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Hello All. Back in late 2011/early 2012 I posted a rather long novel of forced feminization, "Only A Baby Machine". (Some liked it, some did not--what else is new?) I've revised it (not significantly, just improved dialog and such) included introductory material not given in the BC version, and added bells and whistles not possible on BC (exotic fonts, pictures). If anyone wishes to see this recent version, send me a message here, and I can email .pdf version.
SQ
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First of All
I enjoyed the story. It was provacative and disturbing. I remember that it created quite a dialog among the readers. I feel that is an indication of how good the story really was. I didn't like what was done to the main character; however, there are many great stories out there that have outcomes that don't make me feel good. You got significant reactions from your readers. They didn't like the story you were writing, but they couldn't stop reading it. I think I would enjoy experiencing what you write. I may not like what happens, but I enjoy what you write.
Portia
Portia
Love/hate relationship
I can see writing a story like this just to see if you can. I have a couple stories out there that tested my limits. What happened to the protagonist was not nice, but then he was not a nice person, and who says he should not reap his just rewards.
I am also very interested in brain washing because I have been subjected to limited (depending on how you see it) amounts of it, and know how it works. My stepfather did it first then the Baptist church, then the Muslims and now I am letting the Mormons take a shot at it, though theirs is very nice in comparison. :)
Gwendolyn
Remember... You brought this up...
And, Erin, This is a critique of the story, not the author.
Were it not for this blog, this story would have remained far under my radar. I wish it had been so! But my curiosity was piqued. I read all of the first 4 chapters, but was wanting to hurl, so I skimmed all but the last 2: those I read in their entirety, God help me. I also read every comment to every chapter.
I'm not crazy about hardcore forced fem, though I'll admit to having read and even written some (Gotta please the publisher). But as my, very few, close friends know, I'm very softhearted, (No! Hearted, not Headed) and am cursed with more than my fair share of both sympathy and empathy, neither of which I found in this story!
IMO, this story surpassed abuse, which I loathe, but verges into cruelty for cruelty's sake. This was not abuse, it was torture, plain and simple, and I'm surprised no one else used that word: TORTURE!
I find the author's premise that George and Pansy are separate entities spurious and meretricious in the extreme. I found no redeeming value in the story that could justify what transpired.
That said, I don't question the author's write and post it or for readers to read it: Hey, this is a pretty open forum... What I am saying is that it sickened me and I'd never read this author again.
Clearly, others liked this... Stuff.
Just one readers opinion,
Ole
We are each exactly as God made us. God does not make mistakes!
Gender rights are the new civil rights!
Hi
I love your story. It was all I Like : cultural change, lowered intelligence and so on.
Is it possible to send me this version ? :)
And I have another question, where I can find your other word (story, caption and so on). I read your two novel on Fictionmania and I want to read it all :)
congrats
Hi,
I enjoyed the story and would appreciate getting a copy of the updated story. I was also wondering if you have been active since 2011 and 2012. I haven't seen any stories from you on bigcloset since then, do you post elsewhere?