Spectre: Shades of Grey Chapter 12

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Spectre: Shades of Grey
Chapter 12
A Comics Retcon Story

by Maggie Finson

 

I knew that we were waiting, that moving now could be a bad thing that would warn the bad guys.

But I couldn't just sit there while this was happening. I couldn't.

* * * *

“Jason Phelps.” I quietly announced myself once I'd appeared in his very secure redoubt in the Rocky Mountains. He was a survivalist, and a very rich one. That he also had questionable dealings in arms, drugs, and other things even less palatable, didn't matter to me.

This man was going to die.

By my hand, though that wasn't so unusual. The reason for it was.

“Who the Hell are you?” The man, middle aged and very fit with a head full of thick if greying hair demanded once I'd spoken to him. Oh, I had appeared in his sanctum as Deena, not Diana. So he was seeing a beautiful, sexy little piece of fluff.

At least in his perceptions.

“Oh, you could call me Deena or Diana.” I shrugged then almost pinned him with my admittedly supernatural regard as I shifted into my Spectre form. “Or maybe retribution. The choice is yours.”

“I haven't actively harmed anyone.” He answered with commendable calm given that I was in full Fury form at the time.

“Your actions, your business, have harmed a lot of people, Jason.” I countered.

“I sell things people want.” He shot back. “It isn't my fault if my products hurt people.”

“No.” I nodded. “It isn't, but you give others the means to harm innocents even if you mask that with the expression 'It's just business', don't you?”

“It is.” He answered. “And I should tell you that my security team is on the way right now.”

“Then they'll die, too.” I shrugged. “But with all the wasted, and prematurely ended lives your business has caused, I don't imagine that would bother you all that much.”

“What have I done to attract your attention, Spectre?” He questioned. “I haven't actively harmed the kind of people you seem to protect.”

“You had the high bid on Samira.” I told him. “And I won't let you have her.”

“What the Hell do you care about that?” He asked while very carefully reaching into his desk.

“I'm responsible for her. I made her what she is.” I looked at the 11mm automatic he had pulled out of the desk and smiled. “And I won't allow someone like you to have her.”

Predictably, he shot me. Five times, actually.

And yes, I got thrown against the wall, even broke one of his bookcases as I was thrown back when the rounds hit me.

“Damn, I hate that.” I shook myself, moved the ruins of the shelf away and stood up to give him an almost gentle smile. “That hurts like a bitch, but I'm already dead. You can't kill me.

“And you just really pissed me off, by the way.”

He fired again, and again, until all he got was empty clicks as he did. I glided forward, took the pistol from his hand and tossed it away. “I am vengeance incarnate, and you just really upset me. I would have made this easy, but you wouldn't have that.

“So now,” I sighed. “You're going to have to go through a really nasty death.”

I reached into the pipes the fed his gas fed fireplace and bent some of them until they broke.

“Just a hint of what you're going to have to endure once this is over.” I told him as the gas hit the flickering flames and those erupted into an inferno.

And I stayed there and watched him burn.

And yes, I was sick after that.

I'm inhuman, I know that, but I'm not Inhuman. If you can understand that at all.

But the man who had purchased Samira wasn't there to pay the millions that he had bid.

No one, no one, was going to buy Samira.

Best? It looked like an accident.

Gods, the way the Furies could do things. And I was following in their footsteps. Without the least hint of remorse.

But I protected those I felt I owed things to.

* * * *

The next one was a surprise. I had planned to let that one go, but something, intuition, another feeling, or Tisiphone's insistence made me go to the second highest bidder.

“Spectre.” The guy, handsome — and yes I was noticing that so don't give me grief over it, okay — smiled at me and gestured to a chair. “Have a seat. We need to talk.”

I have to admit that I was taken by surprise at that one. Mostly people see me and try to run, or bluff things out, or shoot me. This guy wasn't doing any of that. He simply waved to a chair and waited.

I sat down, I could kill him any time I liked, but was more than a little curious at his response when I just showed up in his office. “Talk about what?”

“Oh, try a slavery ring that even if you stop it won't really help the poor girls, or guys, that got caught up in it?” He looked me right in my blazing red eyes and didn't flinch.

“I'm here to kill you.” I told him matter of factly.

“I know.” He gave me a very winning smile and shrugged. “I'm the second highest bidder on a girl who you are very interested in,

“Before you do that, I would like to show you something. Humor me here. If I'm going to die you should at least let me show you why I'm doing this.”

“Try it.”

He reached into a pocket in his suit and produced a folder that opened up to show a badge. “I'm FBI and we've been very interested in the same thing that you appear to be going up against. But up until a few days ago we had nothing to work with but rumor. You just finished our one link to this thing, by the way.”

