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Chapter 09
Warmth.
That was the first sensation—a gentle, encompassing warmth that seemed to cradle consciousness itself. There was no body to feel it with, no skin to register temperature, just the pure essence of warmth wrapping around awareness like a mother's embrace.
Time had no meaning here. Perhaps it flowed like honey, thick and slow, or perhaps it had stopped entirely. Without a heart to beat or lungs to breathe, how could one measure the passing of moments?
Memories flickered like distant stars, more substantial now. Remi. That was the name—his name. It floated through the warmth like a leaf on water, carrying fragments of a life that seemed simultaneously immediate and ancient. His father's disappointed frown. His mother's worried eyes. Rachel's laughter echoing down the hallway. The weight of Andrew's D&D books spread across his bedroom floor. Johnny's excited rambling about the latest anime episode.
Each memory sparked others: the humiliation in the cafeteria, the fear in the bathroom, the long walk along the train tracks seeking escape. But here, in this warm darkness, even these painful memories lost their sting. They were simply scenes in a story that had reached its final chapter.
What would Rachel do when he didn't come home? Would she miss their bickering, their shared jokes, their quiet moments of sibling understanding? Would his mother blame herself, adding one more worry to her collection? Would his father finally realize that his rigid expectations had helped drive his son away?
But even these thoughts felt distant now, like watching ripples spread across a pond's surface from very far away. The warmth wrapped around him like a blanket, gently pulling him away from the person he had been.
Sound existed as gentle vibrations, muffled and indistinct. Sometimes they formed patterns that might have been voices, or perhaps they were just the cosmic background noise of existence itself. It didn't matter. Nothing mattered except this perfect, peaceful suspension.
Occasionally, other sensations would ripple through the warmth—gentle movements, subtle shifts in pressure, the faintest hint of something that might have been light filtering through the darkness. But these too were abstract, disconnected from any need to understand or interpret.
There was no fear here, no anxiety, no desperate need to run or hide or prove oneself worthy. Those concepts belonged to another existence, another story that had reached its end. Here, there was only peace and potential, like a seed waiting in fertile soil, neither awake nor truly sleeping.
The warmth pulsed sometimes with what might have been heartbeats, though whether they came from within or without was impossible to determine. They created a rhythm that needed no understanding, a music that spoke to something deeper than thought.
Awareness expanded and contracted like breathing, though there were no lungs to draw air. Sometimes it spread out so far that it seemed to touch the edges of everything, and sometimes it contracted to a single point of existence. In those contracted moments, fragments of his old life felt crystal clear: the way Tawnee's eyes crinkled when she smiled in chemistry class, the proud set of his father's shoulders before disappointment became his default expression, the exact shade of blue that Rachel had painted her bedroom walls despite their mother's protests.
But with each expansion, those specific memories dissolved into something larger, something that transcended individual moments and emotions. He was both Remi and something more—or perhaps something less, stripped down to pure potential, floating in infinite space.
There was no rush to change, no pressure to become. This was a space of pure being, of existence without expectation. Time meant nothing. Identity meant nothing. There was only the warmth, the gentle pressure, the floating, and the perfect peace of potential.
Sometimes, very faintly, there would be other presences—similar sparks of awareness floating in their own cocoons of warmth. They were neither close nor far, as distance had no meaning here, but their existence was somehow comforting, like stars sharing the vast darkness of space.
And so awareness floated, neither awake nor asleep, neither being nor becoming, suspended in the perfect moment between what was and what would be. No thoughts disturbed this peace, no memories demanded attention, no future called for preparation.
There was only now.
Only warmth.
Only peace.
Only potential.
And somewhere, in a reality that operated on different rules entirely, an egg rocked gently in its nest, cradling a transformation that would bridge worlds and change destinies.
But here, in the space between, there was only the eternal moment of becoming.
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End of Chapter 09
Chapter 10 - Intermission
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Chapter 10: BOSTON HERALD
*Thursday, October 17, 2024*
RAILWAY INCIDENT RAISES QUESTIONS
Student Found Unconscious After Train Conductor Reports Strike
BOSTON — A local high school student was discovered unconscious near the railway tracks in the industrial district Tuesday evening after a train conductor reported a possible collision. Railway maintenance worker Thomas Jenkins found the severely injured teenager while investigating the conductor's report.
