Don't Forget The Glitter Part-1

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Don't Forget The Glitter!
Part One

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Enemyoffun

After getting punished for a fight he didn't start, Taylor's life has taken a turn for the weird. First it was strange dreams then it was a bizarre feeling that something isn't right. Now he's constantly cold and can't figure out why.
But these things are just the beginning of his problems.

Author's NoteHey its been a long time, bet no one thought they'd be hearing from me again, at least story wise LOL. Sorry for the VERY long absence but life has sucked majorly and frankly its NOT getting any better anytime soon. I want to do something besides wallowing in my own self pity though, so I figured I'd try jumpstarting my dwindling passion again. There are only 3 fully written chapters of this so far, so I can't promise much or many active updates but I'll try. Sorry the first chapter is so short :( Also I'd like to thank my beta readers :D

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1.

“Don’t forget the glitter, Cassie!”

I could hear them from the bleachers, even though I was trying my hardest not to. The girls were louder than they should have been, talking, laughing, giggling. I rolled my eyes and tried to hide behind my iPad. I was hoping to get a little more work done before heading home. I just got this scene where I wanted it. It was little use though. I could already see Brittany Clarke glaring at me. She didn’t want me here and I definitely didn’t want to be here. Neither of us had a choice in the matter though. I didn’t blame her for being angry though. Hell, I didn't blame myself for being angry either. The person I blamed was Donny Duncan. All of this was Donny’s fault. It all started last week and all Donny had to do was leave me alone. Donny’s problem was like most of the Assholes at our school, he just couldn’t help himself.

After the fight and the two of us ended up in the principal’s office, my father was called in. His glare had said it all. He was pissed at me for being me. When we got home that night, he chewed me out for not “being man enough”. That was his usual insult. Well, one of them. “Girly Boy” was another favorite of his. I was short, thin and soft-featured. The fact that I liked to wear my near-bleach-blonde hair at my shoulders made me less of a man to him. After several years of his verbal abuse, dealing with Donny was easy. He was a Neanderthal. When he threw the first punch after I insulted him, I was ready for it. I dodged it, he punched Jessica Smith in the back of the head and that was the end of that.

Of course Mrs. Haines saw it all. That’s how I ended up in trouble too. The school had a zero tolerance policy concerning fighting. It didn’t matter that Donny started it. I was involved so I got the attention detention too. Whereas Donny managed to work out his punishment with Coach Franks, I ended up with a far worse fate: dance committee.

“Taylor, are you just going to sit there!?”

Brittany was now talking to me it seemed.

I sighed. I set my iPad down, wondering what torture she was going to put me through today.

“You three seem like you have this one under control.”

She grunted. “Look you don’t want to be here anymore than I actually want you here. You do however have to help us.”

The “help” they were seeking was on posters.

More specifically, glittery, frilly-looking posters advertising the upcoming Halloween Dance. Last week they announced that the theme for the dance this year would be The Fairy Forest. Something I’m sure most of the girls voted on and most of the boys didn’t really give a damn. I was one of them. While I was forced to join the committee for the next couple of weeks, I had no real intention of helping. Especially when I came home last night with glitter all over me. As soon as Dad saw it, he freaked even more. He went on an hour-long rant about how “boys shouldn’t...” Blah, blah, blah. I tuned most of it out. My mother and older sister tuned most of it too. They generally ignored Dad when he flipped on me like that. My parents laid down the ground rules early in life. As a boy, I was my Dad’s responsibility. So he was in charge of punishing me, he was in charge of lecturing. It was his job to raise me “right”. Mom took care of Alexis. They felt it was fair. It probably would have been if I’d been the kind of son that Dad wanted.

Newsflash, I wasn’t.

Bigger newsflash, I didn’t care.

In two years, I’d be eighteen, then I’d be gone. We started college prep courses last week, and I was already planning on going to one out of state. There were a lot of decent scholarships I was looking into as well. I was done with my family and done with this tiny little town. Now I just had to wait two more years for this town to finally be done with me.

