and not a tool.

Turning to the pack he emptied it out to check what he had, and what else had been lost with his mount. It made for worrying news, most of his food and water and clothing was gone with the mount's saddle packs as well as his knife, bedroll, tent, stove with heat element, and utility tool. On the plus side the survival pack held his spare ammunition for the rifle, high energy rations for 3 days, a 10 litre water carrier that was half full, a basic first aid kit, one roll of waterproof tape, a spare battery for the torch, compass, survival blanket, a hooded poncho for wet weather, magnesium fire lighter and striker, work gloves, fishing line and hooks and 50m of high strength cord, and a change of dry clothes in a waterproof compartment in the pack.

Overall Rin considered that while things definitely could be better, at least he had the basics, for the time being at least. After rearranging his gear with as much on his belt and in pockets as possible, Rin broke the hunting rifle down for carrying and stowed it in his pack, and then after a last scan around with the torch to check for anything left behind, Rin taped the torch to the side of the flechette gun and set off deeper into the cave system.

***

The cave system was huge, and Rin no longer had even a vague notion of where he was. The compass had proved useless, as he walked, climbed, crawled and waded in the cave system, it was just impossible to keep a bearing, so after a while he ignored it and just plodded on, concentrating on putting one foot after another. He thought he had begun searching for a way out 4 days previously, but with no daylight his time sense was shot to hell. Sitting in the dark time seemed insubstantial, a minute or an hour could pass and he didn't know the difference, his world had reduced to his sense of touch, smell and hearing. His ears had gradually stopped ringing, but it made no difference, the only thing to hear was the dripping of water.

The caves were devoid of life, so at least his fear of being attacked in the darkness had gradually subsided, any predator in the caves would have died of starvation long before. The worst thing was there was nothing to burn. Rin desperately wanted a fire to heat himself, he was chilled to the bones and constantly shivering. He thought he was running a fever now, and had taken some medication from the first aid kit, hoping it would do some good. As he stumbled along in the dark all Rin wanted was a fire to dry out all his soaked clothes, and raise his spirits. When he got tired of moving he would huddle in the tattered survival blanket to try and warm himself through, eating more of his dwindling food. He was doing his best to stretch out his rations but food was now very short. In the darkness and with no sense of time he ate when he couldn't stand the hunger any more.

Trying to keep his gear dry where possible was hard and the countless dead ends he had run into were depressing. Mostly Rin was worried about his light. The torch was going strong at the moment, but even though the battery packs were very efficient he'd was using spare now. He did his best to conserve power only using the light when moving. Thinking straight was hard, and he was worried that he would begin hallucinating. He kept the scope on the gun powered down so at least he could fall back on that but the prospect of trying to find an exit from the caves with out light was terrifying.

Stopping for a break, he mechanically chewed an energy bar, eating it slowly to try and get some sensation of fullness, his empty stomach was gnawing at him. He was crouched down leaning against the wet cave wall, in the dark. As he chewed Rin suddenly realised that his left cheek was colder than his right. Concentrating on the sensation he became aware that a very slight breeze was wafting past his stubble. The air was moving. It took a long moment for the significance to sink into his dulled mind. If he could follow the breeze upwind, it should lead outside. He might have a way out. Finishing the energy bar, Rin stood in the dark and orientated himself so the breeze was full in his face, then flashing on the torch he set off again.

The weak draught had been getting ever so gradually stronger. Rin was doubled over at times which was killing his back, as he followed a rock passageway. Now the narrow passage had opened out a little and appeared to be at a dead end, there had been yet another rock fall ahead. The beam of light played over the rubble as Rin looked for the chink that was letting air through. Not for the first time Rin wished he had one of the antique lighters a couple of the ranch hands had owned, a flickering flame would have been so much help at that moment.

After some thought, Rin scraped together a hand full of powdery dry dirt that had fallen, and faced where he thought the breeze was strongest. Aiming the light beam he threw the dirt, and watched for any sign of a breeze affecting the dust. Nothing. Rin tried again. It took 3 more attempts but then the dirt was disturbed as it fell and almost straight away Rin spotted the crack in the rock fall under the torch light. The rock fall didn't look fresh but for a while his confidence was shaken by the prospect of the roof collapsing on him as he dug. Shaking off the foreboding and keeping his gear with him in case he had to move quickly, he cautiously began moving the fallen rock and dirt, digging towards the fresher air.