I looked at him, I mean really looked. Like seeing into his mind and soul. That is a bit creepy, by the way.

“Michael Harris.” I nodded and shook my head. “You guys know about this mess?”

“Oh, yeah.” He answered. “We also know that the slaves are transformed males or girls who just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. Or were in someone's way.

“And we want to stop it.” He told me simply. “Like you do.”

I just nodded.

“We also know that all the victims aren't changed physically.”

“So why haven't you moved to stop it?”

“Location, dear lady.” He said with a little shrug. “We don't know where these things are being done.”

“I can give you two locations.” I answered. “But you would need to wait a bit. There are more than a few of us 'Metas' that want these bastards. If you guys jumped the gun, most of them would get away.”

“I know about Dolores.” He told me while giving me that level, uncompromising look that your school principal gave you after you sneaked into the girl's locker room and got caught.

“Then you should know that we aren't going to stand for them being just arrested.”

Harris nodded, then did something that few people had done since I died. He looked me right in the eye, smiled, and nodded. “Neither will we.”

“A lot of these people are going to die.”

“If I can shoot one of them,” He told me, “it's all good.”

And he meant that.

Damn, I had been human, but humanity constantly surprised me now that I was something else.

* * * *

“An amazing race, aren't they?” Tisiphone asked once I'd left Harris with a phone number and the promise that I would let him know when the metas were going to move.

“Yeah.” I answered. “At times they actually make me proud of coming from them.”

“As you should be.” The fury answered. “Your people have the potential to be more, much more, than anything the old gods ever dreamed of.”

“Yeah, you've told me that berfore, and before, and...” I answered.

“Truth is never something that grows old in the telling.” She answered and I could actually feel the grin she was wearing when she did it.

The bitch.

* * * *

“The FBI?” Lena and Doris both questioned at once after I'd told them about what had happened during my last meeting while Lena continued. “Even if they know about this, what could they do, how much do they know?”

“They know about as much as we did in the beginning.” I answered. “Which isn't enough to accomplish much but is enough to be frustrated about the whole thing.

“As to what they could do?” I grinned evilly. “Their participation would give something like legitimacy to what we're planning to do, and trust me, Agent Harris doesn't want these perps in prison, he wants them dead just like we do.”

“How can you be so sure of that?” Doris questioned with some disbelief in her tone and expression.

“Doris.” I let out a sigh and knew that my expression was a sad one. “One my more unsettling abilities, even for me, is that I can see into a person's soul. They might be able to fool their minds, but the soul always shows true.

“And Agent Harris, and his team are more than outraged about this chip slave thing on a gut level that doesn't need explained. They want blood because of it, and law aside, they're determined to get it.”

“Okay, so what do we do with that bit of information?” Lena asked.

“Send what we have to this e-mail address.” I handed her a slip of paper. “I know you can hide where it came from and doing it myself involves appeasing all kinds of weird spirits and things.”

“You calling something else weird.” Doris shook her head. “Now I've heard it all, I think.”

“Not by half.” I chuckled. “But I'll spare you the learning curve on that one this time around.”

“I'll take that as good thing.” Giganta snorted then grinned back at me.

“Oh, yeah. Trust me.” I nodded.

Kyle, the Green Lantern finally got into the conversation. “I have a problem with law enforcement of whatever kind being perverted to killing.”

“Kyle, Kyle,” I shook my head and moved to take his hand in mine while giving it a squeeze. “You are so much The Law, that I think you're loosing track of being human. We've found an abomination here, one that could have been a miracle, and our allies in law enforcement know that as well as we do. They know this needs to be wiped out for now, or humanity itslef could be in for a darker period than it, or a lot of other races, have ever faced. They're angry, outraged, and feel betrayed.

“They want to end this as badly as we do, and they are more grounded in the stakes than us. Those chips could enslave any of them. At least some of us could resist that. And you know Americans. We'll let people revile us, ridicule us, preach against us, but when they really push? We push back, harder.”

He huffed at that one for a minuite then grew less tense and actually laughed, even if it was a bit strained. “Okay, I see your point. But I still have problems with how bloodthirsty this plan is becoming.”

“Believe it or not, so do I.” I answered. “I'm not actually the bloodthirsty, implacable force of nature that I've been painted as. But I'm kind of the god's chemotherapy for humanity. I get rid of the cancers that might kill, or stunt the race. I don't always like doing it, but what I do is necessary. Plus, in spite of what the popular media says, I do have a sense of mercy. Those are the things that most people just don't see, is all. The ones I show it to don't talk, and I'm not going to out them by saying anything either.”

“I know.” Kyle nodded and pulled me into a hug. “You, Diana, Deena, Spectre, are a confusingly complex individual. One I'm very glad I met.”

