Singing to the Moon
Chapter 17 |
“So what is this so wonderful plan you have?” Carly asked once they had all gotten over my telling them I would trust each of them with my life.
“Well, it works like this.” I told them.
“You are insane, you know that?” Carson told and asked me all at once after I'd outlined the plan to them.
“Does Chris know about this?” Carly asked since my twin was teaching a class at the dojo that evening and couldn't be here.
“I told him earlier.” I answered. “He thinks I'm nuts, too.”
“You are.” Dani put in then grinned. “But I like it. My sisters are really going to be entertained with this one, by the way.”
“I'm not in this to entertain people.” I grumbled but had to chuckle. “But do have to admit that it is kind of like those old roadrunner cartoons.
“Only this time, the coyote wins.” I told them all. “These Hunters are going to die. No one, NO ONE, threatens me and mine and gets away with it. The plan will work, I just need to set up a few more things before getting it started.”
“I can live with that.” Carly shrugged then grinned.
“I'll be with you all they way.” Carson put in as he snaked an arm around my waist and gave me a gentle squeeze. “Get it to happen, and I'll be there for the end. With pleasure.”
“”Get it going.” Dani told me with a wink. “And there will more vampires kicking ass than the bad guys can keep track of.”
“But what about that Grail they have?” Carson asked.
“Oh, got help on that one, too.” I told him with a little smile. “No one around here likes Hunters, and this bunch have overstepped the bounds of tolerance that have been enforced before. They're dead men and women, they just don't know that yet. And we aren't going to let them know that's the case until I can drop that anvil on them from out of nowhere.
“Hope it isn't an Acme anvil.” Dani said recalling all those roadrunner cartoons and the company that Wile E Coyote ordered things from.
“Why not?” I grinned. “They need some good press for a change you know.”
“An anvil is an anvil.” Carly noted with a giggle. “If it works it works.”
“Exactly.” I nodded.
“You people can do what I asked before this really gets rolling, right?” I asked the invisible witch in attendance.
“Easily.” That one assured me. “You have the word for activation of the spell. Just use it and we will be alerted and be ready for the next phase of the plan.”
What else could a girl want? I recalled an old television show about some outlaw mercenaries and one line came to me with that. 'I love it when a plan comes together'.
And this one had. I just needed to do a few more things, fine tune a bit, and it would be ready to go.
Thank you Mason. Next time I saw him he was getting a good hug and a better kiss.
It's nice having friends, but even nicer to have have friends who can be 'not so nice' about things when the need arises.
Besides, it never hurts to butter up future in-laws.
The next few days were interesting. I went to school, did the cheerleader practices (Yuck, but I'd said I'd do it and just couldn't do less than my best there.) and wandered around town while blithely ignoring the followers or dark SUVs that were always around.
Well I wasn't really ignoring them. But you get the idea.
“So is the place going to be open?” I asked after I'd just kind of wandered into a small real estate office that handled some warehouses and storage facilities where a friend of mine worked.
“For three days when I get your signal.” My friend, Constance nodded. “It will be empty as it is and no one will be taken to look at it.”
“Oh, great!” I gave her a hug and said. “Thanks.”
“Hey, Daddy runs this company and I am his daughter.” Connie grinned at me. “And I am good at the job, so no one bothers me about things like that. If I don't make the sale, well, it happens.”
“If this works.” I promised her, you've made the sale. I'll buy the place.”
“No need.” Connie gave me a hug. “I don't know much, but I know why you're doing this. Just do it right, okay? Don't get yourself killed over this.”
What had I told her? Not much. Just that a bunch of guys had been dogging me and I needed to get them somewhere that a few friends of mine could use to convince them to leave me alone. It wasn't wise to let humans know much, if anything where the unseen were concerned. Humans who poked their noses into unseen business generally died young and kind of messily. Even if they weren't really aware of what they'd stumbled into.
“That isn't in the plan.” I assured her and hugged her back. “But I'll owe you one after this.”
