Just a nice comfortable evening at home, cuddling on the couch with the one you love, talking about family. A Splintered Life
Chapter 11 The Stuff of Love Copyright © 2010 by poetheather
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The Stuff of Love
Megan cuddled Deirdre closer to her as they watched the movie. It was a romantic comedy they had both wanted to see so they had picked up the movie, a nice feel good “Chick Flick”. Neither of them minded in the least, warm in each other’s arms. Megan pulled up on of Deirdre’s wrists and kissed the thin ridge of scar tissue lovingly.
“It’s funny to think that I never would have met you if you hadn’t tried to kill yourself.”
“That’s funny?” Deirdre shifted a little to be able to look into Megan’s face.
“Mostly from the perspective of who knows what leads to the now. We met because of the chain of events that got started when you cut your wrists. Your dying would have been bad, but your mom caught you before that. And now I caught you. See... funny.” Megan chuckled a little.
“You’re weird.”
“Like you have room to talk. Of course, I think your brother may win between the three of us.”
“How so?” asked Deirdre, as she snuggled closer again.
“Did you see how he goggled like a fish when we walked out of your bedroom? Eyes bulging and mouth wide like a fishes. It was funny. I was almost flattered when he blurted out, ‘But you’re a girl?’ Poor David, I thought he was going to have a stroke.” Megan laughed at the memory.
“Yeah, that was funny. But then I had to explain the whole situation to my mom, thanks to him. Whee. That reminds me, she wants to meet you next weekend.”
“Great, now the parental fun begins.” grumbled Megan.
“She’s not so bad. She has been really supportive of me through this. We can do lunch or something. It won’t be that bad. I promise.” Deirdre kissed her cheek.
Megan hugged her again. “Fine. But then I’ll force you to meet my folks. My dad is fairly traditional Japanese, sort of. You’ll see. He doesn’t mind my life style so much as when I failed to follow him in the family business. That irritated him.”
“What’s the family business?”
“Do you really want to know?”
“Yes. What is it?” begged Deirdre.
“Martial Arts. It’s a family tradition. Since I have no brothers, it needs to go to me. I’m just not sure I want to do that. My dad is trying to be understanding, but it’s a sore point.”
“That must be hard.” Deirdre looked up at her again. “Is your mom fine with things?”
“Sort of. We had gotten this all hashed out when I was in High School. They were more against my going into the military than my liking girls.”
“Weren’t they proud of you?”
“Eventually. But it took a while. They wanted me to go to school first. Now that the government is paying for my school, they don’t mind as much. They appreciate how I saved them money.” Megan chuckled again.
“Thank you.” said Deirdre.
“For what?”
“For being with me.”
“Why shouldn’t I be?”
“Well, I’m not like other girls, for one. I come with my own baggage.”
“Sweetie, everyone has baggage. I care about you, because you are worth caring about. I love you. You are fun, smart, and cute, a quick study in bed, can cook, and I enjoy being with you. Is it so hard to understand that?” Megan held her face and gazed into Deirdre’s eyes. She kissed her nose softly.
“I’m just not used to that. You take me as I am. I have been so used to being someone else that this feels weird.” Deirdre’s voice slid towards sorrow.
“Hey, now. Can’t you cope with the fact that I love you? I do. So cheer up or its tickle time!”
Deirdre squeaked. “I’ll be good. I’ll be good.”
Megan started tickling her anyhow. They both squirmed and eventually fell off the couch laughing.
“I love you Megan.”
“I love you to Deirdre.” Megan leaned forward and kissed her deeply. “Want to do something other than watch the movie?”
“Oh what ever could that be she asked shyly.” replied Deirdre.
“Come with me little girl and I’ll show you.”
Hand in hand, they entered into Deirdre’s room.
Comments
Can’t you cope with the fact that I love you?
... I care about you, because you are worth caring about. I love you. Words that she's longed to hear all her life...What a touching, heartwarming chapter. Thank you!
She was born for all the wrong reasons but grew up for all the right ones.
Possa Dio riccamente vi benedica, tutto il mio amore, Andrea
Love, Andrea Lena
Well, I figured people might
Well, I figured people might need a breather before the next chapter, something to let them rest and recoup before the plunge.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
A Hope Spot?
This chapter introduced a side of Megan that may or may not serve a role in saving Diedre - a supposed (if considered failed) heir to a Martial Arts family. OTOH, it may as well be the titular Hope Spot (a glimmer of hope mercilessly crushed in near future) but...