"I was checking the section of track where the conductor reported the incident," Jenkins stated. "Found him about thirty feet from the rails. No one else around, which struck me as odd given the time of day."
Detective Sarah Martinez confirmed that while the cause of the injuries appears consistent with a train collision, other aspects of the scene have raised questions. "We're particularly interested in speaking with any witnesses who may have left the area before emergency services arrived," she stated.
The incident has deeply affected the local community. "He was a quiet student, always kind to others," said one teacher who requested anonymity. "The empty seat in class serves as a constant reminder, and we're all hoping for his recovery."
Medical staff at Boston General Hospital report the student remains in a comatose state following treatment for severe trauma. Authorities are asking anyone who may have been in the industrial district between 6:45 and 7:30 PM on Tuesday to contact the police department with any information about the circumstances leading up to the accident.
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MUSEUM HEIST SPARKS CULTURAL CONTROVERSY
Beastkin Community Leaders Condemn "Deeply Offensive" Theft
In a separate incident that has inflamed local tensions, three individuals were apprehended Tuesday night following a brazen attempted theft at the Museum of Natural History. The suspects, whose names are being withheld pending formal charges, allegedly attempted to steal several artifacts while wearing what museum officials described as "culturally inappropriate Beastkin costumes."
"This incident goes beyond simple theft," stated Dr. Elena Rodriguez, the museum's curator. "The deliberate mimicry of Beastkin cultural elements represents a profound disrespect to our diverse community."
The Beastkin Cultural Association released a statement condemning the incident: "The appropriation of our identity for criminal activities reinforces harmful stereotypes that our community continues to fight against. We call for these actions to be treated with the seriousness they deserve."
The suspects face multiple charges, including third-degree theft and hate crime enhancements under the Cultural Preservation Act of 2018. Museum officials have announced increased security measures and sensitivity training for all staff members.
Local authorities have noted a concerning uptick in similar incidents across the greater Boston area, though they maintain there is no evidence linking these events to any organized movement.
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End of Ch 10 - Intermission
Chapter 11: Emergence
The first crack shattered the perfect silence.
Remi's consciousness, so long suspended in peaceful warmth, jolted at the sound. It resonated through the confined space, followed by a rush of cooler air that carried strange new scents—earth and stone and something wild that defied description.
Another crack, and light filtered through the breach—dim and diffuse, but shocking after so long in darkness. The peaceful cocoon was breaking down, the shelter of suspended existence giving way to urgent, insistent life. Muscles that hadn't existed in the void flexed instinctively, pushing against the weakening barrier.
Around him, other cracking sounds echoed through the darkness. Through the growing fissures in whatever enclosed him, Remi caught glimpses of movement—dark shapes breaking free from similar oval enclosures, emerging into a world that smelled of earth and ancient stone. Their movements were confident, instinctive, as if they'd always known exactly how to break free from these shell-like prisons.
The urgency to join them built like a wave. This wasn't like fighting through the paralysis of a nightmare or the heavy lethargy of oversleeping. This was something deeper, more primal—a cellular knowledge of exactly how to move, how to push, how to break free of this shell that had been sanctuary and prison.
With a final decisive crack, the shell split. Cool air rushed in, bringing with it a flood of sensations too intense to process. The ground beneath him was rough stone, worn smooth in places by the passage of massive bodies. The air carried layers of scent—mineral and organic, ancient and new, all mixing together in a symphony his brain struggled to decode.
As his vision cleared, Remi became aware of his body—a body both familiar and utterly foreign. Pale skin, still damp from the egg's interior, felt hypersensitive to every brush of air. The hands, when he managed to lift them, were smaller than he remembered, belonging to someone much younger than he had been. And the hair that fell forward into view was a startling shade of rust-red he had never worn before. Something felt different—wrong?—about his body, but in the overwhelming flood of sensations, he couldn't quite grasp what had changed.
Movement drew his attention. five strange creatures were already exploring their surroundings on sturdy legs. Unlike his human form, they were like nothing he had ever seen before: six-legged beings with bodies built low to the ground, covered in overlapping brown scales that seemed to shift color slightly with each movement. Their tails ended in heavy, mace-like clubs that they swung with increasing confidence as they moved about.
One of them noticed him watching and turned to study him with eyes that held an intelligence far beyond what he would have expected from a newly hatched creature. It made a sound—not quite a growl, not quite a chirp—that seemed to vibrate through his bones.
Then everything shifted as something massive descended from above. An enormous head, larger than any creature Remi had ever seen, moved into view. It was covered in brown scales worn into subtle patterns of ridges and whorls, suggesting immense age. Ancient gold eyes, each larger than Remi's entire head, fixed upon him with an awareness that seemed to peer straight into his soul.
Remi's first instinct was raw terror. Every muscle tensed, preparing to flee from this impossibly huge creature. But something deeper than instinct held him in place—a strange, inexplicable sense of recognition that transcended conscious thought. Despite all logic screaming at him to run, he felt safe. He felt... home.
The great head moved closer, and a tongue longer than Remi's entire body flicked out to gently clean away the last of the egg fluid. The sensation should have been terrifying or disgusting, but instead it felt right—a familiar comfort he hadn't known he was missing.
One of the creatures bumped against his side, nearly knocking him over. Another made that strange chirping growl, which seemed somehow welcoming despite its alien nature. They accepted his presence without question, seeing nothing strange about this two-legged being in their midst, so different from their own six-legged, armored forms.
Remi's mind struggled to make sense of it all. He remembered being someone else—a high school student with homework and family drama and social anxiety. He remembered the train tracks, the stranger's reach, the moment of transition. But those memories felt increasingly distant, like a story he'd read about someone else.
This was real now: the cool stone beneath his feet, the lingering dampness on his skin, the presence of these strange creatures who seemed to accept him as one of their own, and above all, the watchful protection of the massive being above them. Whatever he had been before, he was here now—reborn into something entirely new and utterly beyond his previous understanding.
One of the young creatures tugged at his arm with a clawed limb, urging him to join their exploration. Remi took a hesitant step, then another, learning the balance of this younger body. The massive being above them rumbled—a sound that vibrated through the stone itself—not words exactly, but somehow Remi understood it as approval and protection.
As Remi moved into the loose circle of the young creatures, their chirps and growls surrounding him like welcome, he felt the last threads of his old identity begin to dissolve. He wasn't exactly Remi anymore, but he wasn't sure what he was becoming. Everything familiar had slipped away, replaced by something alien and incomprehensible, yet somehow feeling right. He was lost between what he had been and what he was now, with no idea of what that might mean.
The massive creature settled onto its haunches, watching its strange brood with ancient, knowing eyes. Whatever Remi was, whatever he would become, he was part of this group now. He was family. He was home.
And in the deep caves beneath the mountain, as six young beings began the first tentative steps of their new existence, the wheel of destiny turned just a fraction further toward a future none of them could yet imagine.
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End of Chapter 11
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You nearly had me crying again…….
With chapter 9 - yes, what would his sister do without him? How would his mother react? Would this become the straw that broke her back? Knowing as she did how troubled her son was, and knowing that her husband was making it worse - and she sat back and watched helplessly?
Add in chapter 10, and the additional trauma that finding Remi’s traumatized and comatose body must have added to his friends and family…….. yeah, almost lost it. Maybe Remi’s father will finally wake up when he hears how friends and teachers describe him - but I doubt it. Assholes like that never seem to learn anything, even after it’s too late for the lessons to do any good.
Now chapter 11 intrigues me. Six legged beings with club-like tails? And a dragon perhaps? But why one egg with a human (apparently Remi is now a girl), and the rest are some different creature?
D. Eden
“Hier stehe ich; ich kann nicht anders. Gott helfe mir.”
Dum Vivimus, Vivamus
Trust me, I totally
Trust me, I totally understand. I SOOOO wanna take Rachel along for the ride. And to those left behind? Trust me, the sads... the very sads....
So, the TG element is the rebirth of course. And the others are just in the clutch. Eventually? It will be resolved. Eventually. Just like so many of those Isekei novels, lit novels, and Manga on these.