Who are the Real Monsters? Chapter 19

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Who are the Real Monsters?

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Elsbeth


Ken Umeki will learn that not all monsters come out at night.

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Chapter 19

Ren Shisaa stood in the Hawaiian surf watching his cousin play in the sand. "Why are you playing by yourself?"

Ken Umeki looked up, covering his eyes to block the sun. "I'm not, my friend is helping."

Sitting down in the sand, he looked over his cousins sand castle. It looked a lot different from what he and his sister had built earlier. "What are you building?"

"Hirado Castle, its in the Kyūshū region of Japan." Ken smiled, before speaking in some unknown language to an empty space next to him.

"Who are you speaking with?" Ren asked, not seeing anyone but for some reason, knew that his cousin wasn't speaking to an imaginary friend.

"Her name is Hina'ea, she lives in the sea."

"That's cool, tell her I live in Massachusetts."

"You told her yourself." Ken laughed.

For the rest of the day, under the watchful eye of Aya Yoshida the three played under the Hawaiian sun.

Since that first fateful meeting, if asked who his best friend was, Ren Shisaa would have said his cousin Ken. When at the age of twelve, Ken came to Skogshaven for his cousins wedding the two of them were inseparable. Even though they had only shared a half of dozen summers together, they always remained friends; that was true until Ren turned sixteen.

Taken in the dead of night to an old shrine sitting deep in the woods, surrounded by family, the new sixteen year olds were introduced into the mysteries of the Shisaa clan. Long has the family been the guardians of sacred places, Were Temple Lion Dogs and strangest of all protectors of the Umeki family. That had come as a complete surprise to Ren. Not that he minded, he thought protecting his best friend sounded great.

However there were other secrets, older and darker that each Shisaa member learns upon turning sixteen, these secrets poisoned his feelings for his cousin. Ren learned of an ancient pact made with a Japanese Emperor, a pact that commanded Witch families to protect Japan from the Yoaki. Initially the Umeki family, powerful enough to help other families, had good relations with the spirits. But as the years went by, with their power waning, the Yoaki with whom they had good relations became tools to be used to keep themselves in power.

Ken, of course, being the heir of the Umeki family must have been aware of all these secrets all of his life. Ren began to feel that his cousin and his family must be using the Shisaa clan like the Yoaki, nothing more than a tool. The attitudes of Ken’s mother and grandmother and how they treated his own grandmother and father reinforce his belief.

When Ken suddenly moved to Skogshaven, Ren had planned on giving him an earful. The young Were couldn’t believe that Ken’s mother forced the two of them to share a room. The feelings he once had for his cousin, before Ren turned sixteen seemed a lifetime ago. However, the more time spent as Ken’s roommate the more the young Were realized that his cousin had never changed.

That epiphany came too late. Ren’s father was hesitant at first to come to his son for help, but was pleased at his change of heart. Ken had done nothing wrong; in fact according to Ren’s father, Ken knew nothing of his family history. Because of the wishes of Ken’s mother, something terrible was soon to take place.

At the day of the festival, Ren’s drove his father’s car behind the Shisaa compound planning on rescuing his cousin. When his cousin didn’t appear, the young man climbed the steps entering the shrine just in time to comprehend what Kaede Umeki had in store for his cousin.

When Ken collapsed in Ren’s arms, he understood that his cousin was only dressed as a female; however the soft body that he found shocked him to the core. To think that the Umeki clan would change one of their own to keep the power in the family left him speechless. Aya Yoshida made the point quite well at the time that it would be better if Ren also kept such thoughts to himself.

Most of the Shisaa felt terribly uncomfortable around Ken’s guardian. Masanori explained that Aya Yoshida had been a member of the Umeki family for a long time. He remembered the Warden, when he was a child, what was chilling Ren’s grandmother Rika also remembered Aya when she was a child.

Ken’s transformation to Kimme, beyond the obvious, confused him. Not the why, that was obvious but the result. Ren felt as if Kimme was a totally different person. Ken, quiet and moody at times, was suddenly replaced by this vivacious girl who seemed to make friends with everyone.

