http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/8941/susie-and-jeffrey...
"If you want something doing, Jeffrey, do it yourself."
"That's what gran says, Susie, but I've begun to doubt the wisdom of her words since I met you."
"Are we ever going to visit your gran, or is she a comedy device like my car?"
"I haven't decided yet - I'll have to discuss it with my other half."
"You are your other half."
"Not Denise - Jamie."
"We'd be better off dropping that persona, Jeffrey. Our little blog did better than his 50,000 word epics."
"That's mutinous talk, Susie."
"Oh, he heard us. Run, Jeffrey - get back into his id."
"You've done it again, Susie - you always go too far."
"Don't blame me - it's not my fault our creator has gone mad!"
Comments
I'm a little acorn round...
Sitting on the cold hard ground.
Jeesh. If the stories are anywhere near as funny as the blog entries, maybe I should start reading them as a source of relief from the angst of my own story.
Abigail Drew.
trust me, slicersv
It is that funny.
The Missing Link
Thanks for posting.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Commentary
The penultimate sentence, it should be too, not to. And the final sentence needs a left quote at the beginning of the line.
A handy link, so those others interested can find it, not just Dorothy Colleen and myself.
Susie and Jeffrey, well worth reading, the blog posts are but a mere sample of what the banter is like. People admit to laughing out loud while reading, people who don't normally laugh find it funny. And the story builds upon itself quite nicely, it's not random banter, it has a plot! Go, enjoy, you owe it to yourself to give Susie and Jeffrey a try!
Yours,
JohnBobMead
Yours,
John Robert Mead
Thanks, On Behalf Of The Little Rascals
Thanks, Ray and John, for the recommendations. Sorry about their mistakes - as usual, the little rascals had to leave in a hurry.
Jamie Hayworth
Jamie