Friday night at Lads Night In was explosive, in a variety of ways, with Tony discovering the Toni part of himself, or more now herself, along with two new, female friends, Jess and Sally. The day after was an emotional roller-coaster, where people actually smile at the new Toni—no-one ever smiled at boy Toni—and she discovered a wonderland bar where everything ended in tears. But tears for Sally, not Toni! Before Big-G took Toni home to be held and simply rest.
With Toni’s life finally filled with joy and fun, NO BORING!!! is it all going to stop when the big man, Big-G, says it’s time to take things seriously? Or is Big-G correct and will treating things properly as the new Toni be as fun, fun, fun as the partying and drinks? And will Toni end up back in Light Avenue?
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A new, updated version of 'Toni With An i is' available on swolle.eu with the name of The Pattern In My Chest. There's also some fun stuff like very silly promo images and some pop banger playlists, do check it out!
The Toni With An I story is improved in many ways. All the parts I have ready for an imminent release will be released on that site in the coming weeks, then as an ePub. All of the story remains free on that site, my personal site, and the plans are for the ePub to be available for free, too. Later parts not yet edited for a soon-to-come release will remain on BCTS. You can get two goes at Toni, the early version and the later version.
Thanks for the support, here, staff and readers! New writing from me will continue to appear on BCTS. This place is too valuable to trans fiction to ever ignore the impact it's had on so many people!
Comments
More excellent storytelling
And almost all of it through dialogue and Toni-with-an-i’s internal monologue! I’m enjoying your whole laid-back approach, where this is happening, and Toni is simply having time and space to feel good about it.
And everyone is being really nice. :)
Emma
Dear Ms Wooly
I like this too. I wasn't sure with part 1, but it has grown on me.
Please take note of Emma Anne's comments. She reads a lot of BC, and also writes extremely well, although she has not been around here for long!
I particularly endorse her remark about everybody being so nice. That remark recognises that it makes this particular story different from many other stories, amd I hope it will not change. (But I stll have 2 more parts to catch up on!)
Dave
too nice
i dont think tony with a y is going to be around much longer
You’re you, nothing else.”
that wonderful sense of gender euphoria. nothing like it, or so I've heard