“Then you'd better live through it.” Connie grinned. “Having YOU owe me a favor would be awesome.”
Wow. Since when had I gotten a reputation like that in town? Though there were worse ones to have. I could have been the town slut or something. Nah, I would have kicked the guy's asses if they tried that on me.
Okay, maybe that's why I had the rep I was getting. Who knows?
I took great delight in shopping for clothes. The Hunter following me for that one was a guy, and I could feel his discomfort from yards away. Especially when he had to follow me into the intimate wear section and was getting those 'looks' from every female there.
I thought his brain was going to explode when I was trying on bras.
It was really fun when a clerk walked up and specifically asked him if he needed help.
Isn't it amazing how the little things can boost you?
Of course I had held off on doing that until a guy was tasked with watching me.
I'm evil. Sue me.
Oh, being evil is so much fun if you do it right.
I didn't look at them, didn't flip them off, grin at them, or do anything but ignore them for the next few days.
It was kind of fun watching them get frustrated and worried.
I even took Linda to the park one day. With suitable backup that wasn't so subtle that the bad guys couldn't see it. But there was other backup they didn't see.
Strange, a couple of them just kind of — disappeared that day.
Go figure.
Nice having vamps on your side, you know. Especially when the 'no kill' prohibition had been lifted in this case. I'm sure the girls were happy about that one.
At least I was pretty sure those guys had died happy.
This was almost too much fun.
Which meant it was time to move into stage two.
More of them 'disappeared' when they were following me. The attrition was good, but what I wanted was the uncertainty, the beginnings of fear that I could tell were being planted in the Hunters.
“They know someone here in town is taking them out piecemeal.” Dani told us at our next meeting. They're worried, but can't just strike back because getting the whole town involved in this would be suicidal and they know it.”
“That's the idea.” I nodded. “Up to now they have had to deal with specific targets, and to be honest the rest of the unseen in town just let it happen. It has always been easier to accept the losses and let them go away thinking they'd won.
“This time, though.” I smiled and it wasn't a pleasant one. “They are being attacked on multiple fronts from more than one of our kind. They're used to playing by rules that don't apply now but they aren't all that sure we know they violated those rules in the first place. So they're getting jumpy, which is what I want.
“Having them so twitchy is dangerous, but it is also an advantage for us.” I went on. “Now, they'll jump at the slightest provocation and chase anything that even comes close to looking like me.”
“Who the gods will punish, first they will make insane.” Dani quoted and grinned. “Nice one there Coyote.”
Okay, so I was being really nasty there, but I wanted those assholes to suffer a little bit, just like the suffering they had caused in the past. It isn't only one side that can play a game after all.
I fully intended for this bunch to pay more than blood.
“Well the time of just playing with them is about over.” I answered. “Time to up the ante here.”
Remind me to never, ever piss you off, love.” Carson told me.
“Keep that in mind, dear.” I grinned at him then outlined the next step in the plan.
Comments
Getting there
Anticipation rising, hope the next episode will be posted soon just to maintain the momentum. Great story - love it.
controlled chaos
just what Coyote is known for.
nice one, thanks
About time someone does something about the Hunters
Very nice chapter, albeit a little short (I was hoping for the big fight in this chapter). Now eagerly waiting for chapter 18...
Ah come on!
Maggie! two in a row? I mean, can't we get rid of these guys already? sorry, I'll be good, but even the coyote didn't have to fall off two cliff's in a row before the anvil struck.
Draflow
As a contradiction to the
As a contradiction to the peals of 'it's too short!', I'd like to say that I think that the shortness works for this. It's a fast buildup to some real activity, and THAT'S going to be fun.
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
Oh the irony!
In the past, the Hunters were the predators and the Unseen were prey. They'd move in, kill a few, move out.
Now, suddenly, the boot is on the other foot. They are the ones being hunted, but as it's all being done covertly1 and there's a "take no prisoners" attitude, the survivors have no idea who (or what) is stalking them. After many centuries, they're finally getting to experience what life's been like for Unseen communities when they've been on the prowl.