Kimme quickly conquered all of the girls in the Shisaa household. Both his sister and Hibiki immediately fell in love with their new cousin. It took no time at all for her to make close friends at school, something that Ken seemed incapable of. Treating Kimme as a princess didn’t seem to bother anyone in the Shisaa family at all.

What bother Ren the most were the boys. He couldn’t remember the number of times explaining to some love-struck guy if he was interested in Kimme they needed to speak to her. And no, he wasn’t going to put in a good word for them. As the weeks went by, Ren even started to have feelings for her. Beautiful, yes, but it was her personality that made you want to be around her. Ren had to just remind himself constantly that Kimme used to be Ken. The whole idea of dating his best friend was just too weird. Thankfully, Kimme still had her relationship with Sile.

With Masanori too busy to keep an eye on his niece, it became Ren’s responsibility to keep a close eye on his cousin. Ren knew of the political infighting among members of the Umeki family. Even the Shisaa didn’t seem immune. When his grandmother Rika stepped down as the head of the Shisaa family, Ren thought things were settled. The young Were was wrong.

With the sudden arrival of Kimme’s mother Kaede and her entourage of Witches and Wardens, Ren felt afraid for his cousin. It seemed that the head of the Umeki family didn’t just prepare for trouble, but happily searched it out. Kaede immediately took control of their entire household. Except for school and work, all family members had to be ready to help the Witches of the Imai family at a moment’s notice. All of the energy of all three families was now directed at Ken’s ceremony. When asked, his father explained that it was an ancient ritual that would unlock Kimme’s magical powers. Ren felt that his father was not telling him the entire truth.

Assigned to stand at the edge of the Shrine during the ceremony, Ren spotted Kimme and her group of attendants as soon as they came out of the Umeki residence. She moved with grace, even in those ridiculous shoes. The ceremony seemed to go just as planned, until Aya entered the courtyard covered in blood.

What happened next shocked and upset the entire Shisaa family. Ren understood that the Imai Witches were involved with the Fae, but using them for their rituals? When the Umeki servant Katherine appeared, seemingly from a witches knife, Ren knew something horrible was going to happen.

Late last summer, almost everyone over the age of sixteen in the Shisaa family along with most of the Unseen in Skogshaven had assisted the young Fae Princess in the fight against the Unseelie Court. Charging into the troll-kin ranks, Ren felt like a Samurai of old. This was the true path of the Shisaa clan, to protect everyone from the evils of the spirit world.

What happened deeper inside the Fae continued to haunt his dreams since. Little did the young Were understand that the creatures the Unseen had faced were nothing but fodder, the true terrors lay in wait. When the Countess of the Winter Court appeared wielding the black blade, Ren thought that she was just another easy target.

Realizing his folly too late, the Temple Lion Dog felt the Countess’s black blade slip through his ribs. Yui too fell in a blink of an eye. Preparing for his end, Ren felt his life’s energy fading. But he would not die; instead a beautiful angel knelt by his side pulling him out of the darkness. With a warming touch and a soothing voice, Ren realized that Princess Morgan had actually saved his life.

As Katherine shed her mortal glamour revealing herself to be an Aos Sidhe and a sacrifice to the Umeki family, Ren understood at that point the entire Shisaa clan stood on an abyss. Almost as one, they stood up and began to shout as Aya brought her blade high in the air but before it descended, the top of the shrine exploded in activity.

Members of the Shisaa family watched in amazement as Kimme flew backwards off the palanquin, slamming into Aya. Like the Aos Sidhe Katherine, the heir to the Umeki family had shed her mortal trappings. With long black and white hair, adorned with what appeared to be a cat’s tail and ears, Kimme slashed out with razor sharp claws. A Warden, who got too close, found out that Kimme’s claws were all too real while she sliced through his sword arm.

Almost in one move, the cat spirit lifted Katherine from the ground depositing the Aos Sidhe safely of the top of the shrine. With the shock worn off, Kimme’s mother began to scream.

“Subdue her, we cannot allow her to escape.”