I looked up into his face, and absolutely gorgeous eyes — did I mention that about him? -- and just smiled.

“Uhh, guys?” Lena interrupted. “This is all nice and gooey, but we — you know — have other things to work on just now?”

Another presence was with us in the warehouse now.

“Hello, Phoenix.” I greeted her as I moved away from my second, but not in the least less important Kyle.

“And I thought you were awe inspiring.” Lena breathed as she looked at me then back to the blazing, but held in, glory of Phoenix.

Even I, who have actually seen gods, was nearly transfixed by the blazing beauty and strength Phoenix was.

“It is close to time, isn't it?” She asked.

“Yeah.” I nodded then smirked. “By the way, how's your love life going?”

“Good.” That being of fire and glory actually giggled. Which pretty much gobsmacked everyone in the room, even Kyle. “Thanks for the advice.”

She toned down her appearance and was just Jean, a pretty teenaged girl after that.

“Show off.” I smirked at her.

“Look who's talking.” Jean chuckled.

“Oh, yeah.” I went back to my Deena form and laughed as I went to give Jean a hug. “Glad you got my message.”

“As if I could ignore FIVE emails from an obviously supernatural source.” She snorted.

“Just wanted to make sure you got it.” I grumbled. “Sometimes my — umm — ISP gets cranky about passing things along. Case in point, I sent it fifteen times.”

At that stage, Lena cleared her throat to get my attention. “Umm, Deena, could you go back to being Diana right now?”

“Sure.” I did that then gave her a questioning look. “But why now?

“Because someone is here who actually wants to see you as Diana, The Spectre.” She replied, then opened a door that led back into the real living quarters of the wharehouse. “She knows you that way is all.”

She was wan, and looked weak and tired, but determined as she slowly walked out into the warehouse proper.

I smiled in genuine pleasure as I saw her, and moved to stand in front of her as one hand lightly touched her cheek, then I accepted the tight hug she gave me and returned it.

“Thank you.” She whispered as we hugged. “You made me see that I have strengths that aren't involved with my change. That my mind, my intetlligence is my true strength.”

“Are you up to this right now?” I softly questioned with real concern.

“I may not be up to my usual standards physically just now,” She smiled then got a very determined look on her beautiful face and tapped her head while giving me a girlish grin. “But I have other options, and you know I wouldn't be out of this if I could barely get enough breath to survive. I can contribute.”

“You already have.” I answered and hugged her again. Megan, Miss Mars, was the last piece of the intricate puzzle I'd been working so hard to put together. She was here, and determined to help. “And you need to be in on this, I know.”

“Thank you.”

“You did it all yourself, dear.” I told her seriously. “I just showed you a path that might work. You're the one who walked it.”

“Let's get these bastards.” She breathed.

“We will. I promised.

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Great stuff, Mags!

Something I can read without a flow chart, and being written by you means its prime top quality reading!

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"Girls are like pianos, when they're not upright they're grand!" Benny Hill

Karen J.


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

Thanks.

This one took awhile to get the way I wanted it to be. Also I'm glad that you like what I write. It helps, believe me.

Maggie

The troops are gathered

Is it really time to go and end this?

Wren

End this?

Yes, and it's about time don't you think? I've put too many people through too many kinds of Hell in this one as it is.

So yes, it's time to bring it to a close.

Maggie

Fantastic

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Just as good as the other chapters. I've been waiting for this one...the ending leaves me on the edge of my seat though...but that's a good thing. I like to call this event the "Calm Before the Storm" :)

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Fury, go!

You *never* disappoint, Maggie. This is going to be one hell of a conclusion!

If you thought The Spectre was bad-ass now, wait 'til you see her in full Fury mode. She's going to really and truly frighten those who are near and dear to her, and her enemies (those few who *might* survive!), will go so far underground they'll never raise their perverted heads for fear of discovery.

This has been an awesome series, Mags... one I'm sad to see end, but then there's more adventures for Diana in the near future, no doubt.

On a scale of 1 to 10, this has been a 15!

The old dog is out of there...

Do you remember in the movie Shane, immediately before the gunfight in the saloon? The old bar dog got up and trotted out before all hell broke loose. That's where we are now, the dog is up and on the move.

Great story, Maggie.

That dog...

Left in the last chapter, but thanks Armond. Things are there now, I've built it up enough. The conclusion is coming.

Maggie

Solid Chapter

Like everyone else, I'm looking forward to the payoff. Great buildup.

I'm glad, it's time

Way too much pain and suffering already.

Hope the two changed ones get to get their own licks in to those who changed them.

Sometimes the law is broken and this is one of those times and mercy has no place.