It took Rin an age to dig through the rock fall. He excavated a narrow channel near the roof of the passage, several times having to search for the draught as he moved from pocket to pocket in the collapsed passageway. As he dug he began to hear the sound of water. He had never suffered from claustrophobia but after this Rin felt he’d had enough of confined places for a very long time. After finally breaking through the last of the rock fall he slumped on the rock floor exhausted by hunger, stress and fear. All around him the sound of running water echoed in a large space. Sitting in the dark for a long time he did his best to breathe calmly regaining his strength before flicking the torch back on.

He was sitting on a ledge that ran the length of a large cavern towards another tunnel. Some 10m below him a small black fast running river was running, twisting and crashing through boulders, stalactites and stalagmites, following the ledge before twisting away and rushing out of the cavern through a low virtually flooded tunnel in the far wall. The breeze that Rin had been following seemed to come from that direction. Shining the torch beam along the drop from the ledge it didn't look like there was any way down that would involve less than a broken leg, and Rin didn't really feel like wading through the no doubt freezing water to pursue the breeze further, so he decided that although it would mean leaving the breeze behind he would follow the ledge, besides he could always back track if necessary. He ate the last of his food and took a long drink while he listened to the river in the dark. Then, break over he flicked the light on, and carried on walking leaving the noisy cavern with only a quick glance back down at the river.

It took a few minutes of walking to realise that this new tunnel was different somehow to the cave system he had been negotiating before. Stopping, Rin shone the torch light around paying attention to the walls and floor, before realising they had been worked somehow, not wholly artificial like a mine working but as though someone had taken the existing natural cave and tunnel and made them more usable.

Tired and hungry he moved on quickly now, eager to be out of the dark, and back amongst the living. As he travelled Rin quickly began to notice more signs of working, a rock wall straightened here, steps carved in the stone there, and at another point the tunnel was clearly braced and strengthened by an arch that looked like it was made with some form of concrete. Rin thought he had travelled at least a couple of kilometres since leaving the river behind, and was wondering where this tunnel was leading when he practically fell over the skeletal remains of a body that lay sprawled in the tunnel.

Swearing he backed up then crouched down to examine the remains in the torch light. The skeleton looked humanoid, and just over a metre tall. In fact if he ignored the fact that humans had only been on Yasm for a little over 40 years local, and then only as refugee workers brought in by the Korkari for their new colony, Rin would have sworn the skeleton was a human child. A human child who from damage to the back of the skull, and the larger wound at the front obliterating the skulls forehead, had been shot from behind.

Rin was young, and uneducated, although he had tried to get what schooling he could from the colony computers in the slums, but he was certain that the skeleton had been there a very long time. In fact from the dust and dirt that had built up around the bones that lay on the rock floor where they fell he was sure they had been there far, far longer than the 40 years humans had been on Yasm. In the slums he had learnt to trust his gut, and his gut said that was a human kid lying there, where it absolutely could not be.

Shining the torch around, he played the beam over the skeleton, then down the arms to the hands. A glint of metal amongst the finger bones caught his eye and bending closer Rin found a ring on the index finger of the skeleton, a greyish metal band with a band of dark green stone inset along the middle. As he touched the band he accidentally jostled the bones of the hand, which collapsed soundlessly into dust.

A very long time.

The ring might be valuable at least so rather than risk losing it in the darkness Rin slipped it on his finger, a little surprised that it seemed to fit okay, but after that he thought nothing of it. He found nothing else amongst the remaining bones, all traces of clothing or other artefacts had vanished long before. The skeleton disturbing on many levels, and muttering an apology for disturbing the body and a small prayer for the dead child he moved on.

