When I penned my story Kelly's Journey, I thought that it was complete as is, but from comments made, I feel that there is more to tell about her journey.
So I have a question, I completed the story for the contest and I wonder if I should expand upon the story. I can see where i can expand it and add to the story.
But I also would like input from readers on what they think should be explored.
I want to show Kelly's relationship with his Dad before he was taken away and explain why Kelly is so feminine.
Most of her journey will be a revision of the original story with added bits showing how Kelly became who she is and her friends and family.
This is my first major attempt at a romance and I want to do my best. I have had the help and advice of Holly Hart, Sarah Lynn Morgan, Sephrena, and Sue Brown.
If I have missed anybody, please let me know. Any comments are welcome.
Comments
Yes that would be great
I would like to see you expand the story. I would love to know why kelly is so feminine.
I, too
would like to know more about kelly's realtionship with Daddy
Old Fox
Just Continue it's great
Stan' This is one of your better stories, please continue it! Richard
Richard
Kelly Journey
In a summer where the biggest films ect. are all explosions car chases, and special effects, you want to expand on a story about PEOPLE and HUMAN NATURE?
I say, GO FOR IT!!!
It's wonderful to read about human beings and who lead lives of quiet courage.
They deal with problems of real life and NOT the freak shows you see like on Jerry Springer.
I love a good read a good story.
Something that makes you think!
People not stereotypes.