“Taylor!”

I sighed even louder. Instead of leaving my iPad on the bleacher where I was certain it would get damaged, I stuffed it into my backpack as I slung it on my shoulder. Better safe than sorry. I could have left all of it just sitting there, but I didn’t trust this place anymore. Even though the gymnasium was deserted save the small group of us, one could never be too careful. Lowering your guard was never smart around this place. Donny had taught me that. I wasn’t just a target of opportunity to him, I was the bullseye he always hit in his game of life darts.

Trying not to think about Donny and his bullying, I begrudgingly stomped over to the small circle formed in the middle of the Gym. Brittney was still glaring, the others were barely paying attention. I only knew a few of them by name, the rest were cheerleaders and student council. None of which were in any of my social circles. Not that I really had a circle, unless Loner counted. I had no true friends to speak of and at lunch, I generally ate in the Quad, under a tree as far away from everyone else that I could. I honestly preferred it that way. I had a problem connecting with people. My mother blamed herself. I blamed other people.

“What do you need me to do?”

I was already annoyed.

So was Brittany apparently.

She huffed. I get it, she didn’t want me here. She already told me that, twice. This was definitely not how I wanted to spend my after school hours. I had planned on drawing more of my comic. As it was now, I barely made a dent on the new page. I’d only been working on it for the past month or so. What had once been nothing more than an itch in the back of my mind was slowly starting to become all I could think about these days. What’s worse, it was starting to invade my dreams too. It was strange really. Before last month, I never had such ideas. Then one night shortly after my sixteenth birthday, the dreams started. First once every few days then almost every night. They weren’t just normal dreams either. They felt so vivid and real, almost as if…

“You’re an artist, right?”

Brittany again, I forgot we were talking.

“How do you know that?”

She huffed, hands on her hips. “I’m not an idiot you know, I see you doodling in class.”

Yes, I did draw in class but I sat in the back of the room, in the farthest corner from the door. Brittany was an overachiever, she sat in the front row. How could she possibly know what I did in the back of the room?

She didn’t wait for me to respond. “You draw those fairies, right?”

Fairies? How could she possibly know that.

Unless…

Donny.

That’s how I got here in the first place after all. Donny caught me drawing fairies. Well more specifically he caught me drawing one fairy. Her name was Maela and as much as I’d like to take credit for creating her, she came from my dreams. I’m not even sure if she was a Fairy to be honest. She did have glittery wings like one but she was human sized. Donny only caught me drawing her because I’d been careless. You see, in my dream Maela resembled me in that she had white blonde hair and striking blue eyes. I didn’t intentionally draw her to look like me but Donny saw me drawing over my shoulder and of course jumped to conclusions. He made a crack about me “being a fairy after all”, I made some comment about him being a “neanderthal” and that’s when he threw the punch. I’m not even sure how I dodged it, I have horrible reflexes.

The rest ended me here.

“Donny has a big mouth.” I finally mumbled.

Brittany laughed. “Donny? He didn’t say a damn thing. Everyone knows what you draw, you doodle them all over the place.”
What?
“I don’t know...”

She cut me off with a hand in my face. “I don’t give a shit. Look I just need you to draw two of them.” She was holding one of their posters. “Here and here.”

I looked where she was pointing, it was on either side of The Fairy Forest Dance, written in some elegant flowing script.

“I’m not sure...”

“Look it's the only reason the Principal put you here. I told him what I needed and he did it. Now do your job, then you can leave.”

So that’s how it was.

Brittany didn’t give me a chance to respond. Instead, she snapped around, almost hitting me in the face with that long red single braid of hers. That thing could be registered as a deadly weapon.

I followed her to the group, dragging my feet the whole way.

I was a Loner by choice. It's not that people hadn’t tried being friends with me in the past, it's just that I wasn’t all that interested. Most of the guys that tried were only interested in a few things, mostly video games and talking about girls. It's not that I hated either, it's just I didn’t think about them all the time. Sure I played games but I didn’t live and breathe them like I was apparently supposed to. I had a look and as such there were certain things expected of me. Those things were different depending on who was talking to me. I was feminine and soft so clearly I was a sissy and gay to most of the jocks. I was quiet and kept to myself, so I was a freak to many others. I dressed in skinny jeans, a hoodie and carried an iPad with me everywhere, so I must be a gamer.

