LIke, I mean if I send you the chapters and you can read it for me and tell me some of the problems you see in it
I have part of chapter 4 written. Theres some things I still dont like and will have to redue those parts to make them better and im starting to see some of the problems with my writing already. But, when I finish this chapter, is there anyone who would want to read through it for me and help me identify problems I missed
I am writing Natashas Story,
its set in the star Wars universe. I am a big geek and love Star Wars
Sure
I'll read it for you if you would like.
If you use google doc's you can share it with me and I can comment and make suggestions without actually changing anything. You just reject anything you don't want to change.
As I said...
...in the comments on Chapter 3, I am also prepared to help you in any way I can.
I just hate seeing it when a new writer struggle and one can lend a hand in their growth to becoming a great writer.
Again though your choice in the end.
Pm me if you want to.
Later, have a fabulous day now.
but it is the rare moments of beauty and peace
in between the chaos,
That makes it worth living."
- Tertia Hill
Beta reading
Sure,
How can I acquire a copy of the file?