Interrupting Kaede, the Shisaa family heard their Alpha give his own command. “Shisaa clan remain where you are, this is an Umeki internal problem.”

“What!” As Kaede screamed, Masanori Shisaa knelt on the ground, amused to see a certain satisfied smile pass over Kimme’s grandmother’s face.

Kimme growled, flying downwards; with one hand picking up Katherine’s knife that had fallen, with her other hand she sent two Witches flying down the stairs.

What happened next, no one expected. Kimme, too intent on not being hit by Aya’s blade, didn’t see the Warden approach her side. As the katana slashed downwards, without a word Sachiko Imai stepped in the blade’s way.

Everyone stopped, as Kimme turned horrified. Her grandmother stood still with two feet of steel sticking out of her chest.

“Obaasan why?” The young girl moved forward to catch her grandmother as she collapsed.

Without a word, Sachiko Imai reached up slowly touching her grandchild’s face, and then it dropped, the light going out of her eyes. Kimme’s mournful wail tore through everyone’s heart, however Kaede seeing a chance ordered Aya to capture Kimme. It was then that the world changed.

The sky itself changed colors; the barren tree in the center of the courtyard which had long lost its leaves bloomed instantly as a bright light settled over the entire compound. In awe, Masanori Shisaa understood that the entire family compound had been drawn deep inside the Fairy Realm.

As wave after wave of Pixies flew over the walls, members of the Shisaa who fought with Princess Morgan over the summer recognized the Aos Sidhe that suddenly walked out of the ancient tree that stood in the center of the courtyard.

Sile!” Kimme screamed as her girlfriend came through the Fae gateway first.

Immediately behind her, others followed. Liam, the tall Aos Sidhe, adorned in silver mail wielding a claymore stood next to his wife, Roisin. Passing the two with a rowan spear in hand, their daughter Emily looked over the Umeki and Shisaa family with murder in her eyes. Two other Aos Sidhe, the members of the Shisaa family didn’t recognize, but the swordsman wearing an old WWII bomber jacket they knew as Lord Alexander, the same Aos Sidhe lord who fought a duel with the Countess. However, the small figure, garbed in the purest white, grabbed everyone’s attention. Quite a number of times the younger members of the Shisaa had passed the Princess in the halls at school always receiving a friendly smile. The look Princess Morgan now gave everyone in the compound was anything but friendly.

Kaede Umeki, with her mother dead and her child shifted back to her Yoaki form felt that her grip on events was coming apart. Understanding immediately that the Yoaki in white posed the most threat, she commanded Aya to kill Princess Morgan.

The Japanese Witch felt satisfied as the girl didn’t realize her danger but her satisfaction was short lived. The Aos Sidhe in the old US Army bomber jacket simply stepped in front of Aya, easily blocking her attack. Everyone stood in shock. To those of the Shisaa and Umeki family, Kaede’s Warden had always seemed to be unstoppable. With little effort, Lord Alexander started to push Aya back, blocking her attacks without counterattacking, as if waiting for something.

Without even breathing heavy, the Aos Sidhe Lord suddenly called out. “Morgan, is she the one?”

“Yes.”

Stepping underneath the black blade, Lord Alexander brought his shining sword around. Aya Yoshida cried out, collapsing on her knees, the sword falling from her grasp.

“Morgan?”

“I’m not going to kill her, Sile.” Morgan walked forward placing her hands on the Warden’s head and heart. “A certain family demands that their cousin be returned.”

Kaede Umeki stood in shock, like every other mortal she was unable to move. The power that emanated from the small form held her in awe. Suddenly, the Japanese Witch understood exactly what Princess Morgan planned on doing.

“No, don’t”

Aya Yoshida, Warden of the Umeki clan unknown to most as a Yoaki sealed away during the Edo Period, began to scream. A high pitched scream, full of loss. Like Katherine and Kimme, the Aya form melted away revealing a beautiful white nine-tailed Kitsune. Still crying at her loss, heartbroken that she had been forced to kill her own kind throughout the years, the Yoaki reached for her sword to end the pain. Before Aya could reach the black blade, sensing what was happening, the young Aos Princess quickly knelt down taking the fox woman into her arms.

