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Okay, I don't have a clue how to share something from Facebook to here so I hope a cut and paste works. This was posted today by David Gerrold, a noted author best known for writing the all time best Star Trek episode "The Trouble With Tribbles". It seemes it might have some relevance to certain on again/off again conversations here on Big Closet.

David Gerrold

So a guy I don't know plonks down in one of my threads and promptly starts criticizing.

I admit it, I do read critical reviews and responses. Sometimes I learn something about my writing that I hadn't noticed before. More often, I learn a great deal about the critic. But either way I learn something about the effect my work has on others.

Now, in this case, not particularly noteworthy, but it's a good jumping off point for the discussion that follows, the sum total of this fellow's analysis was, "Your writing sucks."

Well, hell -- I already know that. Hold up anything I've written and I can tell you all about its flaws, everything I did not achieve. I can show you where the prose is clumsy, where the characterization was shallow, where the structure was shaky, where the flow from one idea to the next was turbulent. I can show you everything I wished I had done better, but was already bumping up against the limits of my ability.

In that, I am not alone. Any writer worth his/her keyboard feels the same way. We know what what we wanted to achieve, we're painfully conscious of the distance between the result and the ideal.

Writers seek perfection. But the universe conspires against perfection. There is no purity. The best we can achieve is excellence -- and a book is never completed, it's only abandoned when it's no longer cost-effective to keep polishing.

My response to the above individual was, "If that's the worst you can say about me, you don't know me very well."

And that's true. In my eyes, my writing does suck. It's not good enough. It will never be good enough.

But sometimes it's ambitious, and in those efforts the best I can say about my work is that it's evidence that "a man's speech must exceed his task or what's a metaphor?"

"Your writing sucks." Yeah, I agree. So what? Over here, that's not an insult, it's the motivation to do better next time.

Next?

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I love it.

The next time I get a PM saying just that I'll point them in the direction of this post. Brilliant. Thanks for sharing it.

Samantha

Bravo David !

Dear David,

I feel moved by the humility, honesty and sheer courage you demonstrated by writing this letter.

Personally, I think you write pretty well, and I thank you here and now for providing such entertainment for us all, for free, on this wonderful website.

Love,

Briar

A nice synopsis.....

D. Eden's picture

But I disagree about the best Star Trek episode!

Dallas

D. Eden

Dum Vivimus, Vivamus

Better to say

a fan favorite instead of the best. I know I have my favorite and so does others. (Mirror, Mirror/Balance of Terror/Charlie X ect.) As for writing I don't think I've ever read a more spot on analysis of what it is like to be a writer than this. It is so true. Every time I go back and re-read some of my stuff, I find myself changing something. That's a problem when you're attempting to clean things up to try and make a little money off of it. I end up wanting to rewrite the whole thing!

He's been in the business for a long time and has the proper mindset to deal with it. I loved the bit about learning more about the commentor than about his writing.

Well Done!

Grover

my response to amazon criticism, if I ever get any.

would be to say, yeah it sucks, but you bought it. So how dumb do you feel now?

But to be honest, I'd love to have David's problem, (or Katie
Leone's problem, truth told. Making good money and being told you suck makes me a bit jealous. i mean I get good reviews, and dont think I don't appreciate those, but outside this site
I'm not even a blip on anyone's radar.

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while a "trek fan" i knew David from his books before i knew his connection to ST:TOS. the chtorr series is pretty good, read it a long time ago, and while it is currently in limbo (4 books published, 2 in the can, or 1 1/2 something like that) something is holding up publication.

Yes the Tribbles episode was very good, depends on your take of things whether it is the "best". best to you sure, but not everyone, as others have stated.

Teresa L

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He has also dabbled very lightly in 'trans' themes, in "The Man Who Folded Himself"