Choices -- Chapters 20 & 21 Conclusion

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Choices

by M.N. Thomas

edited by Bill Durr & Tom Peashey

Choices

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Wonderful

Linda Jeffries's picture

Wonderful story. Just loved it. Glad the other sister came through. Hmmm... Are there tell tale sings of a progressing pregnancy afoot? Inquiring minds want to know.

Linda Jeffries
Too soon old, too late smart.
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awesome conclusion

loved this story all the way through.

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Thanks

What a Great story and a happy ending

MICKIE

Isn't this really what everyone feels?

Andrea Lena's picture

Standing in front of the mirror looking at the reflection of the woman looking back at me. I am still not all that sure who that woman is, but it is becoming a little more clear.

Terrific story! Thank you!

  

To be alive is to be vulnerable. Madeleine L'Engle
Love, Andrea Lena

Yes it is!!

Pamreed's picture

Andrea As time went on during my transition that reflection
became more and more the woman I truly am!! So now I am sure
that it is me!! Even in the morning just after getting up
with my hair all messed up and no makeup!! She just gets
prettier as I clean her up!! I pray that someday that will be
the same for you and all my sisters that are not able to say
that now!!

Hugs,
Pamela

Toxic Family

We've been and still are at times being treated as mentally ill over a miss match that nature gave us. Our stories vary, and some of them are founded in wishful thinking; trying to make sense of our own feelings.

It is the bad treatment from others that causes the Mental illness, not our own identity. Sometimes,our families never accept. Who then is mentally ill? Vain effort after vain effort to get them to see can kill us if we let it.

The truth is that there is a physical cause for all of this; some of it being visible, some not. It is up to us to turn our backs on things that hurt us and move on to our own lives.

G

Kleenex time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Thank you Melodie for making me very emotional (happy)!!
Tiffany is leading the life that a lot of us tran-girls dream of!!
She has someone that not only accepts her, but loves her!!
Her family is accepting and her friends. She is a very beautiful
woman and is accepted as one in public. Things many of us can
only wish for!!!! This story is the dream I had for so many
years for myself!!! So being able to sorta live it through your
story is very good!!

Hugs,
Pamela

So I’ve been a boy
and I’ve been a girl
and, trust me,
being a girl is better

Be Right Back

I need more Kleenex!

Wonderful story, truly wonderful!!

Great Story

Indeed, Choices was a powerful story from start to finish. I read it in a day on my kindle and loved it. :D

I liked the way you presented Tim and Tiff struggling with their self-identity and trying so hard to fit themselves into a role they were comfortable with. The contrast between the desire to grow out his hair with the knee-jerk reaction Tim had towards believing he was gay was rather compelling reading. Especially after Tiff and Rick became a couple.

Lisa and Sandy were great supporting characters who hit all the right notes towards being friends anyone would be proud to have in their lives.

Mary coming to the wedding was a nice way to end the story with reconciliation - especially following on from Tiff's dad's acceptance earlier in the chapters.

All in all, another fantastic story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
xx
Amy

P.S. I posted a review of your book on amazon.
Hope you like it... it will be through moderation in the next couple of days.