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..To all of you who left comments on Dreamer: Part 7.
It can be disheartening to write something, to see that hundreds of people read it, but only a handful leave a comment. To have such a response in reply to my question was most pleasing and very humbling.
So, in response to the generally expressed view that I should continue, I shall.
To clearly show it is a different section, I shall take the remainder of this story from a different perspective, and look back from a point in Pippa's future.
I hope you like it.
Whether you like it or not, don't be shy, leave a comment. We writers are a strange bunch, we like comments!
Tanya
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Tanya, your school notebook tale was worthy of the comments
And the new *book* is looking good.
Hum so they ...
SPOLIER !!!!!
Nah, I'll let them read it themselves.
Let's say it was nice to see a female character who is kind yet self assured and her own woman. She has not let her sucess inflate her ego. From what I have seen she is still the loving and ever so happy to be SHE that she was back when it all started going right for her.
Interesting hints about her love life, future carrer and her parents. Sure mhope iit all works out. Her one parent worries me.
And I wondered about school. Can she balance this potental once in a life time opportunity -- the starring role on TV -- with completing her education, becoming a woman perhaps a wife, a mother?
You have left us lots of clues where this might go but who knows? Write for yourself and for your characters.
As you are older now the inital change in perspective worked for me as you are not that 15 yearold unhappy child and youe heroine is now a woman some 15 years later at the peak of her carrer and beauty.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
No Need to Feel Like the Lone Ranger
It seems to be the way of things.
Nancy Cole
"You may be what you resolve to be."
T.J. Jackson
A big thanks!
Love your stories
May Your Light Forever Shine