Charli(e) Wilder Saga?

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I left this, pretty discouraged by lack of feedback.

Charli has been accepted at an exclusive girls school as a transgender girl. But she is questioning whether she is really transgender. She is wondering how she can sample boyhood from the position she is in. She has a session of basketball and video games scheduled with a group of slightly older public schoolboys. But the boy who invited her doesn't know her transgender status and wants her as a girlfriend. Charlie wants him as a boyfriend.

Charli will be starting his first day of school in 11th grade at age 14, due to the home schooling his mothers gave him. There is an agreement to conceal her transgender status, to help make friends.

Additional story lines:

Changing from isolated rural home to big city.

Adopting surrogate transgender grandmother.

Friendship with genderfluid biological female.

Keep her transgender phycologist, whose home she is living in, from overmanaging her life. Complicated by fact phycologist is romancing her mom and is her biological father.

Watching over her younger sister.

Confrontation with bully.

I feel somewhat guilty leaving readers with an unfinished story with so many loose ends, but I could use some encouragement.

An alternative would be more with my characters from Roses, Rose and Cindy/Steve Greene and Robert/Rose and Amy White. Storylines I have in mind here are: Rose and Cindy presenting "Making Crossdressing Work in Marriage" and Cindy presenting "Gender Euphoria" at another conference.

I would like some feedback on what readers would prefer. Please PM me your preferences and suggestions for additional story lines.

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0.25tspgirl's picture

While continuing any of those would be good, I have been following poor Charli/e with amused interest.

BAK 0.25tspgirl

Hope You'll Continue...

...with Charli. Kids like Charli (and Tuck) who straddle the gender divide really appeal to me. As you noted, you've set up a lot of potential subplots; hope to see where you take them.

Eric

I enjoyed ...

... reading about Charli(e). It's nice to so a story about someone who isn't especially interested in identifying as a boy or a girl. I can relate to having difficulty continuing a story. But, if you ever decide to write more about Charli(e), I'd definitely like to read it! :)