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Don't play with forces beyond your understanding. Re-Edited. Same day just later. The full punch line did not copy over. Sorry. I missed it.
A Bad Day
By POLYROBOTICS1
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
Tomorrow will be soon enough. Just relax get some sleep. I mean what can go wrong.
This fancy closet should do the trick. As I reach for the handle, a tingling sensation is felt. Releasing the handle, I look around. Nobody. I must be getting paranoid. Start. The final thought through my head is "I don't wanna be a girl."
* * *
“Stop that.”
“But mommy that human is funny.”
“Did you do anything?”
“No, mommy, I just watching.”
“Then give me the dvr remote.”
“But mommy its funny.”
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Not For Cellphone Readers
Don't try to read this on a cellphone or other device with a smll screen.
Time Loops
It sure does. Tantilizing. What's worse than a bad day? Temporal feedback is a mother.
I wonder if anyone will actually read this from start to finish.
~~~hugs, Laika
Well shit, I guess it really CAN happen here..,
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Remember
Time loops like a boomerang, fruit loops like a banana. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
A Bad Day
Thanks to a kid with a remote control and a fascination with a human. Wonder if he will do any editing?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
First Thing That Came To Mind...
Is that i could see the repeated part used as a chorus/refrain for a sequel to "Paranoimia" by Art Of Noise, feat. Max Headroom.
All in all its a funny and scary premise, I'd hate to be caught in a loop like that for that many cycles. At the same time, maybe the repetition was overdone? I think 2 screen fulls would have been as effective as the 10 or so i counted. I found myself scrolling quite a ways to find the "punchline" as it were. Other than that, I liked it.
The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once - Albert Einstein
Perhaps it would help
If the loop made some sense. There are two apparently unconnected actions, no context, no idea what is going on.
KJT
"Being a girl is wonderful and to torture someone into that would be like the exact opposite of what it's like. I don’t know how anyone could act that way." College Girl - poetheather
“When a clown moves into a palace, he doesn’t become a king. The palace becomes a circus.” - Turkish Proverb
...
Ooooooooooooooookaaaaaaaaay. That was... interesting. Take the remote away from that child xD
I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D