“Rory kidnaps pretty girls and brings them to see the sunset.” He gestured, and I gasped as I got another glimpse of technicolor glory.
by Erin Halfelven
Part 3 - Hollywood
Chapter 15 - Pizza
“I don’t feel like I’m dressed right to be here,” I murmured to Rory as Dominick led us to an out of the way table.
Rory piffled that. “I’m wearing a Göthique Revölution t-shirt. Don’t worry about it. This is California. Chicks! Always worrying about if they’re dressed right.”
I giggled at that—a bit nervously, sure. “W—what is Gothic Revolution?”
“Please,” he said. “Göthique Revölution.”
Dominick held a chair out for me, and I covered my awkwardness with more giggles. “Okay, Gerthick Reverlution. What is it?”
He waggled his bushy brows at me. “It’s a heavy metal band I’m in-when we get the chance to perform.”
I laughed out loud at that.
Dominick left menus behind- but Rory didn’t touch them. “I know what we’re having if you’ll let me order for us?”
“Uh, sure. Um, what instrument do you play?” I asked.
“I’m a screamer,” he said with a straight face.
“A—uh—a vocalist?”
He made a face, like a mime discovering he has stepped in imaginary dog poo. “You don’t know much about heavy metal music, do you, Babe?”
Well, I didn’t. “Apparently not,” I admitted.
“Well, you have drummers, who play the drums, yeah? And guitar people who do guitar stuff.” He looked thoughtful while I struggled to control more giggles. “A keyboardist who stands at the keyboard and tries to look cool. The vocalist, who’s the one who’s supposed to know the words if the song has them. And then the screamers. Every band has to have at least one.”
“Do—they—do they—scream?” I asked between more giggles.
He nodded. “Yeah, well, it’s what they do, what I do. The lead vocal sings the verse, then I come in and scream the hook. The chorus. And everyone screams along.”
It was a legit description of most of the heavy metal I had ever heard—which made it very funny.
“Loo-gee!” said Rory as another waiter approached.
“It’s Luigi, Moonface,” said the waiter. Then they did one of those masculine things with the fist bumps.
“‘At’s what I said, Loo-gee.” Rory turned to me, “Kissy, my cousin Lou. Lou, my date Kissy.”
So, it is a date. My ears were roaring, and I didn’t hear the next thing that anyone said. I thought, I’m on a date with a guy, and I’m having a lot of fun. Which reminded me that a lot of what I had done with Marjorie had been fun, too. “N-nice to meet you, Lou,” I stammered at what I hoped was the approximate time.
“Is this kidnapper treating you right?” Lou asked.
“K-kidnapper?”
“Yeah, he kidnaps pretty girls and brings them here to see the sunset.” He gestured in that direction, and I gasped as I got another look at technicolor glory. “It impresses them so much they forget they’ve been kidnapped and give him what he wants.”
Rory laughed.
I managed to look serious. “He did sort of kidnap me. Practically right off the street,” I said.
“You were in a Fatburger, I had to save you,” said Rory.
“You didn’t tell me where we were going,” I pointed out.
“You didn’t know about this place, so if I’d told you, you still wouldn’t know.”
“Hmph,” I said, trying to play along with the gag.
The guys looked delighted at my reactions.
“So, this is where I tell you what I want?” Rory asked, teasing.
“No,” said Lou, “this is where you tell me what you want.”
“Not as much fun, but okay,” agreed Rory. “We’ll have twice-baked, green salad with, crusty bread, sparkling red and those raw veggies with the dip.”
“And water,” I put in.
Lou nodded, scribbled something on his pad and scooted off.
“Are you old enough to order wine?” I asked Rory. “I’m underage.”
“You’re undertall, too,” said Rory. “Short. They let you ride the big kid’s rides at Disneyland yet?”
Ouch. I am short, or Davey is, but Kissy is almost average height for a girl. “I’m not short,” I protested. Okay, it’s a bit of a sore spot for me.
Rory grinned. “I’m teasing. And I’m old enough. Here. Famiglia, as they say—it’s like being at home. If you’re good and promise not to get sloppy, you can have half a glass.”
“I—you—it’s!” I glared at him. “Everyone wants to get me drunk!”
He raised an eyebrow. “Everyone?”
I looked away. “The last date I was on, I mean….” The show in the sky captured my attention.
We watched the sunset until the antipasto came. It was quite a show, but we had to look away when the waiter arrived with a tray with small bowls of sauce and a big platter of vegetables.
Domenick explained. “Mama doesn’t think you should fill up on cheap delicatessen meats before a real meal. So she came up with this. Cut up raw veggies with oil and vinegar to dip, and her own recipe, crema di pepe, peppercorn cream.”
The last was a creamy dip with sharply flavored bits of fresh ground black pepper. Also garlic and something else. “This is wonderful,” I said, after a taste on a dipped piece of broccoli.
Rory and Domenick both beamed as if they had mixed it up themselves. There was also a basket of hot, fresh, crusty rolls, with either butter or olive oil to adorn them.
And the food kept coming. A green salad was next with four kinds of greens, seasoned croutons, and a savory version of Italian dressing like nothing I had ever tasted. “Has this got beef in the dressing?” I asked Rory, astonished.
“No,” he said. “Fish. Good, isn’t it?”
I nodded though I couldn’t imagine what kind of fish it might be.
Then Lou brought the main course, a sizzling casserole that, when uncovered, revealed three pieces of lasagna, all of them crispy brown on the outside, and standing more than two inches tall.
“You see,” said Lou. “This is the dating special—twice-baked lasagna. Three pieces, one for him, one for her and one to share or take home.” He glared at Rory, “Usually, this criminal eats two pieces himself, and as much of the girl’s share as he can talk or extort out of her.”
“I need fuel,” Rory defended himself.
I laughed at him as Lou helped our plates with the delicious smelling pasta.
I did have a few sips from a half glass of sparkling red wine, but mostly I drank water. And I ate until I could hold no more, the corset helping me keep my appetite to a ladylike proportion. Then I cheerfully handed over the last more-than-a-third of my serving and watched it disappear into the engine that was Rory Beeson.
“It is criminal how you can eat,” I observed.
“I know, huh?” he admitted. “All the guys eat like I do. Coach says he’s glad he only has to feed us one or two meals on game days. Two if we’re on the road. You gonna come see me pitch tomorrow? Free tickets, right behind home plate.”
I frowned at him. “This is—I’m not—Aren’t you trying to move fast? I mean, we hardly know each other.” I gestured at the restaurant. The lights were dim, but now that the sun was down, rivers of jewels flowed through the city, and Chavez Ravine, across the valley, was lit up like a birthday cake. “All this? For…just a date from a casual meeting?”
“This is Hollywood, Kissy. Romance is the gross national product.”
I snorted to keep from giggling. Well, we were in Hollywood, which is part of LA, just like Los Feliz is. The Hollywood sign was all lit up somewhere above us, though I’d lost track of which direction.
Dessert came, tiny scoops of our choice chocolate or spumoni gelato or rainbow sherbet. I took chocolate, and it was just the right amount.
“I’ve got to be honest with you, Kissy,” said Rory. “The reason I asked you out is I’m on the rebound. I’d just broken up with my girlfriend, and intended to drown my sorrows with a Triple Fatburger and a side of chili fries.”
He leaned towards me, “Then I smelled a thousand flowers and turned around.”
“A thousand and one,” I said inanely.
“And there you were.” Rory reached across the table and took my hands in his. “It’s not that sudden. We’ve known each other for years.”
I felt a sudden stab of anxiety. I shook my head. “You don’t remember me. We might have gone to the same schools together, but you were three years ahead of me.”
He shook his head. “I remember you now. My older sister was your babysitter. We lived on Massachusetts, and you lived two doors down, until I started middle school, and you guys moved.”
That would have been about the time of the divorce. Mom and Dad had sold the house as part of the settlement, and Mom bought the condo we lived in now. I remembered Cindy, my babysitter, she went away to college about that time, but we moved several miles away.
“You can’t remember me,” I protested. “I was just a little kid.”
He nodded. “And I was almost the size I am now. You probably thought I was a grown-up.” He laughed. “You were the cutest little redhead in the neighborhood, sure I noticed. You were eight, I was eleven, it could have worked.” He grinned. “Your face, Babe, you should see your face.”
“Rory—Rory—I—I!”
“Your name was Dannie, when did you change it to Kissy?” He frowned. “Oh, wait, Kissy was your last name.”
I tried to breathe deep, to not hyperventilate. I counted my breaths, silently. I didn’t want to pass out.
“I meant to look you up when you got to high school, but you were always hanging with Mando Gower and his Amazing Zoo Crew. Buncha nerds,” he grinned. “No offense. Armand tutored me in math. He’s a good guy.”
“Not—not Dannie.” I gasped. I had to tell him. But he might try to throw me off the roof. But if I didn’t tell him and he found out later, well that might be worse. What could be worse than getting thrown off a roof? I got ready to run. “My name was Davey. Davey Kissee.”
Rory’s face lit up. “That’s right. I remember now. And I didn’t date you cause you were a boy back then.” He smiled at me. “But you aren’t now, are you, Babe?”
Comments
well
That was unexpected
You're telling me
I didn't know it was going to happen like that when I wrote it. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
A Nail In The Coffin
Little chance of going back now Kissy!
Stuck
And Kissy had been having such fun!
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
picture
I started this chapter with my mind blown that all along the fun drawing that illustrated this was a trace of a photo.
But that twist at the end - O. M. G!
Well...
Not exactly a trace but a redrawing by Rasufelle. Nice, huh?
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Replicating photos isn't that hard.
In high school I kept a disposable camera on me most of the time to snap pics of friends to try and re-draw once they were developed. It's good practice, and when you've spent years doing it you can get pretty accurate, moreso with digital since you can scale the photo to the size you want and keep it side by side with your work, making thumb measurements a snap. It's kinda gratifying to do that and lay the two over one another and see 'em an almost perfect match, something I could never do back in the day :)
Just don't try and do that with the freckles: I got lazy with those and just sprayed 'em in willy nilly.
Melanie E.
thrown for a loop
the boy knew who she was, and still wanted to date her. I think Marjorie is gonna have some serious competition ...
Marjorie?
Marjorie who? :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Wasn't she the one who always
Wasn't she the one who always wanted you to put your fingers in Palmolive? Only one I can think of.
Oh wait... That was Marge.
Hugs!
Rosemary
Used to be a popular name
Kind of like Joyce. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
My, my, my...
That question DOES seem to keep coming up, doesn't it, lol? And so far, everyone seems to be encouraging Kissy to see that the answer is clearly 'no'.
Your model reminds me of one of my girl crushes - Detective Megan Wheeler (Julianne Nicholson) from Law and Order Crminal Intent. At least, how she might have looked as a teen.
Perhaps
Miss Nicholson is a cute, all right. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Well, damn
wish my meeting with an old school mate would have went that well.
Probably the best
It certainly could have gone more poorly, huh? :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
It was rather concerning.
It was rather concerning.
Hugs!
Rosemary
Especially
Especially if you were the one it was concerning. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Butterscotch
Wow. The question now is, is it a relief that Kissy's date knows already even if he doesn't know how sudden things happened. I think we could have a triangle going here.
Time is the longest distance to your destination.
Triangle?
Wa-ay too simple for our girl. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Way to simple???
Way to simple? Hexagon? Octagon? Hopefully not a decagon!
Hugs!
Rosemary
Only two dimensions?
Lol. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
This is close to what I think you are thinking
got this from a google search and it said this was on Pinterest. (Julianne Nicholson)
From her modeling pictures I would say cousins.
Emotion, yet peace.
Ignorance, yet knowledge.
Passion, yet serenity.
Chaos, yet harmony.
Contemplation, yet duty
Death, yet the Force.
Light with dark, I remain Balanced.
Mouth, eyes, hair
That does look like the same model!
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
More on my girl crush (just for fun)
I love the story no matter who your model looks like, but as long as we're posting comparisons... FWIW: This is how I always think of Julianne, but I did a quick check and the other (b&w) photo is kinda similar to your model's pose (except Julianne's lips aren't as full):
Most people think Julianne looks like a young Shirley MacLaine
What's really really funny...
...well, remember when someone came up to KIssy on the street and called her by the name of a TV star? :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Love it!
I love this story, it’s delightful
Glenda Ericsson
Thanks hon :)
It's a lot of fun to write, too. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
SIGH
This is such a beautiful story, though we are leaving to move to our new home in North Carolina, so I won't be able to keep up for a bit. We are stripping Dad's old computer down and selling it off, we have everything packed, and then we will, as Willie Nelson sings, be On the road again. I have moved so much in my life. My Mom being a career Air Force Sr. Master Sergeant. She spent 33 years serving our country, even in Project Desert Shield in the war zone overseas. She went overseas to protect us, Dad stayed here to do the same, and they are both gone now. So my husband, kids, and I are going back to his home state of N. Carolina to live in a nice house we found at a reasonable price. I will miss coming here until we get settled in, and my new computer is set up. So, as my people say, Hagoonee (without the inflection marks since Dad's old dinosaur computer won't put them up). In Dine' or Navajo if you prefer the White Man's name for our tribe, it means See you later or the equivalent. I do so dearly hope that later does not come too late. I will miss the wonderful authors on here, and you my dear, are one of the best. Your friend (I hope) and fan, Sarah Stewert
I am a Proud mostly Native American woman. I am bi-polar. I am married, and mother to three boys. I hope we can be friends.
Be safe
Take care and see you again someday.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
found another model
https://www.dreamstime.com/girl-can-not-lift-her-eyebrow-hel...
Found this girl on Dreamstime.
Emotion, yet peace.
Ignorance, yet knowledge.
Passion, yet serenity.
Chaos, yet harmony.
Contemplation, yet duty
Death, yet the Force.
Light with dark, I remain Balanced.
Same model
We used a different pic without as big of a smile. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
wow
Didn't think that was the same model.
Shows how I can keep searching to see if I can find the original now that I have I have creeped myself out.
Loving this story just the same.
Emotion, yet peace.
Ignorance, yet knowledge.
Passion, yet serenity.
Chaos, yet harmony.
Contemplation, yet duty
Death, yet the Force.
Light with dark, I remain Balanced.
wow
A really nice twist!! really unexpected...was thinking they would got along and at some point he will found out about kissy but except her anyway.
Imagine
Imagine how surprised she is. :)
Thanks for commenting.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Wow!
I really wasn't expecting Rory's reaction. I was really worried near the end of this chapter about what was going to happen. I'm so glad things went as well as they did. Thanks again for sharing this amazing story, Erin. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! :)
I was almost afraid
I was almost afraid I might have telegraphed the punchline a bit too prominently. Then again, it caught me by surprise, too, even though I could go back and see where I had set it up. My unconscious is so sneaky! :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Rory did know Kissy...
I like to hear another writer acknowledging that a story changes as it takes on a life of its own. The story has more curves and hooks yet is unbelievably believable. I'm caught along with Kissy/Davy
Jessie C
Jessica E. Connors
Jessica Connors
Me too
I hope reading about Kissy is as addictive as writing about her. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Possible beating out, possible love in?
Does Rory realize what he just told Kissy? He had a thing for Davey when both were young? And it hasn't changed?
Kissy has already had a very surprising day and now Rory unloads another bomb on Kissy. She's not totally enamored with being Kissy, and then to be reminded about someone she knew when young. Rory better keep an eye on Kissy or she might pass out if she has another panic attack.
Talk about a DNA spin.
Others have feelings too.
I love this story and Kissy so much.
Perhaps the whole tale will be published and sent out?
I would love to read it.
Gwen
Perceptive
Wow he is very perceptive we have a love triangle going on.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
Who is in charge?
The character or the author?
Glenda Ericsson