Rin guessed it was close to another 1500m before he reached the next cave. Shining the torch beam around, the cave was clearly machined, arched and buttressed over head. Before he had time to wonder about the construction Rin's pulse sped up as the torch beam, suddenly picked out a flat circular wall which he realised was a hatchway of some kind. Wherever he was he had arrived at least. With his mood soaring he hurried across the cave to the hatch, anxious to open it and find a way out on the other side. Rin looked at his left hand, he thought he felt a vibration in his finger from the ring as he moved deeper into the cave. Nothing looked different though and now he could not feel anything either so he carried on walking.

***

The hatch comp was ancient and very basically programmed. It had been in standby mode for so long as to have no meaning. Not that it would or could have cared. The last sequence of events that its base functions recorded was that the Anari Prime key left the site by the hatch followed by 2 more unknown signatures. The unknown signatures were logged as having returned but the Prime key did not. Functions had moved to standby conserving power after no further activity was recorded. Now peripheral sensors recorded the key in immediate proximity and activated lighting circuitry to facilitate entry. The system noted that 60% of the lighting system was non functional, outside acceptable parameters and updated the attached maintenance logs.

The sudden light was blinding after days with only the torch and its steadily weakening battery. Rin cursed and flung up his hands to shield his eyes. Squinting and blinking sudden tears away, he headed to the hatchway which was now mostly lit up, although some of the lighting was fitful at best. A small beam of light illuminated a dust covered metal plate at waist height, inset into the wall beside the hatch. He waved his hand over the plate, nothing happened, pressed against it, still nothing occurred. The hatchway itself showed no sign of moving, and nothing seemed to mar its circular metallic surface. Rin looked for some type of retinal scan or a physical lock to try and force or pick but could find nothing. Frustrated he leant against the hatch and forced his fatigued mind to think.

The hatch comp noted that after the specified elapsed time of 200 micro cycles the Anari key was still outside and ingress had not been completed. Locking hatch lighting had activated and although not satisfactory had illuminated the Hatch's activation swipe. Sensors registered temporary pressure against swipe surface but circuit link was not activated. Anari Prime data file recorded as juvenile status- possibility of confusion and or incorrect hatch use. Following its programming the swipe surface illumination was pulsed. Notification sent to House comp of Anari key presence and possible evidence of confusion.

The light playing on the dust covered metal plate pulsed off on, off on, off on, and then stayed on. Rin stood up and examined it more closely.

What's that?

Blowing most of the dust away, he noted a shallow horizontal groove indented into the metal plate.

Some sort of swipe? A key card device?

Wiping the plate with his tattered sleeve removed the last of the dust and beside the groove Rin noticed an etched diagram that was clearly a hand with a ring on it and an arrow from left to right. Feeling like an idiot he place his hand on the plate with the ring's edge resting in the groove and moved his hand sideways left to right. There was a long pause. Stale air rolled out as the hatch began rolling sideways. There was the sound of electricity sparking, and the smell of burnt cabling and with a groan and a shudder the hatch stopped partially open before resuming its sideways motion seconds later to slide open fully. Quickly Rin moved inside. Behind him the lights dimmed then winked out.

Access protocol completed. Access circuit completed. Hatchway motors engaged. Sub optimal efficiency noted in primary hatch motor. Short circuit due to failed primary power coupling. Power rerouted to secondary system. Secondary motor engaged. Hatchway motors engaged. Hatchway opened. Maintenance requirement flagged as urgent. Anari Prime key movement into Hatchway confirmed. House comp notified. Damaged systems protocol engaged. Hatch locked in open mode. Secondary motor power discontinued. Local lighting circuit moved from external to internal modes. Hatchway comp returned to standby mode.

Rin was in a small room that looked like a cross between an equipment locker and the wet room at Rijkard’s Hold where the herders dumped their gear after returning from a long trip. As he walked in internal lighting came on, a diffuse glow that didn't appear to come from any one source. Not caring about anything else at the moment Rin sat on an alloy bench that ran along the centre line of the room facing 3 standing lockers on either side and grinned, just luxuriating in being in a lit environment. It was almost disorientating after spending days underground constantly following a beam of light, and praying that said beam didn't die on you. After a few minutes with his spirits rising Rin looked around to get his bearings and then decided to see if any of the lockers would open. All the lockers had markings in a language he did not recognise.

**

The House comp unit was vastly more powerful than a mere Hatchway, after all it ran the majority of the facility's systems. It too had been in standby mode, and powered up after the activation signal from the Hatchway, starting running diagnostics and then almost immediately began following the Prime Key on its remaining functional sensors. The overall situation had not changed- outer and internal automated security systems and sensors had been almost totally compromised or destroyed during the attack on the facility. The complement of defenders and staff had been eliminated. Facility command had succeeded in rendering the Vault secure and this had remained undetected.

Primary and secondary power sources had been disabled and rendered beyond repair with available technical resources. Facility was now running on tertiary passive supply. Facility reserves at 14%, Vault reserves unknown. Communications facilities had been destroyed. The attackers’ primary targets had been juvenile Anari guardian candidates and the Anari Prime candidate. There were no survivors amongst the guardian candidates and the Prime had been terminated so far as the House comp systems had been able to ascertain. No reinforcements or rescue had been forthcoming. The House unit had gone to passive standby status, once the facility had been repaired to the limited degree possible without Vault direction or external support. The House comp analysed its available data before determining this situation was outside the boundaries of its programming, due to a logical error.

The Anari Prime candidate had been terminated, and each candidate’s Key would, could only work for that candidate. Remaining house sensors insisted that the Prime Key was currently centrally located in locker room 4, having activated the bolt hole Hatchway from the outside and entered by completing the access circuit. Logic suggested the Anari Prime candidate was deceased, both due to time passed and sensor logs from the attack. The unidentified attackers who exited the facility in pursuit of the Prime candidate would not have returned without terminating the candidate who was recorded as unarmed and untrained. The candidate’s Key would not work for any being other than the candidate. The Prime Key was located within the Facility. Key access required that the candidate be alive therefore the Prime candidate was alive which was not logically possible.

In a quandary as to how to proceed, the House comp did what all juniors have done since time immemorial, and bounced the problem up the chain of command. A sensor sweep with its available resources detected no threat to the Vault, so this being the case, a circuit breaker was reversed, reconnecting the Vault with the facility and a burst of data was transmitted down a hugely armoured sub system inviting the Vault Paladin AI to take over the situation. This done the House continued to monitor the Key.

**

It had been mostly asleep for a long time, successfully isolated from the Facility during the attack the AI had waited, then slept. Periodically it would wake and check status, nothing changed. It got bored. Slept. Waked. Slept. The AI knew precisely how many times this had happened, it just couldn't be bothered to check. Boring. Within the Vault laboratories the newest generation of Symbiont had finished maturing. The Keys themselves couldn't be improved upon, the technology wasn't even understood fully .The AI had worked at improving each generation where possible and its tinkering had improved Symbiont set survivability by an estimated 5%, it didn't have a lot else to do, and it prevented electronic dementia.

A miniscule fraction of itself noted that it had just received a data packet. Requesting help. From outside. The hard data link had been restored by the House unit. The data packet received all available attention with immediate effect. Less than a millionth of a second later and Paladin was re-established into all the remaining facilities and giving the House a 'good job, I will take over now'. The AI then reviewed all available data from the attack, agreed with the House that the Prime had definitely been terminated, therefore the Key could not be in the House and that this was outside House's program. Next step communication.

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Legacy of the Anari -2-

Will be fun to see what happens, next.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

Interesting...

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So the Key (ring) is only supposed to work for one person, and is working for Rin in contravention of that? Interesting. The installation seems to have been significantly damaged in the attack, but still functions to an extent. One question, of course, is are there any food supplies still usable? Given how long the body had lain there, to turn to dust when touched, it would take fairly impressive food storage technologies to have anything left. Long enough to pre-date Earth's attaining spaceflight, by a long shot, if the 2300 AD given in the intro is accurate. So how did humans get here, presuming Rin's identification of the remains is correct. Someone off-planet picking up humans for some reason in the far past? Or Earth being a lost colony or shipwreck planet? Insufficient information for analysis.

Symbionts, eh?

Yours,

JohnBobMead

Yours,

John Robert Mead

Hydroponics, with a

Hydroponics, with a reasonable genetic base, could maintain themselves for centuries. It would make sense to make a facility that critical be as self-sufficient as possible.


