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What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 8

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ACT 1 Characters

Daniel/Dannielle Baptiste : The Angelus
Finch : Danielle's Lover, consort and second-in-command
Jackie Estacado : Host to the Darkness on Earth
The Darkness : the first demon
Unsen : Angelus warrior
Butch Babliano : Jackie Estacado's most trusted leiutenant

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 7

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Primal forces, fallen angels, vampires and metahumans -how will one girl find out what she wants to know?
This is the final scene of act one as all of the main characters are now in play.
As always thanks to Top Cow for their characters. I introduce an aspect of a DC Comics character in to this now. Maybe you can figure out what it is.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 6

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I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 5

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 4

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 3

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 2

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 1

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics. I wish to thank Lilith for wonderful advice.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 3; 1

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I wish to thank Maggie Finson for letting me use her character. The Darkness, The Angelus and The Witchblade are all the property of Top Cow which is a subsidiary of Image Comics. Dynamite Entertainment has the rights to Vampirella. I do not intend to profit from this story.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 3

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MAJOR PLAYERS FOR ACT 3

DANI BAPTISTE

FINCH

JACKIE ESTACAO

BUTCH BABLIONI

STEPHANIE ROUX

SONNY DARKO

VAMPIRELLA

SATANNA

LUCIFER

MARIE — ELISE BAPTISTE

JAQUES VERVOUX

JAMES WHITE - EAGLE

SPECIAL GUESTS PLAYERS

GINGER CALVERT, THE BEARER OF THE WITCHBLADE

BRENT, HER FRIEND

What Light Through Yonder Shadow...

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Before this world was created they were here. The two primal forces, opposites. Call them what you will Light and Dark. Order and Chaos. Masculine and Feminine. Positive or Negative. Where once there had been a universe based on unity it was obvious that duality was the new currency.

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What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 8

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ACT 1 Characters

Daniel/Dannielle Baptiste : The Angelus
Finch : Danielle's Lover, consort and second-in-command
Jackie Estacado : Host to the Darkness on Earth
The Darkness : the first demon
Unsen : Angelus warrior
Butch Babliano : Jackie Estacado's most trusted leiutenant

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 6

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I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 4

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 0

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Before this world was created they were here. The two primal forces, opposites. Call them what you will Light and Dark. Order and Chaos. Masculine and Feminine. Positive or Negative. Where once there had been a universe based on unity it was obvious that duality was the new currency.

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How do I put a story in the contents list in the Retcon Universe?

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I started 'What Light Through Yonder Shadow...' Earlier This year. Lilith told me that it goes just before 'Green with Envy'. I've asked others how to put it there and I am still having trouble.
Could someone please help me?

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What Light character list and Act 3

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"What Light Through Yonder Shadow" has 3 acts. I've finished two of them at the end of each act I put down the main characters of that act. Act 3 will be shorter and I might put the character list before I start.
I have said that I won't create new characters and I'm not although I am using a guest character with another author's permission.
I have taken a while to do act 3 as I have been unsure how to form the picture into words. Please be patient.

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What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 2; 8

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IMPORTANT PLAYERS IN ACT 2

DANIELLE (DANI) BAPTISTE/ THE EMBODIED ANGELUS

MARIE- ELISE BAPTISTE / DIANIELLE'S MOTHER

STEPANIE ROUX / DANI'S FRIEND WITH ALTERED DNA

JAQUES VERVOUX / STEPHANIE'S BODYGUARD AND FORMER KIDNAPPER

FLAME THE ANGELUS WARRIOR /THE ONCE HUMAN HOWARD STERN

VERA STERN / HOWARD'S SISTER

FINCH /DANI'S LOVER AND SECOND-IN-COMMAND

CHARLES VICTOR SZASZ / MAD SCIENTIST

THE SOLDIER / PSYCHOPATHIC VAMPIRE

VAMPIRELLA / VAMPIRE QUEEN

TERAK / HER ASSISTANT

SATANNA / VAMPIRELLA'S MOTHER AND THE DEVILS DAUGHTER

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This is the end of act 2. Act 3 is the final act.
I realise the plot for this story is confusing because of the variety of characters. I did not intend it to be. What happened is that the story gave birth to characters without my intending it to.
It probably has 2 or 3 different characters for their own stories. I do believe it is not too confusing.
Everything shall become clearer in part 3.

