A Gift From Santa Chapter 14

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December 2024 Change A Life Christmas Story Contest Entry


Chapter Fourteen

Chelsea and Max stayed hidden among the snow-covered trees, watching Jeremy with bated breath. The scene unfolding before them felt like it had been lifted straight from the storybook they'd given him. The old man worked diligently, chiseling delicate feathers into the ice bird's wings while Jeremy stood nearby, his arms crossed but his attention firmly fixed on the work.

At first, Jeremy simply watched. He shuffled his feet in the snow and occasionally glanced around as if expecting someone to interrupt. But as the minutes passed, he seemed to relax, stepping closer to the old man's side. He began asking questions, his voice cautious but curious.

"How do you make it look so real?" Jeremy asked, gesturing to the intricate details of the bird's wings.

The old man smiled, pausing his work to wipe his brow. "Patience, young man. It takes time and care. Each stroke of the chisel matters, just like each choice we make in life. They all add up to something bigger."

Jeremy frowned slightly, mulling over the words. After a moment, he reached out hesitantly. "Can I try?"

The old man's smile widened. "Of course." He handed Jeremy the chisel and stepped aside.

Jeremy held the tool awkwardly at first, unsure of how to grip it. The old man guided his hands, showing him the right angle to carve without splintering the ice. Slowly, Jeremy began to carve a small feather, his brows knitting together in concentration. The tip of his tongue poked out slightly as he worked, and for a moment, Chelsea and Max saw a glimpse of something they hadn't seen in him before: joy.

An hour passed as Jeremy continued to help the old man. Together, they carved the final details of the bird, smoothing its edges and giving its wings a lifelike curve. When it was done, Jeremy stepped back, his cheeks pink from the cold and his eyes bright.

"It's... it's really good," he said, almost to himself. His voice carried a note of pride that surprised even him.

The old man placed a hand on Jeremy's shoulder. "It's more than good. It's a gift, and you've made it with your own hands. Never forget what you're capable of, Jeremy."

Jeremy's smile faltered slightly, and he glanced down at the snow. He stayed quiet for a moment, then turned his head, his gaze landing on Chelsea and Max, who were still watching from a distance.

For a moment, his expression was unreadable. But then, to their astonishment, he smiled—a small, hesitant smile, but a genuine one. He waved them over.

Chelsea and Max exchanged stunned looks before stepping out from their hiding spot and walking toward him. When they reached the clearing, Jeremy stood awkwardly, the chisel still in his hand.

"Hey," he said, his voice softer than they'd ever heard it.

"Hey," Max replied, a cautious smile on his face. "That's amazing work. You helped make that?"

Jeremy nodded, glancing at the bird. "Yeah. The old man showed me how."

Chelsea's eyes sparkled as she looked at the carving. "It's beautiful. You did a really great job."

Jeremy shifted his weight, his cheeks flushing. "Listen," he began, his voice hesitant. "I... I wanted to say I'm sorry. For, you know, everything. The way I've acted. The stuff I've said. I... I didn't mean it. I was just... angry. At everything."

Chelsea and Max both froze, their eyes wide. They'd hoped for progress, but they hadn't expected this.

"You don't have to apologize," Chelsea said gently. "We understand. We've been there too."

Jeremy shook his head. "No. I do. I... I want to make things right. I want to apologize to the kids I messed with. And the shopkeeper. I... I'll pay for the bread I stole. I don't have much, but I'll figure it out."

Max's heart swelled, and he couldn't keep the grin off his face. "That's really brave of you, Jeremy. We're proud of you."

Jeremy looked at them, his expression a mix of relief and nervousness. "You really think I can fix things? After everything?"

Chelsea stepped closer, placing a hand on his shoulder. "We know you can. And we'll be here to help."

Jeremy's smile grew, and for the first time in what felt like forever, he didn't feel alone. The clearing seemed brighter, the cold air less biting. Together, the three of them stood, the ice bird gleaming in the sunlight behind them, a symbol of new beginnings.

The old man, quietly observing their conversation, stepped forward and placed a gentle hand on Jeremy's shoulder. "Remember, Jeremy, the world doesn't change all at once. It's one step at a time. You've already taken the first one."

Jeremy nodded, his expression serious. "What should I do next?"

Chelsea smiled, her eyes warm with encouragement. "We can start by visiting the shopkeeper. Let him know you're sorry and see how you can make things right."

Jeremy hesitated, his brows furrowing. "What if he doesn't forgive me?"

Max stepped forward, his voice steady. "That's not something you can control. What matters is that you try. Apologizing is about taking responsibility, not just being forgiven."

Jeremy let the words sink in, then gave a small nod. "Okay. I'll do it."

The old man's eyes twinkled with approval. "You're a good boy, Jeremy. Don't let anyone, not even yourself, tell you otherwise."

With that, the old man turned back to his carving tools and began working on a new piece of ice. Jeremy watched him for a moment, then turned to Chelsea and Max. "Let's go. I... I don't want to wait."

As they walked back toward the village, the three of them talked quietly, Jeremy opening up in ways he never had before. He spoke about the anger he carried, the loneliness that felt like it would never end. Chelsea and Max listened, sharing their own experiences and reassuring him that change, while hard, was possible.

When they reached the shop, Jeremy stopped just outside the door, his hands trembling slightly. Chelsea gave his shoulder a gentle squeeze. "You've got this. We're right here with you."

Jeremy took a deep breath and stepped inside.

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Sharing Their Experiences?

I wonder to what extent. The two of them got new bodies and have been promised new families. I wouldn't think they'd want Jeremy to expect the same.

Eric