Marcie And The Amazons: 28. Back On Board

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We waited... and waited... and waited. Then, at nearly the same moment, the longboat appeared at the end of the cove, and a red flare shot up into the sky from behind the hill.

"What does that mean?" Cakey asked.

Marcie And The Amazons by Kaleigh Way

 

28. Back On Board

 

We all watched as Graffy and Grooty swam off, towing Wiggy between them. It seemed so effortless on the swimmers' part, and so frightening for Wiggy. She told me afterward that it was made worse by the fact that she couldn't see anything. I waved and waved to her until she was out of sight, but she hadn't seen me at all.

Once the swimmers disappeared around the hill, Cakey said, "Ding-Dong, let's run to the top of hill and watch them!"

"No," Mirina said. "Everybody stays here." And she fixed her eyes on the sky.

"Why?" Cakey demanded. "Are you watching for something?"

"Yes," Mirina told her. "There's a flare gun in the emergency supplies. I'm watching for Graffy's signal."

We waited... and waited... and waited. Nobody spoke. Nobody moved.

Then, at nearly the same moment, the longboat appeared at the end of the cove, and a red flare shot up into the sky from behind the hill.

"What does that mean?" Cakey asked.

"It means that the adults are gone," Mirina replied. "There was no one left on board." Turning to face us, she clapped her hands for attention.

"Listen, girls!" she said. "There are no adults on board. I'm sure we'll find out more details soon, but that's all we know for now. Right now, we need to unload the ship. First of all, we need our own luggage."

There was a general murmur of agreement. "When Wiggy gets here, she'll show Cakey how to run the motorboat, and she'll take all you girls back, except for me and Knickers."

"Why?" Cakey asked.

"Cakey, you're going to be running back and forth with piles of stuff. You don't want to unload it yourself, do you? Knickers and I will unload and carry stuff up to the cave.

"So! First priority: ALL our luggage. Pack up everything that belongs to us and bring it ashore. Second: whatever's useful. Boogers, I want you to evaluate the food situation. Wiggy will decide the rest. She knows boats; she knows what we'll need. Ding-Dong, I want you to help Wiggy — but don't drive her crazy."

Ding-Dong nodded. "Okay."

"Now," Mirina continued, "Life jackets, everyone! Marcie, will you bring one for Cakey?"

I nodded. As I ran off, Mirina spoke very seriously with Cakey, who nodded as she listened.

When we returned to the dock with our life jackets, we found Cakey sitting in the stern of the longboat, her hand on the tiller. Wiggy was explaining things to her, pointing to various parts of the engine. I tossed Cakey's life jacket into the boat.

Mirina caught me by the arm. "Marcie, as soon as you get to the ship, will you pack up all of your things and Wiggy's, and bring the bags up on deck? Then stay with Wiggy and help her. Try to keep Ding-Dong's feet on the ground. Okay?"

"Okay," I agreed, and Mirina gave me a smile. It was funny, but that little moment made me feel important, like I was a key part of what was going on. Wiggy was right about Mirina: she knew how to make people do things. At the same time, I didn't feel like she was bossy or taking advantage of me. I knew that she'd be back here, unloading and hauling everything that we loaded on the other side.

I was the one of the last to get into the longboat, so I had to sit near the front. Donkey was the very last, and as she stepped in, Wiggy called to her from the other end. "Donkey, can you cast off that end? Try to look at way it's tied up, and see if you can make it fast the same way when we get to the ship. Okay?"

"Okay!"

After we cast off, Cakey had to pull the ripcord three times to get the engine started. Red-faced, she steered us away from the dock and into the center of the cove. Occasionally Wiggy would say something to her or point to something, and Cakey would nod. When we left the cove, Wiggy had her come about twice so she could be sure Cakey knew where to enter the cove on the way back. If she came in at the wrong place, she'd run up on the reef, and the hull could be damaged.

When we pulled up to the side of the Seward, Donkey tied off one end of the boat, and Wiggy showed Cakey how to tie off the other end.

"Marcie," she called to me, as the other girls climbed the ladder. "Will you pack my bag and yours and bring them on deck?"

"I was going to," I said. "Then Mirina told me to stick with you."

"Oh, good!" she said, with a relieved smile.