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In many tales here at BCTS people go into great detail after the story why that wouldn't be possible. Now while I sometimes feel it ok to do this (and I have been known to do it as well on occasion). Some stories are picked apart too much. I mean who care if something is legal because of one little thing.

My word, it's only a story.
Don't tear it apart- enjoy it.

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What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 2; 7

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How insidious is evil? Can it become genetic? Can good be genetic? Where does that leave freedom of choice?

The government limousine that had picked Stephanie up from the airport sped along the highway at a speed that was above the limit. It passed police cars which didn't give chase because it was a diplomatic vehicle. Unfortunately for the passenger in the back seat of the vehicle this felt more like a kidnapping.

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What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 2; 6

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How insidious is evil? Can it become genetic? Can good be genetic? Where does that leave freedom of choice?

I wish to thank Maggie Finson for her advice and support.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 2; 3

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How insidious is evil? Can it become genetic? Can good be genetic? Where does that leave freedom of choice?
I AM NOT USING 'THE QUESTION AS A CHARACTER.The treatment that was used on Stephanie was called the question treatment. Any resemblance to The Question is just that- a resemblance. This is what Steph looks like when her power kicks in.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 2; 2

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How insidious is evil? Can it become genetic? Can good be genetic? Where does that leave freedom of choice? The last few scenes had a lot of jumping around in order to get characters into play. Now I will take a longer period of time on each character. Please do not get upset if you miss an installment with a certain character. I'm getting a lot of people reading this but very few comments . I get most of my idea from the things that happen around me. Maybe if you comment I'll get a new one.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 2; 1

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How insidious is evil? Can it become genetic? Can good be genetic? Where does that leave freedom of choice?

I've added a picture of Vampirella.
I'm starting a new job tomorrow, so I don't know how regularly I'll be posting. I'll try to at least do one a week.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 8

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ACT 1 Characters

Daniel/Dannielle Baptiste : The Angelus
Finch : Danielle's Lover, consort and second-in-command
Jackie Estacado : Host to the Darkness on Earth
The Darkness : the first demon
Unsen : Angelus warrior
Butch Babliano : Jackie Estacado's most trusted leiutenant

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 7

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Primal forces, fallen angels, vampires and metahumans -how will one girl find out what she wants to know?
This is the final scene of act one as all of the main characters are now in play.
As always thanks to Top Cow for their characters. I introduce an aspect of a DC Comics character in to this now. Maybe you can figure out what it is.

Title alterations to 'What Light through Yonder Shadow...'

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This was always intended to be a play on words title in honour to Shakespeare's line, "What light throught yonder window breaks, it is the sun and Juliet is the East."
I recently thought of new directions for the plot and therefore am making it With acts and scenes.
Every scene will be a chapter or installment. Every act will be the beginning and end of a major aspect of the story.
Enjoy!

PS- I really would like some feedback about this.

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What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 5

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 4

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 3

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 2

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics.

I thought I did okay for a first retcon

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When I first joined this site, I tried writing fan fiction it didn't go so well. I'm writing a retcon now but don't know if it's being received that well. I hope that it works so everyone enjoys it because I'm really putting a lot into it, listening to other authors and trying to take advice.
I expect my writing to be a little rough around the edges. But I hope it gets readers. And for any of those retconners out there who have trouble with my style, please give me time to learn. advice is always appreciated. Even if I don't follow all of it.

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What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 1; 1

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When the Angelus looks for a new vessel She is weak. The Darkness seeks to gain the upper hand.

I wish to thank Top Cow for such great characters and give them kudos for showing the development of a lesbian relationship in mainstream comics. I wish to thank Lilith for wonderful advice.

What Light Through Yonder Shadow... - Act 0

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Before this world was created they were here. The two primal forces, opposites. Call them what you will Light and Dark. Order and Chaos. Masculine and Feminine. Positive or Negative. Where once there had been a universe based on unity it was obvious that duality was the new currency.

Prologue

A change is not always bad if you have help

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Due to the fact that life is not always smooth, I have begged out of writing "Seeking the Truth". Thankfully Stanman63 has consented to continue this tale.

This is a great relief for me, as the story was getting skewed off course as I deal with my own issues.

Hugs and blessings to you all,
Cliff

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