I'm guessing the warehouse is where the finale will be set - but evidently someone hasn't given Cindy the memo about who Connie's in-laws are...
Connie's probably aware of most of the Unseen in town, but as she's deliberately separated home life from work life, evidently not all of the Unseen who know her know her (if you know what I mean) - which may prove useful at some point in the town's history (but not now!)
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
So jealous...
How do you do it? You can do more with 1,500 words than I can do with 10k. :)
More please...
-- Sleethr
Warming up at a nice pace
Went back and read the last three chapters to get back into this. Going really nicely. I love stories I can't predict and you do very well at that. Thank you, can't wait for the next part.
Nice Plan
Nice plan. Hit your enemy where they don't expect it and then when nicely off balance, show them what the think they are expecting and drop the anvil. :-)
"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."
Oh, this is going to be so good
I can't wait to see the next part of this plan. What a great story Maggie, I'm really enjoying it!
Strange Friends coming together
Maggie,
Is it the wit of Cindy, a common enemy or something more that has them uniting. Singing to the Moon, Coyote as well as this Special Child, Linda indicate something bigger than the individuals or the some of the parts. I hope the coming clash will reveal more than the easy doing away of the hunters. Those who have disappeared seem to suggest an impotent enemy. Maybe it is just such a good plan or is there more to it.
JessieC
Jessica E. Connors
Jessica Connors
Great story!
“Who the gods will punish, first they will make insane.â€
Maggie,
Love that quote, keep em coming.
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
"I love it when a plan comes together"
Quoter for LtCol. John Hanable Smith leader of the A-Team :)
Cindy has really been messing with these guys little bit by little bit & the Vampires are loving this now I tink the Witches are going to get involved & maybe the Lockes (If things settle down with them.) I think Cindy is enjoying this a little too much & I hope things go according her to plan.
Love Samantha Renee Heart
Good story
Wow, it get's exciting :D I wonder why the unseen didn't do that earlier. Just band together and just slaughter the hunters. The town is riddled with unseen and the only way to really fight them is to turn the town into a battlefield. I doubt that would go down well with the mundane authorities.
The TG part of this story was rather short, which I didn't really like at the beginning. This is pretty much a normal urban fantasy story except for the fact that the heroine was once a boy. I'm glad I started reading this again although Cindys sex drive kind of gves me the creeps :D
Thank you for writing,
Beyogi
Keep in mind that the town is
Keep in mind that the town is made up of distinct groups of individualists. Each of them would have reasons to want the others not around to interfere. The Weres aren't happy about the vamps, the Vamps have been told to keep their hands off of the Weres, both groups would just as soon the Coven wasn't around as a threat, the Coven would probably just as soon get rid of both Weres and Vamps - but no group is big enough to take on all of the other groups at once. The only advantage the Coven has is that many of their members can stay hidden from the vamps and weres as "normal" humans. Otherwise, much of their magic takes time to prepare, and if they do too much, too fast, nasty things can happen - so a were could eat one for lunch, as could a vamp.
Think about it - do you think the Coven would stand Wisteria yanking magic power from people if they had much choice?
At this point, the Hunters have done enough damage that it's become 'the enemy of my enemy is my friend' (although substitute 'ally' for 'friend'), so all of the groups, including the one that normally stays hidden from the rest, want to send the Hunters a message to stay OUT of Ravenscrest.
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
Lingerie
That stunt was hilarious. I wonder what exactly Cindy is.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
I have followed
the tale up to here and I must admit, that tales of Weres, Vampires and so on other than from Terry Pratchett never really caught my attention.
This one has, though. Well done. I just love it. In my own tales my MC is a bit more ruthless and consequent, but that - of course - is a matter of personal taste. And after all she is at least equal to Lady Moon (Artemis) and others like her. But mothers are truly and ever the most dangerous "animals" on this planet, if their cubs are threatened,
Monique S