Graffy and Grooty were waiting on deck. "We found them, Wiggy!" They told her, as they waggled some walkie-talkies.

"How many are there?" she asked.

"Four, so far."

"Okay," Wiggy told them. "You two keep one, give me one, and give Cakey two. Tell her the second one is for Her Manliness."

It had been a long time since I'd heard Mirina's nickname — I had to think for a moment who it was. Wiggy gave me a what are you still doing here? glance. I took off below deck to pack our bags.
 

It didn't take long to pack. The hard part was lugging the heavier bags up the steep, narrow stairs.

Ding-Dong and I finished in the same moment, and together we went to find Wiggy, leaving the other girls to load the luggage into the longboat.

We found her in the wheelhouse, looking at the instruments. Suddenly, her walkie-talkie crackled. "Wiggy, this is Grooty. We found the soap."

"Wiggy here. How much did you find?"

"A case and a half. It's all little bottles."

"Bring it all on deck. We're taking it. Did you find any fuel yet?"

"Negative."

"Keep looking. It's the most important thing. Wiggy out."

"Very efficient," I commented.

"We have to be," Wiggy said, without looking up. "We need the fuel for the longboat's motor, so if you happen to see any, tell me."

"Maybe they didn't keep any," Ding-Dong suggested. Wiggy lifted her head, and looked ready to blast Ding-Dong with her anger. Ding-Dong threw up her hands defensively. "All I mean is, they might take it out of the Seward's tank when they need it. The Seward has a motor too, right?"

"Oh," Wiggy said, relenting. "I hadn't thought of that."

Wiggy picked up her walkie-talkie and began talking to Grooty.

"How did you come up with that?" I whispered to Ding-Dong.

She glanced at Wiggy and whispered back, "It's what my Dad does with the lawnmower. He doesn't want to store the gas in a can, so he siphons it from his car when he needs to cut the grass."

Wiggy said into her walkie-talkie, "Well, come up here and I'll *tell* you what a siphon looks like, then! We need to find one. Wiggy out."

"Why is it so important?" I asked.

"Cause the longboat's motor's gonna run out soon, that's why," Wiggy said, a bit exasperated. "Okay. Here's the next important thing: the radios." She indicated each instrument with a tap of her hand as she named it: "Radio, radio, GPS. Radar. Fax machine. Radio, radio."

"They have four radios?" I asked.

"Yes, and none of them work! None of the electronic stuff will even turn on! There's a laptop over there... it's dead, too."

"Okay," Ding-Dong said. "One step at a time: is there power?" She pointed up to a light in the ceiling, which was on. "Yes. We should check that the instruments are plugged in."

"You can try that with the laptop," Wiggy replied, "but the instruments don't have plugs; they're wired in. They're hooked up."

"Maybe we ought to follow the wires?" I suggested. "Could they have a different power supply from the lights?"

Wiggy, pale-faced, looked at the two of us. "Do either of you know anything about electronics or electricity?"

"What's the difference?" Ding-Dong asked.

I glanced at her and quickly replied, "No, we don't."

The walkie-talkie crackled. "Cakey here. Donkey and I are taking the first load back."

Wiggy replied, "No. Donkey has to stay. Cakey, do you or Donkey know anything about electricity and electronics?"

"Me, no," Cakey replied. "Hang on." After a few moments, she added, "Donkey says don't use a hairdrier in the shower. That's all she knows. But Wiggy—"

"What?"

"I'm afraid to go back by myself. What if something goes wrong?"

"Okay, Donkey can go, but bring Knickers and The Manley One back when you come, okay?"

"Will do. We're going now."

We could hear the sound of the longboat's motor start up, then grow fainter as Cakey rode away.

Now that the conversation with Cakey was over, Wiggy stood stock still, looking at the floor. Ding-Dong and I glanced at each other, but before either of us spoke, Graffy and Grooty came into the wheelhouse, grinning broadly.

"So, Wiggy," Grooty said, "What's this siphon thing look like?"

"Hang on," Wiggy said. "Ding-Dong can tell you in a minute. Do either of you know anything about electricity?"

The blonde pair shook their heads.

Wiggy sighed. "Okay. After Ding-Dong tells you about the siphon, go see how Boogers is doing, and ask her if she knows about electricity."