Lots of labels.

Lots of misconceptions.

When I finally reached the group, none of them even acknowledged me.

Well, except for one.

I stopped and blinked.

Mel?

She was the last person I was expecting to find here. We were in Art together. We weren’t friends per se but we sat next to each other. She was cool to be around because she was the kind of person who didn’t take crap from anyone and always had some outlandish stories to tell. Her older brother was some kind of extreme sports junkie and kept getting into all of these messed up accidents. They were usually really painful but she always put her own snarky spin on them to make them fun and interesting. I never in a million years expected to find her here. She just wasn’t the type.

When she saw me, she looked just as surprised.

Brittany shot a thumb in my direction. “You all know Taylor, right?”

Some of the girls mumbled something but most didn’t seem to care one way or another.

“He’s gonna draw some fairies on our posters for us.”

Brittany then proceeded to grabbed a few of the mostly finished posters and found me my own spot, away from them.

Fine by me.

She gave me some really cheap colored pencils and markers and set me to work.

It wasn’t long before I found myself not alone.

Mel dropped onto the floor next to me. When she spoke, they were words almost out of my mouth:

“You are the last person I expected to see here.” she said it with a laugh.

When she did, I got a good look at her tongue piercing.

Yep she was that girl.

It wasn’t her only facial piercing either. There was one in her lip, a stud in her nose and one in her left eyebrow. She had several in each ear too. I wouldn’t call her punk, she once described herself as “Alternative” and I suppose it fit her well enough. Her neon green hair was cut short and shaved on one side. There was a tattoo of an eyeball there. It looked weird and a bit out of place but that was Mel. She embraced the weird whenever she could. Her makeup was dark, her clothes a mismatch of different fashions, today was a long sleeve striped shirt, tartan mini-skirt with ripped blue leggings, and black combat boots. There were a lot of tats that her clothes hid as well, I’d seen them from time to time. Each one as bizarre and as crazy as the next.

I’m not sure why we didn’t hang out actually.

She was my kind of weirdo.

I finally shrugged. “Didn’t have much of a choice.”

“Oh yeah, I saw that shit yesterday.”

I completely forgot that Mel was in my Math class too, where the “incident” took place.

I didn’t really know what to say, so I didn’t say anything. Instead, I tried using the crap that Brittany gave me to draw with but finally gave up after only a few tries. These pencils were horrible and the markers had fat tips, making them all wrong to get the finer details. Groaning, I went rummaging through my pack, hoping that I brought my stuff from home. I generally didn’t carry my good pens with me anymore because most of my drawing I did on my ‘pad now. Sometimes though, I kept the pens in my pack for class. I had to shift a few things, take some stuff out before I found them.

“Hey, you still drawing these?”.

I turned, Mel was holding one of my notebooks. How had she gotten it so fast?

I tried to take it away from her but she pulled it out of my reach.

“What are these things anyway?”

The “things” as she called them were just doodles. I drew them all the time. At first they were nonsensical things I just started drawing a couple of years ago. I thought they were silly at first. I used to daydream and doodle them into page margins and things. Lately though, I’d found myself drawing them more and more. They were getting a lot more elaborate too. First they were squiggles but now they were these complex caricatures that were starting to look like some foreign alphabet. They weren’t though, I looked them up. I spent hours googling but couldn’t find a thing. That didn’t deter me from drawing them though, so I decided to put them in a notebook. I thought maybe I could use them as some weirdo language in my comic. I was even starting to form them into reasonable words.

“Its just some language I made up for the comic I’m doing.” I said, finally managing to wrestle the book from her hands.

“Oh cool, can I see it?”

I hesitated before shaking my head.

I didn’t let anyone see my comic.

“That’s cool, I’m pretty private about my stuff too.”

She liked to talk though, that much I knew from class. I was a person of few words and was generally bothered by people like her. There was something about Mel though, something that put me to ease when I was around her. Maybe it was her stories or maybe she was one of those chill, lax people that I didn’t mind being around. Regardless, her talking didn’t annoy me. Instead, I always found myself working through it. Even now, as I sat cross-legged, sketching out my fairy, I listened to her talk. I liked to sketch things out before doing anything permanent. Usually I did that to music but with Mel here, I felt it kinda rude to put in my ear buds. So instead, I used her voice as my distraction. I let her words wash over me as I worked. It didn’t take me long. I drew out a few crude little fairies before I settled on one I felt worked. It wasn’t my greatest work but it wasn’t meant to be. Brittany hadn’t asked for a masterpiece, just something for some cheap posters.

As soon as my sketch was finished, I quickly set to work putting it to the poster.

The first one took about ten minutes.

I smiled when it was done.

“A pixie?” asked Mel, looking at it over my shoulder.

“It's a fairy.”

She scrunched her nose. “Fairies look like that?”

What did she mean by that?

I looked at my drawing. It was of an elegant looking woman in a simple long gown, with long flowing hair and butterfly-like wings. I even made her bending at the waist, her hands pointing at the words. Sure she didn’t look like something out of Disney but she was a fairy.

“What are fairies supposed to look like, if you’re such an expert?”

She took a moment, was about to open her mouth when we were interrupted:

“That’s AWESOME!”

Brittany.

She had apparently come over to see what was taking me so long. I think she was expecting to chew me out but when she saw the poster, her scowl disappeared. She was now practically beaming. I couldn’t help but smile, it was good to see that someone appreciated my hard work. She really did too. She kept praising me over and over again for a good five minutes. She stood by while I added an identical figure to the other side of the words, so both fairies were flanking the dance’s name just like she wanted.

She was ecstatic.

She took the poster from me as soon as I was done and quickly rushed over to the other girls.

I could hear the ooo’s and ahh’s.

It felt nice.

Mel scoffed, giving my shoulder a bump as I packed up my things.

“Looks like they’re happy.”

I gave her a smug look.

“Well at least they know what a fairy looks like.”

She didn’t have a rebuttal. Instead she stuck her hands into the pockets of her hoodie, shrugged and wandered back off. Just like that, she wasn’t interested in me anymore. I shrugged it off, used to it by now. I drew an audience when I was drawing sometimes. I mostly ignored it. I think Mel was just looking for some company and it was nice to have her around. Like I said though, we weren’t friends. Just as well too, Mel was great but only in small doses. I’m not sure I could stand being around her all the time.

The meeting broke up shortly after. Apparently we only had a limited time to use the Gym. The dance wasn’t until the next weekend after all, we still had a few days before our decorations needed to be done. As per my punishment, I was in it for the rest of the long haul. Which meant I’d be here after school for the next week or so. Not that I really had anything else to do. I knew my Dad was going to be pissed though. I was pretty sure he thought it was going to be a one-time thing. He liked to drag me to the garage as soon as I was done with my homework. It was all a part of his “education”. It was a waste of my time but at least it kept him off my back most of the time.

As I was leaving, I overheard Brittany talking to some of the others, but I didn’t stick around long enough to listen. She did ask me to finish up the rest of the posters tomorrow, which I agreed to. I left the Gym, meandered down the short hallway to one of the nearby exits. It opened up into the west parking lot, now deserted. As soon as I stepped out the door, I was hit by a fierce gust of wind.

I shivered.

It was starting to get cold these last few days.

Not unheard of for late October but kinda surprising.

I thought for sure the forecast said it was supposed to be sunny and warm until the weekend?

Shrugging it off, I pulled my hood over my head and started the mile or so trek home.

Looks like Winter was coming early after all.

Elsewhere

It watched.
It waited.
It listened.

Author’s note: As I’m sure all of you know, comments are life blood to an author. I’m not begging or demanding, but I certainly would appreciate anything you have to say (or ask). It doesn’t have to be long and involved, just give me your reaction to the story. Anything critical you have to say, PLEASE do so in a PM. Pointing out people's flaws or mistakes in a comment is hurtful and NOT appreciated.Thanks in advance...EOF

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That could ACTUALLY be me! Well, except, I’ve always been l a r g e, I’m now pretty OLD, I can’t draw to save my life and the ‘cool’ people have NEVER talked to me, but outside of those handicaps, it really could be me.

sincerely,

An Avid Reader

Addendum

Oh, and my name is NOT Taylor, either.

Hey Bonus time! I got first comment!!!

An Avid Reader

Artist

Enemyoffun's picture

I dabbled with art in highschool but it was more cartoony and by the time I thought I was really serious about it, I decided I wanted to be a writer instead.

Thats a pixie......

well at least she didn't call it a sprite. Im hedging my bets on Taylor actually being a fairy. That strange language he has been writing is probably elven or another fae language. If his writing in elvish is getting more advanced his awakening is nigh. Im hooked please remember to feed your muse so we don't have to wait so long. Im glad you are back with a new story.....
thank you

EllieJo Jayne

Pixie? Fairy?

Enemyoffun's picture

The bigger question is: Why does Mel think she's an expert?

The biggest question

When did she say or imply that she was an expert. Going by some small amount of research that I've done, the appearance of faries, pixies, sprites and such is pretty vague; and depends mostly on the artist's mood.

Damaged people are dangerous
They know they can survive

That Is The Question :D

Enemyoffun's picture

Going by her words alone, its clear she thinks fairies and pixies are different things.

It could be that Mel saw a

It could be that Mel saw a few images of fairies in cartoons or movies in her childhood and they somehow stuck in her mind. So that would make her a wannabe expert.

Seeing Fairies?

Enemyoffun's picture

I'm sure its pretty close to that. I know I've seen a lot in TV and movies :)

Thanks

Enemyoffun's picture

This story will be "cool" throughout :D

A good start to an intresting story

Samantha Heart's picture

Welcome back stranger lol. Anyway this story.... has a VERY VERY Intresting start to it. Look forward to see where you take this. Although I might have an idea where this is leading :).

Love Samantha Renée Heart.

Ideas

Enemyoffun's picture

Its always fun to guess at the start :D

Interesting exposition.

Beoca's picture

Interesting exposition. Reminders me of a number of Jennifer Sue's protagonists (particularly with the interest and talent in art). Curious to see where this goes.

High Praise

Enemyoffun's picture

I'm in good company then :)

Welcome back. Glad to see

Welcome back. Glad to see your muse is alive and well and inspiring more of your excellent storytelling. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, as I am sure everyone else is also.

My Muse

Enemyoffun's picture

She is a fickle mistress :D

Changeling?

Good start so far. I look forward to the rest.

Ooh I didn't think of that...

I was just assuming a recessive trait becoming more prominent but a changeling is a better explanation..... perhaps one who had their true gender sealed so they could be hidden away longer.

EllieJo Jayne

Changelings

Enemyoffun's picture

The idea has always fascinated me actually. Especially since it was never able to be fully explored in a certain universe of mine :)

Great Start!

Great start! Good to see you posting again! Looking forward to the next chapters!

Next Chapter

Enemyoffun's picture

It should be some time next week I think

Glad to see you

crash's picture

Glad to see you writing and posting. I love your work. Great dialog. Wonderful characters, Interesting situations. Some fun metaphors. From here it looks like this is gong to be a two worlds story. I'm looking forward to seeing some of Taylor's dreams too. And then of course the inevitable bleed over between the two.

I'll be looking forward to your next posting.
Crescenda

AKA

Your friend
Crash

New Worlds

Enemyoffun's picture

I'm excited to bring this story to life and have some interesting plans for it :D

Interesting start,

looking forward to finding out where you are taking us with this tale.
Feed the muse!

Stay safe
T

Hungry Beast

Enemyoffun's picture

She's a hungry beast and has been impatiently waiting :D

Good start

This looks interesting can’t wait to see how it develops. I’m guessing he isn’t human and neither is Mel. I wonder if Taylor is a Changeling and Mel their guardian or something.

hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Guesses

Enemyoffun's picture

Lots of guesses LOL

Great start

Amethyst's picture

I'm glad to see you posting this, or anything really. I liked the first little bit of the chapter that you showed me when you started on it and I really enjoyed what you've done with it in this first chapter. I can't wait to see more.

*big hugs*

Amethyst

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Don't take me too seriously. I'm just kitten around. :3

A Long Long Time Ago...

Enemyoffun's picture

I'm just glad you were able to use that other title and find some great success with it :D

may with each day..

Your sense of wellness return..
Been recently missing your writings.

alissa

Wellness

Enemyoffun's picture

I'm not sure how long its gonna take to return honestly :(

Nice to have you back

Great to see your writing again . I am fascinated waiting for the first big question. Not who is Mel but What is Mel?

Mel

Enemyoffun's picture

So you think she's something more than she's letting on? Interesting? ;)

Welcome back E!

Patrick Malloy's picture

I think I'm going to enjoy this one.

Patrick Malloy

Thanks :)

Enemyoffun's picture

I've been wanting to write something like this for awhile now :D

Happy to see you return, and

Happy to see you return, and very interested in seeing where this goes.

Why do I have a feeling that those 'squiggles' are going to be important, as will the 'dreams'. Not to mention Maela being closer to a certain someone than they thought.

Let the flames of inspiration blaze within, and the sky be less of a limit, and more of a challenge

Dreams

Enemyoffun's picture

A dream is already important and in this story, you'll see why they're really important too :D

interesting beginning

I haven't been onsite much lately, but great to see you writing. thanks

Site

Enemyoffun's picture

I haven't been on here much lately either :(

EOF is back!

And it's shaping up to be a great story too. As usual I have no idea where its going, and that's fine with me.

On a much more important note, I do hope (and pray) that your personal situation improves. You've been struggling for quite a while.

Voldy

Personal Stuff

Enemyoffun's picture

Its a better situation than it was before but some stuff happened to get here and I'm still dealing with that emotionally and probably will be for awhile.

I'm glad you're enjoying this little distraction of mine so far :D

Labels are a bane

Jamie Lee's picture

Some parents just can't let their children develop their own interests, they have to try and force their children into a mold the parents believe SHOULD be.

Taylor's parents are responsible for Taylor's ambivalence for others. Assigning one parent to handle one child, while the other parent handles the other child, prevents both children from learning from both parents. Taylor only learned male things from his dad, never learning the female side of things. Likewise, the same occurred to his sister. And had dad work with his daughter, he might have found she was more interested in dad things that Taylor.

Taylor's school has an unfair policy when it comes to fighting. Verbal sparing isn't fighting, so Donnie should have been the only one punished after he threw the punch. Was Taylor, or any other student, not supposed to not react when a punch is thrown at them? Or defend themselves when necessary?

Doodling is actually good training for the mind. It allows the mind to freely develop ideas that, in Taylor's case, go towards his comic. But why Fairies? And what are the reoccurring dreams he keeps having? And how might it all relate to his life?

Others have feelings too.

Doodling

Enemyoffun's picture

I did a lot of doodling before I became a writer. At first I thought it was what I wanted to do with my life but I got bit by the writing bug in high school and haven't gone back. Though I still doodle from time to time :D.

I'm guessing that ...

Jezzi Stewart's picture

Taylor is a princess of Fairy placed on Earth in some sort of Fae witness protection program that has kept her there as him for much longer than was anticipated. Puberty may be fueling the slow undoing of the FWPP SystemicProgramEntered: Lowly Lad (S.P.E.L.L.) allowing S.P.E.: Lovely Lady to emerge.
Welcome Back and keep up the excellent work.

BE a lady!

Interesting

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I guess we'll see if you're right or not ;)