Yey I posted my first story here and I am wondering if anyone would like to help me

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I know it seriously needs proofread and edited. If anyone could please
If you have read it you know it is going to go to very bad places. It deals with war the third reich and treatment of jews. So I dont know if anyone will want to deal with this or ask me to remove it tell me what you think