what did i do wrong?

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it seems that the latest installment of Vision spring hasnt recieved the appreciation the first one did. I am not sure why. If you liked the first one but where unimpressed by the second, I wish you would tell me where it failed for you.

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ER, can't do that...

At least not yet, because I'm afraid I haven't read it yet. I'll get there, never fear!

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what did i do wrong?

You've done nothing wrong! Me, I went backwards and read them in reverse order. You have a good story idea, I say keep working on your story because your fans will start commenting, given time.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine