The Vampiress: A Lovingly Stolen Idea

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First a few words, I did not write the first version of this story, this is merely an unauthorized rewrite of the original. JR wrote the original version and the basic idea’s, plot, and setting belongs to JR, not me. I took the liberty to make any changes I saw fit to make this story more to my liking. I changed the names of those involved but the plot remains basically unchanged. Any and all continuations are my work but based upon the work of JR, not mine. So without further adieu I give you “The Vampiress: 12,000 Words”!

Here’s the link to the original: http://fictionmania.tv/stories/readtextstory.html?storyID=33...

The Vampiress: What Happens When You Have Eight Free Hours And A Computer
By: JR, edited, rewritten and lengthened by El Guapo
15 January 2010

Chapter One: A New Dawn

I looked up at the clock and noticed it was now midnight. What had woken me up? My windows were open, I could have sworn I closed them.

"Aw hell" I said as I stood up to close them.

"You don't know how close you are to becoming a tasty treat my sweet!" An angelic voice sang out.

My eyes darted around the room to see what was going on and who had invaded my humble abode. A ghostly pale and yet strangely beautiful, dark red haired woman came sashaying out of a dark corner of my room, her heels clicking on the hardwood floor.

"Who are you?" I asked. She stood about 5'10, with well defined curves.

"Me? It doesn't matter who I am." She purred as she admired her long red nails.

"What are you doing in my room?" I asked in a shy quiet voice, interested but concerned.

"I'm here to give you a nice bite my little delight. Come on, it won't hurt." She said, one hand rubbing her breasts. "I’ll make sure this is a night you won't ever forget!" she cackled as she began to undress, her floor length red gown falling down her curves.

Now like any teenage guy would do, I walked right towards the strange woman, ready for some action! Laughing, she pushed me onto the bed. She seemed incredibly strong for a girl. She sat on top of me as she pulled my clothes off, tearing them but I didn’t care, I was getting laid!

She kissed me slowly, her hands caressing my tan skin, massaging my taunt muscles as she started to nibble at my neck.

I squirmed under the pressure and feelings from her talented hands I seemed ready to burst. She pulled me close to her mouth, our lips locked in a luxurious kiss. She pulled away and nibbled at my neck paused and then whispered in my ear, "Now you can join us."

She kissed my neck her tongue tickling my neck, I could even feel her teeth. And then in one sharp quick movement she bit me! she fucking bit me! I would have screamed but she cut off my air by squeezing my throat, her sharp talons she had for nails cutting into my neck’s soft skin.

"Goodnight my little sis." and then she slapped me so hard that I blacked out

I woke up the next morning thinking it was all a dream. I looked at my window, the damn thing was still open! I closed it and then looked in my small mirror. There were two small marks on my neck slightly red around the marks and looking a little puffy. Could I have really been bitten? I ran my finger across the small holes, reminiscing about that strange dream. "Nah, I must have been bit by a bug or some shit, vampires don’t exist and they eat you not bite you." I thought calmly to myself.

I ignored it and got dressed. When I was getting dressed, I noticed something different though. I had trouble getting into my pants, they were a little too tight around the butt and even though my parents enjoyed calling me glow butt because of the contrast between my tan and how shall I say nether regions I had far less contrast today, hmmm maybe I can say I’m sick… But the weight gain was troubling I would have to stop at the gym.

"Too many Baby Ruth’s I guess, it’s a doooodiiieeee!!!" I yelled in my best Caddyshack impression as I tossed my belt aside. I quickly finished getting dressed and ran to the bus stop. Damn I hated Mondays, me and Garfield both. School sucked.

All during school I kept scratching my nipples. Something was wrong, I know I showered, why was I itching? Even worse were the looks the girls were giving me. “Hey look who’s growing his own boobies!” they laughed as I scratched in vain.

I had to try and ignore the itch until I could use the bathroom. At least my nails were sharp enough to scratch away the itch. All during the day I couldn't concentrate, between my butt trying to do its best impersonation of a cross between an airbag and a balloon, my pants stretching to the limit and cutting off blood flow to my legs and the itchiness in my nipples, I couldn't think. I practically flew home, raced to my room and flung myself across the bed. I hadn’t scratched this hard since the time I had the chicken pox or I did the army crawl through a field of poison ivy just to show I was immune to it. I lay on my bed and scratched my chest for what seemed like hours. Finally I took off my shirt and looked in the mirror.

"Holy mother of ding dongs!" I exclaimed as I admired the small saucers I now had for nipples.

I scratched the damn things, the small mass of jello jiggling as my nails worked on the now baby bottom smooth skin. "What in the ham sandwich is this? I didn't get a manicure!”

My nails had changed colors slightly to a soft pink and were now taking an elongated oval shape giving my hands a very girlish look, my hands looked different too, my fingers shorter with small dimples, like a child! Then I ran my hands around my butt. It was definitely bigger then this morning and softer too, very malleable and yet not fat if you know what I mean, normal, normal for a girl.

"What is happening to me?" I asked of the mirror, a strangely effeminate reflection of me staring back with no answer. I took off my pants and underwear to see my butt, but immediately noticed something of more importance.

"My wee willy wiener, oh where oh where could it have gone?" my penis was barely visible at oh, one inch or so.

“Oh mother!” I pretended to call out, “Have you seen my prick lying around somewhere, it appears I misplaced it again, perhaps you’ve seen it, maybe it went through the wash in one of my pockets?”

So I might be a little deranged but I like to see the fun side of everything. Maybe I could even post a missing sign. “Missing, a four inch phallus, on the small side, tends to be very excitable, prone to wetting itself, reward for the person who finds it!” Ha Ha, I could just see the scene, my MIA wiener appearing in a most unfortunate place, like coming out of someone’s stomach, “Alien, Alieeennnn!!!”

But in all seriousness it was definitely smaller than before. My ass was growing and my dick was shrinking. What was happening to me? I quickly got dressed again, somewhat painfully with my extremely tight jeans, and went to my computer. I played computer games for hours to get my mind off my body. It was insane - bodies don't just change like that! But nothing like live violence with my online family and friends to get me back in a good mood, after all you know, family’s that slay together, stay together!

"JAMIE! DINNER!" I heard my parents yell. I walked down the stairs and said hi to my parents, and sat at the table.

"Hey, it looks like you're putting on a little weight there thunder thighs." Dad said laughing.

"Whoa, easy there John Candy, you think you have jokes?"

"Well your pants and shirt are so tight there I thought it was Rosie O’Donnell for a second, sorry!" Dad said.

"Yeah, these are old clothes." I lied, trying not to panic them. We didn't need three of us panicking instead of just me. Mom laid out the food on the table, and we all grabbed some.

"So how was school today?" Mom asked.

"You know, same shit, different day." I said as I stuffed my face.

Dinner was fun, and no one said anything about me changing. Good thing too, because inside I was scared at the fact that Dad said I was getting fat.

After dinner I watched TV. I basically just flipped through the channels for 20 minutes before finding something.

"Jamie, what did you do to your nails?" Mom asked.

"What?" I said, surprised.

"Looks like you filed them. You're not getting too close to the girls, now are you?" Mom asked, joking.

"Nah, I just lost a bet with some friends." I said, covering up my fear.

"Oh. I told you I don't like those bets. Pretty soon you might end up in skirts if you keep it up." She said and walked out of the room.

I dismissed what she said about skirts and looked at my hands. My nails were definitely rounder and daintier then this morning and longer too. I'd have to cut them soon.

I slept that night with no surprise women biting me. And the holes on my neck were shrinking fast. Almost as fast as my penis. It was almost gone now. And my butt was too big to fit into jeans now, so I had to wear sweat pants to school. Worst though, was my chest. My nipples were huge, and were beginning to sag out from my pecks, a large mass of jello slowly advancing across my peck. I was getting scared to be seen, so I wore a huge sports jersey to cover my chest.

"Nice clothes Jamie…" followed by giggles, that was all I heard all day from everyone.

My nipples were driving me crazy, I just wanted to cut them right off. As I scratched I could feel my chest bouncing, this is getting really bad. I couldn't really stand it! I looked down at my nails during 5th period, and noticed they were more feminine then they were last night.

"How? I cut them this morning!" I whispered to myself.

I took a deep breath, and calmed myself down. I couldn't panic here in school. I had to wait till I was alone to examine myself. When I did get that chance as I lay in my bed that night, I was completely surprised.

"My dick is completely gone!" I yelled at the mirror. In its place was something new, moist folds of skin that was completely alien to me.

"Now the process will speed up." A woman said softly, walking out of the same corner the first woman had come from. She looked a little younger but still amazingly pale, long, straight, black hair flowing to mid back. She was wearing a knee length black dress with a black bow tied around her waist, she appeared to be 5’6” or so, her two inch heels making her seem slightly taller.

"What the hell is happening to me?" I asked.

"Why, you’re turning into one of us. Vampires do exist, Sort of. Just not in way you're used to thinking of."

"What the hell are you talking about?" I screamed at her.

"Now that your penis is gone, the changes will speed up. Then you will gain the attributes of a vampiress. Strength, beauty, and power all in one."

"What's a vampiress?" I asked in panic.

"A woman who needs blood for sustenance. We have the strength of many men, the speed of a cheetah and the beauty of divas!”

"As a woman!" I screamed.

Then my answer was given, not by her, but by my body. My ass expanded to the teardrop shape of a balloon! My hips exploded out to help form an hour glass shape. My hair dropped off my body, except for that on top of my head, which tinted from my former brown to a deep raven black and grew to just below my shoulders. My nipples shot out my breasts swelling to a full c-cup hanging soft but firm jiggling uncontrollably, becoming duplicates of the woman's tits next to me, and lastly, my nails finished their transformation into a picture of femininity.

"NOOOOOO!!! I don't want to be a girl!"

"It's too late. You are a girl sweetie, you are one of us!" She said, and pointed to my crotch.

I couldn't deny it; I was a girl. I looked in the mirror to see what had become of me, a young woman looked back. I appeared to stand 5’2”, over a foot of height lost in my transformation. I had lost all muscle definition and now was all curves. My once healthy tan was now replaced with a creamy white skin, almost sickly, a small layer of soft fat covering my now beautiful body. My face was the very picture of feminine beauty with full pouty lips which changed color to a natural soft pink, large icy blue eyes, long full dark lashes and soft luxurious silky smooth raven black hair. And then as if to signify the finality of my situation I watched my reflection in the mirror slowly fade until nothing remained to be seen, I was a true vampiress now.

"Now what?" I asked of her. Even my voice had changed changing from a deep base to a reedy thin high alto, every word sounding like I was singing, a very melodious sing song angelic soft voice.

“Well Jamie, that’s what I’m here for, I’m your advisor, like a sister, I’m here to teach you, to guide you, to comfort you, to be your friend, to teach you the way of the vampiress!” she spoke as she grasped me in a friendly hug.

What am I gonna do… I’m a guy, what do I say, what do I do?” I was so confused as I took in the sight of my new feminine body.

“Well Jamie, I took the liberty to change a few things like birth records and such, don’t ask how, it’s a secret you wouldn’t understand anyway, your name is now Rachael Jamie Lynn, known to friends as Jamie and she has always been a female in the eyes of the human world so don’t worry your cute head, ok?”

“What do I do to eat, can I leave the house, what can I do?”

“Well first sis, you can leave the house, while we are more prone to sunburn and are extremely light sensitive we can go in the sun light just try to limit it as much as possible, it is extremely uncomfortable but unless you have prolonged exposure it won’t be deadly. As for eating, there are many options. The National Association for the Advancement of Vampire People has made it illegal for the consumption of human blood by vampires so you’ll have to find other means. Fortunately most grocery store meat counters have all the products you’ll need, you’ll see, just give them this card and they’ll give you whatever vampire food product you want and you’ll be surprised at the selection, it’s quite a market!” She handed me what looked like a plastic credit card with my new picture and name stamped on it.

“You wouldn’t happen to have any food now would you, I’m kind of hungry…” I could hear my pretty stomach growling.

“Sure sis,” she reached into her purse and pulled out a can of what I guess is blood, “Only the finest for my new sister, grade A pigs blood, the best on the market.”

I took the can tentatively and sniffed, it actually smelled good. I sank my new, sharp, pearly white fangs into the top of the can and drained it of its contents it was actually very good but it made me a little sleepy.

“Good night sister, sleep well, I’ll see you in the morning for school, sweet dreams!”

And like that she was gone, I didn’t even catch her name she just floated silently into the night and I drifted off to a deep peaceful sleep.

Chapter Two: A New Beginning

The morning sun came too soon and too bright, way too bright, blindingly bright, so bright it caused pain bright. “Holy shit, it’s too fucking bright…” I whined as I made a lunge for the blinds.

The clock read six thirty a.m. as a peaceful dark settled back down in my room. I glanced around, my long hair dangling in my face, my jiggling boobs causing me some distress. “So it wasn’t a dream, it’s really true, it’s really fucking true, I’m a vampire, shit…”

I slowly pulled myself out of bed, my dainty pale feet barely reaching the floor, in fact they didn’t. I looked around, my room was completely different from what it had been a night before. What had been a mirror strewn on the floor was now a part of a complete vanity stocked with all the cosmetics you could imagine. My walls were painted a soft pink. I slowly made my way over to my transformed dresser, my unrestrained boobs making walking difficult. I gently placed my boobs into the cups of a satin ivory push up bra and fastened the clips like I had done it all my life.

“I could get used to this feeling!” I thought as my breasts emitted pleasant vibes from their snug nestling in the bra.

I pulled a matching pair of ivory lace boy short panties until they rested on my girly hips, the front snug on my new vagina. I pulled on a pair of ankle socks and padded over to my closet, afraid of what I might find. Lining the walls of my closets was what looked like a JC Penny’s catalog with clothes of every shapes and sizes. I pulled on a snug yet unbelievably soft white cami and selected a pair of woman’s blue jeans and a blue and white rugby striped cashmere sweater. The pants fit like a glove, tighter than I would prefer, they showcased my now massive bubble butt, their tight front pulled against my smooth front reminding me of my new sex. At least the cashmere sweater was a delight to wear, warm and yet so comfy.

“You look positively gorgeous Jamie!”

I did a complete three sixty and standing there was the vampiress from the previous night.

“Who are you, how did you get in, what…” She cut me off with a wave of her manicured finger.

“Full of questions are we, that’s okay, I was at first too, first off, my name is Sara and how I get in and move about isn’t really any of your business but for your information I opened the window.”

“Oh, okay…” I didn’t know what to say, what can you say, can words possibly describe what I felt.

“I know you’re confused, it’s okay, the mental changes take the longest to take effect but don’t worry, you’ll adapt, now let me do your hair and makeup before you have to leave for school…”

“I have to still go to school…”

“Yes Jamie, life still goes on, now sit down so I can help you.”

She pulled my hair back into a pony tail, tied back by a light blue ribbon tied in a large feminine bow. I could feel it tickling the back of my neck. She slowly massaged my face as she applied some foundation to my pale skin. I must admit it did feel good. She applied some blush to my cheek bones and some eye shadow to my pale face adding some life. She applied some eyeliner and mascara before pulling out a tube of soft pastel pink lipstick and slowly gliding the creamy lipstick to my lips. She opened a small box on my vanity and pulled a pair of silver dangling earrings and carefully placing them in holes in my ears I didn’t even know I had.

“There you look great, almost finished!” she exclaimed with pride, “I have a small present to give you.”

“Thank you…” I was speechless, to think that I was a boy only the night before and now I was a beautiful if pale teenage woman.

Sara pulled two boxes out of her purse. I would be honored if you would wear these, I opened the first box and contained inside it was the most gorgeous silver necklace I had ever seen. I fastened the clasp behind my neck, the heart pendant hanging down to just above my cleavage exposed by the sweater’s v-neck. The second box contained a beautiful silver woman’s watch, small and dainty, just like what I had become, I guess I was in shock that I wasn’t utterly repulsed by my changes but then again it might be part of the changes.

“Thank you Sara, they’re gorgeous, thanks!” I smiled, trying to make the best of a trying situation for me.

“You’re welcome Jamie, now you need to get to school before you’re late, I brought you breakfast too, now I have to go so have a good day sis!”

And like that she was gone, just fucking disappeared, did I just say fuck?, I’m going to have to work on my language if I want to make it as a girl. I sank my fangs into the can of blood and drank it slowly, careful not to mess up my makeup or lipstick. I finished the can and carefully placed it in a small wastebasket. In the past I would have tried to shoot it in like a basketball, but times had changed and had I tried, my breasts would have got in the way.

I located my purse, my purse, when did I get a purse? But somehow I knew it was mine. Opened it up and removed my pink wallet and looked at my driver’s license, Rachael Jamie Lynn, aged seventeen of 1800 Terrace Drive Sioux Springs Iowa, there I was, a female, always a female in the eyes of the law and society.

I laced up my pink and white puma’s and slung my purse over one shoulder and my pink book bag over the other and walked out to my car. I was careful to put on my sunglasses before opening the front door trying to avoid a repeat of earlier. Where there had once been a brand spanking new Ford F150 now sat a brand new silver Honda Civic with a pink front license plate that said ‘girls rule’, I just sighed and got in the car. I was amazed at not only how much closer I was to the dashboard but how much bigger everything in general was. I think if it wasn’t for my superhuman strength I probably would have just sat down and cried from the intimidation, instead I was just scared witless.

I pulled the car into a spot in the school parking lot and took a guest parking spot, evidently I was new to the school, more fun I thought as I rolled my eyes. I sashayed across the parking lot, my butt swaying side to side, by boobs bouncing around, my hands swishing back and forth, the way I was walking was sure to make all the boys shoot a load in their pants and it sort of pissed me off and yet there was a small part of my mind that liked their attention, that craved more…

I walked down the crowded halls of James Woods High and walked into the front office and walked over to the secretary’s desk.

“Hello…” evidently I inherited some shyness when I changed, I had a hard time introducing myself, “Hello, my name is Rachael Lynn, I’m new here, can you help me?” Did I really just call myself Rachael, where did that come from and why was I so quiet and shy, hrrrmmmm!

“Oh, you’re the new girl, here’s your schedule, you have homeroom with Mr. Johnson, room 241, okay, buh bye!” with fake wave and an impersonation of David Spade she shooed me out of the office and into the zoo they called the halls.

My book bag tugged at my slim shoulders as I minced down the hall, holding some of my books in front of me like a girl, I couldn’t help it, it was just instinct I guess. I heard a few whistles as I walked but other than that no one talked or interrupted me and I made it to homeroom just in the nick of time.

“Hello, and who might you be young lady?” A forty something year old man balding on top standing at about 6’, at my diminished height he cast a very imposing figure.

“I’m… I’m… Rachael… Lynn… I’m new… here…” I stammered, nervous for some reason.

“Well hello Ms. Lynn, we’re always happy to have another pretty lass such as yourself, why don’t you take the first seat on the far left row next to Mr. Norris.”

“Thanks…” I said, shyly not making eye contact, I could feel thirty pairs of eyes following me, the boys firmly on my chest and ass, and the girls staring through me as possible competition. Now that I was out of the sun I pulled my sun glasses off, I was going to have a hard time adjusting to avoiding sunlight.

I sat down slowly into the hard chair carefully placing my book bag on the ground next to my desk.

“Hello, my name is Jeff, but everyone calls me Otter” said the boy seated in the desk seated to my right, Mr. Norris, his eyes not moving from my boobs.

“Hello… and I’m up here if you don’t mind.” I said softly but with what I thought was some anger.

He looked up, his face turning many different shades of red, it was cute really, he was cute even when he did blush, what am I saying, what am I thinking, a boy cute, I’m fucking sick, stop! I yelled at the voices in my head, this can’t be happening…

“I’m sorry, I uh…” he stammered unable to formulate an excuse.

“No, it’s alright, my name is Rachael, I’m new here!” I gave him a big smile, kind of flirting, I couldn’t help it honest, it’s like I was on cruise control.

“Oh, well welcome to James Woods High, if you need a guide or anything you let me know, I’m the class president, if you need anything, anything at all…” he was clearly smitten with me and the scary part was I was loving every second of it.

Only the tardy bell could interrupt the budding relationship, its crisp tone shocking the students to attention. After a brief role call and some announcements we were released upon the school to find our way to first period. I glanced at my schedule, who ever made the schedule I was going to kill, I had band first, dancing, home economics, gym, AP calculus, AP US History, AP chemistry, and intro to music theory. It was going to be a long hard day, that was for sure, and to make it better, Otter Norris had class next to the band room and insisted on escorting me chatting the whole way and I loved it.

“Hello, who are you, can I help you?” asked a twenty something man with short brown hair with a cute (Cute!!!, what the hell!) goatee, his name was listed as Mr. Morris.

“Uhh… my name is Racha…” he cut me off.

“Oh, you’re the new girl who’s really good with the acoustic guitar, I actually have one that you can play today in the back if you’d like since you didn’t bring yours!” he gave me a kind smile and pointed me towards the back. “While you’re back there why don’t you grab a music book too?”

“Uh… ok!” I snagged the guitar and the book and found a seat next to a heavy set girl.

“Do you mind if I sit here?” I asked her gesturing at the chair with my full hands.

“No, not at all, my name’s Kristin, what’s yours… no let me guess, Kathy… no, Jennifer… no, I don’t know, tell me!” she was bubbling with energy with a pleasant smile and what seemed to be a cheerful disposition.

I sat in the chair and put down my stuff and extended my hand gently, “My name is Rachael Lynn, I’m new here!”

“It’s a pleasure Rachael!” and she grasped my hand and then dropped it and pulled me into a girly hug, I hugged back. Clearly I was changing and I had no control over it. Only days before there was no way I would have thought I was a girl, much less answer to Rachael, much less hug a girl and have no sexual appeal. Shit.

“Everyone warm up as they please but be ready to play in ten minutes!” Mr. Morris called out to the class as I opened the guitar case and began to play. I strummed the first few cords to Phil Ochs “I Ain’t Marching Anymore” before drawing the ire of the other students, apparently when he said warm up he meant do scales, not play a song, oops, my bad! Maybe it was just the song, and I started to play Neil Young’s “Keep On Rocking In The Free World” either it was received better or they just ignored me but no one said anything or glanced in my direction the rest of the session. The class itself flew by and I had a blast, more fun than I thought I was going to have even if the songs we played sucked.

I almost escaped out the door when Otter intercepted me in the hall.

“Hello Rachael!” he had a cute shy smile as he saddled up next to me in the crowded hallway, “How was your first class at James Woods High?”

I gave him a bright smile, I was starting to like this guy, I was in my first day of school in my first day as a girl and I was already taking a liking to boys and as strange as it seemed, it didn’t seem different or wrong to me anymore, it was like all my former inhibitions were gone. “Hi Otter, it was really fun, I really enjoyed it, how was yours? I gave him another shy smile.

“Ohh, it was alright but math is really boring you know, Bueller… Bueller… Bueller…” he mocked the teacher, I couldn’t help but giggle, it was really cute and sort of funny too.

“Yeah, math can be like that sometimes but look at the bright side, at least you don’t have AP Calc on your schedule!” I gave a rueful shake of my head.

I reached my next class and started to walk into the room.

“Will I see you in lunch? He asked with a grin “I have B lunch!”

I glanced at the copy of my schedule I had placed in the clear cover of my notebook, imagine that, “I have B lunch too, see you then!” and I would look forward to it too, as sick as that seemed to the last portion of the previous regime attempting to hold on in my estrogen riddled mind. My next two classes went off without a hitch and lunch arrived before I knew it. I walked into the large cafeteria and immediately noticed Otter waving at me from a table at the far side of the room surrounded by other boys and girls. I walked over, completely uninterested in the human food on display in the cafeteria.

“Hi Rachael, this is my friend Travis, everyone calls him Stifler and his girlfriend Katie”, Travis waved Katie gave me a bright smile and stood and gave me a hug.

“It’s nice to meet you Rachael, I’m sure we’ll be great friends."

She was slightly taller than me with brownish blonde hair and a cue but not knockout face and body.

“And this is my friend Chris, but everyone calls him Flounder and his girlfriend Jessica” continued Otter.

Flounder waved and kind of nodded at me and Jessica practically knocked me over with her giant bear hug, her light brown hair pulled into a French braid.

“Hi Rach, I’m Jessica, it’s nice to have another girl in the group so we aren’t outnumbered by the guys and have to listen to guy talk, it’s great to have you!” and with a giant smile she gestured for me to sit with the group.

I sat down in between Otter and Jessica, Otter put his arm around my waist, I noticed but I didn’t care, in fact I kind of liked it.

Otter and Flounder and Travis immediately continued the conversation they were having about the school football team so Jessica turned to me and all three of us girls, and yes I have begun to see myself as a girl, it just seems natural so why fight it, and started our own conversation.

“Did you see last week’s episode of ‘Gilmore Girls’ Rachael?” Jessica asked loudly trying to cue the boys to stop being rude, but that’s boys for you I guess.

“Yeah, I did, I thought it was alright I guess, but I thought that Rory’s fight with Lorelei was kind of stupid.” I answered, now I know what you are going to say but even when I was a guy I used to watch ‘Gilmore Girls’, I don’t know why, I just liked it.

“Ahhmm, ladies can we talk about something more interesting please!” Flounder interjected.

“What, like football!” Jessica snapped back.

Otter wrapped his arm around my waist and pulled me close to him and I didn’t object. He started to whisper in my ear softly.

“I know we haven’t known each other long but would you be interested in going to a movie with me tonight, I have two tickets and no one to go with, what do you think, as friends of course.”

I thought about it, I had never considered myself gay, and now in my first hours as a girl I had already fallen for a guy, oh well, I thought, when in Rome do as the Romans do. I pulled his head down, stroking his soft short hair and whispered softly into his ear, “Sure, I’d love too, as friends of course!” and I started to giggle uncontrollably.

Amazingly none of the others noticed or cared. I finished the school day on cloud nine even though most of my classes sucked. The drive home from school seemed to fly by until I realized that I had to get something to eat, I couldn’t raid the fridge anymore.

I arrived at our local supermarket and walked into the store and made a beeline for the meat counter, absolutely sure that everyone I passed saw me for what I was, a vampiress. I waited in line at the counter as the people placed their orders and then it was my turn. Fortunately I was last in line or I might have died of fright. I shyly handed the man my card Sara had given me.

“Hi, you must be the new kid Sara was telling me about, I’m Tom, what can I do for you?”

“Uhh… I need to eat… I don’t know?” I didn’t know what to say and add on to that I was extremely shy now and it made for a bad combo.

He gave me a grin “Don’t worry kid I’ll take care of you and he filled a large bag with many different cans and packages of different forms of blood I guess.

“Here you are, have a nice day and come back and visit!” he handed me the bag with a smile and like that I was gone.

I drove home in record time and spilled the contents of the bag on the kitchen table, there was every kind of blood you could imagine, jello blood, blood soup, blood puree, blood steak, blood drinks, every kind of blood imaginable. I ripped open a package of blood jello, looking for all the world like cherry jello but tasting much better to my new tastes than cherry jello would have. And naturally it scared the piss out of me when Sara walked in unannounced.

“So how was the first day?” she asked with a knowing smile, “That Otter kid sure is cute!” she had a sly grin on her face.

“How do you know about him!” I asked indignant, “You didn’t, how did you follow me!” I asked genuinely angry.

She laughed and smiled, “Let’s just say I have my ways sister!”

“I wish you weren’t so secretive, why am I changing mentally, why do I like boys?” I asked quietly, afraid of the answer.

“Well, you are now a girl, and girls like boys, besides, everything about you is to make you a good hunter, boys are naturally attracted to you, they can’t help it, we are literally boy magnets, now imagine if we didn’t want that, that wouldn’t be good, would it?”

