Black powder and lace - 4

Black powder and lace

copyright 2011 Faeriemage

When the entire universe is stacked against you, all you can do is change the game.


AUTHOR'S NOTE: As has been said before, now for something completely different. No, I am not changing the story, per se, but I am adding in a couple of new characters. As I currently plan it, I will not be returning to Mar or Anhelette before chapter 5, so if you really can't wait for that part of the story, come back to this part later.

One thing I have decided is not to have a clear good/evil dynamic. People are people, by and large be they from America, France, or even Genin. Genin may be expansionistic, but that does not make them inherently evil. So, it's time to see their point of view.

Helmet, check. Armor, check. I'm ready, you all. Let the onslaught of angry readers commence ;)


"Put your backs into it, men!"

The straining soldiers in the purple of Genin struggled to get the wheel of the caisson out of the mud. The cannon was disconnected from everything else, having already been dragged through the mud hole.

"Marshal Freid," a boy said as he ran up to the man observing the muddy soldiers.

"What is it, Eron?"

"Grand Marshal Eamon sends his regard and requests the pleasure of your company."

"Would you relay to the Grand Marshal that I am overseeing the process of pulling the guns out of the muck that he so graciously guided us into and can't currently please him with my company."

"The Grand Marshal thought that would be your response, so he gave me another that he expected delivered by rote. 'Tell that good for nothing sack of river rocks that he is my subordinate, and not I his. If he doesn’t step to it and report on my time table I'll put demote him to able man, patron in the senate be damned.'"

Fried chuckled at the statement, knowing full well that the Grand Marshall loved his bluster. He also realized that if he were threatening demotion then it were something serious.

Before being inducted into Special Weapons he would never have thought something like it, but he marveled that horses faired so well on this planet when so many other species of animal brought with them didn't. He pulled himself into the saddle, and set off at a trot to the Grand Marshall's tent.

"You wanted to see me, Eamon?"

"You will show me the respect I deserve, Marshal Freid!"

"I show you the respect you deserve. The only reason you outrank me here is because the senate, may god preserve it, chose to create a new rank for you. If they'd really wanted you to be in charge, you would be a Field Marshall, or even a Marshall General. No, you are a Grand Marshall. Have you ever considered that it's because of your size?"

Eamon's round face turned a brilliant shade of red as he shook with anger.

"I am in charge of this…"

"Eamon, you are in charge of nothing. You will stay out of my way. You will stop calling me to your tent like a puppy every time that you need someone to change your diapers, and finally you will stop threatening things you can't get away with. Seriously. Threatening to demote me and take away my commission in the same breath? No one can take my commission from me. Not even the senate. So, while you could try to demote me all the way to page, you can't make me an able man."

Eamon laughed at the unintended joke, and after a moment Freid joined in.

"It's just that I am so bored, Freid. I expected being on campaign to be exciting, as it is…"

"It is mostly mud and marching, Grand Marshall. You could always head back to Genin City…"

"No, Freid, I can't. While I would like to, I am banished. Don't try to deny it. They don't want me in the city, so they foisted a commission on me, thereby taking away my name, title, and lands."

Freid smiled sadly at the man. A commission cost a lot. It was a year's wages in the fields to even buy the rank of Page. Each higher rank was, as was expected, even more. To become a Marshall, Freid had to pay his entire portion of the tribute from taking Aliaster. That had left him very little to live on over the past few months, and then they'd saddled him with this…person.

Eamon had lost even more than Freid, however.

"So, Eamon, what exactly is it that you wanted to see me about."

"The men in those wagons have come up with something new." Eamon's disgust at having men behave so unseemly as the people riding in the oversized wagons did was obvious. Even Freid could barely contain his disgust most times. Unfortunately, with the army being as far from home as it was, he couldn't complain about updates to his weapons. Since women weren't permitted to go to war, that left having men decipher the texts and work on the innovations that he would so desperately need.

No, need was to strong. That he wanted. He wanted all of his men to come home alive. He wanted to take Flees bloodlessly.

"Well, what have they got for us? Have they finally figured out how to make that…interrupted screw that they've been promising me?"

"No, no. Not that. They have, however, come up with this." Eamon gestured to one of his men, who went out. The man came back with a cloth cylinder. It didn't seem solid, in fact, it sifted a bit under its own weight.

Freid took the bag in his hands, and smelt it. "Black powder? Why would…"

The significance of the bag in his hands came to him. It would fit perfectly into one of the charge mugs for his guns.

"They tell me that it’s the powder that would fit into one and a half ladles. Exactly what we have found to be the best charge base. It will still be subject to damp and rain…"

Freid was already seeing the changes that this would make to his teams. No more ladles and half measures. It would be a perfect load every time. And quick. Drop a bag, drop a ball. Now, the loading of the mugs would be almost as fast as the loading of the cannon. They would be able to leave the quenching of the embers to just before they needed to load the mug.

"While there are many wonders in that book I would prefer to this, this brightens my day," Freid said with a smile.

Eamon laughed as Freid returned to his men.

Yes, this would be wonderful. And maybe, just maybe, they would be able to beat ten shots per minute.



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