Kelly's Journey- Another Look

When I penned my story Kelly's Journey, I thought that it was complete as is, but from comments made, I feel that there is more to tell about her journey.

So I have a question, I completed the story for the contest and I wonder if I should expand upon the story. I can see where i can expand it and add to the story.

But I also would like input from readers on what they think should be explored.

I want to show Kelly's relationship with his Dad before he was taken away and explain why Kelly is so feminine.

Most of her journey will be a revision of the original story with added bits showing how Kelly became who she is and her friends and family.

This is my first major attempt at a romance and I want to do my best. I have had the help and advice of Holly Hart, Sarah Lynn Morgan, Sephrena, and Sue Brown.

If I have missed anybody, please let me know. Any comments are welcome.