"Why is that important?"

"I'll tell you later," Wiggy replied, biting her lip. "Right now you have to look for fuel, a siphon, a gas can. And if you can find any kind of communication device: walkie-talkies, radios, satellite phones, whatever, bring it to me. And tools. Any kind of tool." Then she turned away to look at the instruments.

After Ding-Dong finished explaining what a siphon was and what it might look like, Graffy and Grooty left. Ding-Dong walked to one of the radios. She grabbed a little black knob, turned it, and pulled it off.

"This fuse is blown," she observed, holding it up to the light. "Maybe all we need is new fuses."

We found that some of the other instruments also had fuses, and that they, too, had blown. We began searching for replacements.

"The other fuses are probably hidden, like behind," Ding-Dong said. "Could there be a panel, so one of us could get back there?"

While Wiggy and I searched for fuses, Ding-Dong found a sliding panel. She opened it and looked inside. "Is there a flashlight?" she asked. "I can't see anything in there."

"I don't know," Wiggy said. "We'll look."

"Wiggy," I said, "I know we're in a bad spot, but why are you so frantic?"

She gulped and said, "Am I frantic? I thought I was being surprisingly calm."

Ding-Dong looked up from where she was sitting on the floor. "Yeah, Wigs, it seems like you're in a big rush."

"Okay," Wiggy said, explaining. "All the instruments and the radios are dead. We don't know why."

"Maybe they were struck by lightning," Ding-Dong offered.

Wiggy looked at her in silence for a moment. Then at long last she said, "Maybe. In any case, we can't call for help, and we don't know whether the Captain did."

"All right," I said. "But people know where we are, right?"

"I guess so," Wiggy said. "But no one is going to miss us before Friday, when we're supposed to get on the plane. I figure that Saturday's the earliest we could be rescued."

"Okay," I said, "So that's only... what day is today?"

"Tuesday," Wiggy said nervously.

"So it's four days—"

"Five, counting today," Wiggy quickly contradicted. "And if they don't come until Sunday, it's six."

"All right," I said. "But in the meantime, we have food, a place to sleep..."

"Castile soap," Ding-Dong offered, with a smile, but Wiggy didn't react.

I'd seen Wiggy with her lost-little-girl look before, but right now her expression when way beyond lost. She looked really, seriously frightened. Terrorized.

Then I had a thought: maybe this was an extension of her fear of sleeping alone?

"Wiggy," I said, "We're all here. We're all in this together."

"We could even stay on the boat, if you'd feel safer," Ding-Dong suggested.

"No, we can't stay on the ship," Wiggy countered. "We have to get off this thing as soon as we can."

"Why?" I demanded. Her irrationality was beginning to try my patience. "Are you afraid the storm will come back?"

"No," she said. "I'm afraid that the tide will come in. The ship's hung up on the coral reef. The hull has a great big hole, and I'm afraid that high tide could lift the ship loose and sink it."

© 2008 by Kaleigh Way

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Rock and a hard place

Angharad's picture

I'm sure Marcie will come good and save the girls. How about exploring the island - maybe there's a town in the next cove or giant spiders?

Angharad

Angharad

Sadly....

I will soon be too insane to appreciate this wonderful story...

"The next chapter will appear Monday, September 1."

Is just too long to wait.

;)

PS Just so you know that is a joke...

The Legendary Lost Ninja

Yeah, I know

My writing time has shrunk a bit. I'm fighting to get it back.

Just Want You To Know

...that I appreciate EVERY word you've written! It's very good stuff!

Hmmmm

This is a situation. The hull of the ship is stuck on the reef and if high tide comes will probably raise the ship off of the reef. That means it will be sunk.

Were are the adults? You would have thought they would of went after the kids. This is strange.

I would have thought the crew's main concern would have been to get back to the kids to keep them from freaking. Keeping them safe.

is there another plot going on that we are not privy to yet? Such as the kids being held for hostage unknown to them. I thought I posted this thought before, but for some reason it never got posted and I didn't have time to re-post it. The best hostages are the ones that don't know they are being held as hostages. They won't fight you if they don't realize whats really going on. It is to weird how the cave was all set for this many people, and that the provitions will last them the amount of time necessary to stay there a week, or more.