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

Ancient civilisation

Well... this certainly pushes my buttons :D I just love mysterious ancienct high tech civilisations. If they're really humans that might explain the vicious attack on earth humanity. I guess the symbionth might be a major advantage for Rin, but I doubt that it'll help humanity as a whole. I mean it's just a single AI that slept most of the time. It shouldn't be able to develop something better than a whole culture of aliens.

Thank you for writing this awesome story, I can't wait for the next chapter,

Beyogi

Hey John

Sorry, my replies got messed up. I think my reply to chapter 3 caught most of this one. Glad you enjoyed it.

Lost civs

Lost civilization stories are kool! Possibly Rin was let in by the malfunctioning door and the key he has might not be actually working. Because it did that's causing the logic loop.

Am I close?

More please!
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Grover

This is quite fun.

I am looking forward to where you will carry me off too next. :)

Gwendolyn

I'm sure this is already

I'm sure this is already plotted out, but notice that in the Paladin AI 'thoughts', it's mentioned that the technology of the 'Key' wasn't fully understood.

That means that the _Key_ could have chosen a new 'Prime', or that the Key was triggered off of something about Rin that matched what it was really set for - rather than what the original creators of the AI thought it might be.

(Edit)

After a quick scan, it also is that the "House" facility couldn't be repaired (power, communication) out of existing technical resources, but the Vault condition was unknown.

With the Vault AI becoming active again, the Vault resources - apparently fully functional - might be able to repair the other facilities. I'm envisioning the Vault as being a relatively centralized, but much 'deeper' facility, connected to all of the others through hidden ways, and controlling all the subsystems. All of those connections would have been locked down and stealthed when the attack occurred, putting all of the subsystems into fully independent status. Thus, the door could be seen by the house, but the door couldn't see the house AI. The House AI couldn't see the Paladin AI, but could send a 'blind' message. The Paladin AI could then see the House and door. Basically, a cell system, where each one doesn't know the contact above, so cannot give it away, but the above contact knows several cells - but not the one above it.


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

Cell system

I hope you carried on reading to find out the answers to your questions..

The Key was not fully active at the time of its previous holders demise.

Correct that the Vault AI was a much more secret installation than the House system.

Rewire Paladin...

(You probably have to be American and over 60 to get the reference, but...)

Not sure whether there's deliberate confusion here or not. As I read it, "the key" seems to refer both to the ring that allowed entry (a key in the "lock-and-key" sense) and to the Prime Candidate, the youth who wore the ring previously (a key in the "most-important" sense). The former, of course, is in the locker room; the latter is long deceased, and the AI -- even at the Paladin level -- seems to be having more trouble reconciling the two than I'd have expected. Do I have it wrong?

Eric

Have Key Will Travel

Loved Richard Boone and I'm only 53.

I gather the kitty was both this top priest/warrior and it is also refers to the ring which seems to have the ability to preserve/enhance things. Or maybe it was just that the small humanoid had not been disturbed for thousands of years. The body though old was intact until he took off the ring. I got the impression much of it crumpled to dust after.

Thus IMHO the previous key was injured or starved yet the ring slowed decomposition.

As this i BC I assume the key is female or THIS one will soon be a female perhaps after bonding with symbiant. Hum, is it simply the key is malfunction thus it assumes this boy is the key OR is he somehow a genetic match, a blood descendant/relative?

Still wonder how Earth had space colonies only a couple centuries from now? A breakthrough in tech or a friendly alien race helped us then the nasties attacked?

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

LOL

Gah make it very weird doing replies when I have already done the replies for the next chapter, including yours John!

I uess you got the reference about Paladin but I still dont get it, but then i am English and 36 so prolly gotno chance!

Rewire Paladin

Sorry but I missed that reference, could you explain?

You're correct that the Key refers to both. Because the AI knows the Key can only be active if the Prime is alive, therefore the prime is alive. The Prime cannot be alive because of time passsed etc Therefore the AI goes with what it has and accepts Rin as Prime. Physical evidence taking precedence over old data.

I enjoyed your comments for chpater 3 as well.