Around the courtyard no one moved, no one spoke as the Princess spoke quietly to the Kitsune. Suddenly, Aya’s body shuddered. Nodding, she rose from the ground kicking the sword, the symbol of her pain away from her. With a nod from Princess Morgan, Roisin came over and took the Kitsune by the hand.

“Morgan Hime.” Masanori began but stopped seeing the look of utter disappointment in her eyes.

“Where is Caitrin?”

“I am up here your Highness.” The Aos Sidhe shouted as she jumped to the ground. With tears running down her face, she moved quickly towards the Princess, coming down into a deep curtsey.

For the first time since she arrived, the Princess smiled. Reaching down Morgan helped the Aos Side from the ground. “Are you ready to go home?”

Caitrin, once called Katherine could only nod.

“Sile?”

“The knife is over here Morgan.” Sile knelt next to Kimme, who sat on the ground holding her grandmother’s lifeless body.

“You have no business being here.” Kaede finally found her voice.

Ignoring Kimme’s mother, Princess Morgan turned to Masanori. “Did you know about Caitrin?”

The alpha of the Shisaa family nodded sadly. “We knew she might be like Aya.”

Morgan slowly walked up the stairs to the shrine, turning around she shouted angrily. “Someone explain to me why I shouldn’t leave all of you stranded in the Fae Realm.”

“Morgan Hime?”

“Kimme?” Morgan knelt down.

“You can’t kill them Princess, she wouldn’t want that.” Kimme said quietly as she stroked her grandmother’s hair. Who she was, no one was exactly sure. “I just don’t…don’t want them to be able to hurt anyone again.”

“What are you doing, Kimme?” Kaede, looking stunned called out to her daughter.

“Deciding your punishment.”

“You can’t, you’re not…”

“What mother? I’m the heir to the Umeki family.”

“I Masanori, of the Shisaa family also acknowledge Kimme Umeki as heir to the family.”

“Know this, I am Princess Morgan, The Arbitrator, Daughter of Mab the Warrior Queen of the Summer Court and I hereby take away what was so lovingly given to your ancestors ages so. A gift that you have used so evilly is now taken back.”

“Let’s get this over with then.” Morgan walked over to the closest Japanese Witch. “I’m afraid this is going to hurt quite a bit.”

As the Princess touched her head, the two of them began to glow. Seconds later, the woman began to scream, then suddenly collapsed.

Morgan looked down sadly, and then turned to the next Witch who tried to get away.

“What did you do?” Kaede Umeki whispered, finally understanding the full power of the Summer Court. “Did you bind her?” Kimme's mother understood the power to bind a Witch and for one to be able to do it without help seemed unbelievable.

“No.” Morgan said simply. Touching the second Witch, she too screamed after a few seconds then collapsed. “I took away her magical ability, all of it. She has no more power than any norm, nor will her line ever carry that ability.”

Kaede Umeki sat there terrified, her mother’s predictions seemingly coming true. Her screams of terror fell on deaf ears as moments later Princess Morgan turned around to impose justice on the former head of the Umeki family.

Authors Notes: A special thanks to djkauf for a little elvish editing. If you like the story please leave a Kudos, if you have the time I would love to hear from you. Thanks to all for reading! - Elsbeth

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Aarrgghh!!

Elsbeth!!! Do you KNOW how much work I am going to have to do on the Gazetteer from this over-load of information!!!!?? :)

Aarrgghh!!

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Who little ole me :) thanks for working on the Gazetteer, I used it a lot especially when I don't have my notes on me.

Thanks for reading

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Another great chapter

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Another great chapter Elsbeth, I look forward to seeing how you wrap things up.

Seems we're both keeping Payter on his toes this week lol

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Don't take me too seriously. I'm just kitten around. :3

You won't be the only ones...

Come Mid-December I will be too, but any more than that would be telling on what I'll be doing. ;P

Peace be with you and Blessed be

Thanks!!

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I'm happy you liked it, Chapter 20 will still have a few surprises.