“Were you a boy once like me?”

“No, most vampiresses are made from human females, it is very rare for a vampiress to bite a male or vice versa for a vampire, now what time is Otter coming?” she asked with an excited tone and a bright smile.

“Otter is coming for me at eight o’clock.” I smiled just thinking about it, he was soooo dreamy…

“Hey, no day dreaming about guys, you have homework and you have to get ready, my little sister getting her first date, I’m so proud.

A note on my bedroom door informed me that my father wouldn’t be home until late so I didn’t need his permission, he wouldn’t be here to stop me. Sara by this time had disappeared again like she likes to do and it was just me sitting on my soft bed. I pulled open my book bag and pulled out my calculus book. Sitting cross legged on the bed with my book in my lap I studied diligently until my phone rang.

I pulled out my pink cell phone, it was Jessica, I had given her and Kristin my number when I gave it to Otter at lunch.

“Hey Rachael, how’s the homework going?” she asked her voice very peppy.

“It’s going alright I guess I can’t really concentrate though, I’m looking forward to tonight!” I smiled just thinking about it.

“Yeah, I was wondering if you minded if we double dated, it would be so much fun, whata ya think?”

“Sure, it sounds like a lot of fun, I don’t see why not, I’ll see you at the movie then?” I liked the idea, it seemed like it would be fun.

“Ok, thanks Rach’ see you then, see ya!” and with a click she hung up.

I Was fired up, my first date, a mix of butterflies and excitement, happiness and sadness that I was no longer a guy, but a girl, a vampiress, but what the hell, I was having so much fun, maybe the grass is greener on the other side!

Chapter 3 — Mowing The Grass On The Other Side Of The Fence

After that my homework seemed to fly by and before I knew it was time to get ready for my date with Otter. What should I wear, what should I wear, I thought to myself as I browsed through my closet. I pulled out a knee length black silk dress with a large v-neck and a large black bow and full length sleeves, almost the same dress Sara wore when I met her, only the sleeves were different. I changed my bra and panties, exchanging the ivory set for a very lacy jet black set, the black thong sort of gave me a wedgie but I didn’t care, it gave my butt a good look.

“That looks very cute!” Sara chimed from her corner.

“Uh thanks, you wanna help?” I asked not turning to look in her direction, I was getting used to her presence.

“No, you have to live your own life, I’m only here to help if you get stuck and you should have the knowledge to dress yourself now.” She gave me a kind smile and a wink and like that she was gone.

“Well then, I guess I’ll just have to do this by myself…” I looked in the mirror at the reflection of me in my lingerie. I never did ask her how I could see myself to do my makeup but never anytime else.

I began to do my makeup for the night applying foundation like I had done it all my life. I applied some blush and dark eye shadow before brushing on some mascara and applying my eye liner. I finished with a dark red very creamy lipstick. Having finished my face I started to get dressed, pulling the dress down over my head, careful not to get makeup on it. It fit perfectly, its hem falling to just below my knee, the sleeves extending just past my wrist, stopping at the base of my thumb, the dress shape fitting but not tight. In other words it fit perfectly. But something was missing, I couldn’t tell what it was until I looked at my unpainted nails, they would look great painted.

I had the time so I pulled out a bottle of wine red nail polish and slowly applied it to my feminine nails, giving them a sophisticated look. I painted my small toenails the same rich color, I was surprised I could reach them, as a guy I hadn’t been able to reach my toes in years.

After blowing them dry I placed a pair of earrings in the small holes and placed anther silver necklace I now owned around my neck, the cold metal tickling my exposed neck. I pulled my black hair back into a bun but left a small amount of bangs down, giving me a look I thought looked perfect.

“Otter is going to love the way I look…” I thought to myself, small warning bells were going off in the back of my mind but I didn’t care, I had changed, I wasn’t a guy any more, I was a beautiful vampiress and I liked Otter and that’s all there is to it!

A pair of black strappy sandals with a three inch heel showed my painted toes and showcased my legs well. I was ready and not a moment too soon, it was seven fifty five!

I grabbed a small black purse I seemed to own and quickly filled it with some hand lotion, makeup, lip stick, a tampon, a condom (don’t ask), my phone, and some gum, I was ready!

The doorbell rang precisely at eight and there was Otter standing there in a Metallica t-shirt and blue jeans, not the greatest outfit but he was clean and so were the clothes, more than you can say for most teenage boys. I slowly walked down the stairs from my room to the front door, the clicking of my heels on the hard wood strangely normal. I pulled open the door slowly and walked out on the porch.

“Hello Rachael… are you umm… ready?” he asked shyly blushing a little, his BMW parked in my drive way.

“Yeah, I’m excited let’s go!” I gave him a girlish hug and a small peck on the cheek before we walked over to his silver beemer.

“Allow me to get that door for mi lady!” he said pretending to be cultured or something.

“Why thank you kind sir” I played along as I slowly sat down, smoothed my dress and swung my legs and heels into the car, before I had a hard time with leg room, now it seemed like I could do laps in the front seat I was so small.

The drive to the theater was uneventful with both of us making small talk about nothing. We pulled into the theater and found a parking spot near the door. Otter rushed out of the car to get my door for me, I swung my legs out and walked to the front with Otter, his large strong hand engulfing my dainty feminine hand, making me feel even smaller.

“Gosh you look great Rach!” called the sing song voice of Jessica, she had her arm around Flounder and they were walking across the parking lot. Jessica was wearing a black pair of slacks and a pair of heels, her purple top making her look gorgeous.

“You too Jess!” she dropped Flounder and she embraced me in the way girls hug.

“You ladies ready for the movie?” Otter and Flounder laughed and asked together.

“Yeah, let’s go!” Jess and I replied in unison!

We walked into the theater, Otter holding me close as we walked.

We found seats in the far back, Jessica sat next to me and Flounder next to her. We chatted as we watched the boring trailers. I leaned on Otter’s shoulder, he had such big muscles. He was playing with my hair and with my hand I massaged his chest, tracing patterns with my nails on him. Then with a sudden noise the movie started. It wasn’t Jessica’s or my first choice that was for sure, Final Destination 3. About half way through the film Jessica and Flounder’s face ceased to be separate interties, they were merged in passionate kisses and groping. I looked over at Otter longingly, besides the movie sucked anyway.

“Hey Otter…” I half whispered, half purred.

“What… oh… okay, all right!” he said with a large smile growing larger on his cute face.

He pulled me close in a tight embrace and his lips met mine somewhere in the middle. We started slow, my lips meeting his and then I felt his tongue enter my mouth and do its work. My tongue slowly did the same to him. I loved the feeling of his rough stubble on my soft skin and as we kissed we played with each other’s hair, my hand running through his short yet soft hair. I was starting to get hot, a wetness I had never felt before was building in my panties and yet as his tongue probed the depths of my mouth I felt something else, something even more primal than sex: hunger. It was everything I could do to keep from sinking my fangs into his neck and feasting on his delicious blood. We kept playing, he was nibbling at my neck and ears and I was loving it. I moved my hand to crotch. He was hard as a rock and was making quite a bulge in his jeans. I felt his hand cup one of breasts and start to squeeze…

I squealed, surprised.

“Did I hurt you, I’m sorry…” Otter pulled back surprised as well.

“No,” I laughed, “You just surprised me that’s all!” I sat up in my chair, the movie was almost over any way. I tried to fix my hair and makeup in the dark, not an easy feat but I think I pulled it off.

We walked out of the theater, Flounder with Otter and Jessica and I.

“So how was it?” she asked a smile on her face, clearly she had had a good time with Flounder.

“What, the movie?” I pretended know exactly what she was asking.

“No silly, Otter, how was he, I’ve never seen him with any other girl!”

“Ohh…” I gave a smile that showed her I had been kidding “He was great, he really seemed like he knew what he was doing, it was great…” I had a dreamy smile just thinking about it.

Jessica just giggled, “Was he that good, I mean Flounder is good, but you made it seem great!” she smiled and giggled again.

“Yeah, yeah, Otter was great, hey, what’s with the names?”

“Well, you are now a member of a strange cult I guess,” she started to giggle at what was a joke to her I guess, “Every guy has a name in the group, Otter, Flounder, Stifler, D-Day, Bluto… you know, famous ladies men!” she continued her giggles fit.

“You’re kidding me…” I couldn’t help but giggle, it was kind of funny.

Flounder barged in between Jessica and I, “Hey Jess, you wanna go over to Stifler’s, it’ll be fun!”

“Sure,” she was grabbing his ass in public, “Would you and Otter like to come, it’ll be really fun, come with me please!” she looked at me with fake puppy eyes and then burst into a fit of giggles.

I looked over at Otter, he was shaking his head like a bobble head, I guess that was a yes.

“Sure Jess, we’d love to, it sounds like fun!”

“Why don’t you ride in my car and we’ll let the boys chat, sound cool?” Jessica asked with a smile as she started walking in the direction of her car.

“Sure,” I shrugged my shoulders “I’ll be with Jess, Otter, I’ll meet you at Stifler’s, okay?”

“Okay” he bent down and gave me a full on kiss on the lips and then we had to go.

I followed Jessica to where she had parked her car, apparently she had driven Flounder to the movies and not the other way around. She got in the small Chevy on the driver side and I in the passenger side.

“So how do you like life here?” She asked as we pulled out of the lot and onto the road.

“I wasn’t sure if I was going to like it at first but it is really great, Otter really helps you know?” I smiled at the thought of Otter.

“Yeah he is really dreamy isn’t he…” we both sat silent for a moment thinking of him.

Strange but I guess you could say I was liking Sioux Springs Iowa, I guess ‘Field of Dreams’ had it right, heaven can be in Iowa.

“Earth to Rachael, this is earth paging Rachael…” Jessica was waving her hand in front of my face, “We’re here, welcome back to this planet.”

“Oh, sorry, uh thanks, sorry I kind of spaced.” I gave an embarrassed smile, I could feel the crimson spreading on my cheeks.

“That’s okay, Flounder did that to me at first too, it passes!” she laughed and with that we exited the car and made the short walk to the massive mansion before us.

Towering columns of masonry and ornate decorations were scattered around the place. We walked to the front door where a cute boy was standing with a plastic cup in his hand, his sandy brown hair hanging down slightly in his face.

“Why hello ladies and what brings you to my humble abode this fine evening…” clearly drunk, “Jess, you look even more beautiful than ever and who might this lovely lady be?” He smiled crookedly at me but it was kind of cute.

“I’m Rachael and let me guess, you must be Stifler.” I smiled at him.

“Wow, I’m famous among the ladies, well why don’t you come on in Rachael and have a drink, it’s on me!” he laughed as he spilled some of his drink on his shirt.

“Well actually Stif’, Rachael is Otter’s new girl” Jessica said with a smile as she looked at me.

Stifler spit up some drink as he sort of laughed, “It’s about time Otter got a girl, well welcome to the family, we’re all one big family here so welcome and do please come in!”

He turned and walked back into the house and Jess and I walked in, stepping over prone bodies and trash, loud music blaring. People were everywhere.

“Stifler is always having parties with people he doesn’t even know,” she whispered in my ear “They’re fun, but not as much fun as we have when it’s just the gang…”

A small lamp was attempting to fly across the room, or at least someone was trying to make it fly, it arced past our heads and impacted on the far wall, falling to the ground in pieces.

“It’s a zoo in here!” I yelled to Jessica, fighting to be heard above the roar of the music and people, “Where is Otter and Flounder?”

“They’re probably in the pool, Stifler keeps girls bathing suits up stairs if you want, we can join them?” she had a smile on her face, she clearly wanted to visit the hot tub.

We made our way up the stairs past some passed out people and one playing a guitar poorly, Jessica pointed out who each one was as we climbed.

We stepped over an obese kid passed out at the top of the stairs, “Let me guess,” I giggled and pointed, “Bluto!”

“Yeah, how’d you guess, that’s pretty good, you’ll fit right in!”

We stepped into a guest room and locked the door behind us. Jessica pulled out two pairs of bathing suits, one pink and one purple. She quickly stripped, standing necked before me, her boob’s hanging free in a sight that would have once driven me crazy and now had no impact at all, it was completely normal. Jessica pulled on the pink bikini and grabbed a towel as I pulled on the purple one, the smooth feel of the material tickling my boobies.

We made our way back down the stairs and out the back door, made the run in the cold forty degree night and did a cannonball into the shallow hot tub, splashing Otter and Flounder who were talking to a blonde.

“Hello Otter…” I called, giving him a big smile.

“Why, hello there, you look great!” he was drinking out of a red plastic cup.

I sat down next to him, okay, I was sitting on him, he wrapped his arms around me in an embrace as Flounder did the same to Jessica.

“You wanna sip, its Jaeger and Red Bull, it tastes great!” as he handed me the cup.

“Sure, I guess…” before I had never drank, apparently now that had changed too as I took a big gulp of the drink. I nearly coughed up a lung when I did.

“Wow, that was nasty…” Flounder, Otter, and Jessica were all laughing at me, at least I did get a little buzz.

“Hey I’m going to get more to drink, would you ladies like something?” Flounder called as he got out of the tub.

“Yeah, can I get you something Rachael?” Otter asked as he got up, sliding me off his lap.

Jessica called out that she would like some red wine, “I’ll have the same if you don’t mind Otter!” I smiled at him as he walked with Flounder back into the house. I couldn’t help but stare at his cute butt.

Another girl joined us in the tub, wearing a pink polka dotted bikini, it was Katie, Stifler’s girl.

“So how do you like the party pad Rach?” Katie asked as she slid up next to me.

“Its nice…kind of loud but its nice!”

“So how was Otter, can he kiss, I’ve never seen him with a girl…” she smiled and looked right at me.

“Yeah, he can kiss…” I smiled remembering in the theater.

“So how was Flounder, Jess? same as usual?” she asked Jessica.

“Oh yeah, he gets better and better, how about you and Stif’?”

“Well, he’s been kind of busy but he has a special surprise for me later he says!” she smiled and giggled.

“Ohhhh… some one’s getting lucky!” Jessica and I both said and then all three of us collapsed in fits giggles.

“What’s so funny ladies!” and with a splash Stifler joined us in the tub, his hands all over Katie, she was so lucky, where is Otter and Founder I thought to myself.

“Well there’s the Stifler we know and love!” Chris yelled as he entered the tub handing Jessica her wine. Otter wasn’t far behind and he joined us, all three of us girls sipping wine and sitting on our man’s lap, his arms wrapped around us, I could have stayed like that forever.

But unfortunately the time had come for us to leave, the party was winding down, it was four in the morning and I had to be up for school at six thirty, not good. Jessica and I each got back in our clothes and walked out to the cars.

“I had a really good time tonight, I hope we can be great friends!” she said as she smiled and laughed tiredly, “I’ll see you in a few hours!” And with a hug she got in her car with Flounder and drove into the night.

“So, how was it?” Otter asked, a smile on his face.

“I really enjoyed myself tonight, thanks!” I gave him a peck on the cheek as he started the car and drove me home.

The car arrived at my house all too soon and Otter opened the door for me and gave me a big hug, making sure to grab some of my ass.

“Have a good night!” he said as we embraced for one last long kiss and then he was gone.

I snuck back into the house careful to avoid waking my dad and as quickly as possible removed my makeup, put away my dress and crawled under the sheets for a few hours of sleep, my first day as a girl an unqualified success!

Chapter Four — Dawn Of The Living Dead

Apparently vampire’s can be hung over and good rest like humans because when the alarm went off at six thirty I wanted to eat the first ten or so humans I came across, I felt that bad. My head felt like it was about to burst and I didn’t even drink that much. At least the shades were closed this morning though. I rolled out of bed and quickly put on a bra and some panties.

“Another pants day…” I though as I made my way to the closet and pulled out a pair of black slacks and a red silk blouse. I pulled on a clean white cami and pulled my slacks on, the pants fitting tightly around my butt and my large hips, accentuating my curves and fitting against my smooth and now normal crotch. I buttoned the elbow length blouse up most of the way but leaving the top undone exposing my cami and some cleavage.

I fastened the necklace Sara had given me around my neck and the ladies watch on my wrist. A pair of dangling earrings went in my ears after I did my hair. I carefully applied my makeup, I had somehow become skilled with it overnight, pulled on a pair of red sandals with a two inch heel, downed two cans of blood, grabbed my purse and my book bag and strolled out the door to my car, my sunglasses protecting my eyes from the painfully bright sun.

I arrived at the school in plenty of time, avoiding the last minute rush and found the parking spot I was assigned the day before. Lo and behold but who should meet me in the lot but Otter!

“How did you know where I parked?” I asked with a quizzical expression on my face.

“Well my beautiful, I’m the class president, I know these things.” He smiled and pulled me into a warm embrace, my breasts mashed against his chest. We kissed full on the lips for a few seconds and then walked hand in hand into the school.

School itself was uneventful, the highlight of the day seeing Katie and Jessica at lunch. We agreed that we would meet after school at the local mall for some girl time before meeting with the guys over at Stifler’s for dinner and some fun.

Jessica rode with me to the mall, she had to ride the bus to school because she was still drunk from the night before.

“So, did you go shopping a lot in your old town?” she asked, bubbling with excitement.

“Sometimes I guess, my friends weren’t that interested in clothes.”

“Well you are going to have a blast, the mall is so much fun, the clothes, the boys, there are always so many cute boys to admire, it is soooo much fun!”

“Are you looking to buy anything or are we just hanging out?” I asked, somewhat curious.

“Are you serious, the winter formal is only four weeks away and we need to get our dresses, are you going with Otter, Flounder hasn’t asked me yet but I know he will!”

Before I could answer we had arrived at the mega mall, and calling it mega doesn’t do it justice it was magnificent! And Jessica wasn’t exaggerating about the guys either, there were some real hunks walking around, maybe I was going to like this shopping thing after all!

We walked into the mall together attracting more than our fair share of looks from the men in the mall but none of them spoke to us and we for the most part, only a little flirting, ignored them. We found Katie waiting for us in the food court eating a salad. One nice thing about being a vampire is that one I don’t get fat and two, I don’t have to eat nearly as often as I used to.

“Hey Jessica, hey Rachael, you ready to shop till we drop!” Katie was grinning from ear to ear, “I got Stif’s credit card, I’m set!”

“Oh yeah, let’s do it!” Jessica called back and we started off into the depths of the mall looking for the dress store.

We walked in and immediately began to evaluate the dresses available.

“What do you think of this one?” Jessica called out, holding a floor length powder blue gown that positively sparkled.

“It’s nice,” I called back, “What do you think?” I held up a purple floor length gown with spaghetti straps and a nice bow tied in the back.

“It looks gorgeous, why don’t you try it on?” Katie called out from under a large pile of dresses.

I entered the changing room and quickly changed into the dress, it fit me perfectly, flowing over every curve and exposing my dainty shoulders. It had several silk skirts underneath and it fell to the floor when I stood. I walked out of the dressing room, the feeling of the silk on my bare legs positively divine.

“It looks great on you, you should get it, I think I’m gonna get this one, like it?” Jessica called out, “Hey, if nothing else, Otter will love it!”

All three of us giggled and in the end we left with a brand new dress slung over our shoulders. The dress was going to be perfect, I even had a pair of heels that matched perfectly, the dance was going to be so much fun.

Katie and we split when we reached the parking lot, Katie had to go to work, sucked for her, oh well. Jessica and I hopped in my car and me pulled out onto the road headed for Stifler’s.

“All the guys are always at Stifler’s, we should have some fun, they’ll be happy to see us…” Jessica said as I drove down the highway.

“I can’t wait to see Otter…” I smiled just thinking about him.

We pulled into the long driveway and walked into the house. Apparently Stifler never saw the point of cleaning because it looked like the marines had just invaded. There were loud noises and catcalls coming from the basement and Jess and I headed that direction. I walked down the stairs slowly, careful not to trip over my heels. The guys were sitting in what looked like it was once a bar but was now being claimed by a growing pile of trash.

“Hey, it’s the ladies, hello ladies!” came a chorus of male voices as Otter and Flounder made their way across the room to greet us. Otter pulled me into a hug and gave me a long kiss on the lips, his tongue making a cameo appearance.

“And how is mi lady?” He asked, his strong hands around my waist and on my butt.

“Good…” I gave him a flirty smile, “And how is my favorite sea creature?”

“I’ve been doing swimmingly sweetie!”

I couldn’t help but giggle at his joke and we walked back up the stairs to what was once a living room. We sat down on a trashed couch and I leaned on him/ lay in his lap. He sat stroking my hair and caressing my thighs and my butt. We made small talk about the day, I laughed at all of his jokes, he’s really funny. I was unabashedly in love with him and it was only my second day as a girl, my how easily I changed.

