Breaking point for Melanie

I wrote 'Uniforms' at pace, for the subject had me gripped. I referred to Melanie Stevens' revulsion at events in Bosnia with the words "I lost my religion as well as my gender then"

http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/22382/uniforms-6

Well, the Dutch have finally come to the end of a legal process that has taken 19 years. Melanie was right: the Dutch gave up the refugees, locked themselves in their barracks, and hid.

This is what I wrote:
"Things came to a head with Srebrenica, and my father’s joke was just so, so bad. The UN had declared it a safe haven, and the Dutch troops were there to protect the people, and in rolled the Serbs and butchered 8,000 while the cloggies hid in their barracks so as not to get hurt.

I know this s not how they see it, but that was what we saw and heard, and if they don’t like it they can tell it to the families of the dead.

We went in as part of a “peacekeeping” force, and all the politics and crap strangled us, and they took all the men and boys and shot them, and raped the women and girls before pillaging, and only then did they burn."

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-28313285

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