Still want to know if the chaperones are in on the idea of hostaging the students. Remember the captain was pensive at the beginning of the story and looked worried about something, I'm sure it wasn't the weather at the time. One of the adults should have stayed with the kids. Seems like the chaperones weren't exactly worried about leaving them alone.

I hope Wiggy gets the radio gear working, and hopfully we find out what is really happening.

Great job so far. Looking forward to the next installation.

Hugs
Joni w

Plot Developments

Given the damaged ship, I would tend to rule out the whole hostage scenario. I don't think that's what's going on. With the ship wrecked on the reef, something which would be visible via satellite even after the ship sinks on it, rescuers would tend to concentrate on the island where the girls are, so they're hardly in a secret location.

As far as where the adults went, it probably involved the life boats. Why they left the longboat is a bit of a mystery, unless it had something to do with not expecting to survive crossing the reef again in the storm. As for when they abandoned ship, that probably has a lot to do with where they ended up. Given wind and tide patterns during a storm, it's entirely possible they ended up hundreds of miles away, perhaps even lost. I'm going to assume that the lifeboats are modern and include homing beacons, so they'll probably get picked up and rescued, too.

Scenario

erin's picture

Something innocent that occurred to me that may have happened.

The ship gets hit by lightning and disabled, no radios or GPS. She hits the rocks and is damaged. A passing ship takes the crew off, but they don't speak English or have much modern equipment. They're a bit baffled to by a ship full of women and don't let the "poor females" use whatever radio they do have but take them to the nearest port. It might be days away.

Even if they did communicate that there are more victims on the island, a civilian fishing trawler or tramp freighter is not going to send their ship boats through the reefs to rescue someone who is already safe.

Just showing that innocent explanations can be made, I'm NOT guessing that this is what occurred. :)

Hugs,
Erin

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

International Maritime Language

English, or an abbreviated version of it at any rate, is the international maritime language. (For what it's worth, it's also the international language of aviation.)

On the other hand... there are some bands of pirates operating somewhere around Malaysia and Indonesia. Their modus operandi tends more towards killing the crews and keeping the boats, but maybe, faced with a raft or two full of shipwrecked women, they could fit a bit of rape into their repertoire.

a dangerous spot

So the ship will sink soon and there are so many girls still on board?
Sure they need things and more people will find the stuff faster but its quite a risk.
Not telling the others so far is probably to keep them from panicking. It seems Wiggy is only dangling from a thin thread there.

If I counted right there are still 6 girls on board and I wonder if the Dorry would hold that many. Then again the Twins could probably swim. But a sinking ship causes a downward draft around it for a while and thats makes swimming and even small boats nearby unsafe.

Well I hope we will not flip from the tension put on us till next week.

Thanks for any other great chapter Kaleigh

hugs

Holly

Friendship is like glass,
once broken it can be mented,
but there will always be a crack.

I wouldn't worry about the ship sinking

and pulling everyone down with it.

1. It is quite small. it would likely take much larger ship to really suck everything down with it
2. if it is hung up on a reef, it will probably go down slowly, at least until it is completely off the reef.

I think any Dory should hold 6 in a pinch, even with a load of supplies.
Beyond that I believe it is the longboat with a motor, which holds even more people, etc.

Now for a guess from way out in left field. I have never done this in an open comment before, but maybe Marcie Auburn will reappear, and be able to give the warning sooner than their not showing up?

One of the most difficult things to give away is kindness.
It usually comes back to you.

Holly

One of the most difficult things to give away is kindness.
It usually comes back to you.

Holly

well

first - ship on reef. she want to get as much off ship B4 it possibly rolls over, thus, loosing valuable stuff they may want

2nd - i think the ship rolled over, plausable. adults either lost @ sea or made it to lifeboats, instead of long boat which prob not as seaworthy in rough water

3rd - some plot on kidnapping, well best way to find out is keep reading on & see what our mischievious authoress comes up with.

4th - back to #2 a moment, all da fuses blown is why I thought the ship rolled over, but, noting that nothing seems mentioned that everything was soaked, hatches stayed closed ? hmm

off to read more.

nobody on board

that doesn't smell right to me.

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