Everyone has probably notice that Angela's Legacy has been lagging behind and I have a few reasons. First and foremost, I want to point out that for a group of readers that claim to hate forced fem, Chapter 1, which was nothing but torture porn and forced fem has gotten a LOT of views. 3300 or so. What the hell, guys?
Secondly, I've decided to give Angela's Legacy a rewrite because it can honestly be better. It's a good idea that needs a lot of refining, which is why you can find it over at Wattpad under the name 'Children of Eaves'. It's going to be a lot longer this time, and a lot more interesting. You should like it, unless you're that person who left negative reviews constantly and then informed me via PM that you're sworn to fight the people I write about and that no one could possibly enjoy these types of stories. You know who you are, stop policing what people write.
Woodcrest, Allison, and Makayla will continue as normal.
Have a great day!
Comments
I suspect that the people
I suspect that the people that really enjoy forced fem/torture aren't likely to have accounts or even post here as the "I'm a coward" guest user.
The other is that unless you have a really good synopsis to start, the only way to know what a story is going to be is to open the first chapter - even if you never finish more than three lines.
As for the person 'sworn to fight'? Obviously they aren't serious about it; if they were, they wouldn't have time to be here and complain at authors.
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
wot she said
First chapters almost always get a lot of hits as everyone is curious as to the story etc, etc.
For those, like myself who aren't into that stuff we probably won't back.
I follow some tales, others i've not got beyond the first paragraph before dumping them, here on BC they both rate a 'read' point.
Madeline Anafrid Bell
We're smart (mostly)
Sometimes a story starts off "rough" and then morphs into an entirely different beast. For example, I was somewhat shocked by the first chapter of "Foreign Influence" by Monique S but once past the first chapter the story turned into something much more interesting.
Yours seemed to be evolving in much the same way, ie once the initial shock has worn off, there is some good development along the lines of, "fine, we have our protagonist backed into a corner, what does she do now?" From what I have read, you seem to be handling that really well, and the premise is developing nicely.
I have to say that there is also a fair masochistic streak among the readership. This is natural, given who we are and what we are. Sometimes we read the forced stuff in a similar way in which people watch horror films, not because we like them but because we know that, if circumstances had been different, we might have ended up somewhere near there.
I wouldn't worry too much about that. What matters is the story. If is is good enough and original enough, we'll read it.
Penny
The truth is, the protagonist
The truth is, the protagonist was never in a corner, the story has a beginning, middle, and end, it's just that I think it can be written a LOT better, which is what I'm working on. Check it out on wattpad if you want, I have two chapters done and I'm working on the third - I just moved it because it's not exactly a TG story anymore. Well it has TG characters but it's not a transformation story.
The Thing About Forced Fem.
Being brutally frank, forced fem stories can provide guilt release because "Someone made me do it". Depending on how explicit the story is, it can be great material for wanking off. We try to be all dignified and advanced human, when the truth is that we are partly animal.
BDSM feeds right into forced fem. For some, the pain of a beating or worse is all the attention they ever got, so their psyche interprets that as pleasure. True story.
The other side of it is that forced fem is perhaps the best description of what happened to some.
As animals, we are predatory.
Gwen
I'm amazed
I'm amazed that in a website that is dedicated to promoting understanding, and help in exploring our natures, where we the subscribers should be the most understanding to alternate lifestyles some actually propagate the bigotry that we wish didn't exist in society. Some of the subscribers are lucky enough to have grown in an age in which there is a lot more understanding and medical help for the transgendered community, while for some of our older subscribers growing up it was considered a perversion and something to be ashamed of and if discovered they would have been ostracized and disowned by even their own families and close friends.
For some of us at some point forced fem stories were a way to fantasize about being taken out of the closet and living the way we were meant to be. While not fond of torture in any way I guess that for some it is the way to atone for their sins of being "unnatural and perverted". And if you think about it it is sick, it is sick in the sense of why should we feel ashamed for being the way we were born, why can't we find acceptance and support from even the people that are similar in nature but were lucky to have a different upbringing and opportunities?
When I started reading stories every once in a while I would run into a female to male story, the stories would always let me feeling with a sense of disquiet and upset even though some of them were very well written with good plots. After some introspection I realized the reason I felt like that was that: they were women! they were "perfect"! Why would they even want to even want to mess with that. And then came another realization as much as some of us wish we were women some wish they were men and that unlike us medical science hasn't evolved as much as it has for us. Since then my heart and best wishes go to them as well as the hope that science catches up.
To those that complain about the sexual content on some of the stories I would like to point out that the site has categories and authors can and have labeled their stories as not work safe when the content is highly sexual. Also the site has on entering the choice of going to the under 18 section as opposed to going to the adult section. I have read comments of people saying that such and such story or author should go to the "porn" site fictionmania, last I checked the site stories are clearly labeled and ranked as to their sexual content as well as the categories they fall under. So it's the readers choice what they end up reading.
Finally please do consider a couple of things first of it's Erin's first rule on the site "Keep it friendly!". Second the more stories the site has the more subscribers the site will have which will be hopefully result in more revenue/paying subscriptions that will help keep the site alive. Third please remember that the more we encourage the authors the more we will benefit. Few of the authors here write as a way of living so also keep that in mind.
To Audrissa, thank you for sharing your stories and I for one hope you keep contributing and hopefully when you finish editing Children of Eave you will repost here (I have seen some authors do that also here).
Xtrim
Forced feminization
That is horrible that someone has been targeting you like this. One of the things I like about this site is that I've seen very little harassment of this type. Mostly comments have been very supportive of each other.
And what's wrong with Forced Feminization in fiction? It's a popular subject. And if they don't like it they don't have to read it.
Wattpad
It looks like it's not on wattpad (at metacrawler didn't find it). And when it comes to wattpad it sucks: the cookie policy is worthy of a Big Brother award. And it looks like you have to create a login to use it effectively.
That is rather discouraging to use that site.