Personal fantasy vs. marketable story

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A book on writing I'm currently reading says the reason most aspiring novelists are rejected by publishers is that their core concept is weak. That is, they need more of a "hook" to build a story around.

That got me to thinking about what exactly constitutes a story, and came to the following conclusions. First, most of the "stories" I attempt are not in fact stories, but fantasies I've attempted to write down. I fantasize about being a little girl, doing stereotypical little-girl things, living the female childhood I never had (OK, so I buy into the gender binary--sue me). Therefore, that's what I write about.

Secondly, I've never been able to write anything that wasn't trans-related, a fact I'm sure is related to conclusion number one. I couldn't write a conventional, non-trans work of genre fiction to save my life, simply because I don't fantasize about being a part of most of those stories. (And therefore, don't read them).

Unfortunately, one's personal fantasies are boring, since rarely do two people share exactly the same fantasy. It's translating those fleeting mental images to a logical, compelling story arc that causes me to falter.

What often results is that no matter how promising my initial idea, sooner or later the stories I attempt degenerate into what I call POO (short for "Parade Of Outfits"). That is, after the initial gender change/transition, the stories become little more than "...and then she wore...and then she wore...and then she wore...." A sure cure for insomnia if ever there was one

There are exceptions, of course, in work I've read by others--light, frothy little fantasies that catch my interest. (I can think of several in the Altered Fates and SRU universes). They're usually short, however, while the longer ones are often about much more than the transformation.

Like the late Katie Leone before me, I'd like to do more with trans fiction than light cross-dressing fantasy, perhaps even produce something a mainstream readership would like without stepping into POO (sorry, couldn't resist that). Exactly how is the question.

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