Looking For An Author To Write A Transsexual Wedding Story On Me

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Requesting a story of an effaminate youth of 25 years,name Saajid,who was forced feminized( Complete SRS,Post-Op) by a wealthy man in a clinic to become Shagufta.
Later She was married against her will to that man and penetrated on her wedding night. Requesting you to depict the story step by step right from her SRS,bridal makeup( That includes loads of teasing,listenning to catcalls and humiliation infront of her ex-lover) and then followed by wedding night and honeymoon.
Slowly Shagufta will learn to accept her altered fate.

Why?

Why do you need an author to write this?

Why don't you write it yourself? After all, you're the person most familiar with the story.

Why not ask here for someone to edit the story once you've written it? The result will be better.

Powerful Self


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Writing it yourself

As PS indicates, you've already got the basic plot sorted out. You probably have a rough idea of how each scene will pan out.

Don't worry about length - it could be a few thousand words, a few tens of thousands of words, or even longer. Break it into chunks or scenes, then work out roughly what you want to happen in each chunk / scene, and start writing.

If you need inspiration for the details, a story with similar themes that may help is "Only a Baby Machine". It's quite long and is a proverbial car crash of a story, but if FF (forced fem) is your game...

Another good place to start is Fictionmania - I don't frequent it, but from what I've heard from others, there's more FF over there than over here.

When you've got it (or the first segment if you want to release it in installments) written, post here again requesting an editor. It would also be useful to say what you expect from the editor - general spelling / grammar fixup or to rearrange / reword bits. Do you want 'light-touch' editing (where they just fix up the most glaring errors), something more intensive or are you prepared to accept a critic (someone who won't be afraid to say "this paragraph / concept / idea doesn't work" or "X is acting seriously out of character in this scene")?

And finally, if you do decide to start writing it, the important thing is to persevere. Although many stories have new chapters on a daily or weekly basis, some are updated monthly or even intermittently (the SPA universe is a good example) and we're patient enough to wait. After all, most authors do not sit at their word processors for 8+ hours a day, 7 days a week, creating lovely stories. They do have a life outside this community, with careers / families / health issues / household maintenance etc. that have priority over story crafting.

 

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There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...

As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!

You asked the question that I

You asked the question that I wanted to ask -- Why? I mean, with my story 'Tarja', I could have asked someone I write it for me, but who knows more about the story then the author -- me. I had real life to live so I put it away for a while (that and my mom being laid off and my dad's business off by 35% (due to the GREAT RECESSION), so when my computer died... I couldn't get another one that was as good as the one I had.
Also, I had writer's block so I jotted down more info for the story, so I hope chapter 11 and 12 will be up soon... be prepared for a surprise. (;-))

TGSine --958

Harrumphhh

And there you have it.

The comment you've already received is what is called "passive-aggressive." "Sure, sure, write your little FF story, but you'd get a better reception over at Fictionmania."

That attitude is unadulterated tripe and is far afield from what Erin tries to facilitate. Erin owns this website and is the major reason I'm still around after more than a decade.

Erin advertises Big Closet as "A friendly place to read, write, and discuss Transgender Fiction." I just checked and femdom is still one of the major themes accepted and domination is still one of the accepted elements.

Not only does suggesting you go elsewhere for better acceptance run against Erin's ethics, it is counter to my experience. I've written dozens of stories for BC and those containing an element of forced fem remain some of the most popular.

It is my hope that the remarks suggesting you go to FM where merely poorly-worded advice.

Further - should you decide to write your story and are looking for someone to help you with editing you can count on me. I've helped dozens of writers with all many different genre. The only stories I won't work with or write are those involving underage characters placed in sexually explicit scenes.

Angela Rasch (Jill M I)

Angela Rasch (Jill M I)

speaking of tripe.

it was only suggested that Fictionmania be used for inspiration. nobody said this isn't the place for such a story.

Dayna.

Okay Then Dayna

The passive-aggressive statement might have been "If you really want to write that FF stuff, go to FM for inspiration because it ain't BC's cup of tea."

Different pew, but same church.

Angela Rasch (Jill M I)

Angela Rasch (Jill M I)

Well to start with...

I agree completely with Angela. Fictionmania is a good site, but BC/TS is also an EXCELLENT place to place this story. There are a wide variety of stories here, and yours sounds well thought out and interesting. Yes, if you are able, write it yourself, as you see the picture most clearly. If you wish,I would be happy to assist you, and I assure you, there are many others who would be willing to help (most of them more qualified than I am). Gimme a shout (PM'ing me is best right now) and I will do whatever I can to help you.
I know that some people do not feel comfortable with writing. I do, and I'm not the only one here who feels that way. I've recieved an incredible amount of help and advice from the folks here, and helping you would be one way to repay that. Read some of my stuff, see if you think we would work well together, and if so, contact me! I'm fairly friendly, and I don't bite (well, unless it's mutually enjoyable...).

Wren

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Both FM and BC are great sites with tons of FF content...

main differnence i've seen though is that the story's here arn't quite as...

(searching for a good word)

depictive? .. Raunchy?...Smutty... Pornographic...

humm, nope not finding the right words...

basically i feel that the stories here are like rated pg13 to X, where FM is more like PG13 to XXX(I)

So it would depend on how you want your story to go, if your wanting seriously hardcore sex in your story then FM probablly would be a good place to look for inspiration.

BC DOES have it's share of sex in stories, but your more likely to find the harder stuff over at FM

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Cultural ignorance

The names seem to hint at something that isn't stated in your summary - does this story take place in some mideastern country? Or at least it would seem to be set amongst a community of immigrants from some mideastern country. I fear that most of the authors here would be woefully ignorant of the culture in which your concept is set. You may be better off writing it yourself, as you'd do a more accurate job on the cultural details.