This is gonna be an interesting next two chapters.

Kim

This is getting interesting

I was so not expecting the FBI, what a great turn of events!

The troops are gathering...

...and I can imagine a relevant warning label...

CAUTION: Explosive finale ahead!

Especially as we've got Diana/Deena, Jean and Megan ready to send the perpetrators on a one way trip to hell, aided by a bunch of FBI officers (and no doubt if any of them have got wind of the extent of the scheme, given half a chance, several former police colleagues of Delores)

But hopefully they'll still be able to save a significant proportion of the victims - although not ideal, the 50:50 ratio of those Diana/Deena's already dealt with who could cope with life afterwards and those that had to be 'released' was better than I expected given the nature of the enslavement, so it would be nice if a similar (or better) ratio could apply to the remainder.

 

Bike Resources

There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...

As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!

Justice

I really hope that the perps never make it to court! All you get in court is one person's idea of the LAW.

It looks like the bad guys are going to get a good dose of Justice from Diana/Deena and company. Hip Hip Hurray!

Zip

Spectre: Shades of Grey Chapter 12

OK, the FBI is on the case, are there any other government agencies involved? What about businesses like Stark, Lex Corp, Queen, or Wayne?

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May Your Light Forever Shine

Great story

Wow, thank you for writing. I can't wait for the conclusion of this story and hope that they won't need to kill all those poor chip vicitms.

"That being of fire and glory actually giggled."

brilliant. I can just see it. I'm having fun working my way through theses meetings from Jean's perspective, by the way.

Dorothycolleen

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Sadly vigilante action here is about the only way

If they were to go to trial, these guys could literally own the jury and judge. They would go through so many appeals that they would just slip away.

Go for it.

Kim

Jumping the shark

Seems like you jumped the shark with Diana's characterization when she killed the arms dealer. I think it was this sort of ultra liberal propaganda getting into the story, blaming the problem on someone.

I'm reminded of the old saying: "Guns don't kill people. People kill people."

If you apply your ultra-liberal concept to everything, where does it end? Do you kill knife makers and Bed Bath and Beyond employees because they sell knifes that can be used to kill people?

Is this the point you're trying to get at with the arms dealer? But then, Diana doesn't seem to be that conflicted over it.

Nope.

That idea hadn't even crossed my mind. It was just a character to make and throw away. Please don't put political implications into the things I write since I don't put them there.

Maggie

The idea itself is not only political

...It's moral as well. Entire nations can sell guns. Gun shop owners can sell guns. What make that any different than an arms dealer? Nothing, only the first two has the authorization of the State while the other does not.

That makes this a breach of the law and not the crossing of any moral horizon. You said it yourself, Diana is for Justice, not Law. That means the death of the Arms Dealer was not a justified kill.

The concept that guns are inherently evil is a pacifistic view of reality. The problem: Diana is not a pacifist. The fact that Diana thought him guilty was you (the author) channeling your morality. It was not Diana's morality.

This little scene not only made her a hypocrite it made her an (excuse the political term) unlikable left-wing socialist.

Please!!!

She said she didn't write anything with a political viewpoint or agenda. Period. Fullstop. So, unless you can read her mind, your comment has no foundation and no merit.

And just for the record, I am very strongly pro-Second Amendment. I own several firearms, have a CCW, I'm a former police officer, and just today I was out looking at barely-legal short-barreled shotguns; I did NOT see any left/liberal agenda manifesting itself in this series.

Erin has repeatedly said not to contradict the author as only he or she knows what s/he intended to write.

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"Girls are like pianos, when they're not upright they're grand!" Benny Hill

Karen J.


"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin

Did you not read?

It's not just a mater of politics, it's morality. It goes to Diana's character and how she makes decisions.

Even if we completely ignore the political aspect, we still have a scene that's completely out of character for Diana. When Diana killed the Arms Dealer, she wasn't making a guilty of innocent judgement based on her morality. The source of that morality came from Meggie.

Weapons suck

Btw. weapons suck, because they're tools solely developed for the purpose of killing other human beeings. A knife has other purposes, a sword or a gun has been developed to kill humans. All other posible purposes are secondary.

Selling weapons to private persons means assisting murder.
Nations with free access to firearms have the highest murder ratio. Sad but true - you only need a firearm during a zombie invasion, and those are impossible.

Would I be a liberal with that opinion in america?

OMG I love this story

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Retribution against evil and told so well. Maggie, you are the consummate artist. I can see the action and the characters in my mind better than if they were on the movie or tv screen. I've just mostly been clicking the kudos buttons because I couldn't wait for the next chapter, but for this one I just had to say this.

Thank you so much!

Chris in CA

Chris