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Well, you know how much I
Well, you know how much I love crushing the hopes and dreams of others.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
A Splintered Life - Chapter 11
Such a sweet love that she needs to counter her brother's hatred.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
I Really like this Story!
Thank you Heather for a really nice, interesting story! Your writing is excellent and keeps me coming back for more. I've given up trying to second guess you!
Thanks. I am really happy
Thanks. I am really happy about the responses that this story has gotten. Makes me ponder if I am going to revisit this story or not.
And sometimes, trying to second guess me does not work so well. But sometimes it does.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
The way I figure it...
...if anyone has the right to second guess you, it certainly would be you, wouldn't it?
I love the back and forth between the points of view and even the change in mood and tone from chapter to chapter, rather than it being linear. This story is such a diverse collection of emotions and characterization and plot lines. Challenging but well worth the effort...One of the best stories 2009-2010! Thank you once again. P.S. I hope that Deidre wakes up one day and finds that poetheather is paying her a return visit.
She was born for all the wrong reasons but grew up for all the right ones.
Possa Dio riccamente vi benedica, tutto il mio amore, Andrea
Love, Andrea Lena
The wonderful responses and
The wonderful responses and reactions I have gotten here are making me wonder if I should expand this story more and make it a full novel.
You never know...
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Such a nice chapter. Deirdre
Such a nice chapter. Deirdre really is happy with Megan. unfortunately shadow of David hangs sinisterly above her.
You guys have earned
You guys have earned something nice before things finish up with two chapters of trauma and a chapter to conclude. The end of this ride is nigh.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Has Deirdre earned?
I hope our interest has earned Deirdre happiness. I so-o-o hate when an author gets us caring about a character then something bad happens to them. I think Deirdre and Megan have earned a "happily ever after".
KJT
"Being a girl is wonderful and to torture someone into that would be like the exact opposite of what it's like. I don’t know how anyone could act that way." College Girl - poetheather
"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin
Remember that the ending to
Remember that the ending to this has already been written. I am doing nothing but cleaning up things. It is as written in the spring of 2004. What is going to occur to them has already occurred.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Sorry
Please excuse me for expressing my hope.
KJT
"Being a girl is wonderful and to torture someone into that would be like the exact opposite of what it's like. I don’t know how anyone could act that way." College Girl - poetheather
"Life is not measured by the breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.”
George Carlin
Hope is a good thing to
Hope is a good thing to express and hoping that this ends well, is a good thing as well. I was just letting you know that I am not currently writing this.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Allways darkest..
It's allways darkest...
just before it goes COMPLETELY BLACK
GHOD I hope the light at the end of this tunnel isn't on the front of a speeding train!
Well... the best way to
Well... the best way to determine how bad it will get is to think about the author and about what they are willing to do to characters. If the author is willing to do anything it is best to hold onto yer butts, to quote Jurassic park. Otherwise, sit back, relax and have a hot mug of coco.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaah! We're in for a wild ending.
Given what you have done to some of your characters here and in your Whateley Accademy tales, poor Deirdre is in for a rough time, death, becoming crippled or a fairly happy ending with lots of hot monkey sex.
I haven't a clue other than you seem to be shading on towards the dark side on this one.
Her girlfriend's martial arts training could be important or one of Alfred Hitchcock's famous mcguffins, like the stollen money in Psycho.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Well, since I have studied
Well, since I have studied Hitchcock's narrative structure, I guess that means all bets are closed in terms of what is to come. ;P
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Hitchcock E'h!
Were you Megan or David?
LoL
Rita
Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)
LoL
Rita
I was the waitress at the
I was the waitress at the diner.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Ha!
I thought I recognised you!
LoL
Rita
Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)
LoL
Rita
You totally got me. Good
You totally got me. Good job.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
You people are
good weird! ^_~
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
thanks for the respite
of this sweet chapter. Whatever Diedre's life brings her it has not been without tenderness, love and joy.
And until next chapter I am going to try to dwell on what happens after they enter Diedre's room,
and not what Megans feet could do to David's face (Did I mention that I don't like that guy?)
~~~hugs, Laika
"Government will only recognize 2 genders, male + female,
as assigned at birth-" (In his own words:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C1lugbpMKDU
I think you may have
I think you may have mentioned it in passing.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.