Thanks for reading

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

She had it coming

Kaede, obviously. It would be awesome if some traditions within the Umeki family would cause their fortune to land in Kimme's hands now that Sachiko is dead, just so Kaede can die in a few decades penniless, as well as powerless, alone, and unloved. The last three seem pretty much inevitable at this point.

Of course, now that the Umeki witches are powerless, there are probably quite a few yokai families that will take their retribution, without any concern for whether the family is now led by a yokai.

Umeki witches are powerless

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Very true, with no way to defend themselves from the Unseen that they have been persecuting for quite some time. I'm glad your liking the story

Thanks for reading

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

I'm in love

This sorry its so good I want more.

just your average crazy person

Who are the Real Monsters? Chapter 19

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I'm happy you are enjoying the story.

Thanks for reading

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

I'm in love

This sorry its so good I want more.

just your average crazy person

Justice

The point of view change surprised me but it was effective. Too much was happening that otherwise would be obscured unless seen though eyes further away. It also clarifies Ren's position as well as the other Temple Dogs in this matter. Wow, when Morgan steps in everyone knows it.

I knew something was up with Aya but I didn't suspect that. Grandmother surprised me too, but perhaps she knew more about what was going down than she'd said and didn't want to see the end. It might be even simpler to say she really did love Ken/Kimmie in her own way and leave it at that.

Morgan's justice was harsh but given the crime Sidhe could've done much worse. Just wow Elspbeth! What a story!
hugs
Grover

Justice

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Thanks, that's exactly what I wanted to do. I needed a different perspective, plus since the story was Kimme centric it gave a little more information, and a different view point. Also, it leaves everyone not knowing what exactly happened to Kimme until Chapter 20 :)

Thanks for reading

Hugs

-Elsbeth

PS Yes, she was only half joking about leaving them all in the Fae. Her human upbringing tempers her judgement quite a bit

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

I must say...

I had thought that Sile was going to go and get help from Princess Morgan, although Aya being a Nine-Tails came out of nowhere for me. I'm sad to see the ending so close to where we are, as I feel that you could have expanded a bit on some of the relationships between certain characters but oh well. There's always another story to do that in. :P

Peace be with you and Blessed be

Aya being a Nine-Tails

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I did keep that one close to my chest, however I did leave quite a bit of detail showing that she was indeed a Yokai.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked the story.

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Justice

Given that the Umeki clan (particularly Kaede) had become corrupted by the quest for more power (together with the ruthlessness of their desire to fulfill their pact with the ancient Japanese emperor), the removal of their magical ability - the means by which they held onto power - is the more fitting punishment.

Of course, as Ken / Kimmie / Kimiye is not of Kaede's line (but carries the family name and is the de facto heir), any descendents she has may not be subject to the same restrictions. Then again, exactly what powers / abilities Kimmie will have is still undecided - after all, she was originally created as a construct to hold the Kimiye.

Meanwhile, Aya's been rehabilitated / prevented from sacrificing herself to atone for what she was forced to do; Katherine / Caitrin's fate still remains undecided - hopefully Morgan's request for the knife is to break the bond between it and Caitrin, rather than allow Caitrin to self-sacrifice herself. While it's likely Caitrin (if she survives) will leave the family, hopefully she'll make visits to the new-look Umeckis, while Aya may have been persuaded to hang around as companion / advisor / guardian of Kimmie, working with / for her, rather than Kaede & co.


As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!

Ken / Kimmie / Kimiye

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Chapter 20 will have a lot of that, going forward what interaction Kimme will have with those around her. I'm sure you haven forgotten that the Shisaa family, hadn't been honest with her either. Let us also not forget Tabitha as well.

Glad you liked the story, and thanks for reading

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Who are the Real Monsters? Chapter 19

So, Kimme and her Family are depowered. Which Family will now be given their Authority and power? What of their Wardens? What of the bonds between them?

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

I doubt Kimme has been punished

Morgan is neither devoid of compassion nor blind to the entire concept of justice. Thus, she is unlikely to punish the victim, especially since Kimme (in her Kimiye persona) was actively opposing the Umeki clan, and Morgan didn't even punish Aya who had served the Umeki with (magically enforced) loyalty for decades or centuries.

For that matter, it's an open question whether it would even be possible to strip Kimme of her power without killing her, given that she is one of the Sacred herself, and thus *IS* magic more than merely having magic.

I'm wondering what punishment will be levied on the Shisaa family. We don't know what ties kept them in service to the Umeki family even as the latter spiraled down from nobility to official status as moral monsters. At the very least, Morgan has already expressed herself as enormously disappointed in them, but even if it is only oaths of fealty that held them in service, those are ties either lightly nor easily severed, especially not to a family steeped in the samurai tradition. If the Umeki family were using more arcane bonds to hold the Shisaas in service, they they were as much victims as Caitrin and Aya.

I find it strangely sad that neither of the two fae who had acted as surrogate mothers to Ken/Kimme even acknowledged her existence after Morgan set them free. With Aya, that may be a product of how long she was enslaved - her original kitsune personality may have been so far under the surface that only the enchanted shell that contained her (and which no longer exists) would have had any actual bond, but Caitrin showed signs of actual affection for Ken/Kimme. Maybe they think that only Kimiye remains, and the Ken/Kimme to whom they bonded no longer exists. I suspect, however, that Kimiye was rather heavily influenced, permanently, by her shell. It was suggested when she abandoned her attempt to escape to save Kimme's friends. I doubt Kimme is truly gone, merely merged with Kimiye.

I doubt Kimme has been punished

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Correct, although perhaps that could wait until Chapter 20 but the Princess was there to also help Kimme. Both Kimme and Morgan are going to need to deal with the Shisaa family, in their own way. Remember though, Masanori, did acknowledge Kimme Umeki as heir to the family. So we shall see how it all pans out.

Thanks for reading, I'm happy you liked the story

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

How they deal with the Shisaa. . .

. . .will hopefully depend in large part on how it turns out that the Umeki were keeping the Shisaa under their collective thumb. It's obvious they had some hold over them, whether it's just a tradition of Shisaa serving the Umeki, or some ugly financial chicanery that would destroy the Shisaa if they tried to break free, or actual magic. How harshly it is appropriate to deal with them depends on why they were willing to hold their noses in the face of what they obviously knew was some pretty heinous abuse of the Umeki magic gifts.

It seems likely to me that the Shisaa were victims of the Umeki too, albeit not on anything like the same scale as Aya and Caitrin.

Really looking forward to the final episode.

Excellent story!

Excellent story!

Thanks!!

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I'm happy you liked the story, thanks for reading.

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

O_O

So....THAT is what Pure Awesomesauce looks like? Wow!!!

The nature of Monkey is - Irrepressible!!!

Pure Awesomesauce

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Thanks!! I'm glad you liked the story, thanks for reading.

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

I doubt Kimme's *mother* will die of old age

or any of the other ex witches in the family.

-- SPOILERS !!!--

They KILLED and enslaved to keep their power and influence.

Now powerless I doubt if the families of the enslaved and the dead will be merciful.

And what of the murdered, I assume murdered, girl/mermaid? back in Hawaii. They will want retribution/justice.

Unless Morgan decrees they -- Kimme's *family* -- are not to be harmed NOR helped I doubt they will live for long.

I agree penniless and powerless with no hope to ever even have magic welders in their family line is appropriate but the mother was the worst.

She needs to get punished in spades.

Grandmother sadly deserved HER death. She knew yet did nothing to stop it or did very little and far too late. She let her disgusting child do/order all the crimes and for what?

But mother needs to be punished. Perhaps as a slave for the rest of her life to those she hurt. But never allowed the mercy of taking her own life. Perhaps even not being allowed to die BUT being allowed to age. Or turned into a perpetual child. IE weak and powerless.

And what of the warden who killed grandmother while trying to kill another? What is HIS punishment?

I'd say divide all the family assets as reparations and take a large part of it as a dowry to Kimmie. Maybe it can bring her and Sile perhaps a happy life?

Look forward to see how this concludes and ties in with the rest.

Hope the sucking out of their magic and any family future for magic REALLY hurt those murdering/enslaving bit...

Sad about no one in that bloodline ever having the chance to develop magic talents. Isn't any of the family worthy of redemption or are they all like the mom, corrupt, or like grandmother, stood by and did nothing?

And what of Kimme herself? Who is she? She knows Ken was a construct but growing up as Ken and of late Kimme, WHO is she? She clearly is no longer the kitsun(?) she once was. And what of HER family, her REAL family? What will they do, if any are alive? Will they welcome her home? Will they acknowledge her as kin? Kimme has many new and fine friends but does she have any family?

Nicely done.

John in Wauwatosa

P.S. The personality change in Kimmie? Due to the female form being closer to the true form of the spirit they enslaved?

John in Wauwatosa

magic REALLY hurt those murdering/enslaving bit.

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Yes it did quite a bit :) I do have a number of things going in for Chapter 20 don't I :) Thanks for reading, glad you liked the story. You always do give great feedback.

-Elsbeth

PS The personality change in Kimmie? Due to the female form being closer to the true form of the spirit they enslaved?

Yes also much more influenced

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Okay, Deep Breath.

That's quite a bit going on! Great chapter and great story!

I had been trying to figure out what seemed to me a gross overconfidence on the part of the Umeki family leadership. "A Fae princess? No problem. Just a loose end that we'll tie up later." I would think that even with having Katherine and Aya's power serving her, having Morgan as an enemy should have made Kaede really concerned. Did she not have an idea of the true capabilities of the Fae? Maybe she was a bit delusional? Or did she make "friends" with someone in the Winter Court? That's looking less likely now (isn't it?).

I look forward to finding out what will happen to the the Umeki family now that Kimmie's in charge. I hope no one tries to hold her responsible for events of which she had no knowledge.


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Maybe she was a bit delusional?

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Perhaps, or there is another game going on she is not aware of :) Either way, lots of things to wrap up in Chapter 20 :)

Thanks for reading, I'm happy you enjoyed the story

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Kaede underestimating the Fae

I would say that Kaede vastly underestimated the power of the Fae, especially a Fae Princess. Her family had a nine-tail Kitsune bound to their service. They also had an Aos Sidhe bound to their service. She was extremely surprised that Morgan all on her own could completely remove the magic ability from her and the other Witches of the family. Not a binding but total removal.

Sigh...

Another great story draws near its conclusion. While chapter 20 will be the end of this enjoyable story, we at least can all still look forward to the other great stories you're writing for our reading pleasure Elsbeth. I hope that we might see more of Kimme at some future date, perhaps making a guest appearance in some future DRU stories or even in a new adventure of her own?

I also liked your use of the shift in perspective to Ren’s point of view in this chapter. I do enjoy reading stories that are told from another characters perspective as they experience the same events as the main characters. Than can be difficult to pull of well, but can really add allot to a story if done well. One of my favorite science fiction authors, David Weber has taken that writing technique to a new level with his Honor Harrington series, by writing whole books that are from the perspective other characters, sometimes minor ones, as they experience the same events that occurred to the main characters in a previous book. I think that you’re going a good job Elsbeth. I’m enjoying reading all of your other wonderful stories as well, you're a good writer Elsbeth and I look forward to reading work for sometime to come.

We’ll just have to wait until the conclusion in the next chapter to find out what Kimme’s proposition was about to make to Kimiye at the cliffhanger ending of chapter 18. Maybe they worked out a time-share agreement? I think that its more likely that Ken/Kimme has now merged with Kimiye into one being. As to how the merged personality works out remains yet to be seen? My best guess is that when she shifts back to her human form, she will be more like the old Kimme we all knowand love, but with some differences and that when she's her in her yokai/bakeneko form, she's more like Kimiye. Kind of like Morgan when she shifts from her human form to her fae form.

Well that’s enough speculation on my part for now, I want to read The Sacrificial Boy chapter 4 before crashing for the night.

Hugs,
Tamara Jeanne

Justice

I’m so sad that her grandmother died, it is a fitting form of justice.

hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna