The Center - The Eyes Have It!

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The Center
The Eyes Have it!

by Freya

I want to thank Lilith for taking the time to help me refine this story and for letting me post as a canon author.
Three Cheers for Lilith Langtree!

Maria was at a party but she wasn’t having any fun. No one was paying any attention to her. Or rather no boys were paying attention to her. She wasn’t usually happy getting attention, it made her nervous, but this once she’d been actually hoping to be noticed. Her friends had all chipped in and paid for her to visit a dermatologist as a birthday present. He had told her that what she thought was either acne or a persistent rash was actually eczema. He given her a skin cream and a list of common irritants that might be causing the flare-ups.

Her dad had tried to get her to one but he was a single parent and barely making ends meet so he could never quite afford it. She was going to school free because he taught at the school and he made sure she had the basics but she was sure she was the poorest person in her class. That plus the eczema is why she normally didn’t want to be seen.

She sighed, it looked like even when she wanted to be noticed she was invisible. After her skin had cleared up her girlfriends had convinced her to go to Janie’s sweet sixteen party. They’d given her a makeover and loaned her a dress and everything and she’d arrived halfway hopeful only to find nothing had changed. Boys occasionally started towards her but as soon as they got close they seemed to lose interest and went to talk to some other girl. She eventually went to the bathroom to see if something was wrong.

Looking at herself in the full length mirror she sighed. There was nothing wrong with her makeup, it was applied better than she could manage and she hadn’t smudged it nor was there anything wrong with her dress or her shoes. So it must be her. She was simply too bland. Brown hair, brown eyes, and an average figure. A little too hippy and her thighs could use more work but the dress hid that.

She sighed again, “I must be too plain to even bother talking to.” She only realized she had spoken out loud when a voice answered her, “Is that why you’re hiding in the bathroom?” She looked and her friend Briana was standing in the doorway. “If it is, “ Briana continued, “then you need to leave because that is SO not true.” Briana grabbed her hand, “Come on,” and pulled her out of the room and on to the dance floor.

While dancing she forgot her troubles with boys, ‘I wish I was gay,’ she thought. I’d have no trouble dating someone as nice as Briana or any of my other friends. As they danced several boys watched them but she didn’t notice any of them and if she had she would have been convinced they were looking at her friend.

After a few dances they left to go something to drink and a boy came over and asked Briana if she wanted to dance. She smiled at the boy but answered, “No, I’m going to sit out the next few but my friend here still has energy. Maybe you should ask her?”

The tall boy looked over at her and she made herself meet his eyes hoping her luck was about to change but fearing it wouldn’t. He gave her that up and down look that guys do and then met her eyes. Her emotions spiked and then he just wandered off not even bothering to say anything.

Maria was crushed and Briana was livid, “That was just terribly rude! I’m going to go set him straight. He can’t just dis my friend like that!”

Maria mumbled something about it being okay but Briana stalked off after the boy leaving her alone. Maria went to get some punch but it smelled alcoholic so she passed. As she left the table she decided to leave the party too and walk home. She’d come by car with her friends but it wasn’t too far to walk, not really. She grabbed her coat without anyone seeing her and started for home.

She was so absorbed in her thoughts that she didn’t notice the women walking up behind her until one of them spoke, “You are lucky we found you. It’s not safe for a girl to be wandering the streets alone at night.”

Maria spoke over her shoulder determined not to stop walking, “You’re from the party? I’m not going back, it’s just too embarassing. I’m going to go home and put on my own clothes and eat a pint of chocolate ice cream.” Her voice was bitter but determined. She was also planning to skip school the next day and possibly forever.

“What happened?” said the voice. She couldn’t place it which was weird but it had to be somebody from the party right? Why else would they care?

“I got ignored by the boys as usual,” she sighed. “I swear it’s enough to make me wish I was gay!” She blushed because it was the first time she’d said that out loud. But the girls behind her didn’t react badly, they just sped up until they were walking on either side of her then one of them said, “Or enough to make you wish you were a guy?”

“Heh, yes. Then I could show the assholes how to do it right!” They passed in front of a house with motion sensors and she got a good looking at the two girls. They might be about the same age but she’d never seen them before, either of them. She stopped, puzzled but not scared; they hadn’t harmed her or anything. “Who are you?”

“I’m Lili and this is Heather,” the girl who’d been doing all the talking said pointing to the other girl.

“Hi!” Heather waved at her with a bright smile, “I’m sorry you’re upset but soon you’ll get a whole new start! Cool huh?”

“Heather, let me explain please?”

Maria groaned, “All this day needs to be perfect is for me to be kidnapped by some freaky cult or something.”

She would have continued but the first girl interrupted, “No, this is not a kidnapping. We just want to explain something to you. Are you hungry? We could buy you something to eat.”

“Good, then you can buy the ice cream. There is a place up ahead that’s still open. But I know the owner so if you try anything there...”

“Perfect!” Lili replied, “Let’s go.”

Once there she ordered the biggest, gooiest sundae on the menu. It wasn’t like she needed to watch her weight anymore. If she never had a boyfriend then she could indulge and spend more time studying. This was a good thing she told herself. She missed the most of Lili’s speech trying to convince herself until one of them said, “... and intersexed.”

“What?” How could they know that? Her doctor had promised never to tell! “How did you find out?” she whispered urgently as the guy behind the counter frown at them. Maria smiled at him and he went to cleaning up.

“We are all were born that way. Haven’t you been listening?”

Maria blushed, unwilling to admit she hadn’t been, “Well it’s just two unimportant bits. The doctor was worried they might interfere with puberty but they didn’t so who cares.” She paused to eat some minimarshmallows covered in caramel and chocolate. “I’m going to die a virgin anyway. Can you tell me one thing that’s more important than that?”

They did and she fainted face first into her sundae. Things might have gotten sticky then but Lili telepathed the sitch to Ray who managed to divert the 911 call from the ice cream place and he and his team were the “EMTs” that showed up and carried her out into a very realistic looking ambulance.

Looking down at the unconscious girl Heather said, “Look on the bright side! Now we have the perfect cover for her disappearance!”

“Well that is true and at least I think she’ll be listening when we explain this time,” Lili agreed. “Let’s get going. If she comes out of it before we get to the Center I’ll restart my spiel. If not someone else can do it. I don’t why you had me come along on this one anyway.”

“It’s because of her power. When she’s scared she disappears,” Ray replied.

“Invisibility?” she asked.

“Not really, according to Dani she just seems to make people stop noticing she exists. It’ll triggered by fear at first but maybe we can get her to do it at will. If she can learn that she’d be a great asset. Kris figured a good telepath would be immune so you got to make first contact, being our best telepath and female.”

“That might also explain what she was so depressed about,” Lili added. “If every time she got scared people forgot her then whenever a guy she liked came close he’d forget she existed and that would just make her more scared and nervous the next time until it snowballed.”

“Oh god,” Heather replied, “that would royally suck. I hope we can help her get a handle on that.”

“We’ll do our best,” Ray said.

She came to as they were parking in the Center garage, “Man I had the weirdest dream.” Then she noticed she was strapped to a gurney and glared around at them.

“It was no dream, you have manifested a psychic power and will soon become a boy,” Lili said. She started to add something when she noticed that Kris had been right as usual, the others were acting like the girl wasn’t here. “Hey!,” she said, snapping her fingers in front of their faces, ‘Help me get her down from here.” Seeing their faces as they realized what happened was pretty funny.

“We are going to need a way to defend against that,” Ray said frowning and purposely not looking at her.

“Duh,” Heather replied, “just don’t meet her eyes.” She shrugged, “It can’t be that hard. People do it in vampire novels all the time.”

“Alternately we could just try not scaring her,” Lili said. Leaning over to look at Maria she said, “We are taking you to the infirmary. You’ll be safe there and after your change someone will come to help orient you.” With a lopsided smile she added, “If you think you can pay attention I’ll give you the basics on the way. Are you willing to listen now?”

“Yeah, sorry about before,” Maria blushed again.

“There was a water bottling facility on a river once. It closed around seventeen years ago. Well upstream from this bottling plant was a company called Genetech. Both are also no longer in business. The company got hit by a group of fanatics. The group’s name is not important but among the other damage they did was dumping test tubes down the sink. The sinks emptied in to a lake and the normal filters while good enough for their purpose were not good enough to filter out what was in those test tubes. The lake fed in to the river and the river into the bottling plant. Are you with me so far?”

“Yes, am I going to die some of horrible disease?” It would be just my luck Maria thought.

“No, but as you may or may not have known your mother drank the water from there while pregnant and in a nutshell that is why you have to come with us.”

“So that’s why we all have this power and why we all have … extra bits?”

“We don’t all have the same power. It’s always psychic but it varies greatly but otherwise you are correct. I used to be a guy once, so did Heather if you can believe it, and Ray was a girl once just like you.”

Maria looked at Ray and couldn’t quite believe it, “So by this time tomorrow...” she trailed off.

The boy nodded, “Next time you wake up you’ll have male genitals.” He patted her shoulder, “These ladies will take good care of you and I have to head back to my room and start writing the report.” He waved at Heather and Lili and he took the next left while the rest of them went straight. “Don’t worry, I’m sure you’ll fit in fine.” He called over his shoulder. As they went the two girls made sure she knew the basics and by the time they finished she was in the infirmary.

A nurse walked over with a syringe, “This will put you out while you change. You are lucky you have a subtle power otherwise you’d be in the bunker and much less comfortable. Now before I give you this shot I’ll tell you a few things that might help. If you have a positive attitude going into the change it will help and if you have a mental image of what you would like to look like that might influence things as well.”

“Might?” she asked.

“It depends on how hard you imagine it we believe. Also I should caution you not to over exaggerate the image as you will be living with the consequences. If you can’t settle on a good image then don’t try.” She gave Maria the shot then unstrapped her and assisted her in removing her clothes and jewelry. As she helped the increasingly sleepy girl into the hospital bed she said, “I’ll be monitoring from the next room. If the shot wears off or you need anything just call out, okay?” Maria nodded sleepily and the nurse kissed her forehead before leaving.

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good start

good start to a new center story. keep up the good work.
robert

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Interesting Power

Might be a bit hard on all parties involved, good and bad.

Center Powers

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I know one of the hardest things about writing a story in the Center universe is coming up with a unique and new power that hasn't been done before but also fits into the guidelines of what can be done. You did that wonderfully here. Trust me when I say it isn't easy finding a power that no one else has done before---I should know :)

I'm anxious to see where this is going

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Silly me

But the powers are always the easiest thing for me. All you have to remember is that it's all been done before, and the minor details are what are what are important in making a new power.

Take precognition for example. Sure, seeing the future has been done A LOT in other stories, and at least some in the Center universe. So, what makes YOUR pregog different?

How about one who simply remembers both the past and the future? Or only the Future?

How about a precog who no longer sees her own, current, reflection in a mirror, but the reflection that will be there in an hour, or two, or in a day?

How about a precog that sees the pattern of the future in the clothing a person is wearing? Think tea leaves, only not quackery, and clothing.

And any of these three options could be expanded, or limited, to give different variations.

Now, for those who are paying attention, two of the three examples above are actually adapted from archetypes.

Snow White gives the inspiration for the mirror. Merlin gives the inspiration for the future memory.

No idea where I got the inspiration for the clothing read, but I'm sure that it's out there somewhere.

Like I said. Everything has already been done before.

Superman? Ever heard of Hercules?

In fact, many superhero characters find their origins in Greek, Egyptian, or even Norse myth.

Iron Man is Daedalus, you know, the father of Icarus.

See, everything has been done before. The story is where you make it fresh. I'm not saying I'm perfect, by any stretch of the imagination, but if you'd like some power ideas in the future, I'd be willing to talk ideas with you.

Now, actually writing a story in someone else's universe that doesn't just. . .well. . .suck, that's the hard thing for me ;)



He entered the hall to get warm. She left it two hundred years later.
Faeriemage



He entered the hall to get warm. She left it two hundred years later.
Faeriemage

Concerning Superman

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Edmund Hamilton wrote a story called "Gladiator" in which this scientist did some experiments on his own child while the child was still in the womb. His skin could turn bullets, he could leap over a building, he could outrun a freight train etc. No heat vision or super hearing or any of the "red sun" powers that superman got but it was published 2 years before the first Superman comic book came out. Superman in the 1934 era was about as strong etc as the guy in Gladiator. I always thought it was a pretty blatant example of taking someone else's ideas.

Fairiemage is right. Finding a new way to portray an idea is what writing is all about now. There are almost NO completely new ideas. Heinlein's character "Lazarus Long" said it too. He said something like "all stories are just other authors ideas with the serial numbers filed off."

It's always fun to see how someone can come up with a new way to say it, a new way to tell the story or a kink that no one has thought of before.

Chris in CA

Chris

Larry Niven had a character

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Can't remember he name of the story but one of Larry Niven's early novels centered around a guy who had the psychic "ignore me" power. They called it "Plateau Eyes" since he lived on "Mount Lookatthat", and the planet was named Plateau since the only inhabitable land was on the mountain that stuck most of the way above the planet's atmosphere. After all sorts of adventures, including a successful revolution against the government, he discovered that he could not only be completely ignored but he could command TOTAL attention. I wonder if this character will have that ability. Larry Niven has written a lot of really cool stories, some of which explore ideas out to the very edges of the logic. His parallel universes stories "All the Myriad Ways" and "For a Foggy Night" are two that show completely different possibilities of the same basic idea.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how this version of the "eyes" power ends up working.

Chris in CA

Chris

The Center - The Eyes Have It!

If she can make others ignore her she might also be able to manifest the power of persuasion and make them pay attention.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

Very good idea

I'd like to see him, when he changes show some of them how it's done. There's a pain of not being seen that will lend so much to this story I hope.

Bailey Summers

I can see why

Lil liked this one. Interesting power and pretty unique so far. Poor kid, it's going to be tough until sh -- umm, he, learns to control it.

Nice start.

Maggie

I feel like a "Freefall" robot except that

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Hi Maggie,

I always love your comments and stories. Every time I see your picture my mind does what the robots in "Freefall" do when they see Florence (the Bowman's Wolf) except that I mentally shout "MAGGIE" while they shout "DOGGIE"... LOL

Chris in CA

Chris

Thanks Everyone!

For your kind comments!
I hope to provide you all with a great and entertaining story!

I guess there really is nothing new under the sun

Someone emailed to ask me if I was using the fictional hero Matt Keller as my prototype from the story reviewed here...
http://www.tor.com/component/content/blog/57633
If anyone else was wondering all I can say is "not consciously". I don't remember reading that particular book but I am a fan of Niven and have read a lot of his work over the years so maybe I did. It is pretty close and even includes the idea someone above posted about reversing the process and concentrating attention.
If I did get the idea from Mr. Niven's story I didn't realize it at the time. I hope I can avoid the apparent sexism of the original and use the idea originally.
Thank you.

That was the one!

I read the book mentioned by you, just couldn't remember the title. The power might have been used before, but I can already see a slightly new take on it.

The main character ended up becoming a sort of self appointed folk hero, but he was content to work alone even after he got control of his power. The interactions he has with members of the opposite sex int he beginning seem force, and more of a way to introduce the concept of the power, than anything he was really interested in.

And the power was there only to help the character get to where he needed to for the story to progress.

Being as she is much more practically intelligent than the character in Niven's story (as he was a self proclaimed moron who only had common sense going for him) and she is a teen and not a thirty something, I see much more potential here, which is why I never mentioned it myself :)



He entered the hall to get warm. She left it two hundred years later.
Faeriemage



He entered the hall to get warm. She left it two hundred years later.
Faeriemage

Her, um his power could be dangerous IF he rogues

If he can make people ignor him or forget he was there he could be a peeping tom of the worst kind or even a serial rapist, robber and so on as long as there are no cameras around.

The crime would happen but they wouldn't know they were being robbed or raped. If she remains decent and honest he COULD have the makings of a formidable a spy.

The abilty to *clouds others minds* is VERY The Shadow

-- cue a young Orson Wells laughing --

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

Limitations

At least in the Niven story, don't know about this one, they could perceive anything the character did, and any direct interaction would break the power, even a simple as a touch, but they couldn't perceive anything he was holding.

So, yes to robbing, as long as we're not talking pick-pocket, no to rape. . .now of course that was the other character. This story may have different limitations :)



He entered the hall to get warm. She left it two hundred years later.
Faeriemage



He entered the hall to get warm. She left it two hundred years later.
Faeriemage

Well he will have limits but

Well he will have limits but you'll have to keep reading to find out what they are. :)