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Bad Kitty, BAD!
That was pretty funny and I want to see more, however if you are going to do this thing you need to be focused and disciplined about it, there's nothing worse than a story you really like just fading into either incoherent nonsense or getting cut off mid flow due to writer apathy, so to quote the wee green fella Do or Do not, there is no try.
The Nature of Monkey is Irrepressible!
Thanks
Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. Don't worry about me getting off track, my usual work count is barely 1000 so I'm going to make sure I keep up the effort for this one.
..... 3040 words is an achievement for me. Sad but true.
Interesting
An interesting story. As the previous comment said do or not do. Take us on the journey :)
Joanna
Acceptance
or prejudice? What's Mick going to find? I suspect the gamer crowd might be impressed.. A future as a professional convention attendee or actor? I hope you find the inspiration to take this story further.
Teri Ann
"Reach for the sun."
Interesting start to this story
Please continue it as your muse leads you.
Hugs,
Tamara Jeanne
Hah
Apathy at it's finest. When you've been involved in so much fiction already, having something happen to you is much less of a shock. This is fairly close to what my reaction would probably be given the same scenario, so I'm interested to see where you take this.
-Tas
It is an interesting start
I hope to read more to see where it is going.