Palidin was Richard Boone's character in the TV western..

Have Gun Will Travel.

It was a radio show that made the change over to TV much like Gun Smoke. HGWT was one of the very best TV westerns. We are talking the late 1950s early 1960s for the TV show, back when I was an infant or pre schooler.

Boone's character was a wild west detective/hired gun who's business card said "Have gun will travel" and had a chess knight printed on it, the horse head symbol. He was very cool customer and on the side of good and right.

Thus the eventual naming of Paladins as a character type in RBGs and later online gaming. RPGs ... oops!

Hum, I agree with others here , now that the AI in the vault is has a new Prime to protect, nurture and train -- IE a purpose once again -- and has some knowledge of the current state or affairs I assume it will not carefully rebuild/upgrade the old facilities, taking care to remain hidden and undetected. It along with the new Prime Rim need to reenter the World, so to speak. It needs *eyes and ears* to the outside again.

Speculation that the Anari were bad guys, um gals is possible but the AI seems decent. Though even the good gals could be seen as bad if they were so advanced they treated other races like children or worse. Or other powerful races envied/feared them. The women being the only Primes and all that might have raised the hackles of male dominated races. The raider actions suggest a power vacuum at the moment and a break down in civilization/law and order. Almost post apocalyptic?

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

The matriachy vs patriachy

The matriachy vs patriachy bit doesn't make sense especially since humanity is traditionally male dominated. If the aliens had a beef with matriachies, they wouldn't have needed to destroy humanity. There has to be another reason. I'm pretty sure there is comparable technology or magic that also works on males. I mean why should body, charisma or intelligence boosts only work on females? Maybe the original race just didn't have intelligent males... Maybe they were that strong sexually bimorph that the males were nothing but animals and thus they created the keys only for females.

Humanity isn't totally male

Humanity isn't totally male dominated, traditionally. There are a lot of tribal societies in which the elder women made an enormous number of the decisions - especially in terms of goods. Dual 'circles' are more common than complete domination by one over the other.

It's not until you start seeing more 'settled' cultures (agricultural revolution) that you see full domination of one sex over the other. Even then, titles such as 'Dowager Empress' or 'The Queen Mother' end up having enormous impact over the ruler.


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

Not Sure How Much Point...

...there is in finishing the explanation four years after the fact, but the "have gun, will travel" business card John described invited the user (this being before telephones) to "wire Paladin". (In North American usage, the verb "wire" meant to contact by telegraph.)

Thus the attempted play on words in my first comment's title.

Eric
(re-reading the story after someone's 2017 blog entry searching for it)

Symbiont

The symbionts seem to be the solution. Such organisms may be a bit adaptable to different genetic codes and even different body chemistries.
The key detected that the human could be bound to a symbiont (wich does not mean that it was made for humans, only for humanoid species) and started working. With the key working the latch opened and all the logical sequence happened.
Perhaps not all Anari were capable of becoming primes (something related to the symbiontic abilities), but this specific human is.
And yes, the same race that attacked the Anari may have detected their similarities with humans and decided that a preenptive strike was needed.
An interesting twist would be if the Anari where the evil ones in this game, perhaps a very agresive species that, associated with their symbionts, led their slaves to revolt and kill even the children.

Key limitations.

You're right. The Anari and HUmanity are possible users of the Keys. BUt definitely not the originals. Some of yoru queries are dealt with in chapters 3 and 4.

I like your idea of the Anari being evil, however for the purposes of this story the Anari were not evil...at least when compared to those who attacked them. The Key on the other hand is also not evil, but it is not good either...it's a tool and mostly pragmatic. I think you will enjoy he problems that can cause.

Whoops...

Sorry, I just realised I havent responded to comments on chapter 2 yet...even though i have done for chapter 3. My bad, I am not trying to be rude or ignorant, so a general apology. I will now go an write my replies.

Thxs

Hmmm. I do wonder if the

Hmmm. I do wonder if the estimated 5% increase of Symbiote survivability is the absolute or the relative. The former would definitely carry more impact (doubling the chances if the former success rate was 5%, or decreasing the failure rate by factor of six if it was 94% previously).

Faraway


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