I played with his hair as he pulled me somewhat more upright and his lips met mine. His tongue probed my mouth and mine his. I was getting better at controlling my urges to eat him and I was enjoying the experience more and more. I was tussling his hair with one hand and playing with his cock with the other. I was teasing the bulge in the pants, stroking it with my finger making it harder and harder. One of his hands left my hair and made for my chest. I felt it slowly pull my bra down and begin to twist and pinch my nipple. I shivered with the amazing feelings my boobs were sending as his husky breathing continued to propel me further into heat.

“More…” he said, “Play with it more!” as I teased his cock.

I started to undo his pants and pull them down as he fumbled with my bra, I never knew that my skin could be so sensitive and that the feelings females got were so intense, amazing. His hands found my pants and he unzipped and pulled them down as I continued to play with his penis. With a sudden gasp his fingers found my clit and he started to thumb it. My vagina started juicing overtime and I could feel the juices flowing down my thigh.

“Uhh… uhhh…!” he placed one of his fingers followed soon by the rest until he was fisting me, at first there was intense pain as my cherry popped and then there was only sheer ecstasy!

I could feel his penis quivering as he started to place it against my vagina…

“Stop!, stop, I’m not ready for that, please…” I cried out, I wasn’t ready to be fully female, my male side had yet to fully retreat, this was the last stand, the last bastion of malehood fighting its last.

“Ok, am I hurting you, I’ll stop, I’ll stop…” He was breathing heavily as he pulled his penis back.

“I’m sorry, it just too soon, but I’ll help you out okay?” I smiled weakly as I took his still firm manhood in my hand and started to stroke. It wasn’t long before it started to quiver and then he tensed and shot his load, white cream everywhere. I started to wipe it off with one of his socks and then stopped. I bent down and started to lick him clean, the semen actually didn’t taste half bad. We both went to the bathroom to clean up, we both got dressed with each other’s help before I redid my makeup. When I was finished the rest of the group was gathered around, the guys all clustered and the girls clustered, Otter went with the men and I went with the girls.

“What were you doing…” Jessica asked with a knowing grin on her face, “How was it?”

“We didn’t go all the way but what we did do felt really good, he knew what he was doing…” I stopped and burst into a fit of giggles that Jess joined in with.

“Let me introduce you to some of the other girls,” Jessica said, “This is Jennifer, she’s Bluto’s girlfriend.

Jennifer stood about 5’4” with short brown hair and an average body but had massive boobs. She waved at me, “Hi I’m Jennifer but everyone calls me Jenny, it’s nice to meet you.”

“It’s nice to meet you too, I’m Rachael…” I was interrupted by Jessica continuing her introductions.

“And this is Katherine, Sarah, Jill and Tina, they don’t have any boyfriends, they just hang around, she continued in a whisper, they’re sluts…”

The four blondes, all unnatural waved at me and gave me a fake smile before continuing their conversation.

“And this is Megan, she is dating D-Day, she’s shy nut she’s really nice and very smart.”

Jessica gestured in the direction of a mousey girl of very average proportions, average all around, but certainly not ugly.

“Hi… I’m Megan, it’s nice to meet you.” Megan said quietly.

Well at least I would have someone to relate my own shyness with, “It’s very nice to meet you Megan, I’m shy too, don’t worry, we’ll get along great!”

We all intermingled and discussed boys and pop culture as the boys got louder and rowdier. Megan leaned in and whispered into my ear, “Why can’t they be more mature, they act like such little children sometimes?”

“I know but boys are going to be boys, that’s what they do.” I said as I gave her an understanding nod.

“Go Otter!” I yelled out at the group of boys, Otter had Stifler in a headlock and they were wrestling on the floor.

He gave me a grin as he got up off the floor, “Hey some of us are gonna drink, you want some wine or something?” he asked as he made for the kitchen door.

“Sure, I’d love some!”

He and Flounder walked off as Jessica and I sat down on a couch. The boys were soon back with the drinks and we cuddled as we sipped our drinks and allowed time to flow by unchecked. I looked down at my watch noticing that it was almost eleven p.m.

“Hey Jessica, I’m going to go, you want a ride?” I asked as I rose.

“Sure, thanks!” she turned to say goodnight to Flounder as I turned to Otter.

“Why are you leaving, its only eleven, the fun is only starting!” he asked in mock indignation.

“Now you know it’s a school night young man!” waging my finger at him in an accusatory manner pretending to be his mother.

“Yes mommy…” he said as he pulled me into a long farewell kiss.

I pulled away from him as Jessica did the same and we made our way to my car, passing kids from school on their way into the house for a party. I dropped Jess off at her house and headed straight home. When I arrived the house was completely dark, my father had long gone to bed and I silently made my way to my room. I carefully cleaned my face and my skin, removing the makeup and then used some moisturizer before brushing my silky hair out and pulling it back into a pony tail. Fortunately for me I had no homework and I laid down to sleep only to remember that vampires don’t need sleep so I just laid there waiting for the alarm to sound signaling a new day.

The End for now, if you want it to be continued or you have any thoughts, suggestions, complaints, etc. leave a comment and i'll try to address it,

Thanks, El Guapo

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Well, the story looks promising. But (nitpicks, lots of 'em)

But it never touched on a lot of issues. It never gave any answers to more serious questions. Why was Jamie transformed? Why was he transformed by a vampiress and not a vampire? Who was the first vampiress? Nothing.

Many plot lines were not developed. For starters, Jamie was living with his parents, so why was there practically nothing about them with only a small fragment in the beginning? Where did all those shy girl mannerisms and the like come from, and were they 'standart issue' or specifically tailored? How was the change of schools arranged and what were the reactions at the old school?

Oh. And also there is a line that needs editing - speech is there but it's not in "":{Highlight to read} Sara pulled two boxes out of her purse. I would be honored if you would wear these, I opened the first box and contained inside it was the most gorgeous silver necklace I had ever seen.
And the link to the original is apparently broken.

That said, I kinda liked the protagonist before the mental changes kicked in. He was fun and kinda like me.

Oh, right. There is an another category that needs adding - it goes kinda like 'Hypnosis/Mind Control/Brainwashed' because that is what happened to the protagonist to an extent.

Faraway

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I Enjoyed the Story!

Yes, there are some things that could be improved, But this isn't John Steinbeck, ya know! This was a fun read with a very good imaginative twist that I bought into without any problem. I would like to see it continued. There are many ways this story could evolve and resolve some of the points Faraway brought up. But I'm sure El Guapo (a Guy?) has his own kinky ideas!
More, Please!

Hugs,
Diane

Good start...

Perhaps in the next episode you can cover:
a) Vampiresses don't normally transform boys. So why Jamie? Was there something about him that made him a suitable candidate?
b) Vampire(ss) education? Rachel's had the first lesson (obtaining cans of blood using the special card) but (for example) what are the rules and regulations about introducing new members of the sisterhood? What about special abilities (Sara can evidently appear and disappear at will)?
c) Vampire(ss) socials? It would be logical for the local branch of the sisterhood to meet up occasionally...

 
 
--Ben


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As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!

nice

I thought the story had good flow. The early part sounded masculine but as his sex changed, the sentence structure became feminine. Nice job! You really captured girl talk quite well too. Keep writing!